█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ PJ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Usien Nakamura █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Jen █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 168 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 56 kg
█HAIR ▬ long dark brown hair █CLOTHING ▬ She wears a jumper-like outfit composed of dark brown leather, a red hoody, red stockings, and white thigh-high boots embellished with gold linings and symbols. █ACCESSORIES ▬a red headband resembling bunny ears, a pair of goggles and her family emblem on a pouch █EYES ▬ golden █BUILD ▬ Hourglass █TATTOOS ▬ none █SCARS ▬ none █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ none
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Jannet is naturally has great legs, she is able to run much faster than others and jump higher. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Strategic mindset: Jannet is great at thinking about combat strategies and the next moves she needs to make, always thinking a few steps ahead if possible. █Other Talents ▬ Jannet has a great sense of direction, she doesn’t get lost very easily. On top of that Jannet’s body is quite flexable, letting her move more freely than others. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Bomb expert: from a very young age she was taught how to make, defuse and operate a huge verity of bombs and explosives... █Weakest Skill ▬ lack of physical strength. When it comes to combat and lifting stuff, Jannet is way weaker than other students. █Other Skills ▬ Jannet is good at fighting with daggers, can create great plushies and small dalls, and has great sense of aim
█LIKES █ ▬ Making bombs! Specifically bun bombs █ ▬ there aren’t people she loves but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ crisps! █ ▬ bun bombs of course █ ▬ bunnies! █DISLIKES █ ▬ same as before, there aren’t people she hates but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ meat when it's reheated, yuck! █ ▬ any weapon larger than a short sword. She just can’t wield them █ ▬ scorpions █ ▬ any Grimm with a somewhat humanoid appearance █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ on the surface she seems like a spunky and happy girl, always friendly and always willing to hang out, though she suffers from a horrible depression that is only being suppressed by her semblance. The longer she stays without using her semblance the worse her mental state becomes. █Vernacular ▬ that! █Positive Traits ▬ she can be very fun to be around and always tries her best to help anyone she can. █Negative Traits ▬ she is very unstable: when depressed she can seem almost self-harming and when too high on her semblance she can be too careless and do some very stupid decisions
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Jannet was born to a wealthy family in Vale that was famous for their bombs and explosive manufacture, every single person in the family were taught from a very young age the art of explosives and how to make them out of many materials, from dust to gunpowder and even chemical reactions, they knew it all. She was taught by her parents and later her older siblings until the age of 12 where everyone seemed to slowly get less and less energetic, the atmosphere in the house changed as no one had any will to continue creating or tinkering or even get out of bed for a while. And then it happened, a group of Grimm they have never seen before slowly crept in from the basement and attacked them, one by one her family fell victim to the Grimm in front of her eyes as she cried in horror until she suddenly created a weird glowing object that looked like a skull, she threw it to the side out of disbelief and the Grimm followed it instead of her. On top of that the horrible feeling she was feeling up until now felt a lot more bearable and calm, she used this opportunity to escape the household into the woods where she tried to get some help, but she could not find anyone nearby, the place was silent.
A week has passed since the incident and Jannet finally noticed a house in the distance, it was big for a normal house but it didn’t matter, she bolted as fast as she could towards it and knocked on the door but just as she did so her body finally gave up and she passed out right in front of the door. A few hours passed and she woke up, she was inside of the house and was told it’s an orphanage they could not find her parents around and decided it’s the best place for her to be, she started crying uncontrollably until she used her semblance again, and this time she would not stop using it daily. from that day on she lived in the orphanage, she stayed in her room for most of the day making bombs and practicing, she won’t let her family legacy die down not until she herself dies, even when the adults that ran the orphanage caught her making bombs and punished her for it, she kept making them in secret, hiding the bombs inside of cute plushies she created as a disguise until finally, she was old enough to leave.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Jannet uses bombs as her main weapon that she stores in a special pouch. all bombs (except bun bomb) have a 50- centimeter radius of explosion and are as strong as a hand grenade and are the size of a tennis ball. █ ▬.while she does not have a traditional weapon, she does have a good variety of them in her pouch: █First Type ▬ 7 bombs that explode from a strong enough collision █Second Type ▬ 7 Bouncy Bombs that are made with a rubber shell. they are as the name says, bouncy and will only expload after hitting something 3 times (wall, floor, human body etc.) █Third Type ▬ 3 Time bombs that will explode on Jannet's next post. █Fourth Type(s) ▬ Bun Bomb! this special bomb will only expload after placing an object the exact size of a specific hole in the back of it, once the object either disappears or falls/is ripped out the bomb inside will expload in a radius of 3 meters from it. █Ammo Type ▬ 10 iron pellets (those are purely made out of iron and will not explode). █ ▬ all her bombs (except the obvious bun bomb strapped to her other hip) are stored in the same pouch on her, a strong blow towards the pouch will explode on her and will do a lot of damage.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a slingshot used for shooting out the bombs (can effectively shoot up to 9 meters in front of her █ ▬ a pair or 30 cm long Crusader daggers █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ 8 dust syringes used to inject the bombs. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬the value of sadness █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Jannet can take away some of her negative emotions and materialize them with her aura. Letting her make small solid objects that act as a beacon of negative emotions for a limited time. the objects will have the same weight and impact as the real thing. Jannet can make a new object once every three posts. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Jannet can create an object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 10 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 1▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 15 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 2▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 20 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 25 meters, any further than that would attract just like a normal human. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ by taking her negative emotions away it also takes any sort of awareness they give, after using it for 3 posts without resting it for 2 she will lose any sense of fear, danger, embarrassment or awareness to her surrounding. in addition, While the object created will have the same impact and weight as the real thing, it is still just made of aura. So more complex items, like a bomb, would only look and feel like the physical bomb; it would not be able to explode. However, a knife will still weigh and cut like a real knife.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ PJ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Usien Nakamura █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Jen █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 168 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 53 kg
█HAIR ▬ long dark brown hair █CLOTHING ▬ She wears a jumper-like outfit composed of dark brown leather, a red hoody, red stockings, and white thigh-high boots embellished with gold linings and symbols. █ACCESSORIES ▬a red headband resembling bunny ears, a pair of goggles and her family emblem on a pouch █EYES ▬ golden █BUILD ▬ Hourglass █TATTOOS ▬ none █SCARS ▬ none █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ none
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Jannet is naturally has great legs, she is able to run much faster than others and jump higher. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Strategic mindset: Jannet is great at thinking about combat strategies and the next moves she needs to make, always thinking a few steps ahead if possible. █Other Talents ▬ Jannet has a great sense of direction, she doesn’t get lost very easily. On top of that Jannet’s body is quite flexable, letting her move more freely than others. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Bomb expert: from a very young age she was taught how to make, defuse and operate a huge verity of bombs and explosives... █Weakest Skill ▬ lack of physical strength. When it comes to combat and lifting stuff, Jannet is way weaker than other students. █Other Skills ▬ Jannet is good at fighting with daggers, can create great plushies and small dalls, and has great sense of aim
█LIKES █ ▬ Making bombs! Specifically bun bombs █ ▬ there aren’t people she loves but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ crisps! █ ▬ bun bombs of course █ ▬ bunnies! █DISLIKES █ ▬ same as before, there aren’t people she hates but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ meat when it's reheated, yuck! █ ▬ any weapon larger than a short sword. She just can’t wield them █ ▬ scorpions █ ▬ any Grimm with a somewhat humanoid appearance █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ on the surface she seems like a spunky and happy girl, always friendly and always willing to hang out, though she suffers from a horrible depression that is only being suppressed by her semblance. The longer she stays without using her semblance the worse her mental state becomes. █Vernacular ▬ that! █Positive Traits ▬ she can be very fun to be around and always tries her best to help anyone she can. █Negative Traits ▬ she is very unstable: when depressed she can seem almost self-harming and when too high on her semblance she can be too careless and do some very stupid decisions
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Jannet was born to a wealthy family in Vale that was famous for their bombs and explosive manufacture, every single person in the family were taught from a very young age the art of explosives and how to make them out of many materials, from dust to gunpowder and even chemical reactions, they knew it all. She was taught by her parents and later her older siblings until the age of 12 where everyone seemed to slowly get less and less energetic, the atmosphere in the house changed as no one had any will to continue creating or tinkering or even get out of bed for a while. And then it happened, a group of Grimm they have never seen before slowly crept in from the basement and attacked them, one by one her family fell victim to the Grimm in front of her eyes as she cried in horror until she suddenly created a weird glowing object that looked like a skull, she threw it to the side out of disbelief and the Grimm followed it instead of her. On top of that the horrible feeling she was feeling up until now felt a lot more bearable and calm, she used this opportunity to escape the household into the woods where she tried to get some help, but she could not find anyone nearby, the place was silent.
A week has passed since the incident and Jannet finally noticed a house in the distance, it was big for a normal house but it didn’t matter, she bolted as fast as she could towards it and knocked on the door but just as she did so her body finally gave up and she passed out right in front of the door. A few hours passed and she woke up, she was inside of the house and was told it’s an orphanage they could not find her parents around and decided it’s the best place for her to be, she started crying uncontrollably until she used her semblance again, and this time she would not stop using it daily. from that day on she lived in the orphanage, she stayed in her room for most of the day making bombs and practicing, she won’t let her family legacy die down not until she herself dies, even when the adults that ran the orphanage caught her making bombs and punished her for it, she kept making them in secret, hiding the bombs inside of cute plushies she created as a disguise until finally, she was old enough to leave.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dagger Dagger █ ▬ A pair of daggers with a pommel designed to combine the two and form a slingshot that functions like a recurve bow. █Melee Form ▬ a pair or 30 cm long Crusader daggers █Ranged Form ▬ a bow-like slingshot created to shoot ping pong sized bombs or iron pellets to a max distance of 25 meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ Bun Bomb! this special bomb will only expload after placing an object the exact size of a specific hole in the back of it, once the object either disappears or falls/is ripped out the bomb inside will expload in a radius of 3 meters from it. █Ammo Type ▬ Jannet uses both her Semblance and her bombs as ammo, it usually contains: 5 bombs that explode from a strong enough collision, 2 areal bombs that will fly towards a pre-determined target, 3 time bombs that will explode in her next post after activating, 10 iron pellets (those are purely made out of iron and will not explode). █ ▬ all her bombs (except the obvious bun bomb strapped to her other hip) are stored in the same pouch on her, a strong hit towards the pouch will explode on her and will do a lot of damage.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ 8 dust syringes used to inject the bombs. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬the value of sadness █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Jannet can take away some of her negative emotions and materialize them with her aura. Letting her make small solid objects that act as a beacon of negative emotions for a limited time. the objects will have the same weight and impact as the real thing. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Jannet can create an object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 10 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 1▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 15 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 2▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 20 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 25 meters, any further than that would attract just like a normal human. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ by taking her negative emotions away it also takes any sort of awareness they give, after using it for 3 posts without resting it for 2 she will lose any sense of fear, danger, embarrassment or awareness to her surrounding
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
1234boo75
Aeval_Silvertongue
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Affectation:
1) I'm not sure on exact numbers since kg and cm don't covert great, but from places I tried to check it said she was underweight. I leave that to you to double check though to see if she is or isn't and what you want to do with that info (she cant have great thighs like was said in chat though if she is under or barely healthy weight).
History:
1) Not mandatory, but wanted to mention we have a few bio's tied in with orphanage Zachariah (Hedo's character) came from if you wanted to see about her being from there. If not its all good, just wanted to mention.
Weapon:
1) These are two primary weapons blended together. Please pick one: The dagger/ slingshot transforming combo Or All the special bombs
I say this cause like another character with the special bomb types, they do count as primary weapon level since they are special and you have multiple types (so each special function bomb is a "form" of weapon; homing, timer, contact). So as it stands, you have about 5 forms with this weapon.
You can do the dagger/ slingshot (recurve bow strength and range) with regular bombs as ammo.
Or the special bombs with a regular slingshot and pair of daggers.
More will be asked in this section, but need to see which your are keeping.
2) In general, what are her explosives equal to in force/ effect? A TNT, hand grenade, etc.
3) What is the size of the regular, ping-pong sized, bombs explosive radius (you only have it for the bun bomb)?
Semblance:
1) So can she make her own bombs with this, that detonate with the same force? Or does it just fade away instead of detonating with how the semblance is worded currently?
2) This needs a cooldown/ balancing drawbacks towards it. Need to know an answer to the first point before I can suggest one, but you are free to give one you think works as well in mean time (like # uses before a # post cooldown).
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ PJ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Usien Nakamura █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Jen █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 168 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 56 kg
█HAIR ▬ long dark brown hair █CLOTHING ▬ She wears a jumper-like outfit composed of dark brown leather, a red hoody, red stockings, and white thigh-high boots embellished with gold linings and symbols. █ACCESSORIES ▬a red headband resembling bunny ears, a pair of goggles and her family emblem on a pouch █EYES ▬ golden █BUILD ▬ Hourglass █TATTOOS ▬ none █SCARS ▬ none █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ none
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Jannet is naturally has great legs, she is able to run much faster than others and jump higher. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Strategic mindset: Jannet is great at thinking about combat strategies and the next moves she needs to make, always thinking a few steps ahead if possible. █Other Talents ▬ Jannet has a great sense of direction, she doesn’t get lost very easily. On top of that Jannet’s body is quite flexable, letting her move more freely than others. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Bomb expert: from a very young age she was taught how to make, defuse and operate a huge verity of bombs and explosives... █Weakest Skill ▬ lack of physical strength. When it comes to combat and lifting stuff, Jannet is way weaker than other students. █Other Skills ▬ Jannet is good at fighting with daggers, can create great plushies and small dalls, and has great sense of aim
█LIKES █ ▬ Making bombs! Specifically bun bombs █ ▬ there aren’t people she loves but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ crisps! █ ▬ bun bombs of course █ ▬ bunnies! █DISLIKES █ ▬ same as before, there aren’t people she hates but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ meat when it's reheated, yuck! █ ▬ any weapon larger than a short sword. She just can’t wield them █ ▬ scorpions █ ▬ any Grimm with a somewhat humanoid appearance █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ on the surface she seems like a spunky and happy girl, always friendly and always willing to hang out, though she suffers from a horrible depression that is only being suppressed by her semblance. The longer she stays without using her semblance the worse her mental state becomes. █Vernacular ▬ that! █Positive Traits ▬ she can be very fun to be around and always tries her best to help anyone she can. █Negative Traits ▬ she is very unstable: when depressed she can seem almost self-harming and when too high on her semblance she can be too careless and do some very stupid decisions
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Jannet was born to a wealthy family in Vale that was famous for their bombs and explosive manufacture, every single person in the family were taught from a very young age the art of explosives and how to make them out of many materials, from dust to gunpowder and even chemical reactions, they knew it all. She was taught by her parents and later her older siblings until the age of 12 where everyone seemed to slowly get less and less energetic, the atmosphere in the house changed as no one had any will to continue creating or tinkering or even get out of bed for a while. And then it happened, a group of Grimm they have never seen before slowly crept in from the basement and attacked them, one by one her family fell victim to the Grimm in front of her eyes as she cried in horror until she suddenly created a weird glowing object that looked like a skull, she threw it to the side out of disbelief and the Grimm followed it instead of her. On top of that the horrible feeling she was feeling up until now felt a lot more bearable and calm, she used this opportunity to escape the household into the woods where she tried to get some help, but she could not find anyone nearby, the place was silent.
A week has passed since the incident and Jannet finally noticed a house in the distance, it was big for a normal house but it didn’t matter, she bolted as fast as she could towards it and knocked on the door but just as she did so her body finally gave up and she passed out right in front of the door. A few hours passed and she woke up, she was inside of the house and was told it’s an orphanage they could not find her parents around and decided it’s the best place for her to be, she started crying uncontrollably until she used her semblance again, and this time she would not stop using it daily. from that day on she lived in the orphanage, she stayed in her room for most of the day making bombs and practicing, she won’t let her family legacy die down not until she herself dies, even when the adults that ran the orphanage caught her making bombs and punished her for it, she kept making them in secret, hiding the bombs inside of cute plushies she created as a disguise until finally, she was old enough to leave.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Jannet uses bombs as her main weapon that she stores in a special pouch. the pouch usually contains: 5 bombs that explode from a strong enough collision, 2 areal bombs that will fly towards a pre-determined target, 3 time bombs that will explode in her next post after activating, 10 iron pellets (those are purely made out of iron and will not explode). all bombs have a 50- centimeter radius of explosion and are as strong as a hand grenade. █ ▬.Jannet also uses two other weapons, but they do not have another function other than that. █Melee Form ▬ a pair or 30 cm long Crusader daggers █Ranged Form ▬ a slingshot used for shooting out the bombs █Other Form(s) ▬ Bun Bomb! this special bomb will only expload after placing an object the exact size of a specific hole in the back of it, once the object either disappears or falls/is ripped out the bomb inside will expload in a radius of 3 meters from it. █Ammo Type ▬ Kaboom? █ ▬ all her bombs (except the obvious bun bomb strapped to her other hip) are stored in the same pouch on her, a strong blow towards the pouch will explode on her and will do a lot of damage.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ 8 dust syringes used to inject the bombs. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬the value of sadness █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Jannet can take away some of her negative emotions and materialize them with her aura. Letting her make small solid objects that act as a beacon of negative emotions for a limited time. the objects will have the same weight and impact as the real thing. Jannet can make a new object once every three posts. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Jannet can create an object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 10 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 1▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 15 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 2▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 20 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 25 meters, any further than that would attract just like a normal human. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ by taking her negative emotions away it also takes any sort of awareness they give, after using it for 3 posts without resting it for 2 she will lose any sense of fear, danger, embarrassment or awareness to her surrounding. in addition, While the object created will have the same impact and weight as the real thing, it is still just made of aura. So more complex items, like a bomb, would only look and feel like the physical bomb; it would not be able to explode. However, a knife will still weigh and cut like a real knife.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
1234boo75
Aeval_Silvertongue
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Weapon:
1) I would just move the slingshot and dagger into the Other weapons section, since the PW is her explosives. You can move each bomb type into being a type of form (with this its fine having "4" forms; contact, timer, aerial, and Bun bomb).
2) Add range to the slingshot (looked it up and got 9m as its effective range, but if you have something that says otherwise lemme know).
3) How do the aerial bombs fly/know where to go/who/what to target?
4) Because the bombs have a smaller radius of effect, you can have more with you if you like (refer to Deimos and his 15 bombs; this is me saying you can have more than 15 total).
5) Please just mention what size the bombs are (could just say like palm-sized, give an image, etc).
Semblance:
1) I would say she could use it once with a 3 post cooldown afterwards. Just because every other post makes it so grimm are very unlikely to keep chasing her/ keep up so it can be a pretty hard counter for retreats. Or attracting grimm to specific targets/ areas like a trap.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ PJ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Usien Nakamura █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Jen █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 168 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 56 kg
█HAIR ▬ long dark brown hair █CLOTHING ▬ She wears a jumper-like outfit composed of dark brown leather, a red hoody, red stockings, and white thigh-high boots embellished with gold linings and symbols. █ACCESSORIES ▬a red headband resembling bunny ears, a pair of goggles and her family emblem on a pouch █EYES ▬ golden █BUILD ▬ Hourglass █TATTOOS ▬ none █SCARS ▬ none █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ none
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Jannet is naturally has great legs, she is able to run much faster than others and jump higher. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Strategic mindset: Jannet is great at thinking about combat strategies and the next moves she needs to make, always thinking a few steps ahead if possible. █Other Talents ▬ Jannet has a great sense of direction, she doesn’t get lost very easily. On top of that Jannet’s body is quite flexable, letting her move more freely than others. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Bomb expert: from a very young age she was taught how to make, defuse and operate a huge verity of bombs and explosives... █Weakest Skill ▬ lack of physical strength. When it comes to combat and lifting stuff, Jannet is way weaker than other students. █Other Skills ▬ Jannet is good at fighting with daggers, can create great plushies and small dalls, and has great sense of aim
█LIKES █ ▬ Making bombs! Specifically bun bombs █ ▬ there aren’t people she loves but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ crisps! █ ▬ bun bombs of course █ ▬ bunnies! █DISLIKES █ ▬ same as before, there aren’t people she hates but she is fine with everyone █ ▬ meat when it's reheated, yuck! █ ▬ any weapon larger than a short sword. She just can’t wield them █ ▬ scorpions █ ▬ any Grimm with a somewhat humanoid appearance █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ on the surface she seems like a spunky and happy girl, always friendly and always willing to hang out, though she suffers from a horrible depression that is only being suppressed by her semblance. The longer she stays without using her semblance the worse her mental state becomes. █Vernacular ▬ that! █Positive Traits ▬ she can be very fun to be around and always tries her best to help anyone she can. █Negative Traits ▬ she is very unstable: when depressed she can seem almost self-harming and when too high on her semblance she can be too careless and do some very stupid decisions
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Jannet was born to a wealthy family in Vale that was famous for their bombs and explosive manufacture, every single person in the family were taught from a very young age the art of explosives and how to make them out of many materials, from dust to gunpowder and even chemical reactions, they knew it all. She was taught by her parents and later her older siblings until the age of 12 where everyone seemed to slowly get less and less energetic, the atmosphere in the house changed as no one had any will to continue creating or tinkering or even get out of bed for a while. And then it happened, a group of Grimm they have never seen before slowly crept in from the basement and attacked them, one by one her family fell victim to the Grimm in front of her eyes as she cried in horror until she suddenly created a weird glowing object that looked like a skull, she threw it to the side out of disbelief and the Grimm followed it instead of her. On top of that the horrible feeling she was feeling up until now felt a lot more bearable and calm, she used this opportunity to escape the household into the woods where she tried to get some help, but she could not find anyone nearby, the place was silent.
A week has passed since the incident and Jannet finally noticed a house in the distance, it was big for a normal house but it didn’t matter, she bolted as fast as she could towards it and knocked on the door but just as she did so her body finally gave up and she passed out right in front of the door. A few hours passed and she woke up, she was inside of the house and was told it’s an orphanage they could not find her parents around and decided it’s the best place for her to be, she started crying uncontrollably until she used her semblance again, and this time she would not stop using it daily. from that day on she lived in the orphanage, she stayed in her room for most of the day making bombs and practicing, she won’t let her family legacy die down not until she herself dies, even when the adults that ran the orphanage caught her making bombs and punished her for it, she kept making them in secret, hiding the bombs inside of cute plushies she created as a disguise until finally, she was old enough to leave.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Jannet uses bombs as her main weapon that she stores in a special pouch. all bombs (except bun bomb) have a 50- centimeter radius of explosion and are as strong as a hand grenade and are the size of a tennis ball. █ ▬.while she does not have a traditional weapon, she does have a good variety of them in her pouch: █First Type ▬ 7 bombs that explode from a strong enough collision █Second Type ▬ 7 Bouncy Bombs that are made with a rubber shell. they are as the name says, bouncy and will only expload after hitting something 3 times (wall, floor, human body etc.) █Third Type ▬ 3 Time bombs that will explode on Jannet's next post. █Fourth Type(s) ▬ Bun Bomb! this special bomb will only expload after placing an object the exact size of a specific hole in the back of it, once the object either disappears or falls/is ripped out the bomb inside will expload in a radius of 3 meters from it. █Ammo Type ▬ 10 iron pellets (those are purely made out of iron and will not explode). █ ▬ all her bombs (except the obvious bun bomb strapped to her other hip) are stored in the same pouch on her, a strong blow towards the pouch will explode on her and will do a lot of damage.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a slingshot used for shooting out the bombs (can effectively shoot up to 9 meters in front of her █ ▬ a pair or 30 cm long Crusader daggers █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ 8 dust syringes used to inject the bombs. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬the value of sadness █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Jannet can take away some of her negative emotions and materialize them with her aura. Letting her make small solid objects that act as a beacon of negative emotions for a limited time. the objects will have the same weight and impact as the real thing. Jannet can make a new object once every three posts. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Jannet can create an object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 10 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 1▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in one hand. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 15 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 2▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 20 meters, any further than that would attract them just like a normal human. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Jannet can create any object that she thinks of as long as it’s something that a normal teenager her age can carry in two hands. The object will last 1 post and fade away. The object will attract Grim to it in a radius of 25 meters, any further than that would attract just like a normal human. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ by taking her negative emotions away it also takes any sort of awareness they give, after using it for 3 posts without resting it for 2 she will lose any sense of fear, danger, embarrassment or awareness to her surrounding. in addition, While the object created will have the same impact and weight as the real thing, it is still just made of aura. So more complex items, like a bomb, would only look and feel like the physical bomb; it would not be able to explode. However, a knife will still weigh and cut like a real knife.
