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I would love to have a tutor,I can take criticism well,and would appreciate being pushed to the best of my ability. I will read post's and message's no matter how long,as I wish to learn how to go into more detail. On that note describing setting,characters,fighting(which I can't do at all) are my main problems. But recently I have lost internet and will not be very active but I would be willing to message my tutor when I will be on. Thank you for taking the time to consider me as a student. Please Pm me or post if anyone could help me.

Keep your money. What you need to do is pick up a set plot, and start a 1-1 RP with someone who is a reliably literate RPer.

As for detail, there is not much I can suggest without having an active RP available. On that note, however, Here are some pointers: visualise and describe the environs, say something like 'looked at her feet', or 'glanced around nervously'. Those two phrases, if not overused, will get you far.

In fighting, do much the same thing: keep in mind you character's gear and injuries, and don't do anything too far out there, ie, if your character has a deep gash on her arm, she won't be able to weild a sword as effectively. Adjectives, such as 'clumsily', alertly', and such like will help to flesh out your posts as well.