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azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:41 pm


Welcome to my leetle IUJ concept thread! When this is open, I will gladly accept comments and critiques, just as long as they're helpful or nice.

1. Intro post. You are here. How I know that is totally a secret.
2. About Lilith.
3. Her past story.
4. Pictures.
5. False, the guardian.
6. Task one.
.....
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:42 pm


-You are here, alone again, in your sweet insanity-

Her

Name: Lilith
Guardian: Alessa "False" Danton. (Azumi).
Gender: Female
Personality: In everything she does, whether morally wrong, obscene, morbid, or even sometimes amazing in a certain perspective, she takes natural pride in it. With a sharp tongue, though not always carrying witty comebacks, she lashes at those who oppose or annoy her. If that does not work, she just gives a hauntingly chilly, unblinking, stare, locking them to her by means of eye contact.
Lilith tends to not show much remorse or guilt for any heinous act she may commit, and rarely will she ever be sympathetic to another unless they are extremely close to her.
When playing her violin, something that is indeed incredibly sacred to her, she will change her emotions on the turn of a dime; going from melancholic, passionate, blank, to eerie and almost insane. She’ll do almost all of that, except speak, that is. That’s right, not a word comes from her lips while the bow is skillfully dragged over the black strings of her silver violin. She communicates with her eyes and small facial expressions rather than words. Only when her song is finished, and the illusions of her skillful art laid, will she say something... maybe.
Appearance: She's the one who'll eventually stand at a tall five foot eight inches and hold the body most women would consider a gift within itself, though it'll be noting special to Lil. Her skin is smooth and pale porcelain, lacking in almost all normal pigmentation and warmth save for her lips, which are a deep red due to unknown reasons. Her eyes are of a pale violet like those of the purple sweet pea flower, but will darken almost to indigo around the black pupil if her emotions become intense. Side sweeping bangs hide her forehead and eyebrows, as well as the majority of the right side of her face. The rest of her hair, which is the pale blonde that is usually only seen on three year-old children, falls three to four inches past the shoulders in large, semi-loose curls.
She is often, if not always, clad in black dresses of an older age or a greatly less frou-frou gothic lolita fashion.They hug her body and normally fall around her feet to trail and drag slightly on the ground. If it has sleeves, they are often tight and most likely will go past her knuckles, exposing only her fingers. Fine black lace is allowed to adorn and accentuates the hemming and ends of her sleeves or bottom of her clothing at times. Pants, jeans, short capris, or anything that ends before her knees is ignored and never worn...IE, she prefers dresses or skirts.
Clothing Ideas: Again, not cape. just focus on dress! Maybe if it were in black Main dress <3.Just focus on the dress.

Like this/ most of Kmye's clothing fashion.
Hair looks. <- 1. NOT MY ART. 2. like those curls, except they start higher up on hear head instead of being like big ringlets near the bottom.
Powers/Abilities:When she plays her violin, which would normally be on a street corner at night, a theatrical stage when she can sneak on and start playing during intermission, or a general area where there were about a handful of people, the music'll captivate the listeners. Illusions will start to form in their heads, distorting the area around them to look a different way. These illusions can cause the victims to either go into a state of euphoria, a daze, or even complete insanity. it all depends on what Lilith wants them to go through and what she wants them to see, whether it be a candy mountain or their loved ones being slaughtered before them or even by them. She toys with their minds until they become unstable and lost within themselves… only then will she stop playing and kill off what she needs to survive while the others who are incapacitated, yet not killed, are forever “gone.”
Note: Note quite sure yet. Here are some ideas.
"Play them a show."
"Play their internal strings."
"You play to hear their sweet insanity."
More coming. Maybe.

other
+She's a vampire. Dun dun dun.
+ has a silver - yes actual silver - violin and bow with black strings. The hair on the bow (forgot the technical term, if there is one) is actually from her own head. So yes, it's pale blonde.
+Blood will become a more dominant food source as she grows older.
+ PH334 HUR

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:43 pm


-All too calm, you hide yourself from reality-
NOT DONE.
The act, the chase, and the train.


It was the year of 1875. Theaters and Opera houses that had been closed, or still under their extended construction, due to the havoc – the beautiful havoc – caused by the Franco-Prussian war and other events, had finally started opening their grand and decorated doors all over Paris and the rest of France.

The humans were in a flurry. Women dressed in too many skirts and covered under their cosmetics and perfumes flitted about, their men doting on them in their tuxedoes and top hats. Their carriages and beasts clotted the circular turn-around in front of the theater hall. They noticed nothing but what the other was wearing. They knew nothing that the other didn’t already know. They were stupid. Maybe that’s why they didn’t notice the dead man with the slit neck thrown in the near-by alley or hear screams from a cellar door around the back of the theater.

Those backstage were already in a fuss. From the rafters above the hardwood stage I watched. They moved like ants after you’ve just smashed their trail, confused and disoriented. I listened to their harsh cries and swears as items went misplaced and were forever to be lost and I laughed when one tripped over another. It was good to be back amongst them; my fun had been put on hold for far too long.

---


It was some time later; I could not remember how long I had stood on the rickety boards above stage in observation. My insides were fluttery. I gripped the metal bar in front of me when I watched the velvet curtains open to reveal a floor-lit stage and rows upon rows of humans. My debut wouldn’t be long from now. Soon my bow would glide over my heart and those present would fall into their own minds, their own beings.

The actors and actresses traipsed around the stage in their gaudy outfits. Their faces were like the hideous dolls seen in shops that lined the streets; falsely pale with huge, red cheeks, clumped eyelashes, and over-dramatic eyelids. They wore smiles that made me laugh outwardly, but cringe on the inside. Everything they did made me cringe in disgust. Their voices were not tuned and their songs were of things that did not, or should not, matter in this world, like love, justice, and standing up for the small. Those are some of the things that I could never relate to and I don’t believe I ever will. They’re alien to me, foreign…

---

I was brought out of my dark and confused reverie by the sound of thousands of clapping hands. The curtains were beginning to close and I moved swiftly. My feet did not echo as they touched the wooden steps that led further back stage and the orange flames of the hundreds of candles that were used for the moment as light along the narrow halls did not flicker as I drew past them. I was like shadow and shade; there but not physically felt.

I could already hear the loud voices of the performers and scum bounce down my hallway as they hurried to set-up for the next half of the show. I let the tip of my bow drag lightly over the stonewall; it’s emitted sound like that of a blade being dragged over the edge of its sheath.

I was nearing the last corner before the hall that would lead me straight on stage when someone exited into my way from one of the large oak doors.

He looked at me and then at my violin. “Who are you?” he asked. I remember his wandering eyes.

I said nothing. I only looked at him full on, my eyes locking with his. It unnerved him and I could see the inward shiver. A rose a brow, a small smirk crossing my red lips. When he took a step closer, I let my bow come and rest on his shoulder… it was then that he noticed the dry blood on the bowstrings.

“W-Who are you?! I’ll call for someone! I will! Gustov! Gus-“

My bow strings had already cut into his warm flesh. I watched as he slid down the wall and into a heap on the floor. Crimson leaked from his artery into a glossy pool at my feet.

not done.


Sadly I didn't get the time to finish this, but I'll give a review thing of what happened so as to not leave you on a cliff.

So Lilith then moved onto the stage and the several people still in the theater at the time stopped and started to congrigate back to their seats thinking that maybe the show was starting again. When Lil lifts her bow, the doors of the main theater hall close and lock, keeping those inside in and those in the lobby out. She then starts to play a haunting melody and those in the audience become transfixed and seem to be in a total daze. Suddenly there's screaming and hysterical (maniacle) laughter coming from the viewers. One man sees himself murdering his familiy, another becomes consumed with the thought that people are chasing them with knives, a child is lost in a dark world with red snow. You get the idea. In the lobby, people are panicking from the screams comming from the theater and then men dressed in black and white barge in and start to bang down the door. lil stops her fun and disappears out the back, but only to run into one of the cloaked men. She gets around him before he can pull out a cross and then there's a big chase around the back allies of Paris . When all seems lost after being almost completely surrounded, Lilith notices she's just near the trainstation and makes almost a mad dash. There she sees the red train and without even reall thinking, she jumps on and immediatly as she does so the doors close, the whistle blows, and the train starts to move, the cloaked men unable to get to her as they watch from the platform.


PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:51 pm


-Do you call it solitude? Do you call it liberty?-

She can still be seen in pictures.

[x]
MY art. Old. Basically sort of how she looks, except she almost never smiles (out of kindness), and I drew her curls too tight. I'll try to get a better drawing up later.

[x]
Newer picture. She doesn't dress like that...I just got lazy.

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:54 pm


-When all the world turns away to leave you lonely-

Actual guardian material?

Name: Alessa Danton
Nickname(s): False.
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Race: Human.
Height: 5'4"
Occupation: Tattoo-artist, ex-gang member/spy.
Appearance: Standing around five foot four inches, do not let her height fool you into thinking she can't handle herself. With built legs and toned arms, along with stealth, she moves like ink in the shadows and is just as silent.
Her skin is a pale hue, the light freckles scattered across the bridge of her nose and just along the tops of her cheeks perhaps giving away an Irish background. Her hair, too, that falls to mid-back, would also give away her heritage if it weren’t dyed black and streaked with purple with a few – very few – streaks of bleach blonde. Several silver, cylinders, measuring from one to two and a half inches are scattered throughout her hair. Her bangs are cut diagonally over the right side of her face, the longest strands often sweeping to the side. Shorter hair that falls along the sides of her head near her ears curls outwards. Loose strands often fly in front of her face, obscuring her vision out of her two royal violet orbs who’s lids are often covered with black eye shadow.
Feet=horrible.
Not her normal clothing style... [x]
Actually barely has the blonde streaks... Most recent. She has freckles ( )
Personality:
Misc.: -Born in Sydney, Australia.
- Collects autographed guitars.
- Disowned by her parents, a wealthy and well-known family in Sydney, when she was 16 when they found out she had joined a gang.
- Has an older brother named Oliver who was pretty much abandoned by his parents because they didn't want a boy. He was taken care of by his aunt on the west coast of Australia. He was in the same gang as Alessa, though she didn't know they were siblings. He also harbors a deep hate for her because "mummy loved her more."

Other people in Alessa's life:
-Aris: Something like a father figure and boss of the tatoo shop where she works, also a tatoo artist.
-Collin: (23) Aris's son. He's like a brother to Alessa and he's also a tatoo artist.
-Hayden: (23) Collin's best friend. He's also like a brother to Alessa and also a tatoo artist.

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:55 pm


-The fields are filled with desires-
Task one.
"They will come for you at night..."

Note to readers: -Alessa and "False" are the same person.

“Heeey, Lil, moooveee…. Lilith, you need to move so I can get through…. Lilith! Augghh, Alessa,” A rather tall man whimpered as he peeked over the tops of the boxes that were stacked up in his tattooed arms.

“Lilith, move,” came the woman’s stern, accented voice from one side of the people-filled, tattoo machine-buzzing, shop. Violet eyes looked up for a second to watch the blonde haired child scoot in exaggerated slowness to the right towards the wall.

“How’d you do that?” Asked the man as he moved forward, finally, and deposited the boxes next to the entrance desk and behind Alessa’s chair. He straightened up as he fixed his black shirt and watched the child begin to carefully examine one of the framed drawings that hung on the wall.

“Christ sake, Hayden, its not that hard. I just told her to move.” The Aussie had stopped her tattooing once more and turned in her chair to face in the direction that Lilith was in.

“I did tell her to move, didn’t you hear me? Though I don’t even know why I tried, she doesn’t listen to anyone but you.”

“Not true.”

“Yes true.”

“She listens to Aris.”

“You mean she stays away from Aris… She doesn’t listen to him.”

“Then maybe you should wear a cross around your neck then, or garlic. That might work too,” False smirked.

“Oh ha ha, funny funny,” Hayden rolled his eyes and crossed his arms over his chest.

The pair continued to watch the child across the room. She had abandoned looking up at the framed drawing, as she was too close and just too short to see it. Turning to the left on the heel of her black dress shoes, she hopped forward and almost smacked into the waiting bench. Pale hands went up in front of her chest for a split second before they slowly fell back to her sides. Pale purple eyes watched the chatting patrons owlishly. Internally she was laughing at how they hadn’t seemed to notice her despite her being just inches away, so close in fact that she could count the hairs on the nearest woman’s fat arm. Lilith examined those people for quite a good while, long enough to make Hayden lose interest in watching her and her guardian to go back to her job before she lost her customer.

‘Finally.’ The child mentally sighed. Her light irises slid from their corners and back to the fat arm in front of her. With a quick glance upwards to make sure the woman was still talking, Lilith extracted a safety pin from the pocket on the side of her dress. With nimble fingers, for her age at least, she took the “pointy”, as she liked to call it, away from the rounded top. Twiddling it for a second between her thumb and forefinger, the child positioned her little weapon just so and held it above the plump arm flesh. Only a second later and there were three medium yelps that rang out in the shop simultaneously from the three people on the bench. Chaos followed after as the targeted woman leapt up to her feet and started waving her arm around and screaming like a madwoman. She made a mad dash towards the back of the shop, but instantly tripped. Two people were taken down with her; one being another customer and the other was Hayden. The newest stack of something he was carrying went up and everywhere and a tray of inkpots from the other tattooist’s area, just in front of False's area, went flying up as well and splattered all over the floor.

False just continued to sit and watch with a raised brow as everything unraveled and fell apart. Amidst the cries from the woman and the buzz made from the repeated “what happened/who did it?” questions, deep violet eyes were already searching out a particular child who had ducked inside one of the cabinets to safely watch what she had caused.
---

“Now tell me again, for the twentieth time, why did you shove the damned pin in that woman’s arm?” The question was genuine, not harsh or threatening, surprisingly. Alessa was standing in the doorway, watching the pale blonde child stop putting on her nightgown to look back at her.

“Because I wanted to hear her scream,” her reply was paired with a devilish little smirk that’d make the exorcist girl run in terror.

Alessa, however, just rolled her eyes and sighed. “You…. I have no bloody idea,” she ended lamely and just turned out of the room. She wasn’t mad, per se, at Lilith, but it wasn’t like she was going to congratulate the girl for causing a ruckus and making the shop lose some money due to the ink spillage and that the “pinned” woman vowed she’d never come back there again. The only good that came out of that day was seeing Aris’s face at the sight of the chaos, seeing Hayden get squished, and Collin (the tattooist who’s ink had gotten catapulted through the air), almost wet himself from laughing.

Lilith stayed in the position with her nightgown “half off half on” until she could no longer hear her guardian’s footsteps. When the gentle thuds ceased, she pulled her arm through the sleeve and let the clothing fall around her body and her ankles. Bare feet slid dryly over the floorboards of her square room towards the door and closed it quickly to keep the squeak of the hinges away. Turning to her left, she bent down and yanked the plug of the lamp, the only thing supplying light to the room at the time, out of the wall. With glowing eyes she watched as the room became dark and as the silver moon light and shadows stretched themselves over her bed and floor. A calm sensation washed over her small body. She liked the dark, the moon… not the evil that was the day, the sun, where she had to go everywhere under a black parasol. At night she was free and could plainly stand in natural light without being burned or feeling sick…

Coming out of her dark sky reverie, the curly haired child crossed back over to her bed. With the aid of a stepping stool, she was soon up and in the bed’s inky covers, their fabric already twisting around her frame as she moved to get situated. Thoughts of the day skidded around her drowsy head as lids fell over pale lanterns, a small smirk lighting on her lips before all senses seemed to stop.
---

Something caused the “lights upstairs” to switch on, but the child’s eyes remained closed. Lilith could hear something, or someone, scuffling around her room. An unfamiliar scent drifted just about her nose; it was a cold smell, dusty and dreary, with dark blood… Her small muscles twitched, and her heart banged against her ribcage, but as a whole she looked unmoving. Its footsteps continued.

Perhaps it was Alessa? …No, her guardian did not sneak about like this in the house, and she didn’t smell weird either…It could be an animal? It was possible, since those things smelled odd, but there was something in the back of Lilith’s mind that told her it was bigger than a raccoon or opossum.

She could hear it touch things; start moving and then stop to pick up and examine whatever it was that had caught its interest. Lilith was content to stay perfectly still in her bed, pretending to be asleep, until there was a sound that made her eyes flick open and unlatch the coiled springs in her legs.

“Don’t you touch that!” She hissed. The child had made some crazy leaps over the bed and onto the floor, skidding to the side of a whicker chair where a silver violin and its bow were propped up. Lilith crouched slightly, lips pulled back in some type of snarl that flashed her longer-than-normal pearly canines. No one touched the instrument but her, not even Alessa, and definitely not whatever this thing was.

The mystery “creature” actually jumped back in surprise, landing in the moonlight. Its once shadowed body became that of a rather tall and thin looking man swathed in black clothing. His skin appeared paper white, and slightly blue from the current lighting. His hair was the color of the purest snow imaginable and it fell in feathery layers around his long, but smooth, face. Bits of thin silver chain, like those used in jewelry, glinted from his jacket pocket and around his neck, even a bit from his ear as well.

Lilith stared in what perhaps could be called awe, despite her hissing and almost feral manner at the moment. Pale violet eyes traveled up and down the man’s figure a few times, but became stuck on his face. Electric green orbs locked with her eyes and no matter what she tried to do, she couldn’t look away. There was a familiarity in them, but how? She had never met this man in her life and she didn’t even know if he was human or some…. thing from 40,000 leagues under the sea. “Who-who…”

The unknown man began to speak to her, his words a little slow, as if he were only talking to himself.

Lilith stopped her hissing and let an eyebrow rise just slightly in confusion. The mystery man spoke in a language she could not comprehend. It was smooth, and actually very pretty, but whatever meaning the spoken words had were lost to the child. She merely continued to watch him, her eyes locked with his.

The child stared for a moment and watched the man tilt his head as he spoke again in those pretty-sounding words that her mind couldn’t understand. “Who are you?” Lilith asked again, her tone sharp. Her snarl had regained itself in annoyance to this calm and foreign intruder.

The man’s voice was as calm as ever. “I am not so different than you, young one,” his accent was heavy, but at least this time his words could be understood.

“You’re not like me!” Spat the child and she glared at the man for thinking her to be so stupid. She felt as if he were mocking her, in some way, shape, or form, with his calm demeanor and lack of reaction towards her.

The unnamed man only gave a distant chuckle. He moved silently towards Lilith and only stopped when he crouched down so his face was mere centimeters from hers. “Oh, I would not be so sure of that, miss. You see, similar DNA runs through both our veins. We both fear the day and its light, and we are both preyed upon by the ‘Les Sangs de Saints.’”

Lilith couldn’t explain why, but when the man uttered the foreign name, she inwardly shuddered. The internal feeling to look over her shoulder tingled in her mind, but she dared not to; her eyes continued to bore deep into his emerald ones in an unblinking manner. “You…who are the “Les Sangs de Saints?” She asked in a curious, but wary, tone.

“Ah. They are the ones who shadow our steps, our lives. They are the ones who cause the tingling feeling in the back of your mind that makes you to look over your shoulder. They are always hunting us, looking for us. We run, but cannot hide from them for long, because the always find us.” He spoke in a cold tone; a serious tone. It was one that held malice, but fear as well.

The blonde child listened intently; her posture straight and slightly relaxed, her face calm and almost expressionless as it hid her true thoughts. “Us… You’re a vampire, aren’t you…?” She finally understood some and it explained why there was something familiar about him; he was like her.

The man nodded. “I am, like you. And it is because of that that I was sent here to warn you.”

“Warn me?”

“Yes. They’re here…”

“Les Sangs de Saints?”

“Yes…and they’re looking for you, for all of us.”

For the first time during this encounter, Lilith felt fear. Her heart pounded in her chest, her cold palms felt clammy, and there was that feeling that urged her to look over her shoulder. “But-,”

The man cut her off as he put up a silver decorated hand. His eyes had finally broken from hers and were now looking over her shoulder towards the door. Standing quickly, he spoke, “I must go now, dear child.”

“But…how do I know who the Saints are? What will they do? How do they act? When do they come and how can I stay away from them? … And you never told me who you were!”

The man was already at her window, the moon’s light glinting off the metal on his person. Lifting the bottom of the window, he paused, and looked over his shoulder. “Just remember, Lilith, that they will come for you at night.” With those last words he slid out and just seemed to vanish into thin air, never answering her last question.

Lilith ran after him to the window, but he was already gone. The cool air fluttered through her curls as she stuck her head out into the night. They will come for me at night...

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:56 pm


-All voices crying for freedom-
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:57 pm


-But all in vain they will fade away-

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:58 pm


-There's only you to answer you, forever-
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:59 pm


-In blinded mind you are singing a glorious hallelujah-

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:00 pm


-The distant flutter of angels. They're all too far, too far to reach for you-
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:02 pm


-I am here alone again. In my sweet serenity-

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:03 pm


-Hoping you will never find me in any place-
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:04 pm


-I will call it solitude when all my songs fade in vain-

azumi


azumi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:05 pm


-In my voice, far away to eternity-
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