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 Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:57 pm
...I have a thing for one of my best friends, but I can't seem to let them know how I feel.... so I put it into poems.... feedback is cool.... and advise is nice too....
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title- I Only Exist For You
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I wait with baited breath
Crouched on bended knee
Waiting for the day
When you would finaly see me
And exept the cold grey heart
That you hold within your hand
Or crush the beating there
So my misory can end
I'd catch a shooting star
Just so you can see
How it's beauty dims compared
To how you look to me
Your laughter rings like twinkling bells
Lighting up my life
And the warmth within your smile
Chases away the coldest nights
With every breath you take
My heart skips another beat
And I die a little more inside
Because I know we can never be
You're the only one I've ever loved
Enough to stay by thier side
even after our souls find new lives
after our bodys have died
I'd fallow you to the end of time
But you still don't see
How deep the love corses through
the veins inside of me
look into my eyes
and deep iside my soul
to see the secret I cant express
in mortal words alone
I Only Exist For You
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:11 pm
"Another Deppressive Love Song"
by- Broken_Shadow_Child
AKA- Anastasia
I'll climb up to the stars
and sit there in silence
gathering a trail of light
to pull you from your lonely darkness
and I'll hold my breath on the teliphone
just to hear you breathing
in sink with my heart's beating
Oh god, hear we go again
And I love all your tears
They give me a reason to hold you close to me
And I love all your anger
I know you see me when you hurt me
And I love all your laughter
It puts the sunlights rays to shame
And I die everytime you speak to me
Please say my name again
I sat there n the darkness
and watched your sleeping face
and wiped away your tired tears
but held my distance just in case
You decided you never meant the words
that you once said to me
and you decided to break my beating heart
but i would still be happy (just knowing that you see me)
And I love all your tears
They give me a reason to hold you close to me
And I love all your anger
I know you see me when you hurt me
And I love all your laughter
It puts the sunlights rays to shame
And I die everytime you speak to me
Please say my name again
And I hate it when you cry
Because I can't fix that pain
And I hate it when your angry
'Cause you'll hurt yourself again
And I hate it when you laugh
You always laugh at me
And I die with every word you say
Never say my name again
Yes I die with every word you say
Never say my name again
Because I'm not good enough for you
And you just want to use me
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:08 am
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 4:40 pm
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The_Heart_of_All_Darkness
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 5:50 am
they were very good, i wont lecture you with the average advice, you should just stay quiet, and slowly express your feeling to him/her by at first casual flirting or just hug em every now and again, or you can keep it conceiled and let it all out at once, if you are scared then get a friend to tell him/her, i know how you feel i have had the same thing happento me.....i jknow the feeling in your chest that almost hurts and the way you want to throw up with anticipation...
thanks for your time
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 2:22 pm
I actually wrote one yesterday morning at work similar to your last one while thinking about my ex. I may post it on here later, I dunno.
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:15 am
Wow.. That was, to say, one of the best peices I've ever read, refering to the first one.
I can't really express in words, but If you continue to create peices such as that ...
-shrugs helplessly-
It speaks to the soul, not to the mind.
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:34 am
I pray you gain your happness
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:24 am
*dies*
That was better than anything I've ever written.
I can't help you with relationships, because I'm not good with them either, but I hope you end up happy.
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