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 Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 9:35 pm
I got attacked by a plot bunny during math. And I don't know whether to continue it or not. Feedback and what I've written so far? It's not a lot.
Hello. This is God, speaking.
I'd like to inform you that the world will explode in 100 years. And it's all your fault. Yes, you.
You know, I don't understand why you humans believe that you're the One Divine Creation. Frankly, it was a mistake you're all here today.
I'm not quite sure how exactly it happened. But I blame it all on Gabriel. I was making what I thought to be the funniest thing ever. And then I got a craving for Cheez-Whiz, and left the Creation Lab. I think Gabriel walked by, and his wings must have knocked over a jar of the precious myelin I was reserving for the Dolphins. Well, long story short, humans weren't supposed to have lived past the first millenia. But the myelin! It sped up your thought processes, so you survived even though you shouldn't have.
I tried to destroy you all before your population skyrocketed. But it grew exponentially, and now you're overpopulating my beautiful Earth.
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 10:13 pm
True, so true. Humans are like locusts, they juste at and consume everything. I really like this, very creative. ^_^
You think us humans would have gotten the message since the last great flood... o.O
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:25 am
heart That is beautiful, Nyx. 3nodding xd Continue.
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 6:13 am
xd
Definetely continue. From what you have already written it looks like it could be really interesting and funny.
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 8:27 am
I dont think we've ever seen a plot where God himself actually tries to destroy humans, i would definitley read it 3nodding So go for it! This could be a very fun project
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 1:33 pm
whee Thanks for feedback. Now I really will continue this. biggrin Thanks!
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 1:37 pm
That is an intresting point of view.
Itreally makes you think.
I like chezze whiz!!!
me and god like cheze whiz!
It is a really good explanation!
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 4:42 pm
Yeah, post the next bit! I wanna hear about how god tried to kill us but it just got worse!
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 4:48 pm
Ah, comedy with God in it. Beautiful. Perhaps it would work well in a sort of "letter to those about to die" way...
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 10:43 am
^_^ This small tid bit of story makes me happy.
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