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Name: Darius Lupeiescu

Nickname: Don't

Age: 20

Birthday: September 22

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Saphire

Blood Type: AB-

Fav. Food: A really good spaghetti

Hated Food: Mushrooms - the flavor of them is fine but biting one is a HELL no.

School: Graduate

Hobbies:

e.g.

Tea - With what he things, feels like most people in the world drinking coffee, he prefers to spend his time on tea. Creating his own blends, naming them, sometimes selling them in small batches through online shops along with the products of his other hobby. Sometimes even seeking to recreate the scents of a particularly well mixed batch of tea.

Essential Oils - He enjoys mixing various scents and oils together to make colognes and perfumes for people. He likes the idea of providing things that don't smell live one or another various knock off of a highly paid advertising campaign. While he's not exactly always in the best financial space, he does his best to use the best quality ingredients that he can.




Virtues:

No Half Measures: (Driven): He's not one to leave a project half done. If he can't find a way to get things done the way they may have been originally intended, he'll find a way to get it done regardless, be that asking for help (though he'd prefer not to) or trying to find something to allow him to work around any obstacles he'll get it done.

Take Care: (Methodical): Darius takes care of what he has, having grown up in a harder situation, and finding himself making his way into better circumstances, he hasn't lost the need to take care of what is with him. His car is old but it's well tuned, his oils and perfumes are always safely stored to give them the best shelf life. Even the people whom find themselves in his 'circle of friends might find themselves being taken care of in such a way, even if it's something small like reminding them to take care of themselves.


Flaws:

Afterthought: ( Self Neglect) : the people and even the things in his life that Darius takes care of, or takes pride in tend to come before his own needs. He can become so caught up in a task, or a project that he forgets to take care of himself. Anything from remembering to eat regularly, to protecting himself from the hot sun when working on his car.

Stubborn: Darius hates asking for help. He's far more inclined to be the one offering assistance. Where as when it comes to him, finding that he's in over his head you'll be hard pressed to get him to admit it. It's not that he's over confident. He's just stubborn, he even know's he's got a tendency to be pig headed though it does tend to lead to a stubborn silence when confronted about it.



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Chocolate Brown, slightly heavy lidded.

Hair: Brown

Face: Sharp, well defined features.

Clothes:

Home: Simple, comfortable, a plethora of dark colors and a few bright accents, perhaps a bit hipster.

Work: Much the same as home, but perhaps a bit more dressed up, throwing on a coat or an over shirt just to 'dress up' a little.

Hey Ende! Congratulations on obtaining your new corrupt!! <3

Let's go over Mr. Lupeiescu and get him and his Chaotic alter ego stamped up. Please excuse my wordiness, I got a little chatty, oops.

First up, his last name checks out as available but he'll need to be 20 or under since senshi can't be 21 or older before they awaken. You can make him 20 and have him turn 21 shortly after he awakens, if that helps!

For his civilian side, did you have a gemstone picked out? For Virgos, a few examples are peridot, citrine, jade and jasper. For September birthstones there's also the options of moonstone, sapphire and zircon. There are even more out there, I just wanted to toss those out as suggestions. (Maybe sapphire, to go with the main color of his fuku?).


I too hate mushrooms, so he and I have that in common. Does he have a favorite food, out of curiosity? (Maybe even presumably tea, since it's a hobby?).

Speaking of, his hobbies, virtues and flaws are descriptive and balanced so we're good to go there <3


As far as his powered side goes, I need a link referencing Deucalion's celestial existence just for proof so we can make sure it doesn't overlap or have a secondary name that might conflict with an existing object/senshi.

I have an idea of what you're trying to achieve with Deucalion's attacks but as they stand right now, they're actually very close to Sailor Guinevere's attacks as the senshi of Obsession. It's hard to differentiate between the "craving" and "obsession" because both look to intend to distract the opposition into focusing over something they can't have.

Since Deucalion is going to be a corrupt senshi, may I suggest that you tweak the magic just a bit to put more of the physical ailments associated with famine/starvation in with the "cravings"? Since he's influenced with Chaos, it's okay to have pain/attacks involved if you'd like to go that route.

Maybe the craving created can be focused specifically around emotion, as opposed to a person or object? Starving for attention, affection, fulfillment - leaving it to player's choice, it could open the door to a lot of varying results (Jane Doe suddenly REALLY wants to be loved, maybe they've been feeling neglected so now they're desperate for attention or John Smith has been hankering for those McDonald's fries and now he's feeling physically starving because of it). As the attack progresses through the 25 seconds, the player could potentially feel starved to such a point that their stomach and body reacts accordingly to that of a literal starving person. Cramps, body aches, dizziness or cold sweats are just a few thoughts when I think about the times I've been super hungry or experiencing low blood sugar.

So now they're having to deal with an intense craving/starvation but also contending with physical ailments; hard to focus in a battle when your mind and body are rebelling against you, right?

The radius for your super attack is reasonable; again, I would focus using physical ailments or emotional weaknesses that would result in feelings of "starvation" so it doesn't toe the line with obsession/being obsessed over something/someone. Adding the touch of getting a whiff of it if they're hankering for something that can be tangible/heard is a nice touch!

As far as the eternal attack goes, if you're talking about an opposition viewing a teammate or another player as a physical food that they're suddenly craving, I think that's both amusing and unique! Nothing like seeing a hallucination to throw things out of whack!

While the times with your attacks are good, I do need you to slap a usage amount for each attack. Generally speaking, basic attacks are usually 3 per fight, super attacks get 2 and eternal attacks will be performed 1 time per fight.



If you have any questions at all or if you'd like to bounce some ideas around, please don't hesitate to DM or PM me. Otherwise, just quote me when you're ready for me to swing back around.


Thank you so much! <333

Sorry for the delay there, sweet friend!

I like what you've done with the first two attacks as far as the attack itself works but I think the distance is a little too generous for both of them, especially considering that you don't have a person cap on it. I'd scale Basic down to about 5-7 feet and Super to about 10 feet. A lot of Eternal senshi attacks are around 12-15 feet, so we don't want to overpower him!

As far as his Eternal attack goes, I like the hallucination spin! With it being powerful enough to change people's vision for 45 seconds, I think only one use a battle is more appropriate. As well, you'll need to put a distance on this attack or however many people it can affect (I'd suggest 15ft or up to 6 people, going by how a lot of others have listed their Eternal attacks).

Other than that, he's looking quite spiffy! Ping me if you have any questions or when you're ready for me to sweep back in, ghoul style~ emotion_ghost

Thank you, madame! <3




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