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Reznor_Rex
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:07 am


IF anyone is curious to read my story!...please read and give critiques =)


"The world, oh the world...this good yet bad...the plane in which the unearthing of all character is decided until rest...the bittersweet kiss of a love now gone.", through this act, through the glistening of his tears, through the slit in his chest, the gaping oriface left by his killer and his worst enemy...himself.

As Damien rested, he caught his eye on a familiar memory, a sullen, grotesque depiction of his hero falling, spiraling out into his ultimate demise. This life left for Damien now, is nothing more than a balancing act; the balancing act is rather simple, as if working with in the cogs of Karma or Cause and Effect. Damien is the balance between the mortal realm, the unkept realm that those of the immortal dare not touch for fear of such a realm defacing their own grandeur upon it.
This title has been appointed to many, because this is quite the burden to bear, but what separates Damien from the rest is the deciding fact of his arrhythmic faith and definition. You see, Damien isn't your average hero, more or less nothing short of the anti-hero, not to say he is heart less, more on the lines of self serving, yet is servility to those of the world is adequate enough to put him amongst the ranks of many in the this strife.

"Damn, it's been a good seven years, I have been part of this outfit for seven fulfilling years.", the hint of cynicism exude through the very pores of him.

"Damien, why do you always have to be a smart a**, and of course they have been fulfilling', Diandra retorted, "It isn't as if we haven't saved enough a** in this world to pay our way out of anything." giving a smirk to Damien.

You see Damien, his story is quite the story. It all began at birth, for him being the child of what he was, the supposed sign to all Christian faiths of an impending doom, or apocalypse. Many sickening coincidences surround this, but over all, he wasn't this impending doom, more or less the decider of the world's fate. He, being the son of Satan, the incarnate of supposed evil, has a free will, even though for a good 10 years of his life were spent nagging and bitching on his circumstance, they were spent doing hainess acts against man, yet were spent utilizing and learning of the choices soon to face him. In the deciding fight for his stability, was against the man who took him under his wing and taught him everything he could to help Damien find who he was...what his purpose was.

If we revisit this quote: "The world, oh the world...this good yet bad...the plane in which the unearthing of all character is decided until rest...the bittersweet kiss of a love now gone.", were his master's dying words to his pupil before he bid the world his last adieu. His life, taken by his own hands. I presume you think, "How could a teacher do something that stupid? How could this not taint or effect any of the lessons he gave Damien?" and in any other case, these would be legitimate arguments; in this case however, Dante left his pupil with something no one could take away from him, his freedom. Dante simply taught Damien how to release himself, embrace himself for what he was and engage in the will given to him.

"Couldn't this be any more interesting? I mean I haven't had to kick as much a** as usual...something is a miss."
"On the contrary my rambunctious friend, you haven't looked hard enough, but beyond that...no major problems have surfaced...we just have to.."
"...Keep our ears to the grain and feel things out. That is pathetic, I need action, I need a fight, I crave a fight.", Damien puts on this act from time to time to make him seem as if he has a blood lust, but he is too complicated to just desire the loss of a foe, he savors a fight as if it were an elaborate moving piece of art, a complex chain of events driving him to the next moment in time in a precautions yet reckless and potent manner. He only enjoys teasing Diandra, the one who keeps him sane, his love.

Dear, oh dear, oh dear,
Your fears draw me closer,
Your fears draw me near...

Dear, oh dear, oh my,
Your tears draw my eye,
Your tears draw my sighs...
Dear why cry
Dear why fear I?
Death..is the inevitable
And you prayed for release
Dear, oh dear, my dear,
I am here to end your dread,
Here only to end,
Dear, oh dear, my fear,
My only is your discontent
My only is your resent...
Dear, my fear, dread
On my account you are now dead
On my account just cause has been fed....

"Resting words for a friend, don't you agree?", grinning and passing an eerie mood Damien cackled. "Why hold that against me Diandra, he was nothing more than a cut throat vampire, and at pretty weak one at that...he wished for death, so did I deliver!",he sighed in a godly manner.

"Who the Hell endowed you with these order of who deserves to die or live based on their circumstance!? What the hell makes you think you could ever pass judgment on him because he was..", as tears formed and parsed, few escaping,"because he was a.."

"VAMPIRE, just ******** say it woman, its not that damn hard." he cackled,"Indeed, I can be quite the b*****d, but he did beg, and I do hate to see a man gravel."

Damien was quite the intimidating figure, standing at a good six foot four inches, pretty muscular at that. He usually never exposed himself as nothing more as a common person, wearing humble attire such as baggy blue jeans, usually a t-shirt of one of his favorite bands, and some costume jewelry. His face seemed soft, untainted and of one of a child, however his eyes seemed to perpetually rage on like the fires from which he was cast from at birth. His hair, quite versitile, almost with no definate composition and always changing at his will (there goes that word again), but always covering one part or another of his face. Damien was always armed though, so if someone mistakenly takes him lightly, they may be sickly mistaken. His charm and good looks seemed to entrance anyone, and his intelligence was only match by his good looks and adoration for the world but hate for existence on this plane, to live within such a mortal coil.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 8:20 am


Here is part 2..sooo you all have an easier time reading!

What a wicked game fate plays with each one of us. The flick of the deal give each and everyone of us the insecurity the dealer is cheating us with a meer slight of hand trick, taking more than he is giving and giving only what he wants. This dealer of fate seems quite gluttonous. Damien has felt this way all to often, that is basically his theory of God, a demented dealer in this game for allowing him to be blessed yet cursed with his immortal gift, the gift of being a hell spawn. A hellspawn to which no other can compare, not even to the legend himself Spawn, the former assassin for the US gov't Al Simmons, you may have heard of him. He was quite the spawn, he fought for justice and broke from the Devil's wishes as well, he paved the way for Damien and people of Damien's stance in life.

Diandra's eyes seem to glimmer as she turned away and looked at the floor, she blinked faintly and as slowly as she closed her eyes, a tear fell. The momentum of the tear seemed to draw away from the momentum of the fire roaring in front of her or the rhythm of her heart beat, it seemed such an arguous task for her to cry for such a soul, but she did. The Carmenem Mortibis was the poem Damien made a while back, a death call to his mother in vengence for his birth and to requite her request for death for cursing him (he hated his existance and any being contributing to it) , he gave it a Latin title to give it some swagger, some beauty and sophistication; anyway, to the point of the poem, he gave this to his last victim, a reformed vampire by the name of Stephino. Stephino hated the path he travelled, but he did enjoy the times, he tended to davel here and there, attend parties, attempt to cover his curse, but in the end the curse always won. Stephino was in league with a dangerous clan involved with every Black Market organization, including the Chinese Triad, the Oni Okishi, the Russian, Mexican, Spanish, and Itialian Mafias; these organizations desired the ability to mass distribute a "miracle drug" with the horendous side effect of death, but before death there was a mid form called the zombie stage, giving the subject an immeasurable amount of strength, the ability to withstand normal means of weaponry simply because each individual extrimity had a mind of its own. To continue, not to bore with the details, Damien heard of the small town right out of Poland they planned to test this drug on. He stopped every one, including Stephino, but Stephino didn't give up wtih out a fight.

"What, you call that a hit? I have had better hits from a newborn, you sicken me", Stephino gave with a menacing, minacle howl," Do you really want to fight me like that Damien, or should I say Rage. Come on big man, I will give you a sporting chance." The cunning and ruthless rouse to bring Damien's most devestating form to the fore front seemed slightly used and cliche, but somehow that seemd to get his goat.

With the subtle movement of Damien hand, he began to tense, as you saw the veins through his body beginning to surface. His fists clenched together as his body began to swell and his body become engulfed in flames, the shrill screams of him began to get deeper and deeper as the flames subsided and exposed a form of a cape or a coat; the figure brought himself to his feet. Damien didn't share the typical look of a hellspawn, his armor was pretty fierce and variant; his belt lined with the skulls of his foes, and the buckle with the symbol of a crusifix surrounded in barb, his mask covered all but his hair which was a flame. His cape was nothing more than an excessively long cape and the rest of his body was left in shadow.

"Well, quite giving me your snotty a** attitude and lay a hit on me old man! I ******** dare you to! ", Rage had been invoked, with a michevious cackle he seemed to dissipate into the air around him; through this he gave, "So now fight me, fight the fear festers deep with in you. I liven that fear, I quicken you to anticipation of the worst, I bring you to your knees."

Seemingly level headed and not impressed in the least, Stephino laughed and kicked a pebble up and kept it in volley with his feet, "Ah, my dear boy... You have much to learn. Your intimidation tactics aren't as powerful or tactful in the least bit my child, please don'r try and tell me what livens my fear. I have been around far too damn long on this wretched world to not know otherwise." , as his last word fainted into the dissinance, he flicked the pebble in a random direction and casting Rage out; the pebble pierced Rage's shoulder.

"Not bad, for a trecherous fiend such as yourself old man."
"Now now my boy, how do you think I come across such talent, by idly sitting and being a 'Mr. Nice Guy'?", with that he drew his sword, and the battle ensued. The battle was of epic proportions, clearing many areas of the town, of course the town had been evacuated with the aid of Diandra.
As the last blow came from Stephino, the move that should have finished Rage for good, a tune seemed to lume its way out of Rage and through Stephino; with the cunning bluck from Rage, the tune seemed to take form and soon enough these lyrics followed:
Dear, oh dear, oh dear,
Your fears draw me closer,
Your fears draw me near...

Dear, oh dear, oh my,
Your tears draw my eye,
Your tears draw my sighs...
Dear why cry
Dear why fear I?
Death..is the inevitable
And you prayed for release
Dear, oh dear, my dear,
I am here to end your dred,
Here only to end,
Dear, oh dear, my fear,
My only is your discontent
My only is your resent...
Dear, my fear, dred
On my account you are now dead
On my account just cause has been fed....

"Ha, that is quite the sickest account of my life I have ever...", as he spoke these words Rage had come in severing every one of his limbs and pinning him down to the ground with his chains.
"Stephino, you don't know the truth of this operation, do you?'
"Of course I do dear boy, I am after all part of it."
"No, they didn't tell you everything, I was only guessin' you would have picked up on it. They all want you dead."
"Dead?"
"Dead, as in not being able to take any of their share for this drug, because you have server your purpose; you have also become more of a threat, and as time progressed, you will continue to become more and more of a lumming presence in their organization." , emphisized Rage as he began to change back into Damien.
"Lies! ALL LIES, you think it is so rudimentary to lie to me in such a manner, I never...", as Stephino attempted to lurch away from the chains, they held firm.
"I don't need to kill you old man, the sun will take care of this for me and you aren't protected with your magic."
"Please don't let me die this way, this is quite mortifying. I will not take such ridicule, blatent disrespect!", he became hysterical, "KILL ME! LAY ME TO REST, I WILL NOT DIE TO THE ONE ELEMENT THAT USED TO CAST ME SUCH BEAUTIFUL DAYS ON THIS WRETCHED PLANE! END ME DEAR BOY OR I SWEAR, I WILL BE BACK TO FINISH YOU!"
"Old man, I don't think your in a position to make threats", Damien laughed and began to walk away with a grin on his face.
"Please, my boy, end me, I have been here on, undead for far to damn long. I felt as if I were damned here until someone were to liberate me. I never attempted giving myself the proper release because I let the world coax me otherwise...end this pointless rouse...at least don't leave me..."
Damien laughed and spoke out the words once more:

Dear, oh dear, oh dear,
Your fears draw me closer,
Your fears draw me near...

Dear, oh dear, oh my,
Your tears draw my eye,
Your tears draw my sighs...
Dear why cry
Dear why fear I?
Death..is the inevitable
And you prayed for release
Dear, oh dear, my dear,
I am here to end your dred,
Here only to end,
Dear, oh dear, my fear,
My only is your discontent
My only is your resent...
Dear, my fear, dred
On my account you are now dead
On my account just cause has been fed....

"Agreed dear boy, I accept my fate, but tell Diandra...Her father loves her", Stephino clenched his eyes as Damien pulled a stake to drive through his heart, as the steak piled into his chest, Damien's need for efficiency inspired him to turn the ashes that began to form from Stephino's body into a flame; this flame seemed to resinate a pure yellow light and illuminate the whole town, the flame then froze and everything disappeared from that spot on the floor.

"Damein, that was a day I can't forget, I feel wrong. I am his daughter, I should hate you", her eyes looked up and glared at Damien, "I should hate you with every fiber in my body! I SHOULD DESPISE YOU FOR WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE, YOU MONSTER." Diandra layed her head down in her knees as she curled up and cryed. Damien walked over and held her whispering, "I am only here to make sure things don't totally ruin what we have between us, the world deserves this feeling, this high...the blessing of love. That is all part of the balancing act in the end, this love of ours endured, after all of this...", as he kissed her passionately, he eyed in the corner, something stirring his sword to jitter; he whispered in between each kiss, "We have some uninvited guests," giving a michevious grin, she returned the same grin and pulled a dagger from her sheath, laying behind her, "Well, maybe we should greet them properly..."

Reznor_Rex
Vice Captain


Alzipher
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 8:18 pm


I like it. It reminds me of Ann Rice's writing, very poetic. It gets confusing in some area's but I supose thats natrual a lot of writing. ^^;;; ...
PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:37 pm




Well beyond the action and adventure of my life, I attempt to lead a simple and rather undesirable life. I think dulling the world to the bluntest of points is a necessity. I have to keep these little escapades as exciting as the last. As I sit here in my kitchen looking at the reflective surface of my spoon for hours on end, I realize...maybe I am better off looking for trouble every two seconds. I got the wildest idea, this spoon makes the greatest little noise when I hit it toward the edge of the table. As if the temperate rhythm of a hi-hat is being amitted from this little spoon; what if I got two? This tumultuous clamour seems to be holding my attention rather well. Wow, what am I doing? I think I have that there A.D.D. Beyond that, I need the opporitunity to speak with her,that angel, that goddess, the apple of my affection...am I a kiss a**? I just need to realize what happened last night.

Living this dull life of mine has the only few upsides any of your lives have, some known and unknown to the hoards of you. I'm sorry, I seem rather condescending. Not to be the cynic here, but I rather love my eloquence on the subject of humanity. Note the sarcasm.


...last night

A blur...last night.




Reznor_Rex
Vice Captain


Reznor_Rex
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 6:37 pm


I see last night, as if it were a dream; a beautiful wet-dream of sorts, douced in the moist blood spilled, fragranced with the mist of frustration, futility, and excitement.

"I agree, let's," as I reach back and grab her dagger from her, "...but for more fun and a show; no weapons."

What was I thinking?

Wait, we're just that good.

"YOU PLAGUED, VILE BEINGS! I WILL SEND YOU BACK TO THE HELL YOU CAME FROM!" as the door gave way with the weight of our rude, uninvited guests.

They made their way with haste, all twelve of them, and surrounded us; Diandra and I are lip to lip, my sword with in a tug and slide away from me and her dagger not even a few inches away. Two of them moved in actually quite quickly...but not quick enough. Diandra wanted to draw first blood, she gracefully pulled her leg to the side, almost as if she didn't care, and tripped one into the other; these two baffoons were making it back to their feet, wrong move. As I grasped the ground with a flat balance on my left palm, I smoothly slid my feet to their faces...let's just say this wasn't worth breaking their necks for. Three others made their way in only to be dropped. Four others came in as Diandra and I broke each of their necks with accuracy; the last one trembled, but that was rather breif when Diandra decided to put him out of his misery as the other four approached us by inserting her dagger through is obnoxious mouth.

I dare him to say something now.

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