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[Q] Ryan Mahoney // Sailor Monoceros, Senshi of Porcupines

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genovianprince

PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2020 10:46 pm


Name: Ryan Mahoney

Nickname: Ry, Rye Bread, Loaf

Gender/Pronoun: Cis male, he/him

Age: 19

Birthday: May 22

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Emerald

Blood Type: O Negative

Occupation: Streamer

Hobbies: Cooking/baking & video games (when he's not playing for streaming purposes). Cooking is one of his favorite past times, but baking tends to come during times of stress, whether his own or for others. Ryan loves to make dishes that are somewhat of an all day endeavor, even if it just means it sits in the crockpot for several hours. He then fills the time with farming and RPG type games, like Stardew Valley or Assassin's Creed. Ryan particularly likes several different types of stew to make for himself. As for gaming, he prefers to leave more story-heavy games or plain wild games, such as Goat Simulator, for streaming.

Virtues:

Kind. Ryan goes out of his way to be kind to people. Giving extra cash to beggars on the street, complimenting people if they seem sad, always willing to give a listening ear, especially to elderly people. Helping people is something he just does without thinking, no matter the form of it. He also donates blood as frequently as he's healthily allowed to, due to his blood type.

Loyal. Once Ryan considers you a friend, you're his friend for life. He will go to the ends of the Earth and beyond for his friends and family and always stick up/vouch for them.

Flaws:

Doormat. Ryan tends to let people walk over him and runs himself ragged, trying too hard to be a people-pleaser to the extreme detriment of his own health. He tends to think of himself last, if at all, and if asked directly, would consider himself fairly expendable as long as he's helping give others a happier life. He refuses to recognize when he's being taken advantage of in this way, too blinded by his eagerness to help.

Overprotective. Ryan has a tendency to overstep with people he considers friends in a bid to protect them from any kind of harm. He's gotten himself hurt numerous times over it by starting fights where there didn't need to be one. He's utterly careless towards himself, thinking only of saving his friends from such a fate. This also tends to express itself in a "mother hen" attitude.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Icy blue, upturned

Hair: Wavy, soft red hair, mid-back length, often in the "man bun" atop his head.

Face: Round face, a smattering of freckles over the bridge of his nose and high on his cheekbones, small button nose, often wears small amounts of makeup in the daily

Skin Tone: #ffe0bd

Body Type: 5 feet and 2 inches tall, has a "musclechub" body. Toned, but still chubby and round, weighing about 200 pounds.

Clothes: Ryan is very GNC. He often wears swishy, knee-length skirts with a graphic tee of some kind, and his favorite black leather bomber jacket.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2020 12:41 am


Senshi: Sailor Monoceros, Senshi of Porcupines

Challenge: Squeakity squeak squeak squeaker squeakin'!

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: #663300
Secondary Color: #006699

Fuku:
Collar -- CC
Bow -- Ascot
Bodice -- Something like comic book superhero sorts of outfits! Like Captain America or Green Lantern
Sleeves -- long sleeves
Brooch -- Round
Bottoms -- Mid-thigh leather skirt
Tiara -- CC
Choker -- CC
Shoes -- No heels over 2 inches but otherwise CC
Gloves -- Fingerless leather gloves
Accessories -- CC

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Quill Flash

A burst of porcupine quills flies from Sailor Monoceros's hand, which can cause shallow scratches and/or minor puncture wounds. Any attempt to remove the quills before they vanish will cause sharp, pinpointed pain in the area; however, they don't sink in much deeper than skin-level. A user can choose to have this attack cause permanent damage or the injury will fade when the magic expires. This attack will last 20 seconds and can be used three times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Quill Burst

Sailor Monoceros leaps up to the bad guy, getting close, before letting loose a burst of quills from his entire body. (Allies beware!) The Burst is less aim-controlled than the Flash, but more intense. These quills will likely puncture more deeply from being close up and attempts to remove the quills before disappearance will cause a sharp, hot pain where the quill is pinned, and a more dull ache in the surrounding area, making the muscles more sore. A user can choose to have this attack cause permanent damage or the injury will fade when the magic expires. This attack will last about 30 seconds and can be used twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Quill Arrows

A bow manifests out of nowhere, giving Sailor Monoceros much more power behind his quill shots as well as aim. He can fire up to three at once with similar accuracy as just one. The quills themselves will penetrate deep into the muscle tissue, and attempting to remove these will cause tears in the muscle tissues, sending shooting pain over several inches of muscle. A user can choose to have this attack cause permanent damage or the injury will fade when the magic expires. He can nock arrows almost as fast as the first ones leave the bow, at the cost of aim. This attack will last about 40 seconds and can be used once per battle.

genovianprince


Epine de Rose

PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 10:50 am


genovianprince


Hello, hello!

So, most of your profile looks ok to me but there are a few tweaks and clarifications I need to ask for if you don't mind. n_n
  • Senshi Magic
    Order and DMC Senshi Magic generally can't cause lasting damage to an opponent unless the player you're fighting chooses to let it. All magical damage needs to fade after the attack expires by default, that means that any muscle tearing or puncture wounds should automatically disappear. To keep your attacks the same (overall they're fine) you can stipulate in the description something to the effect of "A user can choose to have this attack cause permanent damage or the injury will fade when the magic expires".

    In regards to power-levels the attacks themselves are fine as I mentioned, you just need to adapt this a tiny bit to make sure it stays within guidelines.

  • Hobbies
    Can you expand a little on each one? We generally like 1-2 sentences for each hobby to give a little more scope or context around them e.g. types of favoured games and favoured recipes (if any) would be suggested directions, but you can develop these in whatever way you would like!


Overall with those tweaks done he's at a good point design wise. The only thing I would caution is that you may want to gather references for some elements of his appearance just to help the artist to convey what you want such as an example of super hero bodices. They'll make sure the character fits art guidelines, they just need to understand what you're looking for!

Once you've made changes you can give me another call and I'll poke about again for you. =D
PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 6:02 pm


Epine de Rose
genovianprince


Hello, hello!


I believe I have made satisfactory edits! Tysm for all the advice biggrin

genovianprince


Epine de Rose

PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:26 pm


genovianprince

Overall, I think he looks like he ticks all the boxes he needs to so I'll drop his trial stamp for you! A GM will be along to double-check and make sure I haven't missed anything for you. n_n
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 21, 2020 11:53 pm


genovianprince


Hey, genovianprince!

This profile looks pretty solid! Because you are a new player, the civilian side of your profile is going to be playable immediately after I drop a stamp! You will be able to set up a journal and start roleplaying right away! You will still need to secure a growth slot to have him power up and earn RP requirements! In the meantime, you can play the civilian without going on a character cooldown.

While the powered side does need one small addition, I am dropping a stamp for the civilian portion so you can begin playing him as of now!

I can drop a stamp for the powered side as well if you can add number of uses to the powered magic! Typically this is three uses for first stage magic, two uses for second stage magic, and a single use for third stage magic. I think these would all work for your characters so if you want to plug that in I will be able to drop a stamp right away! If you have something else in mind, please let me know and we can go over it! Give me a quote and I'll get back to you as soon as possible!


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genovianprince

PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2020 12:02 am


Kyuseisha no Hikari
genovianprince



okay!! I added the power use terms like you said! tysm!!!
PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2020 7:25 am


genovianprince


Awesome, thank you! Have fun playing the civ and good luck getting a powered slot! heart

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