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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2020 3:47 pm


User ImageName: Lawrence Dunn

Nickname: Nobody's that stupid

Gender/Pronoun: N/A

Age: 39

Birthday: July 24

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Peridot

Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Miso Ramen, Spinach, baked chicken. He prefers Miso Ramen aslonme but the rest? A delish dish!

Hated Food: Tripe, slimy food. No.

School/Occupation: DCU Physics professor, and active physics researcher when on summer breaks.

Hobbies:

Reading
Lawrence usually has some book on hand -- paper, kindle, audio, nione of it matters so long as he can read. Lawrence loves and devours books as a sould food of some kind, and enjoys sharing them with people he feels some attachment tgo. While preferring educational merdia to satiate his appetites, he's sometimes easy to entice with a bnawedy romance novel, finding the stories abnsolutely gharbage that he can delight in escaping into sometimes. Lawrence loves his tawdry, impossiblwe, unrealistic trash, even if her'll denyt it to high heaven./

Mythbusters/White Rabbit Project/Bill Nye
Lawrence is not a TV man, but like a man loves his bawdy romance novels so too does a man love a good show of science and entertainment. He doesn't care who's hosting Mythbusters, he wants tyo see the experiments! White Rabbit was amazing, but now her's disappointed there's no more -- the expnts. Bill Nyew? Every man woman and child needs the science guy. Lawrence gets giddy over these shows specifically and sometimes uses weekend time to craft and recreate the less destructive experioments, evben finding ways to include his own flair for work from these shows./ Besides, who doesn't want a 21 cheese cannon salute?
erimt a 21 cheese gun salute?

Spaaaace!
Lawrence is a failed rocket scientist because he doesn't entirely understand quantum physics, onbly normal physics, which has also meant the man feels unable to apply to NASA for work. He's bitter and will get vindictive about this failing. But it hasn't ruined his love of space. He owns a telescope anmd uses it to admire stars and planets and unopfficially hunt for Planet Nione. Lawrence loves every fact, figurew, and datapoint. He's That Guy who couldn't chase the passion, but found a way to keep it close, especially now he's getting to bonnd to his daughter and his wife. Space is hids passion his pleasure, and he'll share all he can of it, even his wall of space books.

Arts/Crafts
Like hius daughter, Lawrence is trying to master craftas. However, his is a recent dive into the hobby because it brings hjis daughter joy. Nevermind how useful it is for class, Lawrence likes doing crafts with his now-adult daughter, making the things she asks to do with him. Some things dot his desk, and while not many, knowing hjis own daughter, an accident or noit, loves him enough to give him her hard work or their combined work makes this special to him, and helpos him think in new ways abouyt physics. She's taught him something precious, and he will always treasure that.

Virtues:

Man of his word
When Lawrence makes a promise, Lawrence makes a peomisae and keeps it, even if it chafes him. He always does his best to fulfill his promises when given, from feeding a coworker's fat gopldfish to babysitting a colleague's child. Lawrence is open abot how much his promises are worth, and people know if he gives his word, he'll honor it, which people arte often more grateful for than he thinks -- becvause it is a rare trait in some lives, and has even helped his career as an educator. People know they can come to him, ask a poromise for confidentiality, or aid, and he'll follow through, often resulting in stiudents or staff surprising

Loving
If one gets to know Lawrence, he is a loving sort, even if he covers it up. He simply hates to let others suffer his ire unless they can handle it and reserves his tenderness for those he's close to, dominantly, his wife and daughter. He'll never admit being a giewnt lovebug, of course, but his former students talk of him like a stern father to those who need it, and he often downpolsays it, despite being pleased deep down anyone sees him as a father figure.

Altruistic
Lawrence is not a selfish man. If someone needs help, Lawrence will help. If Lawrence finds some useful dayta at work over the summer, he takes no credit. Lawrence prefers working tio the betterment of all instyead of the one, and will aggressively defend this position. Good acts should benefit all, not the one, and Lawrence refuses tyo assllow people to suffer if he can do something for them. Please -- it's all any devent human would do, no repayment needed.

Flaws:

Difficult
Lawrence's wife would call him an a*****e. Cherish's mother would call him an asshjole. Many people don't know he's a decent man because Lawrence has exacting standards for the people he fills leisure time witrh and he will often argue, or come off as hostile and argumenrtarive, as a defensive me chjanism. He's a pill and a half to get along with at first. Maybe it isn't wrong as a description. Who knows. He'll never tell.

Wrathful
'Shame' is not part of Lawrence's lexicon. His misadventures in high school resulted iin kids? Well his daughter loves him, and she's hap[py. This fills him with pride. He has a happy, successful wife. He's proud of her and her career. He's a physicist working as a teacher at DCU every semester but summer. He worked hard to be something productive. Even though he resents his failings, he buries them with his pride in his accomplisdhments. And boy, will he ytell you about them. His wallet is full of photos of his wife and child, he proudly brags about his favorite students, and he's just a vain b*****d about everythiong. Shame -- he has so little it's not worth writing home about. He probably should look the word 'humility' up, really.

Proud
If you have made Lawrence wroth, then you know ytou. Are. Bonewd.. Lawrence's fury is rival to that of a catergory 4 hurricane -- loud, destructive, and frightening. While he will never harm someone, he will cutr to the bone explaining what you did wrong, how you ******** up, and how he expects you to fix it. Lawrence rarely yerlls, too, instead using body language and height to intimidate and accent points, and one can tell from tone how angry he is. Lawrence is terrifying angry, and nobody likes being around when Hurricane Lawtrence arrives. Noone.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: Ice blue, western european descent, specifically the blend found in Scottish-English descent. He also has lashes that match his pale blonde hair.

Hair: Lawrence has pale, nigh-platinuim blonde hair trhat rests on his shoulders and down to themiddle of his shoulderblades. He often wears a braid on the left side of his hjead behind his left ear, and sometimes behuind both, something he finds makes his daughter smile. He's also very known to leave a flower in his hair or a fewather from his wife or child, and will act completely serious despite it. If they want to play with his hair, and he whole-heeartedly welcomes it..

Face: Lawrence has a long heart shaped face with a slight hook nose and full lips for a medium sized mouth.

Skin Tone: PALE, unless he's spent time iun the suyn.// He's Scottish-British descent, and somehow the man only tans, never burns.

Body Type: Lawrence is basically a noodle and the fact he can probavbly punch a man out is never expected.

Clothes: Lawrence basically tries to dress professionally. Khaki bottoms and sweaters and polos in bnblacks, greys, purples, magentas, reds, and dark browns combined with brown loafers please. When he reads, he needs reading glasses, but otherwise his vision is actually fine.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2020 3:55 pm


Knight Title: La Brea, Page of Saturn
Link: https://tinyurl.com/lftdzgxs

Challenge: May death preserve you
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Uniform:[/bAs long as there's no symbol spam, I just like the idea of some horror blend of the following inspirational images of ELDERICH TERROR.

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Weapon & Magic


Page Weapon: A fragrant black rose! How perculiar!

Squire: A crystallinne black rose. It's still fragranty, somehowq.

When La Brea triggers his magic, everyuopne in a 6 foot byy six foot radius is struck by a strong, pungent scent of roses. While under this affect, those in this circle slow to a crawl due an unnatural calm, as if their mind is bound psychologically. Those affected become sluggish and slow, but may still move, whereas La Brea can easily move at normal speed, allowing him to walk away and carry another if needed to leave. This effect can be channeled up to 30 seconds, after which the scent dissipates and the calm lifts.

Knight Weapon: A gilded crystalline and fragrant black rose. It's a beautiful peice of art!

When La Brea triggers his magic, everyuopne in a 6 foot byy six foot radius is struck by a strong, pungent scent of roses. While under this affect, those in this circle slow to a crawl due an unnatural calm, as if their mind is bound psychologically. Those affected become sluggish and slow, but may still move, whereas La Brtea can easily move at normal speed, allowing him to walk away and carry another if needed to leave. This effect can be channeled up to 40 seconds, after which the scent dissipates and the calm lifts.

Eos Galvus

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:36 pm


NovaCracker


Heya Nova! Let's take a look at La Brea here.

Civilian section looks great! No issues there. Good work!

However, La Brea's Knight magic does need some work. The foremost concern is that Knight magic is only active while the Knight is channeling it and using their time pool. The second the Knight stops channeling, the magic stops. The way the magic is written currently, it resembles a one-use senshi magic more than a Knight magic that works with a time pool. While some residual effects from a mental-focused attack are acceptable, the magic's deactivation would halt the calming effect.

Furthermore, the magic fits maybe too loosely under Saturn's planet power themes. One suggestion would be to utilize the theme of "binding" and perhaps have vines with rose thorns rise from the ground to bind targets (probably just around the ankles to avoid immobility rule clauses), with some pain from the thorns if the targets choose to struggle. The calming scent can still occur, but this suggestion would bring your magic more in line with power themes.

If it helps, think of it this way: senshi magic can have a specific activated effect that lasts for some amount of time, but it's more contained. Knight magic is more like a consistent effect that remains over the course of its channeling time pool.

Essentially, the biggest hurdle here is revisions to the magic. Please quote me with questions or if you've patched things up and I'll come back around. Thank you!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2020 7:55 pm


Sami-Fire


Rolled as rewrite through. And also I feel I need toi explain why I pull the magic as a psychological hit. It's a psychological bind. The people affected are gummed uop in an emotion. Since I've had it explained magic cannot prevent movement I'm erring on a bind of a different sort.

It also, actually, rolls more like something like The Tell-tale Heart, wherein a man was all wound up and fixated on the perception of hearing something not really there, and other psychological gothic horror. I get told 'goth' I'm gon' go with gothic atmoispheric and mentyal shewwwnannigans. Just, instead oppf a violent form of bind, it's a lot more merciful -- I'm super uncomfortable with violent knight magic effects since knights are defensivbe so I just play it safe in my comfort levels. :U

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2020 6:54 pm


NovaCracker


I'm nodding in agreement here; I understand psychological/emotional binds and have no problem with them. Your perspective is perfectly acceptable and workable, but I think it's mostly a matter of being a little more explicit in mentioning the theme. ...It seems to me that you've done that already, actually. The only issue I have left is that the time pools are on the tiny side; I think you could go with 35 for Squire time pool and 55 for Knight time pool. Knights with similar "slowing" effects have been approved with those time pools before.

Patch those up, quote me, and then I should be able to drop a stamp on my return!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2020 7:22 pm


Sami-Fire


I see where you're coming from -- I'm merely rolling with a slightly shorter Knight/Squire (30/40) since it's a form of bind and I'm a paranoid cretin who doesn't want to overstun a character or group and do harm to an RP situation. (Also terror of ever going OP). I hope that works!

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2020 5:33 pm


NovaCracker


That's fair! Just know that you have the option of more time if you ever find you need it in the future. Here's your stamp, and a GM will be through eventually!

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 11:10 am


NovaCracker


All clear!

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