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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 12:43 am
Somewhere in the middle of a mountain lie the ruin's of a majestic castle destroyed by war many years ago.
A yound boy sat on a shattered pillar covering his face a witch hat. Hus staff by his side.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 12:47 am
A single man floated through the skies, rather odd looking wearing a simple camo jacket and blue pants, no shirt or shoes to be seen on the man. Stark white hair hung around his face as he...danced through the air? Violet light played across his pupils which seemed to be in the shape of hexagons, each a rusted red in color.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 12:53 am
Ochimaru sensed something or someone near by he merely put a tight grib on his staf awaiting something from the presence.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 12:59 am
And so the dance continued, the man spinning aboutas his flightpath seemed to be aiming to take him directly over the man amongst the ruins. Something was odd about his flight, however, as he seemed to simply slide through the air, not even tilted forward or showing any wings or aura. How was he doing this? Why were his eyes glowing violet? More importantly, why the hell was this crazy b*****d dancing?
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:08 am
Ochimaru looked up sighing
"Done people ever learn to just leave me the hell alone...?"
He pointed his staff toward the man shooting out various shoots of lightning. he then began to float toward the dancing fool.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:11 am
The lightning hit his feet, or just below, and stopped. How was this possible? By the looks of it, there seemed to be something very odd about the air around the man, becoming clear as he drew closer. He wasn't dancing, he was walking in a straight line but the field around him was disrupting even light. Lightning never stood a chance. The closer Ochimaru came, the thicker the air got and the heavier he became. Just what the HELL was going on here?
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:14 am
Ochimaru backed away to a fair distance.
"Just who the hell are you!?!"
He said as he gave a hiss revealing his thin sharp fangs.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:23 am
The man's voice came loud, booming despite having spoken just a whisper, "I am a simple man. A collector, you might even call me. I seek out pinpoints of power among the populace and procure them for my own productions." The dancing about seemed to stop for a moment, "You may call me Valesk." Within the dance seemed to continue at a frenzied pace as his arms swung wildly, their composition changing slightly, extra arms being produced from within his jacket as the current pair grew in length.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:25 am
Ochimaru gave a slight chuckle.
"Well if you must know my name is Ochimaru Mamoru..."
He said while throwing the staff to the ground and drawing his twin fan.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:37 am
The staff fell about three feet below Ochimaru and then thrust back up, aiming to sodomize the poor man. This was one backdoor bonanza that wouldn't be found in any pornographic films. Valesk could only laugh as his arms reached three times their normal length, with the second pair now normally sized. When his thunderous laugh stopped he shook his head as the dance stopped, "I hadn't asked for your name, but it will be good to place an identity with my trophy." He rushed at the man, his barrier fading as his two main arms went wide to sweep in and grab at the man's arms from the back, aiming to find some bare flesh. The other two hands were brough up as if to strike, but were kept read for an assault.
((Really should give more attention to clothing detail. As far as I know he might be naked or clad in fullplate. 0.0))
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:41 am
[[ 0.0 ]]
Ochimaru gave a mere flip behind his main arms and opening his fans fanning his arms a bit before a wave of fire went foward he looked at his staff while his eyes are widened.
"WHAT THE ******** looked back up at the strange man.
"I dont take trophy's....Aftter i kill my enemy's i swallow them whole...You should keep my not hungry for months! Oh joy!"
he said as he let one of his fangs come out his mouth.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:53 am
((...you do realize what he tried to do, right? I know you're not going to be 13 for like 2 days and all, but I'd assumed you'd either know what sodomy is or could google it. I'd think having a staff rammed up your a** (or an attempt of such) would be damned distracting. This happened before the lunge, so unless that staff is now shoved up his a**...))
((Secondly, your sentence structure and detail leave much to be desired. Try to clean up the grammar a bit. Instead of "You should keep my not hungry for months!" try "Feasting upon your flesh will stave off hunger for months!"))
((And now, a reply, despite the fact. XD))
The wave of fire washed over the man, his skin crackling and falling off, only to reveal more just beneathe the surface. Such a simple assault seemed to do little to the man who seemed to have the ability to shift his body. The air around Ochimaru would get incredibly thick, his weight begining to skyrocket as the gravitational forces around him began to increase. The man was using gravity to crush the man and force him from the sky, hopefully into a crash landing that would break his bones and, hopefully, his spirit. Valesk followed him down, the gravitational forces apparently not affecting him as he darted forth to reach out and grab the man once again. Any contact with skin and a certain...transferal would take place. A mere touch would give Valesk knowledge of every single last ability the man knew, and allow him to steal one.
((Ability Thief lasts 24 hours and cannot be blocked. Only way to dodge is not get touched.))
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:00 am
[[ Sorry ill work on my grammar more sweatdrop And i notice i shouldve used satisfied XD ]] Ochimaru felt it as he began to fall he though of what he could do. And finally took action he wrapped his body in a caccoon of Telekinetic(Sp?) energy. Hopefully saving him fron the fall. he watched as his skin cracked and more appeared.
"What the hell are you."
Ochimaru saw the man come toward jhim and did really know what to do. He couldnt move,fly or even bite so he tried to move the man back he used his telekenesis on his clothes and pushed him back as far he could just so he could think about the scenario.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:05 am
The telekinetic suspension would keep him in midair and keep Valesk from touching him, but would not stop the gravity from increasing. His weight would continue to increase until soon the weight of his own body would crush him to a pancake. Already his blood should begin having a hard time getting to his brain and breaths should be coming hard as the air seemed to begin dropping around him, the pressure increasing dramatically as he seemed to find himself in a column of wind. Valesk's voice seemed to tear at his eardrums from the air pressure, "I am a collector, nothing more."
EDIT: The strain on his mind to keep him up would get really bad fast as his weight increases, a double threat as lack of blood and an impending brain anyurism lay on the horizon.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:11 am
Ochimaru gave a scream. A scream so loud people in other plane's of exsistance could feel one that hurt his own ears. His breathe got deeper as he could feel something.
"what are you doing to me!"
he screamed in pain ochimaru tried to figure out what to do about the gravity. his eyes began to tear.
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