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 Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:59 am
Well, here's my first fanfic! Of course it's not finished yet or anything, but still, any and all reviews are greatly appreciated. biggrin
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2971376/1/
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 1:42 pm
Hmm I like it. Very mysterious and I like the characters in it. And the idea of The Hub. I can't really judge it much more - I need to know what happens next! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 7:18 pm
I'll update probably next Tuesday. I hope to, atleast. biggrin Glad you like it so far.
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:15 pm
Nice start! I like the dialog... it matches fairly well with how the characters would have interacted with each other at that point in the show. Even the innudendo... somewhat inevitable with Jack around, isn't it?
I have no idea who you've got planned as the mastermind. Hopefully it isn't going to be Adam... whee
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Hairy Priest Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 12:46 am
Ha! Now THAT'S a thought. But no. Adam is just... too... stupid. Heh. Ergh, right now I'm at a friend's house so I can't even work on the next chapter. I haven't been able to get online all week until now. *SIGH* Atleast school is finally out. Now maybe I'll have more time to work on it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 8:22 pm
And it ish updated! Chapter two IS up! biggrin Kind of slow... but it will get faster the more I get into the plot.
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Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 11:40 am
Okay, this is just annoying. 5 reviews and 9 alert lists... Four people liked my story enough to want to keep reading it, but were STILL too lazy to review. *SIGH*
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:02 am
I liked part two. You're doing well building up the mystery of who is behind the Doctor's abduction, as well as adding this new mystery about how Captain Jack fits into everything. Of course I'm not exactly a big fan of Jack Harkness, so seeing him feature so prominently in the story isn't quite my cup of tea, but I'm at least curious about where things are headed.
I didn't review it on fanfiction.net. Sorry. Just too lazy to set up an account!
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Hairy Priest Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 11:30 pm
Same as Hairy, about the reviews. Maybe when I'm happy with a story I was writing, then maybe I'll stick it up.
I'm enjoying this story. The lack of pace doesn't bother me, because it's nice to get some more information about the characters, and how they could all link together. I'm interested in who the Gelf are working for, and why the Doctor's not telling Rose this. Surely Rose won't be too pleased when she finds out that he knew all along, and she didn't...
I like the fact that we can see how Jack is trying to solve the mystery on his own, and how it compares to Before TARDIS (BT). Can't wait for Chapter 3!
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 8:58 am
I'm interested in Jack's past. I haven't really thought much about it before but I like this idea that he was supposed to be killed... or I think I like it. I'll have to wait and find out more!
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 5:24 pm
Hairy Priest I liked part two. You're doing well building up the mystery of who is behind the Doctor's abduction, as well as adding this new mystery about how Captain Jack fits into everything. Of course I'm not exactly a big fan of Jack Harkness, so seeing him feature so prominently in the story isn't quite my cup of tea, but I'm at least curious about where things are headed. I didn't review it on fanfiction.net. Sorry. Just too lazy to set up an account!
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 5:26 pm
fredwise Same as Hairy, about the reviews. Maybe when I'm happy with a story I was writing, then maybe I'll stick it up. I'm enjoying this story. The lack of pace doesn't bother me, because it's nice to get some more information about the characters, and how they could all link together. I'm interested in who the Gelf are working for, and why the Doctor's not telling Rose this. Surely Rose won't be too pleased when she finds out that he knew all along, and she didn't... I like the fact that we can see how Jack is trying to solve the mystery on his own, and how it compares to Before TARDIS (BT). Can't wait for Chapter 3!
I'm glad you don't mind a slow pace... I'm setting stuff up right now. biggrin Well, the main reason the Doctor doesn't tell Rose about he Gelf is he doesn't want to scare her... but she'll find out soon. I've always loved, in books especially, how there are different main characters and they meet up in the end. This time, the main characters all already know eachother, but I'm trying to put that kind of story element in my ff.
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 5:27 pm
Roobarb I'm interested in Jack's past. I haven't really thought much about it before but I like this idea that he was supposed to be killed... or I think I like it. I'll have to wait and find out more!
You'll find out about that in maybe a few months if I ever go and write a sequel about Jack's past... Thanks a lot for the review! biggrin
Sadly, this is my only chance for the entire week I'll be able to get online. Three hours isn't enough time to write a next chapter and get in betaed, barely enough time to catch up on my alerts list. Hopefully next week I'll be able to update alteast three times. Thanks for reading and all! biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:56 pm
I updated! Huzzah! biggrin Chapter three is up.
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:18 pm
Yay! It's another great chapter, and I think the pace might be creeping up. It's nice seeing the Gelth again, but I'm still wondering who's masterminding this whole operation...
Don't stop writing this! I hope you're not like me, who gets really great ideas, then starts to write, and then wonders how to sort everything out, and stops writing the story...
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