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 Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 6:55 pm
The CrewTesting room:
This Room is located underground, in the shape of a large metallic Sphereical dome. Judges can sit behind a one way mirror, each one sitting far from each other getting a different view of the student being tested. The room in the center itself is a flat surface. With no obstacle whatever. two doors are located. One for the student. and one for the bot.
now.. the Teachers enter the room.'
((Currently being Tested: Sakura, Setari, Mint and Kurai))
((Kurai and Mint cannot judge each other. (cause Mint said she didnt want to) and also for being Admins. XP))
(any other mods who want to be tested please PM me)
((I guess we are making it 4 people is enough to get stars.. now lets see..))
Setari
Kurai&Mint: 7/8
Sakura: 7/8
Aili: 8/8
Joy: 8/8
Final: 7.5=8
DP: 7.5/8
Mint
Setari: 6/8
Sakura: 6/8
Joy: 7/8
Aili: 7/8
Final: 6.5=7
DP: 6.5/8
Kurai:
Setari: 7/8
Sakura: 7/8
Rene: 7/8
Joy: 7/8
Final: 7/8 (oh joy..)
Aili: 7.5/8
DP: 7.2/8
Sakura:
Kurai&Mint: 8/8
Setari: 7/8
Rene: 8/8
Aili: 8/8
Joy: 8/8
Final: 7.8 = 8
DP: 8/8
Aldora
Joy: 6/8
Kurai&Mint: 7/8
Mike: 6.5/8
Sakura: 7/8
Final: 6.6 = 7
Poppy
Kurai&Mint: 5/8
Sakura: 3/8
Mike: 4/8
Aili: 3/8
Final: 3.7/8=4/8
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:00 pm
((This is the Teacher form of Kurai speaking So we can judge the other mods))
Mr. Violet quickly entered the room eager to see the student perform for its ranking within the school. He smiled as he wore a new violet shirt with some sparkly jewels emblem in it. He took off his sunglasses and brushed back his violet hair. "Alright i wonder who is up first..." he smiled as he found his seat with a large packet on the table. He opened up the packet and looked at the list.
"hmmm"
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:04 pm
((This is Pepper! The teacher form of Mint! ))
Pepper Smiled as she skipped through a large metallic door which opened from her teacher ID. "Hey Everyone!" She smiled to the other Teachers. Pepper was a very young teacher and quite new. Her light green hair was a tied in two ponytails. She then ran about the circle around the testing room trying to find her parcel with her name on it. Finally she found it. It was nearest to Violet. "Hey Violet!" She smiled and waved to her but then quickly covered up her mouth.
"oops we aren't suppose to talk to the other teachers are we..."
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:06 pm
((This is me as the teacher, Ying-Hua.))
Ying-Hua's heels clicked along the corridor floor that led to the judgement room. A folder was tucked neatly in her arm that held information on all the participants. A notice was sent to her a month ago asking her to participate in the ranking of all students of Ria High. Smiling, she wondered how the students would do.
As Ying-Hua neared the room, she straighted her soft pink Chinese dress. The dress ended mid-thigh and had cherry blossoms splashed over it. Her hair was bundled up with two black chopsticks, making her look even more elegant.
"Here we go."
Violet and Pepper had already arrived. Nodding politely to them, she took her seat at one of the empty chairs that surrounded the metallic dome.
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:11 pm
"I've arrived just as the information told me to," began a deep friendly and lively voice, "I wonder, I thought there were supposed to be others as well. Hmm, well, maybe this school has several incompetant teachers and that's why the headmaster summoned me here to teach. Or perhaps he just thought I was, ahem, sex-y! Bahaha!"
The voice belonged to a man in his mid to late thirties. He was tall, well dressed in a dark gray and pinstripe suit and white dress shirt with a navy tie, and extremely well groomed. His hair was long and black, pulled back into a neat ponytail. No split ends were acceptable, and ths, were non-existant. A pair of unframed lenses floated lightly on the front of his nose and through those lenses peared two very sharp brown eyes. If one was to describe this man in one word it would be...
"Raine. Raine Sugawa."
"Confirmed. Sugawa, Raine. Specialties. Stealth. Material and non-material explosives. Please. Proceed into the viewing room," the automatied voice ended and Professor Sugawa sheepishly realized he had not followed the instructions exactly, explaining the apparent tardiness of the other instructors. He entered and saw a few more people to his relief.
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:51 pm
As Setari located the testing grounds following the step by step custom directions that led him from his dorm room to the very point where he was now. Before hm stood the usually access panel through which he slid his student ID. An automated voice activated and proclaimed his entry as a cool steel door slid silently open.
"Shirou, Setari. Enter for examination."
He stepped through the passageway and into a small corridor. At the other end was anothe rof the same steel door adn Setari proceeded to and through it. He was now stnading in a larger room. It was a safe room - a room in which the floor, ceiling and walls were all flame retardant, antifreez, absorbed electric shock and were even slightly cushioned. Hmm, its pretty obvious what's about to take place here isn't it. I'm surprised the faculty took note of me so soon.
A few lonely moments were followed by the announcing of the exam's beginning. "Now commencing examination," a well hidden speaker blared out. It was a human voice, but Setari didn't recognize it.
His attentions soon forgot the voice for approaching in front of him was a semi-chimeric creature, but rather than a mythological duplicate, this creature was smaller built, quicker and was composed of less animals. Instead of possessing five creatures i one, this chimera obtained only two. It was an odd sight indeed, for it wasn't every day that Setari met a more human like chimpansy with a tail like a snake head.
The cimera wasted no time in its attack. It sprinted on all fours, leaped over Setari and ricochetted off the wall behind him. The snakes venomous fangs lunged for Setari's neck, but were dodged bya simply falling to the floor. Setari kicked up and spun to his left perform a ground level sweep kick from a standing posture. The beast dodged with equalling agility. Setari watched taking the defense, but not long did it take before the chimera was in his face performing several combination attacks including both personas attached to the body. Setari sustained a few blows, but made a point to avoid any bites and sacrificed rather for mere punches.
Finding his time, Setari took an opening, snapping his leg forward into its body ad while it was stunned by the speedy kick he reached forward with his left gripping tightly on the animal's right arm. he gave a slight push downward and then twisted back over the beast's shoulder. He supported the movement with his right and the chimera gave out acry of pain. *C-C-Crrre-e-e-e-k* The sound of tendons, bones - the joint was next to destroyed. The snake tail took a desperate but inaccurate stab at Setari, but he dropped and through another sweeping kick. The animal fell on its back and Setari followed it with his right elbow, smashing its skull hard back into the ground.
Setari stood and dusted himself off. It was now that he relized he was bleeding from just above his right hip where two sets of pinpoint holes where releasing the red, hot fluid along with a clear white acid. A few moments later the test was ended on two acounts. One, the animal hadn't moved for several minutes and was found dead - or so the instructers stated, but everyone knew it was a highly intelligant machine formed with very real like flesh and componants. But, the second reason the test was ended was that Setari was now being removed from the testing grounds on stretcher to receive immediate medical attention for a venomous snake bite, yes, it was real venom.
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:54 pm
Mint Slowly entered the Speherical dome. She took a deep breath. She was currently wearing a red-t-shirt and her hair was well groomed. It was as if she was preparing for a date. She looked around at the shiny black metallic surface of the room. She then took notice of a line of mirrors going around the room.
that must be were the teachers are observing me from. she thought. She then waved weakly at them. hehee.. i hope i don't look bad...
She then heard a voice over the speakerphone.
"Test is begining now! Release the monster!"
And with that Mint bent forward ready for her monster. She could see the door slowly open and let out a large machinery roar. She swallowed uneasily and her legs begun to shake. calm down Hikari... she thought as she looked down at her large robotic arm with the blood-thirsty eye.
The figure begun to come out of the door.
Mint facefaulted.
It was a giant panda.
The Panda's size was immense however and its two paws seemingly dropped to its side. it was like some frankenstien movie or so.
The Giant Panda stared straight at Mint with sleepy eyes. It then let out a giant roar and his eyes opened with fury. Mint let out a scream as the Panda stamped on the ground Shaking the whole testing area. This caused Mint to loose her foot holdings. She fell to the ground on top of Hikari. Hikari let out an angry hiss. "Ahh! sorry Hikari!" She told her arm. She then was quickly thrown up by her arm. "Calm down! We have to show control!" she told it. The arm let out another hiss but slower this time and the eye's glow ceased down a bit. She sighed and then turned twoards the Panda.
"OK! lets go!" She put on a serious face and tossed her hair back quickly tying it into a pony tail. (how can she do that with one robotic arm is beyond me) The Panda raged forward across the Metallic floor each step giving a deep shaking BOOM.
As the Panda got closer Mint slowly backed up. Finally the Panda came striking distance to Mint. The Panda quickly threw forward his massive paw trying to slash Mint in half vertically. Mint was awaiting the attack and threw up Hikari at his paw. Hikari let out a machine like Scream as its eye gave off a massive Red glow. Mint Let out a pained cry and squeezed her eyes shut.
The Panda gave out an equal scream to Hikari as he stared down at the arm. Somewhat shocked seeing how a simple small gurl could fend off a massive bear like himself. His ego was shattered. he tried to remove his paw out of Hikari's grip but Hikari already had a tight grasp on it. Seeing this he lifted up his other Paw into the air. Bringing his body upwards he was ready to throw down another massive slice equal to his previous one.
Mint opened her eye and looked up at the paw. She let out a frightened yell. "NOW HIKARI!" She yelled out and the robotic claw Threw the giant panda's paw upwards into the air. Flipping it onto its back. The massive bears body fell onto the ground creating a massive ground vibration and defeanning slamming BOOM. The ground didnt shatter which suprised Mint. Such a large body should break metal. It then came to her that this metal was no ordinary metal.
The panda Bear shocked for a second pondered on what has happened to him. There is a young gurl here beating the crap out of him. Quickly he rolled back to his feet, Determined to get rid of this little girl. Mint stared up at the Panda bear. she smiled weakly at it. "You are angry aren't you.. " She chuckled. The Panda bear then threw both of its arms widly forward. creating a strange Windmill of slashes. He then slowly advanced twoards Mint.
Mint saw this and her eyes popped open. "how am i going to get around this one!?" She thought carfully. She slowly backed away from the Bear's slow advances. Hikari let out an angry hiss and rushed Mint forward. "AHH! What are you doing!?" She demanded from her arm. The Robotic arm went straight twoards The bear. The panda smirked evilly seeing this will be an easy kill. Once Mint gets up close he will rip her to shreds!
Mint quickly closed her eyes again frightened in what was to come. The Claw just kept rushing Mint forward. Once The bear saw Mint close enough he brought down his two paws straight down at Mint. But to The Bear and Mint's suprise The claw gave Mint a sudden boost of speed Dodging the paw just bearly before it came down. The paws only nicked some of Mint's fleash off. But it was enough to make her bleed. Mint let out a pained cry. "AHH!" She felt blood drip down her side of body. She opened her eyes seeing she was lifted up suddenly.
"wah!? HIKARI STOP!" She yelled out to her hand But the Claw rushed upwards onto the Panda bears face. Mints body was thrown up against the massive bears body. The Claw got a firm grasp onto The panda's face. Mint dangled from the claw. The panda bear let out a shocked cry. And toppled backwards loosing balance it fell to the ground once again. Mint fell ontop of the Pandas fuzzy belly with a "oof!". She then rolled tummy down to see what The claws intents was. "Please! Don't make him get hurt too bad!" She told her claw.
The Claw seemingly ignored Mint's words and Squeezed tighter onto the bears face. The Panda let out a squell of pain and blood started to drip out where the claws of the hand came into the head. Mint quickly shut one eye in disguist and sucked in air. "stop..." She whispered but she knew the claw was excited by the killing and continued on.
Finally The Claw made a suden movement and it became a fist. A Sharp disguisting squish was heard. Mint couldnt look, she quickly turned her head and brought her claw away from where the panda's head was. She looked at her claw and its red eye slowly dimmed its glow. She could see blood dripping from the claw. all over its eye. "you.." She looked at the claw.
((have to let Kurai use the keyboard now XD! ))
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:55 pm
Rayan stared blankly up at the identification computer, then looked down at his teacher ID card. He brushed his hand through his spiked back blue hair, then shook his head. Rayan pulled out the written instructions he had been given by the higher-ups and struggled to comprehend the meaning of the message. It read:
Teachers have been summoned to attend a manditory event, whereby contestants will demonstrate the veracity of their abilities in a solo engagment. Participants in the contest will be any students wishing to prove themselves, and will do so in an engagement with an artificial intelligence program system. Instructors are to judge the event, noting the interaction between the contestant and the bot. They will then reach a decision upon the perfomance quality of the subject.
Rayan creased the paper gently, then held it between his thumbs and forefingers. With a swift, convulsive motion, he tore the paper into two equal halves, the tossed them aside with a casual gesture.
"I'd like to know what drug whoever wrote me those instructions was on," Rayan said to himself.
(Psst... this is my way of satirically asking what the heck this place is supposed to be... ur description isn't clear, buddy boy Kurai. Enlighten me.)
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 8:23 pm
Kurai entered the training room with much excitement. He pulled out his angelic pendant from his shirt and gave it a firm kiss. "Mother Aili! watch me now! I won't make you dissapointed!" He then threw his arm to the side and a flame blade shot from his wrist. It let out a loud FWOOSH sound as the fire lighted up Kurai's arm and face with a brilliant orange glow. He smirked and brought the blade forward into his hands.
"damn still heavy.." Kurai chuckled to himself as he tried to hold his blade up in front of him. Kurai wore his typical outfit. an unbuttoned Blue shirt and his black pants. his hair was loose and messy. He could care less about the test and what people think of him as long as he passed.
Kurai Gekkou! Your test will begin now! release the monster!
And out in front of him materialized a hunchbacked robot. It appeared with his arms crossed across his chest like a mummy would. He only had one red eye. his legs was similiar to a humans. in fact. it looked like a human if it wasnt made out of metal!
Kurai smirked and sighed "you gotta be kidding me!" And then the Robot stamped forward shaking the ground. he threw both arms forward and out from both wrist appeared two large metal Katars.
"HOSHIT!" Kurai opened his eyes out. "Well now! this should be interesting!" Kurai rose up his sword near his face in a defensive position.
The Robot let out steam from all over him and then launched itself forward at an inhumane speed. Kurai quickly reacted with a forward thrust of his blade, advancing his defensive stance. "I knew you would depend on speed! All Katar users DO!" He yelled at the Robot. it was as if he was trying to impress the testers too.
THe Katar reached Kurai's flame blade and let out a violent spark. The blade hissed out as the Katar continued to dig into his blade. Kurai brought the blade close to his face giving the Robot an angry smirk. "Hey hey!" Kurai looked straight at the bots face. The bots eye seemingly twisted like a camera's lens. "OH! So thats how the teachers are seeing me huh!?" Kurai smiled and then brought back his head. He then threw it forward at the Robots head. Shattering the red eye.
The Robot quickly stumbled backwards suprised from Kurai's attack. Kurai fell backwards too holding his head. His blade dropped from his hand evaporating the second it hit the ground. "atatatata... Shouldnt throw head... into solid objects... not good idea.." Kurai then shook his head violently regaining concious. He then shuffled his feet as if it was a DDR game and threw his arm to the side again.
"Lets try something more unique for this situation!" he yelled out to the bot and then summoned out a thin blade similar to a Katana. He threw it into teh air and then caught it with both hands. "This should keep me up to speed with your stupid katars!" He smirked and hoped back and forth excitingly.
"WOOOO Mother Aili! I never had this much excitement at the dance of death!" He told his necklace as it bounced up and down along with his hops. The bot quickly regained its balance and then used its other senses to see Kurai. He then once again tried a direct approach of dashing straight forward at Kurai. Releasing a hot steam as it approached Kurai. The room filled up with hot air from the battle and teh flame of Kurai's weaponary.
Kurai's eyes became slits as he stood his ground not moving a muscle. The Robot continued to dash forward.
"ALRIGT NOW!" Kurai yelled out and brought his katana forward thrusting at the RObot. The Katana Slashed straight forward into the robots body bringing the Robot to a complete halt.
"HAHA! GOTCHA!" Kurai smiled. But the Robot tilted his head forward at Kurai and then rotated his body into a full 360 throwing Kurai off his wepaon. Kurai flew into a nearby solid wall. Knocking his head forward. "AHH!" Kurai let out a pained gasp. the katana blade evaporated as soon as Kurai flew off. The robot Quickly rushed to the defensive Kurai slashing forward with its Katars. Kurai seeing this clumisily rolled away from the Katars advances. "AHH!" Kurai kept leapining here and there rolling about trying to get back onto his two feet.
"HEY! GIVE ME A BREAK!" he yelled out to the robot. but then tripped forward Slaming his body straight forward into the robots. The Robot fell forward along with Kurai. The robot Quickly dashed his katar straight into Kurai's arm almost into his chest. "ACK!" Kurai yelled painfully as the feeling of pain rushed over his body. The Robot then lifted up its other Katar ready to deliver a fatal blow into the wounded Kurai.
"WHOA!!" Kurai saw it and then quickly brought his two hands forward in front of the robots chest. "I DUNT THINK SO!" and with that yelled out Kurai threw out a massive flame out of the palm of his hands. The Flame let out a mighty WHOOSH as the Robots body begun to shake with confusion. The Katar shook off the ROobots hand and Kurai fell forward into his own flame.
On fire Kurai quickly rolled off the robot. "OH GEEZ HOT HOT!!" And then quickly put out the flame from his own panic. Kurai collected himself and stood up straight looking at the burning robot.
"haha.. I guess ill need a medic for this?" Kurai pointed to his mighty wound on his arm as he sucked in air. "whooo.. that didnt feel too good." Kurai tried to keep his optimistic smile as he reached for his necklace again and kiss it.
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 8:27 pm
Aili curled the annoying strands of hair behind her ear with one hand as she read the notification. She was garbed in a new form-fitting dress Aldora had picked out for her. The little girl was currently at the hospital bother the doctor Ishoa while Aili was here for judging.
'More work. I could be in the lab now, finish the new amulet,' Aili muttured. She had been summoned in the middle of an experiment for designing amulets that give the holder temporary elemental controls.
A bundle of blue caught her attention and Aili turned her head slightly to see her dear friend Rayan. Aili waved her hand to get his attention. Apparently, he had arrived just before she had.
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 8:33 pm
Sakura stepped into the metallic dome with a confident stride, although her eyes had hint of fear and nervousness in them. She wore a different outfit today because she knew she had to fight. She was dressed in black baggy wushu pants and a rose pink wushu top. A black sash was tied around her waist that carried her two fans and various pouches of her beads.
"Sakura, your test will begin...now."
The door facing her opened revealing a shadow walking towards her. There was something familiar in the way the shadow walked. When the shadow came into the light, Sakura gasped. It was somebody...or something that was identical to her. The false Sakura even wore the same outfit as hers except in all black with the same weapons.
...How is that possible...? I...
The shock of seeing the Sakura-bot almost made her be caught off guard when the Sakura-bot rushed at her. The Sakura-bot flicked out its fans and tried to slice her. Sakura flipped into the air as her wings sprouted mid-air. The shock still slowed her as Sakura managed to escape with just a small tear in her pants. The Sakura-bot did not even pause as it launched into the air with its own wings.
How could...
Sakura's thoughts were interrupted as she was locked in an aeriol battle. She had pulled out her fans and had locked fans with the Sakura-bot. Every move she tried, the Sakura-bot anticipated and managed to block or dodge. It was as if this Sakura-bot was her, not only physically but mentally as well. The very thought chilled her to the bone. She would have to outfit herself in order to defeat this Sakura-bot.
Her wings disappeared as Sakura dropped silently to the floor in a crouch. The Sakura-bot dove at her with an empty look in its eyes. Smirking, Sakura ran towards the wall of the dome and began to run up it. She flipped backwards holding her fans out. A tear sound was heard and then the thump of a body. Sakura had just ripped through the Sakura-bot's wings with her fans, depleting the Sakura-bot of its ability to fly.
Gotcha!
Sakura didn't want to waste her breath saying anything because oxygen was too valuable in fights. The Sakura-bot still had an expression on its face as it pushed itself up to its feet and flung three beads at it. Sakura caught the glimpse of the colors. There was an orange-red, an emerald green, and some shade of blue that Sakura couldn't identify in time.
The orange-red was fire, and the emerald green were vines, but the blue could be anything. Jumping in the air, Sakura sprouted wings again, hoping to at least avoid the vines. Fire, vines, and water burst from the three beads. The fire and water combined to form a steam that quickly filled up the dome, making vision hard.
Cursing, Sakura darted her eyes nervously around. It didn't help because she felt her body slam against one of the walls when the Sakura-bot kicked her. Rolling quickly to the side, Sakura heard the scratch of the fan hitting glass. She launched herself into the air again, but the Sakura-bot latched onto her ankle. Feeling the blade of the Sakura-bot's fan start to dig into her leg, Sakura bit back a cry of pain.
Doing the first thing that came to her mind, Sakura threw one of her fans at the Sakura-bot. Reflief flooded her as she felt it release her ankle. The steam began to clear, and Sakura looked down to see what had happened. A gash ran from the Sakura-bot's left eye, across her face and down to the chin. Blood was dripping down its face as the Sakura-bot stared at her with its good right eye.
The sight almost made Sakura queasy. The Sakura-bot had bled...like a human. However, its resistance to pain reassured her that the Sakura-bot was not human. She had to end this fight now before she lost her nerve. She reached into her pouch of beads and threw four beads at the Sakura-bot. The Sakura-bot mimiced her move, but its beads were different colors.
A small twister had formed around Sakura, not allowing her to escape. It picked her up and continued to spin around, greedily sucking the air from her lungs in order to feed its speed and size. When the twister died, it tossed her to the wall as Sakura slid down. Exhausted, Sakura managed to push herself up to see her opponent.
The Sakura-bot lay on the floor, drenched in blood, ash, and thorns. Small vines that were coated in thorns had wrapped tightly around the Sakura-bot and fire had scorched them. This Sakura-bot had burned as thorns buried themselves into its flesh.
"The test has ended. Thank you, you may leave now."
Sakura stumbled out of the room with tear-streaked cheeks. She hoped she would never have to suffer a fate like that, but she knew she would have nightmares of dying like that for many horrible nights.
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 8:50 pm
Rayan stood where he had been, tapping his foot as he considered what to do after tearing apart his instructions. "Ugh... stupid thing... if they're going to drag me into something, why can't they at least explain what that something is properly?" he said to himself.
A sudden motion interrupted his grumbling. Rayan snapped to attention to see a perfect vision of loveliness greeting him with a wave. He felt a slight smile crawl over his face as he walked towards Miss Aili. "Hey there," Rayan greeted her. He observed her appearance, her shining, curly hair, a friendly smile, and a slender dress, and he whistled his impressment.
"It's been a long time since we've seen each other last," he said. "Far too long. But I'm glad to see that you're still as angelic as ever. You look beautiful." Rayan felt shaken inside suddenly. What had he said that for? He supposed that it just came out, as things always did when he was around women. Goodness knows he could hardly help himself. Rayan quickly brushed his hair with a finger to regain a sense of casualness, then attempted to strike a conversation.
"Ah, anyways, I'm glad to see you again, Miss Aili. I suppose you're here for whatever it is I'm here for." Rayan paused. That had to be a stupid sounding explaination... he thought to himself, and tried again. "What I mean is, I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing. Clueless, as always. Care to enlighten me, if you can?" he asked, gently scratching the back of his head in embarassment.
(I'll be gone until Tuesday... sorry gang... hope I don't hold you up, Aileen.)
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 8:55 pm
((Dont feel like switching between Mint and Kurai so we will share this post))
Violet Leaned forward into the speakerphone.
"Setari!" He cleared his throat before continuing. "Your fighting style deeply interested me. You actually went hand to hand combat with such a fearsome creature. You certianly are one of the more interesting students here in Ria high. However.. we are really sorry for the injuries you got.. You got strong stamina my friend. Being just a human. I congratulate you!"
"Setari! I love how you did your hair!" Pepper said with a cheerful voice. "oh umm.. your.. punches were amazing! I especailly love how you did that final Bone cracking move! Man! we could hear it through the glass! you rawk!"
((Mike! I loved how your character kept in touch with your fighting style. However you could do a little more with the enviroment. You did mention it in the begining which i enjoyed. Fire proof and stuff. I didnt even think of that! Very nicely done. And best of all! this is like your only 2nd day here in Ria High! i knew when i made you a mod i had great faith in you! You did well and didnt make me dissapointed at all. No general english mistakes seen newhere. i give you..
7/8
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:07 pm
Ying-Hua held her breath as she watched the first student enter the room. His name was Setari, and he looked capable enough to fight...but as he capable enough to handle the monster that he would be facing? She watched the fight with an amused look. She jotted notes on the sheet of paper listing his information. It was a shame that the chimera managed to poison him. She did not bother to speak to him, knowing that with the poison he would not have been able to understand her. She scribbled a note to him that she would have delivered up to his room. Quote: Setari, I commend you on your test. You did extraordinarily well when you had no special abilities to assist you. You cleverly demonstrated your wit and strength. I hope your health will recover quickly after the nasty bite that chimera gave you. Ying-Hua ((OOC~ Some spelling mistakes, little grammer mistakes, kept in charry v nicely, not a particular big fan of * sound effects, but that's to each their own, made it a clean posty without dragging it out too long)) 7/8
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:11 pm
Raine finished up the last details of his evalutaions before sealing them in the provided envelope...
TEST RESULTS FROM INSTRUCTOR SUGAWA
Gekkou, Mint
"I found you to be, well, quite a tragic character. I really feel for you. You have such power, but it is simply seek and destroy with no regard to the value of life. I would like it very much if we could have a couple sessions of counsiling, upon your agreement of course. I'm here to help for whatever and whenever you need."
Instructor Sugawa
[ooc - Minty!! I liked the gothy, dark, sinister plot that you tie into this RP. Somewhat becus it personally appeals to me, but also, becus you do it so well. I was writhing in mai seat as I read that post. You...horrify me. LOL!]
6/8!!
Gekkou, Kurai
"You are quite the interesting fellow. A little too chatty for me, but that's because perhaps I'm the same way. I enjoyed seeing you perform, yes it was a performance full with your own script. Like I said you're chatty. Also, you're a sloppy fighter. I'd like to see you improve in how clean you handle your fights. Altho, I'm an explosions expert maiself, so I can't really offer you direct advice, but I can be a support and that's what I plan. Tend your wounds, rest and I'll see you around campus.
Instructor Sugawa
[ooc - Kurai!! Hmm, there were some grammatical errors. Try to shape up in that respect. However, I am always blown away by the balance of descriptions, action, and sound effects as well as humor in your RP's and this was no exception. So for creating such an enjoiable and exciting scene I give you...]
7/8!! and a smiley 4laugh
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