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 Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 10:05 pm
I'm not sure where this came from... But I did take bits out of it for a fanfic of mine. This is mine by the way... It's very short... and rather depressing. It's not very good, but oh well. Tell me what you think.
Hell found me.
I couldn't hide from what I knew was always there. The shadows lurking in the corners, waiting for my heart to weaken, just a little bit. The cold voices, grasping out for my soul, trying to pull me back into the darkness.
"What did I do?!" I clutch my face and sob into my hands, rain pouring down all around me. My hair matted in a black mass on my head.
Thoughts can kill a person.
I lift my head up, tears clinging to my eyelashes only to be washed away by the rain. I struggle to stand up, pain radiating from every part of my body. Why me?
A low groan emits from my teenage throat as I almost fall over, gripping the dumpster for support. Why did you leave me here? Alone, and broken?
Clutching my torn shirt as close to my chest as possible, I stagger towards a deserted street. Do you hate me that much?
I bite back a sob and force myself into the street, looking for any shelter from the rain. I need a place to rest. To forget about this horrible life. To get away. Why did you do it?
I look around, blinking away the fuzziness threatening to take over my vision. Is this what it feels like to die?
I gulp as my throat burns and slip into another alley. I can't go any further. I lean against a wall and slide down, my legs sprawled out in front of me. Why?
My strength is slipping away, being engulfed by the darkness. I don't have much longer. I let a shuddering sob as I wait for unconsciousness to take over. Memories flash before my eyes. Some happy, most horrid.
Why me?
My arm falls to the ground with a soft thud. I'm too weak to even support my limbs. I close my eyes and wait for the pain to stop.
Wait for the betrayal to end.
Wait for hell to engulf me.
My senses weaken. My surroundings dull. I'm burning hot, yet freezing cold.
I open my eyes, for one last look at the life that's treated me so horribly.
Shockingly, I see the eyes of the person that ruined my life.
Those gleeful eyes.
Those cold, hateful, gleeful eyes, laughing with joy that his feat had been achomplished.
Laughing at me. Hating me. Wanting me gone.
A scornful smile played across my lips. He won. He defeated me.
My eyes slipped shut again, dipping me into the deep darkness. And then I heard it.
"I love you."
Too late.
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 4:55 pm
i too share a similar feeling toward vampires as you are afraid at first but welcome it after the deed is done
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 6:21 pm
Wow.. Honestly, I didn't think anyone would get the point of it... or.. the 'behind' story. Congrats!
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