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 Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 2:05 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:29 pm
I love it soo much. I thnk Namine' and Roxas would make a great couple. they look so cute together.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:48 pm
I love it! I want to read more! You really coined their personalities, especially Namine's!
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 6:25 am
"A tan hand slowly reaches out grabbing his hand the figure's hand cold and pale"
this kinda sounded contridictary...namine's hand was tan? or did you mean it to be Roxas'? cause then it sounds like Namine's hand is pale after saying its tan...just wanted to clear it up
Otherwise...really good! xd
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 7:26 pm
very good indeed! blaugh blaugh blaugh but what is with roxas saying h e double hockey sticks? lol! blaugh jk round
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:12 am
That's REALLY good! The way you write it makes the whole thing go smoothely and I could picture the scene in my mind...awesome job!!
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