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 Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 3:14 pm
Well, This is one of my best poems. Do you like it?
All it would take
Is a shot in the head,
Deep cuts on my wrists,
And then I'd be dead
I'd be able to rest
It would then be over
No one would care
Of that I am so sure
But until that time
I guess I'll be here
All I can hope
Is my death is nea
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 3:15 pm
So what do you think? neutral
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YourDeepestDarkestSecrets
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 12:59 pm
I like it. And I can relate to it. Its seems so... easy and simple but it has more meaning to it than you think.
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:35 pm
I can't really agree or relate to it. But as far as poetry goes, it's pretty good.
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 9:33 am
That is good 3nodding I've had that feeling before and I like how you make it sound so simple but so hard at the same time because that is how it is.
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:08 am
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Lucifer H. Marik Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:37 pm
Its good though there are a few spelling errors.
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