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 Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 6:32 am
sweatdrop I've been having a hard time writing my fanfics lately and have only realised why in the past few days.
I spend more time on Gaia than is healthy
So I thought I'd kill two birds with one stone and maybe give a shot at writing on Gaia. It'd mean I could multitask on here without guilt!
I think it's a winwin.
So.
Here's the link to the story so far because I'm starting off writing it here at chapter 10 and am faaar to lazy to put it all in here.
Ok? Ok.
And so I begin. EDIT: This fanfic contains Boylove. Don't like? Meh.
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 6:46 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 6:54 am
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Kai sighed as he took his second blissful sip of his caffeinated beverage. Much Better He thought, content as he felt the warm liquid make it's way down his throat to where it could do it's magic.
He moved slowly to sit down at his table. Easing down into his seat he turned to contemplate his wall of Rei.
"'Morning" He muttered, not quite registering that he was talking to inanimate pictures.
Kai sighed as a ghost of a hand with the same warmth as the body he had held last night traced along his shoulders. He shut his eyes as he heard the whispered reply to his greeting, the ghost hands coming to rest on the side of his neck. Kai leant his head back on to the arm connecting to the hand.
The warmth evaporated instantly as his head touched nothing but the thin air his Phantom Rei was made from.
Kai opened his eyes abruptly and leant forward on the table, resting his elbows on the table and his head in his hands.
I'm acting like a crazy person He thought glumly, rubbing his temples.
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 7:06 am
(( lol - you are funny...i need gold...so close to that were tail...well kinda *reads* ))
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 7:25 am
((also gives me a chance to get you to read it in bits and tell me when parts are le crap. I love Creepy Kai))
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"I'll be back in a few hours." Kai told the clerk at the counter of the 'Quick Photostop'. He handed over his film to the pimply teen.
As the film left his fingers he felt a slight pang, urging him to take back his only connection to what had happened the night before. He ignored the urge and turned away, striding back through the door of the small shop and on to the street.
He was going to see the real thing soon anyway.
He took one last look back at the shop, he hoped that they would develop his pictures well. He had been careful to take his film to a different place from the one who had developed his Rei pictures last time.
He was very aware that it wasn't quite normal to have an entire roll of film dedicated to one person.
To have two rolls of film dedicated to that one person might arouse the suspicions of the photo developers.
And that was something he couldn't afford.
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 7:37 am
((i'm STILL waiting for that creepy Kai you rp'd ages ago...- now he really freaked me out and it was great! ok he killed tala but nevermind stare ))
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 5:48 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:16 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:52 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 10:28 pm
So engrossed with wondering why the regular staff- and , most importantly, Rei- were missing Kai didn't realise that he was at the front of the line until Mariah started to speak to him.
"What would you like?" She asked.
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:01 am
Kai blinked and looked at Mariah. "Uh..." He said, mind blanking out on him. "Bitter." He blurted out before realising just how freakish that sounded.
"Uh... I mean... something really bitter." He said, trying to not sound like a serial killer.
"Ok..." Mariah said hesitatingly, looking at the selection of coffee. "Um..." She bit her lip and picked one randomly, hoping it would prove to be somewhat bitter.
"Sure!" She said brightly, handing Kai a number. "I'll get you your Moroccan Mixup Coffee in a few minutes." She promised before turning to the next customer.
Kai reached out and touch her on her arm, making Mariah turn back toward him.
"Um... I was wondering where all the normal staff were." He asked.
Mariah gave him a sly smile. "They all had a big night last night." She told him. "So the owner of this place called me in."
Kai nodded and took his number, seeing that his regular table wasn't taken despite how busy it was and smirking.
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 7:13 am
((it's great and you know i love it but looking at it critically...you're up to chapter ten and i don't think you've gone anywhere, really, i know your trying to develope it or whatever but be careful not to let it drag on, k?))
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:07 pm
((Noted. If it makes you feel any better I have a definite chapter plan. Obsession is only meant to 18 chapters and each one has it's definite element that adds to the story. I know there's a lot of crapping on in between though >< It's the only way I can beef up the story.))
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 7:42 pm
((hmmm, i'm still worried if there's only 8 chapters left and i have yet to get a diffinite grasp on the plot....or maybe thats just me....i don't like it when things drag on....especially when i know what i'm expecting  ))
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:19 pm
((*cracks up laughing* That's hot. Don't worry this chapter sends Kai down that path- it's entitled Jealousy- or it will be when I'm finished. Have now fully established that Kai's a little bit obsessive over Rei. Now all he needs is a little bit of a reason to abduct him. *giggles* Psycho Kai will come. And he will come with a knife.))
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