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 Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:40 pm
Well here we go, Now to warn you all...the first 5-7 pages kind of suck..after that I stoped drawing them in my math class sweatdrop heh..well..there they are..dont make fun! Chaper one( A broken fist, a new love): chaper pageOneTwoThreefour Thats all for now..I have 20 pages in all but I am only going to post them by the four so it istnt so overwelming...lol..hope you like em...
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:07 pm
I can color iff'n you'd like. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 5:04 pm
The Skoo I can color iff'n you'd like. 3nodding Thank you ^^
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 5:11 pm
I can color it on photoshop!! ^_^ I can color better than I can draw on the computer. Other way aroundo n paper -_-'
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 5:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:13 pm
xPlain_Janex for a test...can you color this..and if you do color all my comic you will be added into the storey and the title page will have your name too. ^^.. ((yes this was drawn by me and dont worrie about it..I already gave this avi art to the user and she will not be geting the colored picture..sorry if its a little big.)) 
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:18 pm
I'd love to take a look at your comic and give a good dose of serious critique.
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:26 pm
I know the story I dont need any idea's...anyway..its about a girl named jane who falls in love with one of her friends from school. The guys name is Jay.. He is caring and sweet..all that stuff, after spending many months with Jay she finds him sliping away. Her best friend Jazzame Is losing intrest in Jane aswell.
Jane soon finds Jay with Blue.. His girlfriend, Little did Jane know she was the "other girl" and Jay was with Blue the whole time...Jane brakes away. Heart broken and shatterd Jane goes her oun way. Jay moves away and asks Jane for one favor to take care of Blue.
Jane being the kind of person that forgives agrees, and says goodbye for the last time. Blue is left in Janes hands. Blue is a cutter, she has many depression problems and on many ocations has runaway.
Jane keeps her promis and holds Blues hand tight, and nevr lets her go.
(now this is a outline, many other things happen such as the school pay, many trips to the beach, nights of harror, being lost, being found, and many other events mostly basted on a true tail..well..last year of my life really)
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 8:37 pm
can i see? i'm no great artist, and i don't know anything about inking and coloring, but i'd like to see it anyways XD
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 6:24 pm
I finely posted something..^^ happieness..I hope you dont like them just because I kind of messed up a billion times and got the pages dirty sweatdrop ..heh...
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 12:11 pm
xPlain_Janex I finely posted something..^^ happieness..I hope you dont like them just because I kind of messed up a billion times and got the pages dirty sweatdrop ..heh... XD yeah i know....when i did mine way back when i screwed up so much....and then i lost one of the pages so there was alot of tracing until i got it back which was blurggggh.....but try it on unlined paper! it's interesting ^_^
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:07 pm
*ph34r5 t3h 4w350m3n355* (Fears the awesomeness)
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