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 Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 2:25 pm
I just thought that I would out some of my drawings up here, and see what people had to say. I am a self-taught artist, so any comments and critique is always aprrectiacted. Most of my work right now is a recreation of other artists, but I am slowly getting my own drawing done.
I will add more pictures as soon as I have time to put them on my computer....I'm not lucky enough to have a scanner and such of my own crying
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 2:27 pm
This drawing is from the manga Tsubasa, and I really enjoyed the picture of it, so I decided to give a whirl: 
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Illicit Romance Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:22 pm
Hmm...
I like how you've done the eyes, mostly.
The only things that bother me are how the chin is kinda pointy and juts out, how the nose is also kinda pointy with no form, and then the mouths are just lines.
But other than that, they're very good.
:3
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:25 am
I agree with illicit.
I would recommend picking up a drawing book to help with little things like that. ^^
Also is cool that your teaching yourself, but believe me it takes alot of years to even get semi-good.
I really advise you to pick up a help book. ^^
Um, I also noticed you drew a line down the page. I don't really think you should do that, because it looks like a wall is bewteen them. o.o
Also I don't really see any shading, maybe add some.
That's it. ^^
It is done very well for a remake od someone elses work.
<3 Fuzzy
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 8:50 pm
In the manga, there IS a wall between them. Hence why he drew it like that. It's a glass wall, but a wall none the less, symbloizing how they are close, yet seperated throughout the entire series.
I love how you managed to do their hands though. They look brilliant. :3 and shading would be good too, though I know it's hard to shade things *hardly does it herself*
I would love to see more of your drawings when you get them on your computer!
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