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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:18 pm
I was looking through my box of memories and found this poem BlackBloodJin gave me. I didn't ask her if I could post it, so if I die you know you to tell the police to question. It didn't have a name, so I named it The Line.
A thin line separates us from death. But what lies between them? Is it a true line? Or a lie? Is life a constant mockery of death? Does death truely exist? You cannot see it, speak itm or feel it, Or is death a state of mind? Is it a light brush of wind beckoning to you? Or the whisper you push to the back of your mind in uncertainy? Or is the true line between sanity or insanity? Not being able to tell the difference between life and death, is that insanity? What is true sanity? Day after day of the same routine. Or the thought of not knowing what will happen next. A thin line separates us from insanity.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:25 pm
Yum Yum... Tasty Poetry There... Give My Thanks To The Poet
Top Hat xXx
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:26 pm
it's so cool i don't think she will kill u
to slow
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:41 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:54 pm
it's a good poem so you might live
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 4:38 pm
Angel Muerto it's a good poem so you might live might wink
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 5:33 pm
Wow... It's a really good poem. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:04 pm
I kind of remember writing it. I've slept since then. sweatdrop
I'm not mad Kit. Just kind of surprised. I'm iffy on my writing. Everyone tells me it's really good. But I just think their trying to be nice.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:06 pm
Yay! The artist is here! Let's give her a big round of appluase for not killing me! *claps around the room, some booing* Come on now people! sweatdrop You don't really want me dead do you?
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:08 pm
I think I have some more poems around here somewhere. I gave a bunch to my mom for mothers day. They aren't as deep as that exept my If I could Change The Past poem.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:10 pm
*squee* Post it! Post it! 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:58 am
Pensakura Yay! The artist is here! Let's give her a big round of appluase for not killing me! *claps around the room, some booing* Come on now people! sweatdrop You don't really want me dead do you? sorry! i was the one booing rofl
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 1:01 am
BlackBloodJIn I kind of remember writing it. I've slept since then. sweatdrop I'm not mad Kit. Just kind of surprised. I'm iffy on my writing. Everyone tells me it's really good. But I just think their trying to be nice. i think your writing is great. you write some good stories. you make them interesting and funny. that and your poem is awesome.
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 4:03 am
i thought it was awesome 1 thing you should know > i dont try to be nice... i tell how it is no matter what ask angel 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 8:51 am
yea Kookie doesn't hold back... she's brutal wink
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