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ConsusLata
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 8:49 am


Do you write poetry? Post your work here for all to see.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 8:51 am


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ConsusLata
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dancing_on_hyenas
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:24 pm


eek *claps enthusiastically* that was very xD poetic!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:28 pm


It's the best I have managed to do. I have some other stuff but they aren't nearly as good.

ConsusLata
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Geba_00
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 1:17 pm


a poetry corner.... redface I'm no good at anything but angst. *runs and hides*
PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 4:49 pm


Geba_00
a poetry corner.... redface I'm no good at anything but angst. *runs and hides*

I forgot what angst was..
I wright poetry about stick figues

JohnnyxCashXXxx


ConsusLata
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 8:48 pm


Has no one anything to contribute?
PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 7:15 am


I put this in a forum a while back. It's by no means a great piece of art but I'll put it in here for kicks anyway.

A boy sits reading on the playground
With perfect round glasses and sad eyes like Harry
before he found out he was a wizard
And could magick himself to fame and courage
For really, what is Harry without magic?
Nothing at all.
The boy stays away from everyone else
As they throw rubber balls - cherry bombs - and
yell a lot.
And you can tell they make fun of him
And probably steal his glasses or worse, his books
Hide them and stomp them and play vicious
games of keep-away
And the boy stays away from them because of this
Also because books are truer friends than most humans
And also because, maybe, he knows what these kids
will be like when they grow up -
-That is, they won't change much.
On the other side of the playground a girl gazes
Across to the unconcious and spellbound boy
with the perfect glasses
She likes books too but doesn't read on the playground-
She's too busy sailing to Australia on the jungle gym
With her three best friends.
You see, she knows a thing or two about people and
How to be youself and stil be loved,
A lucky trait for a kid.
She looks at this boy when her friends aren't watching
And thinks, for a reason inexplicable,
She would like to kiss him.
To see what he'd do, for one,
And also because he looks as if he could use it,
Maybe.

I don't know if I'm the boy reading
Or the girl sailing -
Or an odd mixture of both.

muffinlady


Geba_00
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 9:59 am


muffinlady
I put this in a forum a while back. It's by no means a great piece of art but I'll put it in here for kicks anyway.

A boy sits reading on the playground
With perfect round glasses and sad eyes like Harry
before he found out he was a wizard
And could magick himself to fame and courage
For really, what is Harry without magic?
Nothing at all.
The boy stays away from everyone else
As they throw rubber balls - cherry bombs - and
yell a lot.
And you can tell they make fun of him
And probably steal his glasses or worse, his books
Hide them and stomp them and play vicious
games of keep-away
And the boy stays away from them because of this
Also because books are truer friends than most humans
And also because, maybe, he knows what these kids
will be like when they grow up -
-That is, they won't change much.
On the other side of the playground a girl gazes
Across to the unconcious and spellbound boy
with the perfect glasses
She likes books too but doesn't read on the playground-
She's too busy sailing to Australia on the jungle gym
With her three best friends.
You see, she knows a thing or two about people and
How to be youself and stil be loved,
A lucky trait for a kid.
She looks at this boy when her friends aren't watching
And thinks, for a reason inexplicable,
She would like to kiss him.
To see what he'd do, for one,
And also because he looks as if he could use it,
Maybe.

I don't know if I'm the boy reading
Or the girl sailing -
Or an odd mixture of both.


*huggles* I like it!!! crying

c'mon! I wanna play on the slide. wink
PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 7:25 pm


Thanks Geba! *huggles back* You're such the best...

muffinlady


Geba_00
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 7:59 am


muffinlady
Thanks Geba! *huggles back* You're such the best...


^.^ Naw...you are!! xd
PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:06 am


Okay, I didn't write this poem...but it's written about the town I live in! We live in small tourist town wisconsin, and you know tourist season has started when one is trying to walk to dairy queen on one's lunch break but gets back late because everyother SUV stops on the street next to you and some tanned silly head in a funny shirt leans out the window and is all like "Can you tell me how to get to...(etc)" Anyway, this poem appeard on a small billboard on a hill around 10 years ago, just to taunt those who do not know their way around. ^.^

"Winding in and winding out
Fills my head with seriouse doubt
Whether the fool who sketched this rout
Was going to Hell
or comeing out."

*giggles* short, sweet, and oh so real! xd

Geba_00
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Meeleena

PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:26 am


Geba_00
Okay, I didn't write this poem...but it's written about the town I live in! We live in small tourist town wisconsin, and you know tourist season has started when one is trying to walk to dairy queen on one's lunch break but gets back late because everyother SUV stops on the street next to you and some tanned silly head in a funny shirt leans out the window and is all like "Can you tell me how to get to...(etc)" Anyway, this poem appeard on a small billboard on a hill around 10 years ago, just to taunt those who do not know their way around. ^.^

"Winding in and winding out
Fills my head with seriouse doubt
Whether the fool who sketched this rout
Was going to Hell
or comeing out."

*giggles* short, sweet, and oh so real! xd
*claps* That's cool!

I just right freeverse soul-spills.
It's really weird. I wrote this awsome one in like, second grade. It was an epic. I kinda scared my teacher. She wanted to send it to a poetry book or something.
I lost the poem in less than 2 minutes though.

It was really cool, about this traveling warrior guy who comes to a town and people gossip about him and stuff. It was really weird.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:48 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 8:57 pm


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