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Felinxis

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:33 am


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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:34 am


______//.| Jiao

User ImageForgotten's Name: Jiao - Scaley Dragon (Pronounced J -ow)
Forgotten's Gender: Male

Forgotten's Appearance (Physical): The most noticale thing about Jiao when you first see him would be the long dragon tail that protrudes from his behind. The tail itself is thin at its end and get thicker as it gets closer to his body. It is covered in scales that are a blue-green color, depending on how the sun is shining upon them. This tail is from his former self.

Another noticable feature is the small, dragon-like wings that are attached around his shoulders. These wings are not capable of flight, they are a reminder of what he once possessed. These wings are a dark blue-green color, and are scaley also.

Taking a closer look at Jiao you can see that his back, the sides of his legs, the sides of his arms, and around his cheeks and forehead, are also covered in the blue-green scales that are similar his dragon tail. Thesescales do not irritate him at all, rather he thinks of them as normal skin.

At the side of Jiao's head are small, curled horns that are jet black in color. These horns would grow slowley as he gets older, aswell as his tail, but his wings would stay around the same size, never being able to lift him from the ground.

His 'regular' skin has a yellowish tinge to it, but other than that it ccan be seemingly pale, like a regular humans skin. His eyes are slanted and are the color of pure gold, giving him and enchanting, and important look. Jiao has his hair at shoulder length and it is jet black in color, but at times can seem to be dark navy-blue. He tries to keep it neat, but it tends to go wild and wavy at the worst of times.

Jiao wears long imperial robe-like attire, mostly in the colors of dark red and gold, with comlex patterns of chinese dragons or elegant birds dancing across their hems. He only likes to wear silk, and has an unfortunate knack for telling when it is fake...


Forgotten's Appearance (Traits): Stuck-up, demanding, Regal, occasionally grumpy

Forgotten's Personality: Jiao is always quick to act, very demanding in what he requests and what he does. He is always looking for weaker people to do his bidding, as he sees himself as somekind of leader. He is always looking to take advantage of others weaknesses. He is hardly controllable, even his guardian has trouble taking care of him. The only person that Jiao will truely listen to is Deep. He has also proclaimed himself a prince -__-;;

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Felinxis

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:35 am


______//.| Deep

User ImageDaemon's Name: Deep
Daemon's Species: Fenghuang

Daemon's Appearance (Physical): A Fenghuang is the Chinese version of a phoenix. These birds can be large or small, and are often oranges, reds and yellows in colour. They have feathery wings, and their tail feathers resemble peacock feathers. She is not very tall either, only reaching Jiao's elbows at a stretch.

They have tufts of feathers atop their heads, and long legs, with small talons at their ends. At times it looks as if the bird is on fire, when really it is not.
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Daemon's Appearance (Traits): Guiding, Knowledgable, Calm

Daemon's Personality: Deep is a guiding soul for Jiao, offering him advice whenever it be needed. She is not harsh, nor is she comforting, she is neutral in the way she speaks and the way she acts, though her true loyalty will always lie with Jiao.
PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:36 am


______//.| Excerpt

User ImageExcerpt: "...his body curved and coiled like a snake's, so that he could appear to be much smaller if he wanted. At the shoulder he stood no higher than a young ox. When he raised his head to its full height, he was eye to eye with the girl. In the sunlight, his scales were greeny blue, the colour of water in a deep spring. HIs head was crowned with two long, curved horns with needle-sharp points. He had long whiskers, not of hair but of sinewy strands that hung down on either side of his bulbous nose. His body narrowed to a snake-like tail. Tufts of lo..."
How does the excerpt affect the pair?: The pair believe they must find out the truth about this dragon, and whether it was once Jiao.
What does it reveal about..
    .. their past?: The excerpt reveals how Jiao once was, and in his opinion, how he should be in all his dragon-ey glory, leaving Jiao to pnder how he will return to his 'true form'. As for Deep's past, she knows nothing about it, only that she must be here to guide Jiao on his path to his past.
    .. how they are now that they are "reborn" as a Forgotten? The pair believe they must quest to find the answers about why Jiao was not reborn as a complete dragon
    .. their future?: The excerpt doesn't reveal anything about their future...


Powers, talents, special traits?: Jiao, in normal form cannot do anything, but as he gets older, he will eventually learn to shapeshift into a dragon, and have dragon abilities, but only in dragon form. Deep has fire abilities, but only small ones.


Other important qualities: Jiao carries a large, shiny stone with him wherever he goes... but thats all I'm saying... (:
Other important concept details: Nope! But I want to keep some of his concept a secret... if thats allowed.

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