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 Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 12:31 am
This was requested by Ezieikial, i hope that it will encourage to write a bit themselves. I know i will try when i get the time.
If you have any poetry or songs you wrote, then please put them here, if they are not your own put who they are by so that you are not stealing 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:13 am
ok heres one that i like so far, i wrote this based on the fact that just because Christians are saved that it still doesnt make them better than the people who are not saved, kinda like still putting them down on the same level, its kinda hard for me to describe, but i think you will like it....
Ground Zero
Welcome to destruction of everyday lives
Listen to their alibis then followed by knives
Watch them all kill themselves in ecstasy
Sweet pleasure, none the best
As far as the eye can see
Can you see the fallen amongst the rubble?
Watch them look at the sky, then see them struggle
See a tear in their eye, as they find nothing inside
Look past this worldly dimension to gaze at the spiritual intervention
Look at people with bloody gouged out eyes, some stapled shut
Only prayer is to die, see one raise a hand to the sky
Only to know that he had the power to prevent his own demise
Welcome to Ground Zero this is where we’ll all be
Masses among the ruins is all I can see too busy to help themselves
Watch them die by their greed
Christians, the Saviors men, no different then how the world was back then
Take the apple from the snake, embrace the venom that was given
Then find yourself putting the chain around your neck
Pull it nice and tight, and start to blank out and wonder what’s next
Ha! Ha! You thought this was all fun and games, open your eyes for a split second
And see all the blood and pain, so you cry out for a savior, only true ONE indeed
Sit in your filth patiently as you wait for Him to come and set you free
Jump and shout again, now that you can finally breath
Why Father must it be this way? Why cant they see what’s behind the scenes?
Why Father? What must they do to truly follow you?
When Father will they live like they should be?
Please Father save them all from themselves
Father
Save them
Save them all
By Isaac ******
7/3/04
well there ya go, thats only one of many i have
PS...this is copyrighted to my band Skies of Zion so please dont steal, thank you 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:18 am
wow, that is good, i wish i could write like that biggrin
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:21 am
hehe thanks, ive been told that i have a gift, just please God give me a voice
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:29 am
haha. thats awsome. i wish i could do stuff like that. i stink at poetry and stuff. i stink at thinking. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:31 am
gosh you guys dont be so hard on yourselves, just write thats all
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:34 am
haha. i try. but everything i do is surpassed by my twin counterpart. i guess he took all the creativity sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:35 am
runners high haha. i try. but everything i do is surpassed by my twin counterpart. i guess he took all the creativity sweatdrop you have a twin! ninja that would be kinda freaky if i had a twin blaugh
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:37 am
ya its kinda cool sometimes. we are very well known around our town, and our church. the only bad thing is that you're reffered to as "the twins" most of the time and not as individual people. stare that kinda stinks. but........ ya. surprised
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:43 am
runners high ya its kinda cool sometimes. we are very well known around our town, and our church. the only bad thing is that you're reffered to as "the twins" most of the time and not as individual people. stare that kinda stinks. but........ ya. surprised so is your twin on here on gaia too? EDIT: ok im going to bed, i need to lol its 3:30am where im at @.@' im sleepy, laterz, i'll post more in a week or so
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:47 am
Ezeikial runners high ya its kinda cool sometimes. we are very well known around our town, and our church. the only bad thing is that you're reffered to as "the twins" most of the time and not as individual people. stare that kinda stinks. but........ ya. surprised so is your twin on here on gaia too? EDIT: ok im going to bed, i need to lol its 3:30am where im at @.@' im sleepy, laterz, i'll post more in a week or so ya hes on here too. i told him about this and hes like "thats cool" so i dotn know. hehe. its 1:30am here. im probly going to bed soon. hehe.
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 12:03 pm
ive got some stuff...its on my open diary site...ill have to go find the URL...just a sec... domokun domokun domokun domokun aw dang...its "temporarily offline" and has been for a while...i just hope it doesnt delete all my stuff! gonk
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 4:29 pm
its wonderful how many of us can serve the Lord with many of our musical talents. as for me, God has given me the ability to play drums which i play for the indonesian service in my church.
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 8:14 pm
jollybean its wonderful how many of us can serve the Lord with many of our musical talents. as for me, God has given me the ability to play drums which i play for the indonesian service in my church. hey thats cool! a chic drummer, i need a drummer for my band 3nodding pweeeese blaugh
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2004 4:18 pm
Haha, how cool. blaugh Drums are such neato instuments. 3nodding
Ok, here's one of my poems, really my only good one. sweatdrop
Bloodprice
I'd make a fist
And cut my wrist
And watch the scarlet flow.
A crimson rain
To drown the pain
Of things that I did know.
How hopeless was I
And though I would try
I never could get a thing right.
How I was hated
And how I was fated
To wretchedness day and night.
A cutter was I
And so I would cry
Not crystal, but cardinal tears.
I'd sit on the floor
Behind a locked door
Rather than face my fears.
But now the love
Of my Father above
Has washed all my fears far away.
Only the flood
Of Jesus' blood
Has made me completed today.
The world is now bright
With God's lovely light,
And I can now see my way.
I'll never go back
For I'll nevermore lack
That lovesong that seems to say:
"My Child, My Child,
So lovely and mild,
I'll love you till eternety's here.
Rest in my arms
Away from all harms
And I'll cast away all of your fear.
Worry no more,
Never cut again for
The sacrifice is already made.
Stop the rain.
Give up your pain.
The bloodprice is already paid."
-© LittleKuroNeku 2003
A small disclaimer: I am not a cutter and I never have been. I've been strongly tempted and even went so far as to do the rubberband thing, but my faith in God has always kept me from crossing that line.
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