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Fwizzie

PostPosted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 9:36 pm


The Wingless Princess is a creation of another member of gaiaonline as a contest. I aim to enter this when its finished. This is a very rough drawing so far with very far to go so any pointers would be helpful. I know the picture is big and very difficult to see but i would appreciate and comments or help you can give.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 10:34 pm


I like it, donno, are you gonna color it?

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thedenomerator

PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:22 am


It's really big, and then it's really little, and then it's big again if you click the other thingy.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 1:02 pm


It's beautiful! but as for an adjustment make the neck a little thicker. Her head position compared to the rest of her body looks a little award. But it's only a really little detail. It looks so prettty! gonk I wish ihad your talent for faces and eyes. Something about your work draws you in.

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thedenomerator

PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 7:33 pm


I'm gonna go against TJ on that and say don't make the neck bigger, make the head smaller.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 6:07 am


But If you increase it just a little there is no need to erase all the head and face work. just a little larger swoop of a line.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 5:49 pm


TJ_Jaganshi
But If you increase it just a little there is no need to erase all the head and face work. just a little larger swoop of a line.
I was sorta lookin' from the perspective of this person having an unusually large forehead (eep, don't eat me!) and my thoughts that i was actually the whole head. But, actually... Your idea is much better in more than one way. It's easier and it's probably one of those drawing things that'll draw attention from one thing to another. Liiike, away from the size of the features to something more like the shape or details of them. Now that I look at it, its not too bad, but, yeah, the neck should be bigger. And maybe... Shoulders, too?
PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 8:07 pm


I can't draw and am proud of it.

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