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 Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:34 pm
Just so you know, this is the thread dedicated to Travis and I. I'd appreiciate it if you (the members) did not post here. It's just so we can keep track of all the things we've got planned for the guild.
Any posts not made by Diablo or myself will be deleted. But you may feel free to read anything in here.
Thank you.
EDIT: If you have any suggestions, feel free to post them in the forum in the topic created by Diablo.
-Joseph
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:37 pm
First thing I need to know Travis, is what plans do you have for you characters.
Being Diablo and Curio. I don't mean upcoming, I would like those to be a surprise.
I mean in the past.
What sort of story did you develop for Diablo and Curio and the Darkfire Kingdom?
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:44 pm
Well I shall get to that as soon as I can. I'm still looking for my notebook where I had been writing that story in it. So once I do I can give you the full backstory.
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:45 pm
Can you give me anything briefly? Summary?
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:50 pm
Well you do know the basics already, so I can't really go into full details at the moment, but I shall add anything I remember in this post.
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:53 pm
Hmm.
Well, as I'm sure you're aware, I've been trying to make my own comics to depict past stories.
And we did decide to run with the original DFS story, just several years later.
Would you like me to tell you what I had in my head about the past?
For the record, Diablo is in all of my ideas.
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:56 pm
For the record. I have no clue what goes on in your head. XD
And other then that I do not really know what you had in mind, mind telling me what you were thinking about?
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:59 pm
Which would you like to hear first? DFS. Or the prelude to DFS?
EDIT: Ah hell. I'll just type them both up.
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 11:59 pm
Okay. So you know how the DFS revolved around the sport, Dueling.
And then there the dragons, and the magic stones that were basic knock offs of materia, and whatnot.
Well, I'm gonna tell you the story I came up with in my head. Or atleast, what I managed to came up with. This is why I needed to discuss it with you. To complete the story.
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So, it starts with Ken and his baby dragon sitting on the roof. Cocoa, the dragon (XD) has been acting weird lately. Staring off in the distance. Not eating. Etc.
One day, Ken gets a package from the King. Inside, he finds a note from the King, telling him about his birthparents. This is basically where Ken finds out that he has a feternal twin sister. So in this note, he is told that the King once loved his mother, and had a son with her, who is the Prince, Max. They later seperate. She joins the kingdoms task force (elite army) and meets a new man. This would be his father. They later have twins (keeping in mind he isn't told that it's a girl). Eventually, she is transferred to protect another kingdom. But she leaves her son with the King, asking him to take care of him. 15 years later, Ken reads this letter. He is also given a very valuable gem that once belonged to her. Cocoa leers in the background, keeping a close eye on this gem.
Somewhere else in the forest, Kens sister, Mellany, who had recieved a similar letter months before, was on her way to this kingdom. She gets lost, but finds Diablo, thanks to her skills to sense the elements. Diablo was boiling some water, and she sensed the flame and found him.. Anyways. >_>
He agrees to bring her to the King of this land. But on the way over, they walk through a cold patch. For a few meters, the temprature completely drops below freezing, then goes up again. Eventually, they get out of the forest, and discover a house at the end of the feild. Which is Kens. They eventually arrive at his house, and Diablo basically dumps her onto him, and dissappears. At this point, Cocoa snags the gem off of the table, and make a mad dash out the door. Ken runs after him, and Mel is quickly told to make herself at home.
They make it to the forest, and Ken finds the temprature to be quite a bit lower then it should be. He follows his pet to the lake in the middle of the forest, and what he finds bewilders him. He finds in the very center, laying ontop of the water, the Dragon of Ice. This dragon senses Ken, and tells him the world is in danger. This dragon is telepathic, by the way. XD
Ken is told that an evil man is about to emerge. And that he will try to steal the power of the dragons, thus recieving their elemental power. There were 8 dragons including himself, the Dragon of Fire, the Dragon of Wind, the Dragon of Water, the Dragon of the Earth, the Dragon of Lightning, the Dragon of Light, and the Dragon of Darkness.
The dragon then glows a bright white colour, and tells Ken that he is the gaurdian of Ice, destined to protect the Dragon of Ice. The dragon then turns into pure energy. Think of Kadaj when he dies. All the energy forms a small ball, that shoots into Ken. He faints, and wakes up in the morning, wondering if it were a dream, or a mirage.
He then goes back home to discover an invite to the upcoming Duelest Tournament on his door.
[end of chapter one]
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The next chapter is basically him training, and being taunted by Diablo, creating the rivalry between them. I was also planning on introducing Kens half brother, Max in this one. Mel quickly learns that she is Kens sister, after reading the letter he recieved. At the end, it'd be a week later, at the stadium, moments before the first battle.
[end of chapter two]
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This one is the epic battle between Diablo and Ken. Appearently, no one else signed up. But Diablo really intimidated the competition so that he and Ken would be the only contenders. Ken starts with his initial weapon, that weird swallow thing, but gets knocked over by one of Diablos fireball attacks. He flies out of the ring. Dropping the gem he had recieved, he looks upon it and sees it glowing. He goes to reach for it. Upon grabbing it, his whole hand lights up in a green flash, and his energy blade forms.
Getting back into the ring, Diablo notices his aurablade. Knowing what it means, Diablo uses his ultimate weapon. Speaking a few words in the ol' elvish toungue, a little black vortex appears. From within, a large scaley demon appears. You may know it as the Darkfire Dragon. It shoots a large bolt of energy at Ken. One that would probably kill him if it hit.
Ken reacted quickly, and used his aura blade to cut right through it. The blast shoots off the far wall of the stadium, nearly missing Melany. She stands in awe. Both her and Diablo know exactly who they are standing in front of, and he is not the wiser.
Diablo then forfeits, and walks away. Ken follows him and offers him half of his winnigs, as a peice offering. Diablo reluctlantly accepts. But not before Melany interupts, revealing that she is Kens long lost twin sister.
[end of chapter three]
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This one starts with the three discussing things at Kens house. Diablo reveals that he knows Ken is the Ice Gaurdian, based on the scriptures he's read about the 'weilder of rare energy'. Melany shows Ken her letter from their mother, stating everything the Kings letter stated. Only with one more detail. It states 'find your brother, or all will be lost'. She never even signed it. There's just a line that appears unintentional near the bottom and a small ink splotch. As if she was hurried to hide it.
They question what it could mean, and see the only solution to finding out is seeking the writer of the letter. The only problem was that their mother died 3 years ago. So they decided to consult the only known human alive who could shed some light on it. And that was the King.
[end of chapter four]
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I don't really have much down for this chapter, I just know they see the king, get some information about their parents, and the elemental dragons, then decide to set out to find thier father. Diablo decides to join them, as he is also seeking someone, and the King assigns his son to accompany them aswell. And so the journey begins.
The only other things I have are sketches of two other dragons, and two other gaurdians.
And I really think we should work the rest out.
EDIT: Not to mention the fifth main character and the Baron. XD
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 12:26 am
Oh, and I almost forgot this one thing
The first town they come across on their journey is Bell Town. It's just a quiet black smithing town with a large water tower that doubles as a windmill. They poke around a bit looking for some food. But before they can, they hear a villager scream. Running to investigate, they find a large cloaked man. Diablo, being the only one who knew how to sense aura's, felt the darkness in the mans heart. Ken, unknowing that he shared the same ability, felt that something bad was to occur.
The man confonted them. He wore a mask under his cloak. A plain white mask, with small 1 cm slits for his eyes and mouth. He was about to attack, when a strange force could be felt approaching. From the north, came the Dragon of Darkness, who landed on the water tower. The man seemed to act as though he knew the dragon was coming.
A battle between Baron and the dragon, and a few interuptions from the gang ensue, but in the end, the dragon lays defeated, and the group watches in horror as the man sucks the energy out of the beast, and claims it as his own. With his new found power, he retreats.
-insert flash back to the conversation with the King-
The King had told them, that there were 8 dragons. One for each element: Fire, water, wind, earth, ice, lightning, light and darkness. Each dragon assigned a certain human to be their gaurdian, at that persons birth. But among the gaurdians, one had become corupt and evil. He would bring the beginning of the Great Elemental War. The war was pretty straightforward. All 8 gaurdians were to fight eachother, like the duels. And when one gaurdian fell, he would give his power off to the winner. The one who stood at the end would be considered the strongest being on the Earth. He/she could do anything his/her heart desired.
And Ken was the rightful Gaurdian of Ice. Not only was he to protect his element, but he had to weed out the evil from the others. And it would appear that they discovered the weed in the garden. And on top of that, he claimed the power of two dragons. His element, lightning, and the power of the Dragon of Darkness, that he stole.
This is where the real journey begins.
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:47 pm
-Grumbles angrily at still not finding the notebook- Every fuc... Erm... Yeah....
Back to topic...
It sounds good so far Chris. Don't worry about Diablo's past for the time being, I'll worry about that as it comes up, that way I can bring it up in flashbacks and stuff, aswell as i can use it to fuel my posts.
-Got a few awsome ideas earlier that he wants to keep a secret.-
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:52 pm
Well, there is still the prelude to the DFS that I had in mind.
It was basically a short story, about a kingdom finding it's long lost heir to the throne.
I'll have to type that up a little later on. Ka-peesh?
PS. Diablo is infact in it. Remember that drawing of Diablo being half Curios height?
=D
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:55 pm
Alright, and Diablo's story once I find it, dates from when the his Kingdom destroyed. But i am not sure when it ends yet. XD
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:57 pm
Ah, so you don't have anything dating back to the DFS era. Or did the kingdom fall before that?
Cause in the prelude, Diablo is still under Curios' training.
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