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And the winner is.....?
Entry #1
6%
 6%  [ 2 ]
Entry #2
23%
 23%  [ 7 ]
Entry #3
26%
 26%  [ 8 ]
Entry #4
10%
 10%  [ 3 ]
Entry #5
23%
 23%  [ 7 ]
Entry #6
10%
 10%  [ 3 ]
Total Votes : 30


OGAWG
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:20 am


Creative Character Challenge Vote!

Please vote for the "best" entry.
Names are withheld until the vote closes to stave off favoritism.

If you are not yet familar with the Creative Character Challenge,
please pop on over and check it out. ^_^

Please remember, this is less an exercise in writing, and more an exercise in creativity and character creation. Please vote for who you think made the most interesting or "best" character design to go along with this months picture (below).


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:22 am


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OGAWG
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OGAWG
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:23 am


Entry #2
Audley


Name: Andrella/Penelope Black.
Age: 173 (sprite years - about fifty or so human years).
Race: Ice sprite cross Gritch.

Andrella is the result of a union between a wayward ice sprite (as prissy-looking and fae-like as any sprite might be) and a dark creature called a Gritch. In the other world (people from the other world call Earth the other world - both are accurate) she is a unique creation; most races do not know how to respond to her. Sprites are afraid of her for being an omen; Gritch's are wary of her for not being enough of an omen.

Eventually she is sent to the "other world" (Earth), under the assumption her unique skills would help her detect criminal elements that had escaped to the other world (no one knows what her "unique skills" are - they simply assume she has them; she is consequently very afraid when she first appears on Earth).

On Earth and amongst humans she works in a post office; most people don't notice, but to knowledgeable stamp collectors, it is always quite curious to them to discover her name is Penelope Black (Penny Blacks being the first postage stamp available in the world). Andrella is able to hide her wings easily - as a water substance they can lay flat against her body, though under her work clothes she wears a special suit to stop her clothes from getting wet (mildly successful - by the end of the day her blazers tend to look as though she's been sweating quite badly).

Mission: Detect evil and contact authorities to inform them of evil's location.
Success: Good, though she frequently has to become involved in the detainment of criminal's herself.
Other: Andrella just wants to finish her job on Earth and go home (though she eventually makes friends and even catches the eye of a nice - but terribly shy and weedy - postal clerk).


What's a Gritch?
A Gritch (Gritchenachten) is a dark creature; it is a messenger and an omen of death. The tears of a Gritch produce a small statue called a Krosehasten - once it is delivered and the person whom it was delivered to dies, the Krosehasten loses form and becomes tears once more. A Gritch will lie in shadows and darkness until it sees the person who will die - it then gives a terrible shriek and leaves the statue (usually an animal connected to the subject of death).

Since she is only half Gritch, Andrella's tears do not make Krosehastens - instead when she cries the dark material causes her to bleed and her ice wings to melt. The feather-like shards that make up her wings begin to fall to out and signify dark activity in the area (closeby or further away - the closer the dark activity is, the more Andrella will bleed and melt).

And an ice sprite?
An ice sprite is an ice sprite. It's only relevant features are wings made from ice; in flight these wings look like water contained within a thin film.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:25 am


Entry #3
Alienarose


Name: Rella Ja'neer
Age: 53 (in human years, she'd be about 17)
Race: Cyparti - humanlike, very beautiful in appearance, usually fair in complexion and posessing soft, silvery wings on their back.

Background:
Rella grew up in the city of Angelus. With high walls separating the Cyparti from the wildlands, most of the residents went about their business without a second thought about what happened outside the city. War, famine, poverty, and even disease were foreign concepts to the Cyparti. The only thing they acknowledged from the wildlands were the Orim, cursed and hideous beings with rough, leathery skin and batlike wings - the complete opposite of the beauty the Cyparti possessed. No one knew how the Orim came to be and very few had ever looked upon them, but they were known to exist.

One day, Rella was introduced to the forbidden Texts of Agarre. These covered a shady area of magic that seemed to nullify the teachings of the Pillars of Angelus. People who were secretly a part of the Agarrean Sect, argued that the teachings of the texts did not go against the Pillars, but rather opened up a whole other aspect of magic, called The Grey. Many had gone become adept in this area before gaining so much power, they left Angelus for the mythical Higherlands. The allure of the forbidden tempted her into The Grey and she soon became obsessed with it. She possessed a natural aptitude and began to rebel against the Pillars, believing they were put into place to keep the Cyparti from becoming too strong.

Rella kept her involvement well hidden from most of her teachers. One man who was familiar with the Agarrean Sect could sense a difference in her manner and something in her eyes that very few would ever detect. He confronted her about it, urging her to leave it alone. He told her there was much more to The Grey than any of the Agarreans could even begin to understand and that she was toying with something that would invariably destroy her - something only the Orim knew about. Rella denied involvement and quickly broke away from the teacher. But his mentioning the Orim left a hollow feeling in her stomach. She didn't know what he meant.

It wasn't long after that she began to change physically. She noticed the dry patches of skin first and simply hid them, denying that it had anything to do with what she had been so obsessively dabbling in for so many months. Next were the veins that began to show up on her fair skin, mainly on her legs. She began to feel pain in her joints. She consulted the texts as well as the teachings of the Pillars to see if she could find any answers. As an afterthought, she researched the Orim. It didn't take her long to put two and two together.

The Orim truly were cursed. Once Cyparti just like Rella, they were cursed with the consequences of dabbling in The Grey. Once the transformation began, there was no going back. Even discontinuing working with The Grey, Rella would only continue to lose her beauty. In addition, her command of all aspects of magic would fail and indeed, she was already seeing that come about. The morning she woke to find many of the beautiful silvery feathers from her wings lying on her bed, revealing a scaly underwing, she knew she would have to join the others before her who had left, not to the Higherlands as they all had believed, but into the exile of the wildlands instead. She grabbed the feathers in anguish and clenched them in her hand until her fingernails pressing into her palm drew blood. She knew her innocence was lost forever and soon, her beauty and the ability to touch magic would be as well.

OGAWG
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OGAWG
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:27 am


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OGAWG
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OGAWG
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:29 am


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:41 am


The order in which the entries are listed above is random. I used a random seqence generator to choose placement.


Voteing is now open and will continue through the end of the month. :3

OGAWG
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Lilithia

PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 4:47 am


I am going to lose! DX
PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:00 am


Don't say that! xp

Raesha
Captain


Nyralia

PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:16 pm


I will be back to read these tonight! XD

-dances-

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:31 pm


Lilithia
I am going to lose! DX

looks like I am loosing
told you, you're better

Queen Zenobia


Mekania
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 11:37 pm


It's only a day into the voting guys, have some optimism! XD
PostPosted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 10:47 pm


Mekania
It's only a day into the voting guys, have some optimism! XD
Oh, I am ^^
"positive fear of failure"
I seem to expect to do better than I actually.. do.
I'm over-optimistic xP

I'm not completely expecting to lose...
just saying Lilithia is a better writer than I am ^_^

Yes, now you all know what an incredibly high self esteem I have.

Queen Zenobia


Raesha
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:57 pm


We've currently got a 3-way tie! rofl Voting closes in about 3 days so lets get some more votes and find our winner! whee
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