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Sephiroth_2000
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 10:59 am


Roleplay Character Applications


For those wishing to roleplay, you must first fill out this Application about your character and wait for it to be accepted. We ask that you fill out the form fully, thus giving the best description of your character.

Multiple characters are allowed to one person, however we ask that you make it clear which character is which when you RP.

All applications are to be posted in this thread only. Do not post them in RP threads or PM them to Guild Moderators. Any posted elsewhere will be deleted and not read.

A Guild Moderators will edit the your Application telling you wherther you were accepted, stating ranks if needed, or telling where your Application needs improving. If, after three days, your Application has not been accepted, please PM one of the Guild Moderators informing them that yours has not been replied to, but do not PM the Application itself.

Even those who filled out an Application in the old thread will still need to fill out one here, as the form has changed, and some parts will no longer be relevant, and it must have an updated character history that details all that has happend to you since the character was made. Also your application MUST fallow the new rules, if you have a problem with this speak to a mod about it.

The Application form is on the next post.



The Application Rules


1. You may not start to RP without an accepted application - So wait with RPing until it is accepted

2. A moderator will edit your application to state if it is accepted, or to state what needs to be changed - So make sure you check it regularly to see if you're in.

3. For Force users, the moderators decide your rank, you do not decide it yourself - If you ask for any rank to be given then the application WILL NOT be accepted. All new Jedi and Dark Jedi character will be placed at the bottom rank unless mod approved.

4. Do not whine about mods comments or decisions - Your app won't be the first they accept, they know the works

5. Multiple characters - Everyone is allowed a totaly of 3 characters, Droids do not count as a character, unless it is your main character.

6. Never PM an application to a moderator - They have to be readable to all members and mods and that is why this topic exists. Any and all Applications that are sent by pm will be deleted on sight and not read.

7. Skills - Every Character is given a MAX of three skills they are good at. If any more then 3 are listed the application will not be accepted.

8. Never relate to a movie or extended universe happening or person in your application - That means you have to be born IN our timeline. No s**t with freezing and all, it's unoriginal, as is the whole being born during movie-times.

9. Jedi or Dark Jedi - To be trained as a Jedi or Dark Jedi one of your characters skills MUST be "Force Sencitive." Do not put in force powers as skills. You can only use force powers and a lightsaber if you are a Jedi or Dark Jedi and have been trained to use it. Your character will make a saber durring training so do you do not need to make them have one.

10. Neutral / Rouge Jedi - These are NOT allowed in the guild. In order to use force powers and Lightsaber you MUST be a Jedi or Dark Jedi and fallow the code. If you are exiled in the Roleplay then you can not use a saber or force powers.

11. Jedi Relitives - We no longer allow people to have Jedi Relitives in their character history. This means no Jedi Parents, also you CAN NOT have your character train, in any way by some random Jedi. However you can make 2 characters that are related and try to have them both trained.

12. Character History - Your character history MUST BE at least two paragraphs long or it will not be accepted.

13. 3rd person - You must roleplay in the 3rd person, and this must be proven you can do this in your roleplay sample.

PLEASE NOTE: If any rule is broken or any space unfilled your application will not be accepted.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:23 pm


The Application Form


[b]Gaia Name:[/b]
[b]Character Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Race:[/b]
[b]Character Description: [/b]

[b]Home Planet:[/b]
[b]Starting Planet:[/b]
[b]Relations:[/b]
[b]Character History:[/b]

[b]Alignment:[/b]
[b]Occupation:[/b]
[b]Skills:[/b]

[b]Weapons:[/b]
[b]Ship:[/b]
[b]Personal Belongings:[/b]

[b]Roleplay Sample:[/b]


Detailed explainations of each field are written below. Please use it for a reference.

Sephiroth_2000
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Sephiroth_2000
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:25 pm


Gaia Name: Your Gaia Screen name
Character Name: What you want your character to be refered to as
Gender: Male/Female/Neither
Age: How old your character is in years
Race: Any Star Wars Species
Character Description: A brief or detailed description of your character's looks such as hair, eyes, height, weight, build, abnormalities etc. No more than a paragraph should be needed here.

Home Planet: The planet your character was born on.
Starting Planet: Where you are starting your RP. We suggest you pick planets that have already been made.
Relations: Family, loved ones etc.
Character History A description of your character's past uptil the current day. This MUST BE at least two paragraphs long or it will not be accepted. The history is from the time your character was born until this day and time. Remember the events in our life is what makes you who you are, thus without a good history how can you will not be allowed to make a future for them in this roleplay.

Alignment: Which side your character's political views are sided with, or what faction you fight for. There are choices of Imperial, Republic or Neutral.
Occupation: What your character does in the Galaxy. Eg: Jedi, Bounty Hunter etc.
Skills:Name your character's best few abilities like piloting, healing, electronics etc. We ask that you have no more than three.

Weapons: Blasters, melee weapons, lightsabers etc.
Ship Your character's starship.
Personal Belongings: Any significant items like droids, heirlooms etc.

Roleplay Sample An example of your RP style. It can be from anywhere. All we ask is that you do it yourself, how you normally RP and will continue to RP throughout the guild. We will quickly tell if you have "faked" this to look good.

SIDENOTE:

We choose your jedi rank, YOU do not.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:26 pm


Sample Form


This is simply to show you how your form should look, but without an RP sample, so that people do not copy it.

Gaia Name: Seph_is_a_lazy_Mod
Character Name: Talor Adams
Gender:Female
Age:16
Race:Human
Character Description: Talor is a small girl of 5 feet tall. She has a clear face and a slim body. She has long blond hair and flows down passed the middle of her back. The only problem she finds with her body is her abnormaly large chest that she wishing she could make smaller.

Home Planet:Naboo
Starting Planet:Coruscant
Relations:Yonger Sister, where abouts unknown
Character History Taylor lived with her father and younger sister for most of her young life. Her mother died when she was five and her sister was 1. The true cause of her death is unknown to this day, however going up without a mother wasn't hard for Taylor and her sister Sarah. They spend all their time together playing when they were younger, going into the swamps to see what they could find. One trip into the swamp Taylor and her sister found two small crystals in the swamp.

They later used the cystals to make a neckless out of them, so they would each have one. Though she was always thought of as a Tom Boy she loved to play with her little sister. When she was 15 she saw a jedi for the first time, after her father telling her stories for so many years she wanted to become one. Her father was able to get her the money to go to coruscant to try to make her dream come true. She is now landing at the temple and soon hopes to find out if she has what it takes to make her dream come true.

Alignment:Republic
Occupation:Jedi
Skills:Friendly, good with her hands and Force Sencitive.

Weapons:None at this time
Ship: None
Personal Belongings: A small cystal neckless and whatever she is wearing.

Roleplay Sample:

Place Sample here, I will not to keep people from doing a copy / paste.

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Gaia Name: Sephiroth_2000
Character Name: Sephiroth
Gender:Male
Age:42
Race:Human
Character Description: For his entire life, his hair has always been silver, and, throughout his older life, he kept his long, down to his back. His has pale green eyes and his face is beginning to show his age. Because of his training, he is well built, but not overly muscular and stands approximately six feet tall.

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Home Planet:Naboo
Starting Planet:Coruscant

Relations: None
Character History: Sephiroth was born to a family of merchants in the city of Moenia on Naboo. The city itself has always been a tourist sight, due to the perminant green mist that covers the city, making the family trade a natural option.

As Sephiroth was accept into the Jedi Temple at the age of 4, he never really got much of a chance to know his parents, especially his father, who had spent of his time off-world for trading purposes. Unknown to Sephiroth, his father engaged in many less than faithful affairs while away.

After several years of basic Jedi training in large groups, Sephiroth was accepted for Padawan training by Jedi Master Heero. Heero was a very quite man, never speaking outside of the work they had to do. He believed in the traditional values that the Jedi held, complete dedication to peace and the Republic, forsaking anything they should recieve as benefit to themselves. Sephiroth naturally inherited this though his many years of training.

After well over a decade of the two helping maintain peace in the Republic, Sephiroth now nearing the end of his life as a Padawan, they was dispatched to solve civil unrest of the planet of Talus. After several days of searching, it was revealed that the situation was provoked by a young Dark Jedi by the name of Prince Shin. Having been seperated during the fight, Sephiroth was forced to engage him alone. High above the ground, on top of the Deric Town Centre skycraper, they fought a long battle, fighting the elements of the pouring rain at the same time. Sephiroth was clearly outmatched, and felt his time had come to an end. By a strange twist of fate, a misplaced step by Shin caused his to slip from the top of the building, plumitting the ground below, thus ending the trouble he had caused, and sparing Sephiroth's life.

After the two had returned to the Jedi Temple, Sephiroth was promoted toe Jedi Knight, the Council believing it was his skill that had saved Talus, regardless of Sephiroth's objections. A short while later, Sephiroth's former Master, Heero approached him, asking a personal favor. It was to help him save his wife, Toby, whose ship had crashed on Lok. Sephiroth now finally understood why Heero never spoke of his personal life, because of his wife, his breach of the Jedi Code. Naturally, Sephiroth refused to go against what he had learnt, and also encourage Heero not to pursue it either. It was in vain. By the next morning, Jedi Master Heero had left.

Many months passed as Sephiroth adapted to his life as a Jedi Knight, finding his new responsibilities difficult to get used to. He had not yet taken a Padawan for himself, as he felt he had not evolved enough as a person to accept the responsibilty of training another. It soon because present that Heero had not returned from Lok and, during the time of peace, Sephiroth took a short vaction, with permission from the Council, to find his Master.

The barren wasteland of Lok was difficult to trace any links to Heero, or the crash site of his wife's ship. After a few weeks of solid investigation, Sephiroth was able to find a lead to the crash site. There, lay the ruins of a luxury yatch, shredded by the impact. Some parts have been removed by scavengers, but most of it lay spread across the nearby surface. With a few metres of the site was a crude grave. Sephiroth already knew what it was, the grave of Toby, Heero's wife. As he approached it, he read the message on the stone. It simply said, "Sorry, my love..." Fearing the worst, Sephiroth set off for the nearest village, Kimo Town, which was several day's drive away. Upon reaching it, he found a town that looked as if it had been hit by war. Destroyed buildings and injured people as far as the eye could see. It looked as if it had happened sometime ago, and the people were only now recovering. Having conversed with a few of the locals, it was revealed that a craised Jedi had attacked, screaming for vengence, and was eventually struck down by a lucky blaster shot. Sephiroth knew it was all Heero. Not even wanting to see the body, Sephiroth left Lok, feeling betrayed by his Master, having taught him what he himself did not even stick to, and thus falling to the Darkside. Sephiroth was forced the repeat the events of Lok to the Jedi Council on his return to Coruscant.

The events of Lok he Sephiroth realise the dangers of emotions, and how quickly they can cause one to turn. He wanted to make sure that it did not happen to anyone again, and the only way he could do that would be by teachinng others. Therefore, he took a Padawan, a young girl, named Brood Mayran. She was lively, enthusicastic and extremely skilled.

After a decade of training for the both of them, Sephiroth now aged 31, yet another event rose up. A renegade Padawan known as Tanamon began a mutanty within the Jedi Temple, due to his impatient personality holding back his promotion to Jedi Knight. He was able to rally support from other Padawans within the Temple. Eventually, a massive battle brokeout, the Jedi verses the mutanous Padawans. Due to their lack of skill, the Padawans were quickly defeated, without a single fatality. However, Tanamon escaped the Jedi, fleeing into the depths of Coruscant to build a counter-attack. Sephiroth and Brood were dispatched to resolved the problem. Tanamon was quickly apprehended by the two, and eventually exciled from the Republic. For their actions in both the fight within the Temple, and for the capture of Tanamon, both Brood and Sephiroth recieved promotion. Sephiroth was now to sit within the Council Chamber, along side the other Jedi Masters, as one of them.

8 years on from his promotion to Jedi Master, and little had changed in Sephiroth's position. He still helped to maintain peace in the Republic, as well as helping new entrants into the Jedi Temple. However, that was all about to change. A band of "Fake Jedi" were attacking small planets within the Republic, seriously damaging the name of the Jedi. Due to mass public outcry against them, the Republic was forced to banish all Jedi. Unable to find the source of the "Fake Jedi" which had now mysteriously disappeared, the Jedi took refuge on one of the most unlikely planets, Korriban. This would the Jedi's new home.

A village for the Jedi was quickly estabilished, but, during their absence from the Republic, it was conqured by the Imperials, lead by a lunatic Emperor. The Jedi made it their mission to restore democracy to the galaxy, including restoring the Republic that banished them. After several missions by various Jedi, enough evidence was found to show the Imperial's corruption. However, there was no way to tell to galaxy of this.

Sephiroth volunteered himself for a dangerous mission. He was to hack into the Holonet at Mos Entha, with help from a Jedi more skilled in electonics, and project the evidence to the whole galaxy. However, the Imperials already knew of the plan, and were waiting to ambush the two as they landed.

As soon as Sephiroth stepped off the ship, they were attacked by hundreds of Stormtroopers. Sephiroth and his accomplice were able to defend themselves longer enough to slice into the terminal. Sephiroth then projected the evidence across the Holonet, still under attack from the Imperial troops, thus destroying the Emperor's public image.

It is unknown why, but the Imperials fled the Galaxy after that, not even putting up a fight. The Republic quickly swooped back in to take control once again. However, public uncertainty of the Jedi still remained, so they were not welcomed back in straight away, leaving them to their village on Korriban.

In there time on Korriban, many of the Jedi fell victim to the harsh conditions, as well as the dangerous animals inhabiting the planet. It left the Jedi few in number, and only three Jedi Masters remained, Yoda, Maniac and, of course, Sephiroth. his old Padawan, Brood, had also mysteriously disappeared but, unlike many of the others who died, her body was never found.

Having spent three years on Korriban, the Jedi were eventually invited back into the Republic, though the public were still uncertain of them. Not one for publicity, Yoda asked Sephiroth to be the one to offically re-open the Jedi Temple. He eagarly accepted. The opening of the Temple was a frantic day. It was first struck by a crashing ship, followed by several terrorist attacks. Clearly, the Jedi were not wanted.

While taking a break from the clean-up operation, in a dank Coruscant cantina, Sephiroth was approached by a young Jedi named Fina. He recognised her from the Temple as being well dedicated to her training. She asked him to train her, which Sephiroth chose to accept, knowing full well her training was almost complete.

The instant Fina left the cantina, Sephiroth was attacked by a Dark Jedi, as well as a lightsaber weilding droid. The firely-haired Dark Jedi was obviously skilled, but nothing compared the to training Sephiroth had had during his life. However, the droid was unpredicatable, and quite out of control. The Dark Jedi fled the cantina after the droid turned on him, leaving Sephiroth and the droid to fight it out. Sephiroth was able to best thr droid, just, by slicing the saber in two, followed by removing the droid's head from its body, all while pinned up against a wall. The marking on the droid revealed it was of Imperial making.Sephiroth quickly caught up with Fina, both then heading to Korriban, the most likely place to start their search for clues for links between the Imperials and the Dark Jedi.

Korriban, very familiar to Sephiroth, was deserted, as it always was. The two checked out the only visable structure on the planet., which was clearly a Temple for the Dark jedi. The two sperated to search, which led Sephiroth to find, what he was told, and Archeologist by the name of Aecus. It turned out that Aecus was leading an Imperial operation on Korriban, capturing Sephiroth and sending him back to the fleet.

Having been caged up for a few days, Sephiroth was sent to see Aecus. It was then reveal that he controlled the enitre Imperial Navy, as well as revealing his murder of Master Yoda. Sephiroth was then ejected from the Fleet, dubbed a "liability", onto the planet of Rori.

Rori was a planet no longer within the Republic, but engulfed in Civil War, which Sephiroth was dumped right into, without a working saber, sabotaged by Aecus. As soon as his pod crashed onto the planet's surface, he quickly came under fire by some mercenries, a bolt hitting him in the saber, knocking him unconscious.

Awaking several hours later in a daisne from the spice used for medication, Sephiroth learned of the situation on Rori by talking with his saviours. Knowing his only way off would be through them, he agreed to help. However, their bond did not last long as the men were shot up by an opposing army, leaving Sephiroth alone against thirty men. Fortunately, Fina, along with other Jedi arrived in the nick of time, defeating the army and taking Sephiroth back to Coruscant.

On his way back, he learnt of the situation, the death of many Jedi, including the only other Jedi Masters within the Temple. Sephiroth, unwillingly, was forced to take control of the Jedi. Due to the flaring emtions of the recent events, Sephiroth had to make sure he could trust everyone in the Temple to uphold the ideals of the Jedi, for the sake of the Republic.

Having rested and healed, Sephiroth set about his aim. He reviewed the footage of the attack, then addressed those Jedi who he wished to set an example for the rest. Then, due to her excellent decision making on Korriban, Sephiroth promoted his Padawan to a fully fledged Jedi. however, this would be the only pleasing deed he would have to do. Next, he spoke to a young Jedi Knight, Kari, about her "relationship" with another Jedi, Zeth. The matter was soon cleared up, the result of no actual releationship pleasing Sephiroth. He had to do the same deed with another Jedi, Glacian, although it would be no where near as simple. Glacian was much younger than Kari, and much more head strong. Sephiroth had always felt GLacian had never finished his training and, after his refusal to give up his love affair, it only confirmed Sephiroth's fears. With no other option, Sephiroth banish Glacian from the Jedi Order. Now, Sephiroth is forced to keep the Jedi safe against the inevitable attack from the Dark Jedi, even with their number diminishing.

Alignment: Republic
Occupation: Jedi
Skills: Though he has no particular skills, he is often very aware of recent events, especially low profile events.

Weapons:A single lightsaber with a cyan beam
ShipNone
Personal Belongings:None

Roleplay Sample
Sephiroth walked the busy streets of Moenia, his hometown. It was market day and the centre of town was crowed with men, women, children, all shopping for their weekly groceries. The green mist from the swamps that covered Moenia seemed to never lift. The shoppers were constantly chatting to one another about the mist being thicker today then normal, however none of them were too bothered about it, as they had all grown up with it.

As he stopped to take a look at one of the stands, selling a wide variety of food, he overheard to men talking rather loudly.

Did you hear? People say a Jedi walks the streets here. The Intergalactic Alliance have dipatched some troops to catch 'em. Blasted Jedi. I hope he get's what is coming to him.

Sephiroth looked down at his clothes. He was not wearing in traditional robes of the Jedi, just a rugged red jacket, a black shirt and black pants with his saber well hidden. It was clearly not him then were talking about. Then, as if from no where, a young man wearing a long, black robe, leaped off a nearby building, flipping and igniting a red saber in the air. He landed in the centre of the market, staying crouched on the floor. The shoppers ran screaming. Several blaster shots were fired from the Intergalactic Alliance Troops that had obviously been chasing the cloaked man. There were overwelming numbers for the man to take alone.

Sephiroth attempted to push past the fleeing shoppers, but there were just too many of them. He drew and ignited his own saber, the pale blue beam piercing the green mist. The shoppers, now noticing he was too a Jedi, fled from him too, leaving a clear path to the man locked in combat with the Intergalactic Alliance Troops.

The cloaked man had managed to take out a few of the troops by deflecting their shots back at them, but he was clearly pinned down and getting tired. Suddenly, a shot he was not able to deflect hit his right shoulder blade. A volly of shots were now heading straight for him. He was injured and defenceless. Sephiroth quickly lept over the man and deflected the shots with his saber, out of harms way. He stood there, protecting the injured man from the trooper's shots, but the man had already disappeared of sight.

Sephiroth was now left alone to face the troopers. He knew he would not survive if he stood and fought them all. Using the Force, he quickly dashed beind a market stool, which was shredded by blaster fire moments later. With the split second he had while the troops blew apart the market stool, he ducked into a nearby alley. Deactivating his saber, he sat down on the floor, catching his breath. He had evaded the troops this time. Now all he had to was get out of the city.

And here I thought Sephiroth was nothing but a beat stick... guess you learn something new every day xd . Accepted~Guilyn

Sephiroth_2000
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Brycia

PostPosted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 9:08 am


Gaia Name: Guilyn
Character Name: Kari Lunei (Car-e / Lu-nay)
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Race: Human
Character Description: A young girl who is 5'6 with Silver hair that is somewhat rolled into a bun on the back of her head. A slender body with a slight tan and blue eyes. Kari is a girl that looks like someone just out of high school or should still be there. Kari is almost always wearing her jedi robes now that she is a Jedi Knight.

Home Planet: Naboo
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: Older Brother (dead)
Character History: Kari lived with her parnets on Naboo with her older brother Daniel. She has little memory of her parents, they where killed when their ship was shot down over Tatooine; no one ever discovered who shot them down. Kari who at the time still had brown hair, and Daniel were sent to an Orphanage because they had no relitives. Her brother help keep her feel safe for the years after their parents died. When she was 6 she was found to be force sencitive and was sent to Corusnt. Before she left her brother gave her his crystle neckless.

When Kari arrived she was unable to join the jedi right away. By the time she was able to become a jedi, the jedi were being hunted by the republic. Kari took a job in a local repair shop for different crafts, there she learned quickly about ships and how to build and repair them. The owner of the repair shop made sure Kari always had a place to stay and something to eat. He died one day, shot on the streets for his credits, the killer was never found.

After the owners death it was found he had no relitives and thus Kari ended up with his shop, however the owner had masive dept that needed to be payed. Kari sold the shop to pay of the depts of the owner. On the last day before she sold it she found a back room that she wasn't able to enter before because it was locked, now having the keys kari entered and found an old jedi starfighter. Kari kept the ship but sold the rest.

With the jedi returning to the republic Kari now knew this was her chance to become a jedi. She hoped that this would be the day she became a jedi. Kari met Zeth of her first day at the temple, he had been hurt when an X-wing crashed into the Jedi Temple itself. Kari quickly learned that Zeth and getting hurt went hand in hand.

Soon Kari found Master Swex who took her as a padawan, quickly joined by Glacian, Diamond (HA! I remembered his name blizy blaugh ) and sure enough Zeth. Kari found quickly that she was better controling the force then she was with a saber, and thus now fallows the path of a Jedi Consular. Kari from the start always had some conection to Zeth more then the others, which over time grew to be something more. Though Zeth seemed to always be down and depressed Kari still felt she wanted to spend time with him, or maybe she just felt sorry for him. Whatever the reason there was some feeling that she could not stop herself from feeling.

However during Kari's training something happend that was beyond her control, she grew up. her entering the temple as a simple, happy for life girl changed as time went on. What caused her change is somethng Kari is unsure of but something she questions to this day. Though her training was long only 2 things stayed the same, She always learned something new about the force, and Zeth always gets hurt. Her training, and life was almost cut short during an training mission Master Swex, Glaican, Diamond, Zeth and herself went on. She had been shot in the side, however she was able to make it back to the temple in time.

Soon after they all left for Reytha, while on way she finished her Jedi Robes. They were going there to find someone named "Manic" who Master Alron had said was no longer a jedi. Though Kari didn't totaly understand what was going on the four of them as well as Master Alrons padawans went to Reytha, led by Master Swex and Master Alron. Master Alron and Master Swex were going to go around to flank the army that was attacking and it was the job of all the padawans there to help hold the line. However less then a dozen padawans vs an army, in the end they only prolonged their defeat.

However after the republic officers were all killed the army stopped the attack and help Master Swex, who was almost dead himself. From there they were all taken onto a ship and waited to see what happend to Master Swex. It was then Master Swex told them that Master Alron had fallen to the dark side and attacked him. He also said he was Manic, or as the TA called him Master Shan, also he said that the jedi are just pawns of the republic and we should fallow him and his TA army. Though many of the padawans wanted to return to the temple two did not, and one of them was Zeth. This choice by Zeth caused an argument that was only stopped when Kari to hug Zeth and say good bye. Kari's choice to want to stay with Manic was by his views or ideas, only that Zeth was going with. Kari choose to return to the temple and try to move onto a new part of her life.

After returning to the temple, trying to make sence of what happend she was promoted to the rank of Jedi Knight as Glacian was promoted to Jedi Guardian. She quickly took a padawan Bryce, who was very gifted himself. However during Bryce's training the TA called for a meeting for everyone to try to come to some means of peace. Though Master Alron thought it was a trap only one thing was on Kari's mind, was that Zeth might be there.

Zeth however came to the temple himself before the meeting. It seemed he had feeling for Kari, and under Manic's control told him to take her with. However before anything could happen a Dark Jedi attacked Glacian from out of no where. Zeth asked Kari to fallow him, Kari guessed it was some plan to help Glacian but she was wrong. Zeth wished to tell Kari his true feelings for her, which he did but it seemed to Kari to be killing him side to say it. However once Zeth had admitted his love Kari could no long lie about her feelings. In a stunning heat-of-the-moment, when Zeth was about to lose his mind to his evil darker side Kari kissed Zeth to prove her love for him.

Kari was unsure if this worked or not because he was out cold a moment later. Sence he was the first boy she had ever kissed she didn't think she was that good a kisser to do something like that and thought it best to take him to the temple for help. Kari lifted Zeth onto her back and attempted to take him back to the temple, but she wouldn't make it all the way. One of Manic men captured her, and under orders from Master Alron Kari let herself be taken. Master Alron, though the force told her to go with them and learn about them, however Kari cared little for this mission she only wished to stay with Zeth. Once Zeth was awake they waited for the meeting to take place, and while waiting Zeth was very protective of her while she was there.

The meeting was more or less pointless and Kari was let go to return to the temple. After she returned she continued to train Bryce until the dark Jedi returned and capture Glacian. Bryce, Kari and Zeth left to go save Glacian. Zeth had become one with his darker half and thus the change in him caused a change in Kari's feeling for him. He was no longer the same as he was when they met and thus her feelings were not the same for this new Zeth. When they cought up with the dark jedi on Koriban he blew up the ship that had Glacian inside almost killing him. To everyones dismay the Dark Jedi was Master Alron all along.

They quickly returned to the temple to get Glacian help. Zeth again on his own journy. Bryce felt he had something unfinished he needed to do and left the temple, Kari isn't sure he will ever return. The path to a jedi has proven alot harder then Kari had ever thought it would be. And now Kari is unsure about alot of things, but still believe that the republic is the best way to help everyone. Kari's feeling for Zeth though have, over time began to fade.

Kari continued her own training until Bryce did return from his own mission. Though he had not found what he was looking for Kari was happy to see him again. For some time the temple went back to normal until one day two Dark Jedi showed up. One seemed to be nothing more then a normal man, however when he killed Master Yoda without breaking a swet it was clear there is nothing normal about him. However the other Dark Jedi, who called herself Reith had seemed more straight forward. Reith's attack had left Zeth, Jami and Kari unable to battle, and it would have been the end had Bryce not came when he did. He was able to stop Reith from going after anyone, however he skill was no match for her and he was killed before Kari's eyes.

The sight of her padawan dieing sparked something in her, a feeling of anger and hate and pain more then she had ever felt. She couldn't control the power of the dark side that consumed her in the time, it turned her eyes yellow and her hair silver. Unable to stop herself a great battle between her and Reith began. Reith quickly saw a chance to leave and did. However even with Reith leaving it did not stop the anger in Kari's heart. As she turned on her own friend, it would have been even more dead if not for Zeth. WHen Kari looked into his eyes she remembered everything they had been through and her anger seemed to melt away. Her eyes returned to their normal color just before she fell into Zeth's arms.

Kari blamed herself for Bryce's death, which caused her own confidence to be torn to shreds. To her, she had failed as a Master, as a Jedi and as a friend. With Master Yoda dead the only Jedi Master left was Master Sephiroth, who at the time had been captured. Everyone who could go, left the temple in search of him. Finding him on a far away moon the jedi brought him back to the temple. He had given Kari some peace of mind of the events that had happend, and help her move on with her life.

After a short meeting to descuss the events of the death of two Jedi, Master Sephiroth came to Kari and ask of a relationship between her and Zeth. Kari was unsure how to answer, for Love was forbinden in the temple she was still unsure of her feelings for him. Kari promised to never let anything get in the way of her duties as a Jedi and since then she has not. However shortly there after Zeth left the temple, and then Glacian did as well. So now Kari is the last of the three trained by manic still left in the Jedi Temple.

With so many leaving the temple Kari took it upon herself to train Glacians Padawan sincwe he was gone. While Talon was training Kari was heading to her room when she was attacked again by a dark jedi. However this Dark Jedi was her brother. Trained by Reith he seemed to want nothing less then to kill her. Kari did not understand the hatred her brother had for her but had to fight back to protect the temple. In the end she had no choice but to kill her brother Daniel to keep the temple save. With his last words Daniel admited to killing Zeth on Korriban, which later a letter from Glacian showed this to be true.

Daniel and Zeth's deaths left another mark on Kari, again forcing her to grow up and learn to deal with what happends. Kari then took on another Padawan named Makum Sacre. Though he knew nothing of the jedi he is strong in the force and thus Kari has began his training. However he was not her only new padawan. For in a letter from Zeth just before his death he asked Kari to train a young man names Ryukai Korr, his brother. Ruykai has now come to the temple on his own. He is Force Sencitive and Kari has felt she will keep Zeths last wish and train his brother.

Alignment: Republic
Occupation: Jedi Knight, Class: Jedi Consular
Skills: Repair/Building, Piloting and Force Sensitive

Weapons: Single Lightsaber with a cyan blade color
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((Yes I did make this saber myself, Amazing what 2 sink pips and glue can do))
Ship: An old jedi star fighter she found and repaired
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((only color blue not yellow))
Personal Belongings: Lightsaber, Jedi Robes and a green astromech driod number R3-B10

Roleplay Sample:

Zeth heard Kari plead for mercy, which calmed him down to his normal self. But he had done so in time to take the full burnt of the Force Lightning and sent him flying. A thud landing on the ground, he held himself up barely as he was standing, his legs shaked looking at Kari with his normal eyesight, the wound in his gut was bleeding profusely, but he was still standing

".......*pant*..........*pant*........"

Yoda gasped for breath as he lay on the floor, the singe marks from his impalement quite viable on both sides of his body. Before collapsing, he raised his head to see the Dark Lord walking away from him. he also caught a glimpse of the chaos erupting in the Temple, the Jedi slowly losing the battle. Finally, his body gave up. He collapsed on the floor of the Jedi Temple, his eye's slowly closing. There the Head Council Member lay, dead.

Reith landed breathing hard, and now very angery. She would make him pay, she wouldn't kill one jedi she would kill them all, no matter what it took.

She'll die first for that! Reith ran at Kari with everything she had, this would be the end.

Bryce had finaly made it outsid ethe temple and he ran down the stair as fast as he could. He saw some man walking away from master yoda and he say jami with blood all over, zeth like he was about to die and his master kneeling on the ground as some powerful dark jedi came running at her. Bryce used everythign he had and jump far infront and landed infront of his Master and parried sabers with this women. His green blade to her red.

For Kari time seemed to be at a slow, her heart beating in her mouth, unable to speak. As she saw Bryce start to attack the dark jedi she could even seem to form to the word to tell him to run away.

Please, run while you can. This your your only chance. Kari attemped to speak but no works came forth.

Reith blocked this padawans attack, but she had no time to waist now. She blocked his strikes and was already bord not having to putforth and effert. She want into a circle and now her back was to the jedi, this borded her. Reith jumped, and as she did used force push to push the padawan back, she landed right behind him. with her saber out the padawan flew right into it, her red saber could be seen comign though his chest. This was one Jedi down and one left that could fight.

As Bryce was pushed back he tryed to slow himself down, but was quickly stopped. he felt suddenly cold, he looked down to see that he had been hit, a saber was coming out of his chest. His eyes met his masters, he tryed to form words in his mouth to tell her.

I'm sorry, but like her the words did not come out.

Kari's eyes met with Bryce's as he feel, Kari's whole body went numb. Everything was falling apart, everyone was dieing and she was just sitting there. As his body hit the ground Kari began to stand, and a feeling she had never felt before had overcome her. She didn't care, not about the Jedi, Glacian, Zeth or anyone, all that mattered was to see that Dark Jedi die at her hands. Karis eyes blocked by the shadow of her hair, kept anyone from seeing what was happening. From the roots of her hair, it spread like water, her brown hair bleached out by a very bright shinny white color. As Kari lifted her head, the once blue of her eyes was now yellow, she had no care but to see this person die before her. Kari's first time ever feeling the dark side of the force came to conssumed her to almost the very core.

Reith, smiling from the kill that has now earn her the name of Darth Reith.

Yes, Darth Reith is born this..... She began but stopped quickly. A sudden power of the Dark Side she could sece, but not from herself, from the weak jedi girl. this didn't make any sence to her, this girl was nothing how could someone command so much of the dark side? it didn't seem posisble, Reith felt this power, she had eben lord the dark lord and power stronger then anyone. The dark lord to be stronger then this, Reith though the Jedi would have no chance. Reith took a step back unable to speak, this was something she had not planed on.

Kari's anger was beyond control and she used every bit of the force to run at Reith with everything she had. With her saber at her side Kari pulled it up and began to unleash an furry of strikes agenst Reith. She pushed her back and back, now Kari was in control of fight. But inside Kari was fighting to keep alive the person she was, trying keep from being taken over by the darkness.

Reith couldn't believe this, she was so fast Reith was having trouble keeping up. Reith kept up the best she could, matching blow for blow the best she could, however it was clear the jedi had the upperhand. This was something Reith had not counted on, she had to get away while she could.

The anger continued to rize within Kari, this was anger not just from this moment but from all of her training. From always being a step behind everyone, always having to be saved by Zeth or Glacian someone always having them help her. Had she been able to keep up with them back then, then maybe Bryce would still be here. Al the lies fed to her by Manic who made himself out to be Master Swex and Master Alron, who Kari had defended to Manic, saying he was not a Dark Jedi and in the end turned out to be one all along. Kari life seemed to be a joke for everyone to watch and laugh, everything she did was never as good as someone else. Kari would not let her life be a joke anylonger she would prove she could do this....no matter the cost

Reith was quickly losing around, while she was tiring the jedi was only getting better. Reith saw an opening and took it, however the Jedi countered and ended up taking the top half of her saber off. Reith quickly put her hand out while the jedi was having to move her blade back from the last swing and put everything she hand into a force push. This send the girl flying though the air, Reith waisted no time, she had her ship close by. She used the force to run as fast as she could and leave. Quickly getting into the ship shot shot off without plotting any chorse but to get away.

Kari hit the ground with a tud, by the time she got up she could see the ship blasting off, she ran after if for a moment. The Dark Jedi was gone but her anger was not. Kari quickly turned and saw Zeth behind where Bryce's body lay.

WHY! Kari yelled.

Kari charged at zeth the anger and hate on her face and in her eyes was a sigh of what was happening to her. Why didn't you try to save hi..... Kari began to yell at Zeth.

Kari's mind she remembered Zeth words that day he last returned.
[[Flashback:
"No matter what, I promise never to cross blades with either of you....]]

Kari saw he had lifted his saber to attack, he was willing to fight her. The anger on her face faded and as the anger in her left left her charge changed to a jog and then a moment later to a walk, and finaly a dead stop. Her saber was nolong active, and just lay in her hand. As she looked into Zeth eyes, she remembered what she had promised everything she had been though with him, and most of all, the love she felt. Kari stoof looking into his eyes, blinking from moment to moment, no anger on her face but still the yellow of her eyes still was there.

Another blink this time she stoped when they shut, a tear fell from her right cheek, and dripped off her face. Her eyes opened, only half way as if she had been awake for a month long, the yellow in her eyes was also gone as the eyelids lifted. The water blue in them had returned to where it once was, but her hair had not, it still was a bright silver. Kari worked to form words into her mouth again.

I.....I'm.....sorry......

All that could be heard was metal hitting the ground, Kari's saber had fallen from her hand as she fell unconcious into Zeth arms. She had given it all she had and then some. Her first padawan was dead, and so was the master of all the Jedi. this alone could mean the death of the Jedi, this was the lowest point she had even seen the jedi order fall as well as herself......

Yes, Best application ever...Might be better if It wasn't my own application, oh well. Accepted~Guilyn
PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:15 pm


Character Name: Trance Shada
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Race: Echani
Character Description:

Trance is an Echani. As an Echani he is most at home in battle. Even in the heat of the fiercest confrontation his mind is crystal clear, allowing his thoughts and movements to be exact and precise.

He stands at six feet even. His skin, hair, and eyes are all white, so its all right (XD). His features are plain, and nothing special. Some creatures find them attractive, and just as many find them appalling. His physical build is that of all Echani, toned with extremely defined rock hard muscles.

You will never see Trance wearing any form of armor. The weight of armor restricts his movements and slows him down. Trance wears the typical robes of a dark Jedi, jet black, and with the hood almost always up, casting a shadow over the majority of his face. Under the robes trances wears a black hiroka

The large sleeves allow him to hide his saber very easily, and while physically fighting, the wave like movement of the sleeves as they flow through the air can serve to distract his opponents.

After an encounter with a JDAT which ended in a plasma explosion, Trances entire body was covered with thin and intricately weaving scars caused by plasma charged shrapnel that was able to tear through his flesh before the force shield enveloped his body. Though the bacta tank was able to repair his ribs and broken arm, and was able to quickly heal the plasma burns, it still left thin scars behind.

These scars are some what of a work of art. They clash in every direction all over his body, spider webbing in some places. The only place that was unmarked was the left side of his face as he turned to look away from the light of the explosion. Trance keeps his entire body covered. These marks tend to draw attention to him, and attention is not something he wants. To keep his face covered, Trance has constructed a mask formed from what was left of the JDATs helmet after the explosion. The wraith like robes and the dark t-shaped visor of his mask intimidate and induce a small sense of fear in most individuals. Many simply step aside before he can even tell them to move.

Home Planet: Telos
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: Mother and Father and several siblings
Character History:
Trance was born the restored world of Telos to a loving mother and father. He was the fifth child in seven. Like all Ecahni, his features are almost exactly alike to his brothers and sisters. His face was plain and soft. His skin and hair are albino, completely white. And like all Echani, his physical form was very strong from the rigors training exercises his mother an father put him through.

As an Echani, a race that sees battle as a form of art and pure expression of feelings, he has been taught to fight with a martial art that is considered one of the best in the galaxy. From the day he could walk all on his own he had been taught to fight and to defend himself if the need ever arise. Trance was considered some what of a prodigy, already mastering the Echani arts at the age of six, and then going on to learn the martial arts of other races, such as those from the Twi'lek, Rodian, Trandosion, Faleen, Human, and Mandalorian. Mastering these arts has aloud him to defend and attack against a multitude of differently armed opponents, as well as contort his body in ways that would be impossible to just about any one else. Affording him speed, reflexes, agility, and strength that was other wise unmatched by normal sentient beings. One of his favored arts when fighting from a distanced is the Rodian style. The Rodian in their earlier years perfected a throwing art that is nearly unmatched. When mastered, one can pin a sand nat with a tooth pick with out killing it. One of the more extraordinary arts he has mastered is the art of Acupressure

Acupressure is an art that allows the user to deal tremendous damage to their enemy’s body. The nervous system of many of the creatures in the galaxy is relatively the same as the Echani. But some nerves are either located in different areas, deeper in the body, or simply do not exist on some species. Trance as been forced to augment slightly some of the techniques he has learned in order to deal with those differences.

Trance led a normal life until the age of 17. Bounty hunting had become popular, and Trance knew that with his skills he could be a master at it. His parents tried to steer him away from it. They had managed to get him a job teaching the Echani martial art to Republic soldiers, but he refused to do it. There was no excitement teaching martial art to others, especially to soldiers who supported a stagnant form of government. If anything, he wanted to use his skills to hurt. These dark emotions troubled his parents, and again they tried to reason him away from them. It was at the age of seventeen that Trance ran away from his parents, took the next ship to Coruscant and started a life of bounty hunting

His skill with martial arts aloud him to take his bounty heads down with out resorting to killing them. Not once was he ever forced to bring in a corpse. Word spread quickly of a new young bounty hunter who had little to no trouble with any job he was given and that he always delivered. And in only three years he was just as well known as Boba Fett once was, and almost just as equally hated. Trance never took partners. There was never a need to. He some how always managed to take down the target before things got too hairy for one Echani to handle.

Trance spent only three years as a bounty hunter, he had accumulated a wealth that surpassed that of some of his employers. But, for some odd reason, he all of a sudden sold every thing he had, put the majority of his credits in several different accounts on several different banking worlds, bought an old run down shuttle, and left for a dead world on the outer rim.

The true reason for this is that he had been hearing voices and some times would receive strange feelings before certain events. He consulted with one of the few people he trusted on this matter and was told that some of it pointed to signs of force sensitivity. His first thought, if it was true, was to seek out the Jedi. He had heard that they had set up camp on the planet Korriban. But as he thought more about it, he decided against it. The reason he fell into bounty hunting was his love of fighting. The Jedi would restrict this. Their faulty code of peace was laughable. Trance instead sought out the Sith, or the dark Jedi as they are called now. But he later found that they two were just as weak as the Jedi.

The Jedi code is that of restraining all emotions, especially in battle. And the code of the Sith is that of unbridled emotions. Both codes felt weak to Trance. You can not restrain emotion in battle, for battle is emotion. And yet, at the same time, you can not allow your emotions to lead you for if you do, you will become blinded by them, and you will be your own downfall. The dark Jedi, however, fit with what Trance wanted for himself. They promised power, and that is all he has ever wanted.

Tranc was in a half sleep like state when his ship finally arrived at Korriban. The ships auto-navigation had malfunctioned and had not stopped the ship before it became caught in the gravitational pull of the planet. The ship crashed on the planet, leaving Trance and his droid stranded in the Korriban waists.

Trance wandered through the waists, some how called to the temple on Korriban, lead by a mysterious voice that apparently only he could hear. He would later learn that these were the voices of dark lords and Jedi long since passed. Perhaps this was the reason that the current Dark Lord of the time accepted him, for it seemed that any other reason would not have been good enough.

Trance learned as much as he could, and went as far as he was able to with out having to submit to a master. His force powers came to him almost instantly, in only a few days he had mastered basic force powers as well as a few others. Trance had always been a prodigy, but it was the construction of his lightsaber that impressed himself the most. It had been done in a trance like form, and under tutelage of yet another dead Jedi. The sheer mechanics of it were extraordinary. Instead of using external buttons, the saber utilized an internal activation plate that recognizes only Trance and can only be activated through use of the force. This makes it impossible for others to use his saber.

While on Korriban, Trance ecountered a very strange type of trooper called a JDAT. Trance never knew what he was, or who. Through the force his enemy felt like some one very familiar, but he was never given the chance to see his face. The JDAT unintentionally became a kamikaze as Trance sliced its legs, and accidentally sliced through the fuel tank for its jetpack. Trance was saved only by a reflexive use of the force shield technique.

After waking, he wondered back into the temple and headed directly for the medical room. The resulting explosion from the JDATs pack did not kill him. But the rough landing had cracked several ribs and broken his right arm, and it also turned out small pieces of plasma charged shrapnel had gotten through before the shield activated, leaving thin yet deep cuts all over his body.

He submerged himself in a bacta tank. The tanks healing probes calculated that three days would be more than enough time to heal all his aliments. Something went wrong though. The tank malfunctioned, and instead of keeping him sleeping for three days, it introduced chemicals that resulted in a comma that would last for three years.

Three years later, he woke to find himself still in the bacta tank. At this stage Trance was still as foolish as before, though he was stronger now. He recognized his own feats and prowess as being those of a knight. His first act after reawakening was to destroy his T3 droid, which he dubbed as being too annoying and old.

He then spent some time regaining his ground, exploring the temple, which he found to be completely empty. It wasn't long before he picked up on the new Emperors message to search out the imperial fleet to find the new temple, with out a ship though he was out of luck He decided to head to Dresdea to see if he couldn’t rent one to a dealer on Courscant and find the fleet form there. As luck would have it though there was a ship there waiting for him. A heavily modified SDS Armed Star Courier. With a ship at his disposal he finally left the planet. It just so happened that as he was reading to jump to hyper space to look for suitable places were the temple could be, he spotted an imperial shuttle. Tacking the initiative he intercepted their hyperjump codes and followed them. It was his luck that the happened to come out right in front of the fleet.

While hailing the fleet, Trance was greeted by a rather arrogant communications officer who had a rather interesting way of greeting powerful dark Jedi. When asked to give a name he decided to change from Trance to Aryx. Once landed, like true dark Jedi nature, he killed the officer for his insolence, only to be in turn held against a wall by the Dark Lord’s apprentice’s force choke for being insolent himself. It was after a talk from her as well as admiral Runtre that caused Trance to rethink his attitude. He was powerful, but there were others who were more powerful. Shortly after that, he was summoned to meet the Emperor shortly after docking, Aryx found himself in charge of the Academy that one of the destroyers had been converted to, as well as promoted to master. Aryx knew he was strong, but that strong? It was a bit too much for his arrogant mind to handle.

Shortly after being promoted, he simply left and disappeared into space. He returned several weeks later. He had gone on a personal reflection journey. He had some how returned calmer and wiser then he had been, a new out look on the universe instilled into his mind.

Alignment: Dark
Occupation: Dark Jedi Master
Skills: Extremely well learned fighting (bare hand and armed), Piloting, force sensative.

Weapons:
Left Hand
Right Hand


Ship: Prelude, a stolen and then modified SDS Armed Star Courier. Modified with six retractable disruptor lasers, three on either side of the dagger like protrusion of the ship, and utilizing a class 0.1 hyper drive. Making it one of the fastest ships in the galaxy. It's cloaking device utilizes lines of rare stygium crystals that are rowed up and down the long end of the craft to provide a perfect and nearly unmatched cloaking field

The cabin of the ship has been slightly expanded to make room for a space for a sonic shower set up, a simply cleaning rod with an image distortion feild and light sheilding to prevent stray particles form slipping away. Were the passenger seats are has been removed and replaced with a bunk area, and a small stock has been rigged to hold his swoop bike.
Personal Belongings: His ship and sabers

Roleplay Sample:
Several hours passed, the hot sun had set before the little astro-meck had found its master lying out in the desert waists. The malfunctioning saucer head proceeded to role over him several time before coming to the conclusion that he would need a more drastic method of waking up.

A small metal rod extended from the middle of the astro-mechs chasse. The rod sparked with blue electrical energy and hummed softly. The droid prodded its master several times, electrical energy snapping form the rod to Trances flesh. The area began to crack and burn and boil, but to no avail.

The droid went through its memory core, going over thousands of other ways to wake up a humanoid. It stopped on one that had several physical ailments listed along with one answer: ADMINISTER IMMEDIATE MEDICAL ATTENTION. The droid whistled loudly as though it had no idea that is what you do to a victim with severe plasma burns and several broken bones.

The droid retracted its stun rod and produced claw tipped rod. Griped between the mandibles of the claw was a tube with a needle on the end. It slowly drove the needle into Trances arm, a hiss was heard from the cylinder as the small chemical container inside was punctured and its contents released into Trances blood stream. The droid drove several more needles into Trance before he finally regained enough consciousness to stand on his own. The little droid chirped madly at its accomplishment. Trance, for the umpteenth time, made a mental note to have it dismantled and to buy a new one.

Trance began to walk slowly back to the temple, stumbling every now and then. He was in so much pain. His body hurt far worse than it had when he crashed on the planets surface only three weeks before. He soon became aware that his droid companion was not along side with him on the way back. He could hear its jittering tweets and chirps from some were in the desert waists. It was too dark to see it now. The only thing he could make out was the faint glow of the temples lamps as their light bathed the sand through the open door.

He was about 30 feet from the entrance when he tripped over something. He looked down at his feet and saw his light saber, fully intact, half buried in the sand. He reached over and picked it up before lifting himself of the ground with the arm that wasn't broken. He was perplexed as to how his saber could have survived the blast. No matter, it saved him from the work of having to make a second one.

It took him about half an hour to make his way to the medical bay in his condition. A nice cool Bacta tank was waiting for him there. He stripped down to his under clothing and hooked himself up to the breather. He climbed up to the top of the tank and with what force powers he could summon he lowered himself in. He could almost instantly feel the healing chemical penetrate his pours and begin its work on his charred body and broken bones.

The little droid rolled in some time later. Trance gazed down at what it had in one of its clawed poll arms; it was grasping what looked to be a battered and melted helm. A T-shaped visor, partially melted, stared back at Trance. Trance nearly burst into an uncontrollable laughter right there in the Bacta tank, in his near skivvies and all. He wanted a trophy of his encounter with this thing, something to prove that he had come out on top, and so he had one.

The little droid could tell its master was happy. It began to cheer wildly and spin in place, beeping its little saucer shaped head off. But, for the existence of it, it could not figure out why.


Accepted~Guilyn

Tiger of the Fire


Makum Sacre

PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:39 pm


Gaia Name: Makum Sacre
Character Name: Makum Sacre
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Character Description: He stands at 6 foot 2 inches. While he isn't exactly the type with bulging muscles, he is by no means out of shape. His brown hair falls to all sides of his head, causing him to constantly shake his head to get the hair out of his eyes. His mind is known to wander unless he has things set before him that need to be done. Makum loves to have a good time but he likes to go out of his way to find it, which gets him into trouble a lot. He is prepared for hours of training however, and looks forward too it.

Home Planet: Almania
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: None, his parent's were taken as slaves before he left Almania. Who knows what became of them.
Character History: Makum grew up on Almania. Not the best living conditions possible, but his family did what they could. In his early age, his parent’s were always around, and showing up at home with random things that they could never afford. As Makum grew older, he came to recognize his parent’s thievery, but said nothing about it. The biggest problem was that the life style was all too unpredictable, and you could never tell when they would be able to get something new. He was sent to a terrible school twice a week, and learned nothing more then how to read and speak. On Makum’s 18th birthday, his parent’s asked him to join them in their ‘business’, but he quickly denied not wanting to fall to that level himself. As the weeks went on, he found it troubling that he didn’t know where his life was leading him, and didn’t know what he was meant to do. What was there to do on a planet where people constantly disappear into slavery after all? While walking through the market one day, he saw someone unusual, or at least someone who he hadn’t seen before. As Makum inquired about who the man was, he soon found that he was a smuggler and in need of parts. He went home, told his parents, and they went to work getting them. His parent’s soon got all the parts, got paid handsomely, and they moved on. Little did they know the Makum intended to leave with the man. As the family went back to the home, Makum's parent's were taken away for crime, and made into slaves. So, just as the man was about to board his ship, Makum stopped him, and asked to go with him to get away from the horror of the constantly replaying cycle of a world it was. The man, who Makum soon found out was named Jerek, took Makum on his journeys, which ultimately landed him on Coruscant alone as Jerek took off again. Now, he’s simply wandering, trying to find a life for himself. His endless wandering led him into the Jedi temple, where he met a padawan named Jami who helped point him in the right directon. After talking for a while, he was told to see a Kari to see if he was meant to be a jedi. She soon told him he would become one, and that he were to rest, then come back for training.

Alignment: Republic
Occupation: I assume this whole jedi thing will take up all his time haha.
Skills: He's pretty attentive to anything people say. At his old school, he was told he could control a seemingly tense situation with his laid back attitude. He's also been told he is force sensitive.

Weapons: A handgun which he found on Jerek's ship.
Ship: None. He was left here by Jerek.
Personal Belongings: The only thing he kept from his parent's life was an amulet he wears around his neck. It has slim pieces of gold which wrap their hands around a red stone. He doesn't know really what it is, but he wears it to remember where he came from, and what he intends to do.

Roleplay Sample: Sweat beaded on his forhead as he kneeled to the hard rock ground, letting his breath slow to normal. The cold temperature of the room left him feeling odd, and the air was filled with the rising cloud that was his breath. He held his lightsaber in his right hand, but kept it extinguished. He sat, waiting. A figure moved to his left and Makum jumped to life. He brought his saber around and flicked it on, bringing it down toward the figures head. It was stopped with a parry that nearly knocked him back, but he held as strong as he could. Master and student, one against the other. The green and yellow lights shone brightly on their faces as Makum pushed with all his might. The move brought a smile to the master's face as Makum was knocked to the ground by brute force. Makum felt the anger welt up, but suppressed it quickly enough. He rolled to a rock near him, and used it to assist him in standing again.

"How much more of this master? We both know I cannot win." Makum said while he extinguished his saber.

"You lose faith too quickly my student. You must learn to use confidence as a tool, but do not let it overtake you. Again my padawan."


He crouched again waiting for his master's move. If he wanted to be able to gain ground, he had to open himself up, had to let the force rush into his body, and fill him like a water does a trench. He closed his eyes and looked down. He could feel his master's presence....there was a movement and Makum flicked his blade to life just in time to stop the blade from taking his shoulder off. He batted the blade wide, and went for a stab on the master's low left. Opening his eyes again, he could see the blade of his master finally recovering and coming back toward him. Makum diverted his weight and let himself fall to the ground to avoid the master's hit. He rolled to his side and jumped from his knees to his feet feeling completely revitalized. He swung his blade around to stop just before his chest, and again he waited. His other hand came up to the hilt to take his stance.

Once again the master ran forward, although this time Makum knew where he was going. As he thought about that place, he swung as hard as he could just where the master was supposed to be...only he wasn't. Suprised, Makum tried to regain his balance, while also trying to be aware of his master behind him, but it was too late. He fell to the ground, and his master's blade was at his throat.

"You have come far padawan." He told Makum as he withdrew his blade.

"Apparently not far enough," He sighed as he stood once more, also extinguishing his blade.

Accepted~Guilyn
PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 11:31 pm


Gaia Name: Reiths
Character Name: Shanna Reith A.K.A. Darth Reith (Ray-th)
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Race: Human
Character Description: A young girl in with short black hair, tied in a bun on her head. She has pale white skin, and dark brown eyes and a scar from her left cheek from left to right where she was cut for failing a test.

Home Planet: Unknown
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: None Alive
Character History Anger, Hate. These feels have been a large part of Shanna's life for as long as she can remember. Her parents were bounty hunters always looking for a new target and bring people in, dead or alive. Shanna killed her first person at age 7 when her father had she snipe someone on 500 yards away. From that moment on she loved the thrill of the kill and the hunt.

As with many Bounty Hunters however they were killed when trying to take on someone stronger then themselfs. They were both killed my a Jedi Master (Named Sephiroth, *Sephiroth's theme music starts in the background* Ha, just kidding blaugh ) which was their target. Shanna who was far away from the battle, but was able to see saw her parents die infront of her. From that day on she promised herself she would have revenge on the Jedi that caused her parents death.

She was unsure where to go after her parents death, she wondered around in their ship until she ended up on Koriban and was found to be Force Sencitive, and began her training. Training was like hell, but all that mattered to her was the chance to kill the jedi for killing her parents, and now not just that jedi but all jedi. Her training continued to fill her with anger for Jedi and everyone. Only once did she ever not do as her master told her. She was ordered to kill a man and a women with their small child that had crashed on the planet. She would not and thus her master took out his saber and slashed her on the cheek, to this day she still has the scar. He then turned and killed all three of them without any care in the world.

With her training now finished her master has given her the name Darth Raith, and now her mission to truely earn this name has come. She is now ordered to Find a Jedi, kill them and prove herself as a Dark Jedi. Thus she has come to Coruscant to forfill this mission.

The pain of her life was numbed by the hope of completing her mission to kill a jedi, thus led her to a large battle with three Jedi and a Neutral Jedi. One of the padawans was able to cut of the lens of Reiths left saber, and the other ended up being killed by Reith when he jumped in to save his Master, who was also in the fight. However after Reith killed the Padawan Bryce his Master, the only female Jedi at the battle; Seemed to fallow to the Dark side in her anger. Reith already tired from fighting 3 others fed while she could.

While fleeing she ended up on Tatooine, where she found a young man named Daniel who was Kari, the femal jedi from the battle's brother. He had a deep shate for his sister, which Reith helped bring out and took him to for training to get even with Kari. Before leaving she took another Apprentice with her and left for Korriban. After the basic training, and Daniel killing the Neutral Jedi from the battle, she felt he way ready and sent him to kill his sister. Reith is now begining to dout herself. With no master around her the temple seems pointless. The painful and hate filled memories of ehr past still haunt her and she now seeks a reason for being. Though through the force she feels all life she seeks a reason to be apart of it.

Alignment: Dark Side
Occupation Dark Jedi Knight
Skills: Skilled in Duel Saber style, and Force Sencitive

Weapons: 2 Single Lightsabers, both with red beams
Ship A small fighter like ship, she has been given for her missions.
Personal Belongings: Lightsaber and Dark Jedi Robes.

Roleplay Sample

The sound of footsteps was all one could hear as they entered the temple on koriban. A dark figure come from the darkness ahead, walking slowly with a hood over their head, and the dark shadow's coving their face. As this person passed though the lights the robe that was worn was visible in black, and as each light was passed one eye was vissible under the persons hood.

Sudenly the person stopped dead in their tracks and looked back for a moment and quickly her saber and actived it. A red beam came quickly out of the hilt and Parried with the stealthed person behind them. The quick montion of turning caused the of the cloak hood to fall down and show her face. She began to Attack the persion with a few simple strikes when a second person came out of the shadow's and attacked.

Shanna, this dark jedi quickly took out her other saber to block the attack. Shanna pushed the first person away and while still having her second sabe parried with the second person she spun around and used the first saber to remove his head from his sholders. The first the ran at her with his sword above his head, for a down slash at her. Shanna lifted her first saber to parry to strike and then a cut from left to right across the belly of the person. As he fell back his body split in two.

From the other side of the room a tall man in black walk out of the Shadow's claping.

Well done, very well done. Shanna you know the last part of your test, complete it and you will never be known as that name again. From here on you are Darth Reith, now go and prove yourself. Said the claping man from the shadows.

Raith bowed to her master, I shall not fail you master. Raith stood and quickly left for Coruscant, to fully become a Dark Jedi.

Accepted~Guilyn

Reiths

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