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Name: Anniliese Mathieu

Nickname: none

Age: 18

Birthday: January 4

Sign: Capricorn

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: AB

Fav. Food: Mac and Cheese. (Not the box ones, the real deal. Cooked from scratch)

Hated Food: Liver and goat cheese (Yuck)

School: Crystal Academy

Hobbies:

Roller Coaster Enthusiast - If you are afraid of heights then you probably shouldn't hang with Anniliese. She loves rollercoasters. She loves the way the wind blows into her face, the way she feels when the ride goes up the first incline, the anticipation of the drop. She goes out of her way to ride them. She would plan trips just to ride them. But not just coasters, any fast, scary ride. Any ride that goes way up and up and up till she thinks she can touch the sky will do it for her.

⏺Going on the Ferris wheel with her is a definite No No. She loves to shake and move around the ride.

⏺She always buys season passes or have them handy so can by-pass the long lines.

Ship in a bottle - Have you ever seen glass bottles with an detailed constricted ship inside them. Ever wonder how they got in them. Well they are called Impossible bottles and not just ships can be used to put inside them. As for how they got inside that's a secret that Anniliesse isn't going to tell you. Anniliesse loves the complexity and the wonder of it. She spends every Friday after school at the local craft/hobby store to buy the materials that she needs. She also eod buy Premsde ones just to add to her collection.

⏺ Her most favorite one that she had done is an replica of The Black Pearl.




Virtues:

🔮Patience - The only way to get something that you want is to wait for it. Anniliesse belives in waiting. Belives that good things come to those who wait. Whether it's waiting in extremely long lines to ride a coaster. Or taking your time to get that ship in the bottle. Having a friend who is patient can be either good or bad. Good if you are hunting or going on patrols with her her patience will will help on getting the bad guys. Bad cause patient people wait a long time till they get what they want.

🔮Fearless - I mean have you seen the types of rides that Anniliesse goes on? She doesn't even thinks twice about them. Nothing scares her. She is willing to reach certain goals and she doesn't consider that failure could stop her.
Some people might admire her for her fearlessness. And some people would think she is craxy.


Flaws:

🔮Perfectionist - Anniliese is always seeken a perfect standard in her work. Any projects that she is doing has to be just right. 100% right. If it's not she will destroy it and start all over again. She refuses to accept any standard short of perfection. For her there is no room for mistakes. She will let you know if she sees any mistakes in anything that you have done. She will take over any project that you have done or started to do and take over and finish it to her liking. She will do make sure that's it's done the way she wants it to be done.

🔮Control Freak - Anniliese has to have things her way. She will try to control every aspect of anything even your own life, if you let her. She believes that if a person could change one or two things about themselves she would try to "help them." And she will point it out and out till she feels she has gotten her way. She will offer "constructive criticism" as a veiled attempt to advance her own agenda. Everything has to be in a certain order.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: blue

Hair: long two toned hair

Face: heart shape?

Clothes: she liked cute dresses or pantsuits

Thank you so much for your patience as I reviewed your profile!

To begin with, from Name to School looks fine, though please add in a (none) for nick name if she doesn’t have any, just so that the form is completed.

For her hobbies, we need to keep in mind that they are things she’d do with other people. Hobbies are a way to have people interact with other folks, and a way to build a connection with other characters within the shop. Going out to amusement parks, or piers where there’s rides around Destiny City is a great way to meet people, however Ship in a Bottle reads as an individual activity, rather than something that would allow her to reach out and meet other people. Does she go shopping for kits? Or perhaps does she try to sell the bottles she makes? Or does she simply go out on the town to shop for ones already premade and collects them. Those are just some questions that could be answered and added to her hobby to make sure that it’s something that will work for the shop.

With her Virtues and flaws, be sure to add How that affects people around her, both in a positive and negative perspective. Having 2 and 2 makes it nice and balanced, though, and with a little bit more fleshing out, these will make her a very well-rounded character.
I do know that this is a premade, but you will need to return the Physical Description half of the form so we can have a record of her eyes, hair color, and face, especially since one eye is closed, we’d like to confirm there is no heterochromia, as it is not permitted.

Moving on, I would like to say her powers do not quite work in relation to Icebergs. They read as attacks much like the Senshis of Cold, Frostbite, and Glaciers, who are already in play, and while icebergs are cold, you will want to make it a bit more distinguishable from another sphere.

A suggestion for the powers could be focusing on how large and distracting the iceberg can be, or unsuspecting. With nearly 90% of the iceberg being hidden under the water, as per the wiki, then an idea would be setting up traps with magical ice (think land mines) and when triggered by proximity, they can spring up from the ground to knock people back.

If you’d still like to proceed with the idea of cold effecting people, you could instead use the idea of how icebergs form or break apart, with the biting cold + maybe the “Bergie Seltzer”, an effect icebergs have where the air trapped inside of the iceberg fizzes loudly as it melts. Feel free to reach out to me to discuss potential changes, and quote me again once you are ready for another look!

Everything looks good, there is just one last thing I need to ask before I can drop the stamp.

For her eternal attack, is it 1 time per battle or 3 times per battle?

Eternal attacks by standard are 35-45 seconds long, with one use, but as this is an upgrade to the 2nd attack, I think 30 seconds with 2 use would work fine.

Please let me know.

Thank you.

This looks good to me, have fun!