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 Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:31 pm
I hope you enjoy reading through my little concept. In fact it has become very dear to me since I joined a contest with it. I've gone through many Feedee concepts, but this one seems most precious to me.
I think Idris shall be the Forgotten I desire and so I don't want to put down many suggestions here. I would be alright with taking an excerpt from an other chapter of 'The Little Prince' or another book that would resemble his personality as well. That's why I make a small 'possibility' section at the end.
Have fun and critique/comments are always wished for ~ heart
Navigation :
[1.] ---------------{Welcome and Navigation}
[2.] --------------{ Lena & The Feedees}
[3.] -------------{ About Idris}
[4.] ------------{ About Authority}
[5.] -----------{ Interview with Idris & Authority}
[6.] ----------{ About Faiga}
[7.] ---------{ The Chocobo Ranch}
[8.] --------{ The Tribe}
[9.] -------{ Interview with Faiga}
[10.] ------{ Comments}
[11.] -----{ Idris Room etc.}
[12.] ----{ The Relation}
[13.] ---{ Possibilities}
[14.] --{ Thank you}
[15.] -{ Credits and stuff}
"Oh, little prince! Bit by bit I came to understand the secrets of your sad little life. For a long time you had found your only entertainment in the quiet pleasure of looking at the sunset. I learned that new detail on the morning of the fourth day, when you said to me: I am very fond of sunsets."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:33 pm
... I stumbled upon a small interest thread, which awakened my desire to stay with the future shop. I'm able to read since I'm four and so I can easily say that my life has been filled with thousands of books and writing is a pleasure for me. A shop which dealed with excerpts of those pieces of joy made my heart happy.
So I stayed with the Forgotten Documents mostly because of the story, but of course I was also astonished how amazing the artwork was. I participated in every contest and flatsale available and I'm pretty glad to say that my writing abilities became better and better. Still there were always people who wrote in such a magnificient way that it was just fair to let them win.
Usually everyone is sad when you lose a flatsale, but I don't only want to possess and claim a Forgotten Document. This thread is very dear to me and even if there have been times when I didn't visit it so often I followed all the Feedee's ways of life. I just hope I can be a part of it one day.
"I will recognize the sound of your steps, different from all others. The other steps make me hide under the ground. Yours will call me from underground like music."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:34 pm
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:39 pm
Daemon's Name: Authority
Daemon's Species: Peacock/Metal
Daemon's Appearance (Physical): Authority first of all looks quite much like a usual peacock ( don't mind my crappy reference XD ). Her feathery body is blue/violet, but also has some orange markings and spots on it. An exception to her normal peacock appearance are the metallic features she carries with her. First of all there are the orange copper beak and the matching feet. The most astonishing thing is obviously her line of feathers sprouting out of her butt. They are of a golden colour and obviously metallic, because they sparkle in the sun. On top there aren't the usual peacock eyes, but a pattern, which looks like the sun. Her feathery wings are totally normal though and not metallic like the back feathers.
Dealing with height she's supposed to be as small as a cat, when Idris is a baby or toddler, but should be able to grow up to a horse's size, so he's able to ride on her.
Daemon's Appearance (Traits): The little daemon appears to be a very obedient one. She never behaves cocky and only undfolds her tailfeathers when necessary. On the opposite the bird is pretty hyper and is almost never seen in a sitting position, but runs around most of the time. Although Authority is often worried about Idris, she seems to be happy in general.
Daemon's Personality: Authority is always very down to earth. She's the rational side in the relationship while Idris tends to be emotional. That doesn't mean that she's cold, but instead she's a very warm-hearted daemon who deeply cares about her friends. Still she is often very cautious and doesn't like to take risks. Authority always tries to act reasonable and in dangerous situations she doesn't pretend to be brave, but backs away more likely.
Very untypically for a peacock Authority isn't interested in her beauty or behaves as cocky as Idris does. Don't think she's a shy one though, she's able to be very stubborn and often the bird is able to change Idris' mind. Sometimes he's just too exhausting for her though, because she always has to worry about the boy and just needs time for herself. She just prefers to sit down then and look around. When the peacock is active though, Authority is usually never seen calm.
"Accepted authority rests first of all on reason. If you ordered your people to go and throw themselves into the sea, they would rise up in revolution. I have the right to require obedience because my orders are reasonable."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:41 pm
*Idris, Authority and Lena move into a room and sit down*
Lena : Welcome you two ! Wow, you look just like I imagined you to look like !
Idris : Of course, why should We look different than anyone wished for us to look like ?
Authority keeps silent.
Lena : Alright, it's nice that you want to spend some time with me answering my questions. Could you do me a favour and translate what Authority says ?
Authority : Didn't she say we would receive cookies ?
Idris : She thinks we're so famous. That's important. We can do so. She says it's nice to meet you.
Authority : Don't lie, Idris !
Idris fiddles around with a pillow close to him
Lena : What do you think about the quest thread I created ?
Idris : We like the colours. We don't like how you depicted our personality though, it's...
Authority : Well, it's a bit true, Idris...you know..
Idris : Some parts don't reveal Our genius well enough. The picture of Authority looks stupid, you should have taken a nicer one and the hair on my picture looks even more...
Lena : It's the one you sent to me for the presentation.
Idris : As I said, it looks even more fantastic.
Authority : ...
Lena : Do you think this thread has a chance of winning the competition ?
Idris : We haven't created it, so it's probably not as good as it could be. Still it deals with Us and so it practically has to win.
Authority : You can see she put a lot of effort in it.
Idris : Authority agrees and says you put a lot of effort in it.
Lena : Thank you. Now I'd like to ask you some personal questions.
What do you think about your guardian Faiga ?
Authority : He cares very well for us.
Idris : He's a good serva -
Authority : IDRIS !
Idris : He's alright.
Lena : What would you choose ? Coffee or Tea ?
Authority : Tea, Faiga says drinking coffee is not good for children.
Idris : Tea. Earl Grey. Coffee smells.
Lena : Rain or sunshine ?
Idris : Rainbow.
Authority : That wasn't an option. Think about your excerpt, choose sunset.
Idris : But because it wasn't an option, We choose the sunset.
Authority smiles.
Lena : Chocolate or vanilla ?
Authority : Urgh...ice-cream.
Idris : Authority doesn't like ice-cream. We would choose vanilla of course.
Lena : Is there something you want to announce to the crowd before we finish this off ?
Authority : Thanks a lot for reading this interview.
Idris : We thank you for reading this interview...and VOTE US !
Lena : Thanks for answering all the question *shakes her head and walks away*
Idris : *mutters* Strange woman.
Authority : Can we go and get the cookies now ?.
"I wonder," he said, "whether the stars are set alight in heaven so that one day each one of us may find his own again..."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:45 pm
Name: Faiga Cerecenar
Gender: male
Age: looks like 25 but is 127
Living at: his Chocobo Farm
Eye Colour: purple
Hair Colour: Light Brown
Skin: tanned, but usually pale
Marital Status: Single
Body: Although Faiga appears slim, he has a very trained body. For riding the chocobo's he isn't allowed to be too heavy though, but still the work with them makes him stronger.
Clothing Style: Faiga is usually seen in brown working clothes, because he tends to get dirty anyway. He's dressed casually and sporty and doesn't think about his looks too much. In contrast the chocobo keeper usually wears multi-coloured feathers or flowers in his hair as a habit of his tribe.
Special Markings: Red stripes as a sign of his tribe on his cheeks, pointed teeth
Personality: Faiga is in general a very calm person, which is also a result of his work. He is very emotional though and doesn't understand why certain people react the way they do. He always tries to figure out the reason behind this and often makes it worse. Faiga is a deeply caring person, which is expressed in the way he deals with the big yellow birds. He tries to understand everybody and is confused, when somebody reacts in a way he hadn't foreseen.
Although Faiga is not shy, he doesn't open up to everyone so easily. Especially around women he doesn't know how to react and the result usually is that they laugh about him. If you get to know him though, he's able to be quite a gentleman, although often clumsy. His mood is a happy and content one in general and he loves his job.
"I think there are six or seven of them in existence. I saw them, several years ago. But one never knows where to find them. The wind blows them away. They have no roots, and that makes their life very difficult"
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:47 pm
"He believed that he would never want to return. But on this last morning all these familiar tasks seemed very precious to him."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:50 pm
8/15 cool The Tribe - Nethuaniath"The reply is simple. I have tried. But with the others I have not been successful. When I made the drawing of the baobabs I was carried beyond myself by the inspiring force of urgent necessity.."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:52 pm
9/15 heart Interview with Faiga about the quest""My flower is ephemeral," the little prince said to himself, "and she has only four thorns to defend herself against the world. And I have left her on my planet, all alone!""
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:59 pm
10/15 ninja Idris comments on the other quest threads and the existing Feedees"The grown-ups are certainly very, very odd," he said to himself, as he continued on his journey."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:01 pm
"Yes," I said to the little prince. "The house, the stars, the desert-- what gives them their beauty is something that is invisible!"
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:03 pm
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:06 pm
13/15 exclaim Possibility Section"He had taken seriously words which were without importance, and it made him very unhappy."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:07 pm
14/15 4laugh Unknown yet"The proof that the little prince existed is that he was charming, that he laughed, and that he was looking for a sheep. If anybody wants a sheep, that is a proof that he exists."
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:09 pm
15/15 idea Credits and stuff"To admire mean that you regard me as the handsomest, the best-dressed, the richest, and the most intelligent man on this planet."
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