i just wrote 2 poems can i get some feed back please?

[JesusRocks4Ever]

Once again I Thank You

God I thank you for loving me just the way i am
God I thank you for loving me even when i pushed you away,
I said i didn't need you I can do this on my own
When I realized i really do need you
I came running back to you,
you gladly took me back and forgave me
Once again i Thank You
God I Thank You for always being there through all my struggles
God Thank You for giving me a great family and great friends
Once again I Thank You




I am Never Alone

When I've had a hard day,
and there seems to be no one around,
No one to comfort me,
I start crying out with no reply
"Where are you God?"
"Are you still there?"
Then out of nowhere
I heard a voice "I am with you"
"I am always with you"
"You are Never Alone"  

[JesusRocks4Ever]

thanks here are 2 more i wrote

Jesus you are enough for me

I've had enough of living life for only me
I keep comparing myself to others
and what they have
how come there life seems so perfect?
how come it feels like there is something i more i need in my life?

Then i stop and realize there is nothing i need but you Jesus,
Jesus you are enough for me,
Now and Forever
Just knowing you love me is enough for me
there is nothing in this world i need
nothing but you Jesus


Popular

I long to be popular
I long to be loved by other people
i would give up anything just to see them notice me

I've now changed my whole life
my clothes,
my personality
everything about me has changed

How come I'm not happy?
I'm popular now its what i always wanted

I gave up everything that ever meant anything to me
and for what?
these people who i thought liked me don't like me anymore
maybe the truth is they never liked me.

Now there is nothing left i don't have any friends at all

It wasn't worth all I gave away for a few minutes of being popular

This time I'm saying no
I gave up everything i had
thinking it would make me happy
but in the end i was left with nothing
I've lost enough to know that life's to short to waste it