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An evil known as The Corruption infects the land. Will the shinobi world overcome the corruption, or be consumed? 

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 2:29 am


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Clan Name: Ariana "Most Holy" Clan
Village of Origin: No origin

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Kekkei Genkai: This clan is composed mostly of introverted humanoid shaped refugee celestial beings with telekinetic abilities who landed on earth years ago. Their powers are derived from a seal that bestows quantum powers. In modern times the clan's telekinesis has either been watered down or altered due to evolution and mating with humans. The Most Holy allowed those who could defeat their leaders become their leaders as a way to propel their bloodline with strong lineage. This was a way to remove cultural restrictions and boundaries as well as giving them the ability to use more ethical ways of stem cell research and genetic manipulation seemingly by will...

The common Most Holy excels in the art of utilizing gravitational pull through high compression kinesthetic movements. As a result of an Introverts fluidity with kinesthetics, they also exhibit a high proficiency in spatial awareness
which naturally makes them observational. In addition over time due to evolution their equilibrium auto-corrects when utilizing rapid orbiting movements and keeps track of objects in range of the user's gravitational pull techniques.

Due to the high precision control needed to utilize this bloodline, Most Holy are known to have a legacy behind their concentration like that of the Hyuga prior to the Third War.
They are often known to have a powerful attention span which is reflected in their sprite ethereal eyes. Entities tend to feel deeply about many topics with clarity and can empathize with the feelings of other living creatures naturally even without first hand experience. Most Holy must have an element spot reserved for "Sensory" as this is the foundation of their bloodline. As empathetic as Most Holy tend to be, when they are devastated in any aspect of their life, they can become extremely cold. They don't become ignorant, but neglectful due to turmoil that either becomes an extremely long problem or an extremely short problem; both devastating. Members tend to have a passive demeanor and usually find power in passive-aggressive notions/motions even if they are assertive they may indulge jokingly as if being passive aggressive was a lingo.

The Most Holy language is a universal language that resembles Patois making those of this clan quite fluent in patois and picking up other hidden tongues. These people are typically slaves in any society and only know survival tactics. They typically do not develop well without some kind of guidance in their social and financial lives. The head of the family being the only exception due to their financial status granting them counselors and wider education. The leaders do not tolerate such behavior, though they once did. All leaders must come from the bottom and all leaders are expected to fall. However, when a true leader falls it is common that an era of fallen leaders take place until one strong enough holds the title dearly. Taking the title is as simple as killing the leader. The leader does not have to fight you one on one, that is merely a luxury if THE MOST HOLY allows such a fight. Though, if one requests respectfully, then the chances of receiving such a fight would be much more likely and save the attacker a peace of mind for the remainder of their short life. One may even be spared if they lose, although their is a chance THE MOST HOLY may be frowned upon. The leader does not necessarily have to retain the bloodline, but defeating the leader is mandatory and con not be handed over. You can not relieve yourself of the title without being killed or accepting your death.


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Bloodline Techniques:
Most Holy: Blackhole
User ImageMost Holy: Blackhole::: [ E to SS Rank ] A Ninjutsu attack where a Most Holy creates a strong gravitational pull that compresses a substantial amount of mass to virtually 0 volume. This creates an extremely powerful gravitational pull when utilizing strikes and closed/semi-closed hand gestures. The hand gestures will cause objects to gravitate around the user as well as direct objects with the user's hand movements. This technique can be resisted by defensive and offensive techniques equivalent or greater in rank such as Raiton Armor, Eight Gates Released, & Seal of a Hundred. It also may be dodged or phased by techniques that deal with time-space such as kumoi, Night Guy, Flying Thunder God Technique, Earth Release: Ultra-Added Weight Rock Technique, Earth Release: Ultralight-Weight Rock Technique, & etc. How difficult it is to dodge or resist this technique also depends on ones placement in relation to the user at the time of this techniques usage. The pull is much stronger as you get closer to the center of the gravitational field. Techniques that redirect energy, change density, change mass. and change/convert energy are able stop the user if applied directly to the user. Techniques with the previously listed characteristics that can be applied to oneself can defend against this technique. Due to time and space factors introduced when performing a summoning, if someone summons something larger than the maximum capacity of any Most Holy: Blackhole variation that is in play, it will disrupt the Most Holy: Blackhole and any others that overlap it's territory. If the item exceeds the maximum capacity of any Most Holy: Blackhole variation that is in play by 1 Rank, then a reverse pull will occur spinning the user with the equivalent force of the Most Holy: Blackhole in use. However, a summoning that exists prior to any Most Holy: Blackhole variation goes into play will not cancel the Most Holy: Blackhole. Launching an attack that exceeds the size capacity of the Most Holy: Blackhole in use will disrupt the orbit and cause the user to either break their hold or spin rapidly as the Most Holy: Blackhole sends the user into a spiral until they release the technique. An attack launched prior to the activation of Most Holy: Blackhole will not disrupt the technique. Lightning based techniques of equivalent rank will phase through the effects of the Most Holy: Blackhole in use. Pure fire and wind techniques are easily outed by this technique.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.SS-Rank | 22 pts. | Handseals: Snake ➟ Dragon ➟ Ox ➟ Tiger, but only with the middle fingers raised. ➟ Clap Hands ➟ Boar The user gradually generates the gravitational force of a scaled down blackhole. A ring of high energy is then formulated with enough force to gradually take 2 threads/forums into the singularity of the ring of high energy. The singularity is multi-directional and once it closes up on the objects that are trapped become internalized. The stripped properties can be stored inside the user's body. After using this SS-Ranked ability; the user's muscles become severely weak from the stress that the space vacuum places on the user all at once. This will make it difficult to breathe, drink, and control bowel movements. The user will also develop a severe case of osteoporosis that is extremely debilitating. As a result their stats are reduced to 1/3 of their max capacity for a week as their body will be in a frail state preventing the use of S to SS-Ranked Bloodline techniques. If the user moves while using this ability, then the downtime to generate this technique starts over. This technique uplifts items that are 150 meters deep.

S-Rank | 15 pts. | Radius: 0' to 100' | Handseals: Snake ➟ Tiger ➟ Clap Hands ➟ Boar: The user gradually generates the gravitational force of a scaled down blackhole. A ring of high energy forms forcing any and all objects to be dragged into the user's orbit and then flung by the release of the gravitational force. Objects orbiting the user will be tossed according to their position at the time of this technique being released; making this technique multi-directional. When using the S-Ranked ability of Most Holy: Blackhole; the host can violently drag the support from underneath biju sized objects to violently drag, whip, or slam them. This ability disorientates biju sized targets to effectively down them for [ 5 seconds ] and destroy smaller objects. This technique uplifts items that are roughly 120 meters deep and auto-collects items dropped after a completed mission.

A-Rank | 11 pts. | Radius: 0 to 80': A ring of high energy is formulated forcing large boulder sized objects within range to be dragged into the user's orbit and then flung by the release of the gravitational force. Objects orbiting the user will be tossed according to their position at the time of this technique being released; making this technique multi-directional. When using the A-Ranked ability of Most Holy: Blackhole; the host can violently drag the support from underneath tree sized objects to violently drag, whip, or slam them. This ability disorientates tree sized targets to effectively down them for [ 1 second ] and smaller objects for [ 2 seconds ] if not killing them. Due to the inability to generate a consistent gravitational pull when utilizing this sudden suction against tree sized objects; the objects only have a limited range when orbiting the organism. As a result tree sized objects are only dragged, whipped, and/or flung and can not orbit the user completely. This technique uplifts items that are roughly 80 meters deep.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.B-Rank | 7 pts. | Radius: 0' to 60' : A ring of high energy forms forcing a group of objects around the size of a car to be dragged into the user's orbit and then flung by the release of the gravitational force. Objects orbiting the user will be tossed according to their position at the time of this technique being released; making this technique multi-directional. When using the B-Ranked ability of Most Holy: Blackhole; the host can violently drag the support from underneath boulder sized objects to violently drag, whip, or slam them. This ability disorientates boulder sized targets to effectively down them for [ 1 second ] and smaller objects for [ 1 second ] if not killing them. Due to the inability to generate a consistent gravitational pull when utilizing this sudden suction against boulder sized objects; the objects only have a limited range when orbiting the organism. As a result boulder sized objects are only dragged, whipped, and/or flung and can not orbit the user completely. This technique uplifts sheets of concrete/pavement & secured/tightly bolted items. Although this technique is very powerful it has no direct effect on RPC or NPC with the exception of direct contact.

C-Rank | 4 pts. | Radius: 0' to 30' : A ring of high energy forms forcing items around the user's size to be dragged into the user's orbit and then flung when the user releases the technique. Objects orbiting the user will be tossed according to their position at the time of this technique being released; making this technique multi-directional. When using the C-Ranked ability of Most Holy: Blackhole; the host can violently drag the support from underneath car sized objects to violently drag, whip, or slam them. This ability disorientates car sized objects to effectively down them for [ 1 second ] and smaller objects for [ 2 seconds ] if not killed. Due to the inability to generate a consistent gravitational pull when utilizing this sudden suction against car sized object's; the objects only have a limited range when orbiting the host. As a result objects that are car sized are only dragged, whipped, and/or flung and can not orbit the user completely. This technique uplifts embedded large stones, sheets of soil/grass, & moderately tight bolted items. Although this technique is powerful it has no direct effect on RPC or NPC with the exception of direct contact.

D-Rank | 2 pts. | Radius: 0' to 15': A ring of high energy forms forcing items smaller than the user's size to be dragged into the user's orbit and then flung when the user releases the technique. Objects orbiting the user will be tossed according to their position at the time of this technique being released; making this technique multi-directional. When using the D-Ranked ability of Most Holy: Blackhole; the host can violently drag the support from underneath objects around the host's size to violently drag, whip, or slam them. This ability disorientates objects around the host's size to effectively down them for [ 1 second ] and smaller objects for [ 2 seconds ] if not killed. Due to the inability to generate a consistent gravitational pull when utilizing this sudden suction against object's around the user's size; the objects only have a limited range when orbiting the host. As a result objects that are car sized are only dragged, whipped, and/or flung and can not orbit the user completely. This technique uplifts large stones, soil/grass, & loosely bolted items. Although this technique is powerful it has no direct effect on RPC or NPC with the exception of direct contact.

E-Rank | 1 pts. | Diameter: 1' : The user creates a ring of high energy that's used as a stationary precursor to occupy the location in which it is placed. This precursor is dormant and can be activated at a later time like exploding tag activation or Flying Thunder God Technique when used in combination with a higher ranking version of this technique. A precursor can only stay activated for 1 additional post when used along with the D-Rank variation of Most Holy: Blackhole, 2 additional posts when used along with the C-Rank variation of Most Holy: Blackhole, 3 additional posts when used along with the B-Rank to A-Rank variation of Most Holy: Blackhole, and 4 posts when used along with the S-Rank to SS-Rank variation of Most Holy: Blackhole. Inactive precursors expire after 30 seconds.


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Secret Techniques:

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Most Holy: White Hole Transformation::: [ A-Rank ]
A-Rank | 11 pts. : An Entitled Most Holy goes into a transformation that makes their Clan techniques run at full power at the cost of one lower rank and enhances their bloodline traits. This state also allows them to turn their Most Holy: Blackholes into Most Holy: White holes. Meaning that after using Most Holy: Blackhole, the user can send an RPC, NPC, or Object, into a Most Holy: Blackhole, and have it exit out any other active Most Holy: Blackhole with or without the object succumbing to the crushing force. However, when utilizing this technique the user can die from a heart failure by remaining in this form for longer than 24 hrs. This transformation is very similar to the eight gates in which it puts heavy stress on the user's body. After using this technique, the user will be left in a frail state where gravity strains their bodily functions. Swallowing, breathing, digesting, and other internal matters will be difficult to perform or control for twice as long as this technique has been active. [ Maximum of 2 days ].

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Most Holy: Forgiveness::: [ S-Rank ]
S-Rank | 15 pts. | Genjutsu: A touch that matches a frequency in the targets body to cause maximum pleasure... The target will instantly find themselves in mid-heat until they are completely satisfied... even if that means another round for those with mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. The weakness behind this technique is that the user can never harm the target again or else this technique will never work again. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. The user must provide this stimulation consistently enough so as not to ruin the relationship and lose the targets trust forever.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Most Holy: Virgin::: [ B-Rank ]
B-Rank | 7 pts. | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a mistake, but their heart is in the right place so those around them can feel it. Usually this technique is preceded with a sound of urgency such as a squeal, scream, cry, or yell. If someone is attacking the user, then this technique will enable another NPC or RPC to come to their aid right on time. The user can not attack when using this technique, but may resume battle once the opponent continues to attack. An RPC or NPC can not aid twice a battle and after protecting the user, they must move aside and will not have to defend the user any further. To be honest no one is forced to aid the user, but this technique allows someone to help if they are willing.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Most Holy: Chastity [ D to S-Rank ] | Shrinkage Radius: 0' - 5' | Suction Radius: 0' - 2' :
The user creates artificial mass around their limbs to increase the gravitational pull around the limb . As a result the user's strikes become significantly heavier and stronger. The user may also use this technique to make a target's limbs heavier upon direct contact. Those who enter within range of this technique tend to get displaced quick due to the sudden suction from the vacuum of space. There is also shrinkage of a few inches to a foot when objects enter the shrinkage radius of this technique, due to the compression of this technique.

S-Rank | 15 pts. : This variation of Most Holy: Chastity will cause 1' of vertical and horizontal shrinkage to anything that enters the shrinkage radius and the user's limb/trunk will increase in weight by 33,000,000 tons. This technique's suction will pull in anything lighter in weight than the limb if an object is within the indicated suction range. This technique has the ability to match Jonin Rock Lee at 150%.
A-Rank | 11 pts. : This variation of Most Holy: Chastity will cause 1' of vertical and horizontal shrinkage to anything that enters the shrinkage radius and the user's limb/trunk will increase in weight by 13,200,000 tons. This technique's suction will pull in anything lighter in weight than the limb if an object is within the indicated suction range. This technique has the ability to match Jonin Rock Lee at 60%.
B-Rank | 7 pts. : This variation of Most Holy: Chastity will cause 9" of vertical and horizontal shrinkage to anything that enters the shrinkage radius and the user's limb/trunk will increase in weight by 6,600,000 tons. This technique's suction will pull in anything lighter in weight than the limb if an object is within the indicated suction range. This technique has the ability to match Jonin Rock Lee at 30%.
C-Rank | 4 pts. : This variation of Most Holy: Chastity will cause 5" of vertical and horizontal shrinkage to anything that enters the shrinkage radius and the user's limb/trunk will increase in weight by 220,000 tons. This technique's suction will pull in anything lighter in weight than the limb if an object is within range of the suction. This technique has the ability to match Jonin Rock Lee at 1%.
D-Rank | 2 pts. : This variation of Most Holy: Chastity will cause 3" of vertical and horizontal shrinkage to anything that enters the shrinkage radius and the user's limb/trunk will increase in weight by 100 pounds. This technique's suction will pull in anything lighter in weight than the limb if an object is within the indicated suction range. This technique has the ability to match Jonin Rock Lee at a fraction of 1%.

Most Unholy: Super-Succession | Rank: B | 7 pts. | Taijutsu
The user gets into "The Zone" where they are calm, cool, and collected, yet amp'd up on adrenaline. This tends to fall into the predatory animals ability to instinctively coordinate as the Most Holy's extraordinary observational abilities become aligned with their affirmations. The user's nerves would be triggered by affirmations. It allows the user to command the body with statements as well as commands. The opponent does not have to experience the affirmation, this technique just has to be applied to the user. This technique allows the user to chain their taijutsu attacks seamlessly like a student who speaks out loud to stay focused, but they will carry out the chain of attacks with precision. This technique works very well when used in conjunction with Shadow Of The Dancing Leaf.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.User ImageMost Holy: Thief In The Knight [ E to C-Rank ]
The user can move their precursor by remote control via hand gestures.
C-Rank | 4 pts. : Exchanges the location of two precursors so that they may take the other's placement as long as one of the precursors are within 35' of the user.
D-Rank | 2 pts. : Moves an activated precursor as long as it is within 40' of the user.
E-Rank | 1 pt. : Moves a dormant precursor as long as it is within 45' of the user.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Most Unholy: Circumstances | A-Rank | 11 pts. | Genjutsu
When all else fails with other genjutsu and the user can tell they are going to lose their power over a victim, they return to an extremely passive and innocent display. They will give up all control prematurely and let the opponent take advantage and give out demands. As long as the user cooperates the opponent can not kill them. The user however, gives up the right to attack the opponent and may only escape. The user can not attack until they have escaped once after using this technique. The user is open to being killed once again if their escape attempt irritates the opponent enough. [ Which is determined by the opponent ] This technique can be used again if the opponent finds the user. However, this must be done immediately in response to seeing the opponent again. If not this technique will not work until the next time you meet the opponent and must be done immediately every time afterwards. This technique can be kai'd out of, but is very hard for one to notice as they are getting what they want or hurting the user. There really is not much to question especially if one ends up in this genjutsu by breaking out of another genjutsu.


User ImageMost Holy: Saint | B-Rank | 7 pts. | Genjutsu
The user gives a fearful "oops" demeanor after upsetting someone. A lot of the times this can change someones mind, but the user has no control over that. This technique will however dampen a blow by 1 rank. This technique can only be used once per opponent and should leave the attacker and the user of this technique on the same page. The user should stay in their place if they have not been put unconscious or killed and the attacker will show restraint after some relief from getting their aggression out. The attacker must stop their assault on the user unless the user does not show any signs of stopping or restraint. This technique can be kai'd, but often most people can't tell they have been manipulated into not beating someone into submission. Usually one doesn't think another is the direct cause for why they don't continue to annihilate their target, they just choose not to.

Most Unholy: Ow, that hurts! | A-Rank | 11 pts. | Taijutsu :
This technique uses vacuums instead of the chambers and pressure dynamics that typically manages the body. This resumes organ pressure and insulates internal pathways to maintain the body's functioning during times of poisoning and with large open wounds. As a result large slashes and stabs will drip initially and seal up while poison merely keeps the user from using the highest 3 Rankings of jutsu for their rank until the poison has been filtered completely by a medical ninja with 750 words. Dismembering any part of the user of this technique will require explosive force and/or extreme cutting force. The user should get these wounds dealt with, but they really do not have to.
Killing the user is simple in theory, but requires a lot of work at this point. Go for the head!!!!! Overwhelming the target with pain and large amounts of blood loss will still render them unconscious. Head trauma, decapitation, or any fatal damage to the head can still lead to death if the brain is left nonfunctional. Overflowing the body with poison such as trapping the user in a tank of poison will kill them after 30 minutes of drowning. If one is ceased by head trauma or decapitation, but the head is preserved/functioning, then the user merely only has to wait for medical help in a coma like state. It is best to take this person hostage. Obviously, this technique has to be used before getting struck/beat/killed in order for it to work or otherwise your character dies with a less controlled splatter rather than remaining sealed internally. You may not obtain this technique while occupied as a healer, you may not posses any regenerative techniques, nor posses any other immortal abilities such as Jashin specific techniques. Medical assistance consists of 750 words from an external source.


Most Holy: It can't be translated | E-Rank | 1 pt. | Genjutsu
This is the official language of THE MOST HOLY!!! It's called, "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH", but you have to make it sound glorious-like, as if angels were descending from the sky... Well that's how THE MOST HOLY refer to it. After using this technique the user's body language can be used to convey complete thoughts and sentences to those effected by this technique with what appears to be unmistakable implications. However, these implications are not clear at all to anyone else. It won't even look like communication to others, but others will wonder why you are acting a little different or weird. You don't really have to kai this, it doesn't do anything except make my body accessible and readable to you... Pft I'll just block you out myself, you ungrateful --
Tip: You want to not be blocked out of this technique, because that usually means there is a plot occurring that you won't know about.


Most Holy: Praising The Father | B-Rank | 7 pts. | Ninjutsu
The user can kiss, blow a kiss/O ring, suck, or merely put their lips to an object and use nuclear fission to allow the target to be phased and altered. The user can then alter the object with the composition of an item that has been absorbed. These items can even be released without phasing an object or merging the target with a previously absorbed item. This can be used to add traits to a ninja or useful characteristics to a scene or extract traits or characteristics. By smacking their lips together, the user can undo any alterations. Striking the user in the mouth allows the target to remove the last object released and/or undo the last object that was altered. This technique can be used on the user allowing them to phase objects and merge with them, but the user becomes vulnerable to all the weakness of the object they merge with. If an item that user merges with is destroyed, then the user will be forced out of the object in a manner similar to Haku being knocked out of his Ice mirrors.

User ImageUser Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Physical Characteristics: Ethereal chakra that emits from the eyes and mouth. A seasoned Most Holy's body [ C-Rank ] becomes extremely soft to the touch and has similarities to Soft Physique Modification in regards to the user's flexibility due to the effects of 0 gravity over a long period of time. All Entitled Members have extended canine and a tail unless there is a skip in genetics. This tail when grabbed or handled roughly puts tension on an Entitled Member's muscles. The higher up the tail one grabs an Entitled Members tail, the more damage they would be causing. If one grabs the end/tip of a members tail then the inner sides of the legs weakens and over exerts itself sporadically with stammers. Grabbing midway up the tail causes the body to initially tense up abruptly and forces a member to move at half speed. Usually the obliques can be seen contracting as well as the rest of the torso. Grabbing the upper most part of a members tail at the butt/base makes the member vulnerable and weak. It is extremely painful and typically the member is at the manipulator's whim. When the tail is grabbed this far up, the neck can be observed straining as if the Entitled Member is pulling a muscle and they are unable to perform S-Rank techniques or above. If this tail is removed, then it grows back in a week making the member 1 rank weaker. If a portion of the tail is cut, it will grow back within a day even if it's the majority of the tail. However having a portion removed results in the member receiving mid-tail grab effects until their tail grows back.

History: These people do not have true bonds with their supposed kind or most people due to the cruelty of their experiences. There are no two Entities that are truly alike especially since this bloodline merely makes one antisocial to some degree. Entities usually come into the realization of their abilities by creating distance and space as a means of being alone. Isolation is prioritized along with one on one interactions thus a Most Holy finds everything orbits around their world. Entities can identify each other instantly due to an air they carry and the puzzling disposition in demeanor that only occurs between two passive Entities. Often times, Entities will miss each others' gazes with a casual once over of their surroundings in attempt to naturally make friendly or neutral eye contact, although this is planned. An alternative indicator of Most Holy is usually one who disassociates and/or becomes smaller in less than flattering light. It is not uncommon to find mental illnesses and disorders among these Entities due to their overall sensitivity. These people are quite common in life, but go throughout life barely acknowledged and under appreciated although they pay very close attention to detail. Entities tend to prefer to only have to do things once the right way, but will inevitably improve upon a task making them highly useful yet underpaid. Most Entities are held captive through any society and exploited until they develop assertive qualities although they remain oppressed on the grand scale. The heirs to assertiveness are entitled and may behave as such. They are not treated like Entities for they are considered truly Most Holy, but their are very little differences in behavior between the two classes. The two classes hold mutual respect and accept their roles and are typically treated the same outside of their community with the exception to celebrities, political figures/leaders, and defense teams.

Summary: The Most Holy utilize gravitational pull through high compression kinesthetic movements and demonstrate an unusually high proficiency in spatial awareness.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 2:34 am


Kyeonji
VIII-IX-MCMXCI


Alright, so there are naturally, a handful of things I have an issue with when dealing with these Techniques. Some are minor and others are a bit.... Breaking, to be honest with you.

The main issue I have is the description behind your overall description of Techniques ranging from E to SS, you listed the available weaknesses behind them, which I greatly appreciate, but the problem is that the ones you've listed, with the exception of the Elemental Weakness, are Techniques that aren't available to everyone out there. It's honestly incredibly bad to make a Technique who's weakness is something that's reserve. For example, a Technique who's only counter is Black Lightning, that is horrendously bad. You're effectively making yourself weak to a selective few, if not, nobody at all since if nobody learns Black Lightning, then nobody can beat you. Honestly, it'll be better to just remove those Unique techniques and simply leave it as "Weak to Lightning Release".
Okay and since weaknesses is a theme somewhere else below in one of your statements. I'll address it there.


A second issue that I have ranges from your Techniques SS - B. These Technique seem to imply that their effect is instantaneous, meaning, upon activation they just go into effect without any means to actually stop it or counter it. Effectively, you can spam B-ranks and NOBODY is going to stop you...
False, Yuumei made me add that my SS-Rank generates gradually in case you want to re-read that. it's been there from the start since this technique used to exist. I can also have the S-Rank gradually develop too if you want.

BUT, I'm going off and assuming one thing. That is, these Rings that you're mentioning, are they visible?

It is singular and yes it is visible.

Can they be damaged by Lightning Release to halt its stop the Technique? If so, that does make things better, but only slightly since again, SS - B are techniques that induce the Gravitational Affect without having to actually come into contact with an individual. Sure you can comment that you're dealing with the environment rather than an RPC or an NPC, but if you're saying you can pull Biju size objects, you're definitely pulling people into your Technique, at least with your description.

The ring of energy isn't causing anything, its a product of what's happening. "Ring of energy" was used to replace the word "Quasar" but its function never changed. The "Ring of energy" is simply a physical description of a quasar. Also a blackhole is not an object or a actual tangible item that does something. It's an effect on an area.


This also jumps to another issue, literally from S - B you're killing anybody who gets pulled into this. The main purpose of me saying you needed physical contact was BECAUSE I wanted a level of counter-play behind your Techniques, effectively, if someone were to be Tagged by your Technique, assuming they had the Elemental advantage then a surge of Lightning Nature would deactivate the Gravitational Influence placed on them, thus making them safe from the Technique. Now, how do you counter-play a Technique that effectively pulls on the entire Environment? Everything around the user is going to be pulled including the floor, it's nearly inescapable.

Are you telling me nothing can beat this or are you asking me?
If you are asking:
My description simply says match the rank, it lists techniques that go against it, and there is an explanation of the range of destruction and the level of destruction that comes with the techniques and their ranks. (which is why the mods wanted me to keep that list handy, so it's not really a guessing game like what you and i have here.)

The technique is not as traumatic as you believe. The floor doesn't even dig nearly as deep as gaara's jutsu at S-Rank and at SS-rank it doesn't range beyond gaara's technique. So by the end of my technique one could effectively block dodge or dig especially with the amount of digging techniques.

Seals are so common and they arent considered uniques. Even the fastest way to seal yourself is automatically available to everyone who starts (kote).

there are other techniques that address energy. There are techniques that drain energy and losing energy wouldnt be new knowledge for black holes since they eventually die out.

There are techniques that redirect energy.
There are techniques that change density
There are techniques that change mass.
There are techniques that change energy
There are mind controlling techniques that arent even affected by anything physical
There are soul controlling techniques that arent even affected by anything physical.
However i listed a bunch of techniques as is; i cant exhaust this list realistically.
A demon can survive
Sage mode/transformation resist S-rank and below except the SS-Rank.
nara clan slips right in especially if you use it creatively.
Genjutsu especially binding genjutsu or mind controlling or tranquilizing someone using a genjutsu would work.


I can assume that release a pulse of Electricity can "protect" them from being pulled, but the same doesn't account for everything around them that's being hurled towards them or pulled towards yourself. When I request for you to add a Physical Contact Requirement, I didn't mean to half-a** it into just two version and leave the rest as is, I meant the entirety of the Technique.


Before we continue, I want to address, "Half-assed" in the context I see it here.
Please consider your choice of words in reference to the long hard effort I've put here over the months/years far before you were a member. I'm not just sensitive to my work, but to how I do my work. I do not mind you saying these things in general, but maybe it is better suited for a third party who may/may not agree, but is definitely less deeply invested in my work than i am.

If my work looks as you described, then it's not due to half-assery, but miscommunication. Anyway, my response is that I still dont know what you mean tbh... My main description applies lightning as a weakness which means every rank is affected by lightning.

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I don't consider myself a half-asser and please use more professional dialogue with me especially in reference to my effort unless I disrespect(ed) you. In this case clearly I thought I understood you, but clearly i have not judging by the kind of response I got.

My technique has been getting worked/reworked for about 2 years now and I dont consider that half assing nor how patient ive been for the last few months trying to get it approved as a clan or the months it took for it not to get approved when it was just a technique. My technique descriptions are among one of the most researched and one of the most lengthy descriptions in the entire guild. All of my techniques are pretyped and I believe you messaged me about that as well. I am always one of the highest post counts despite that i always quit the guild and come back. I was even an active mod when others gave up.

I consider myself detailed and patient. I understand if you do not agree, but if you could use friendlier words when talking to me about me. This custom technique is a struggle, so I am being as polite as I can be. (trying new things)

You may not have meant to offend me, but I statements like that do effect my responses to you and how we interact. Hopefully, you don't feel that I have said anything untruthful and/or hurtful about your character. If so I advise letting me know before we move on in any topic. Thank you



These techniques still need to be fleshed out properly, while I can see your effort into properly implementing balancing there are still things that need to be fixed. Environmental Technique such as those from SS - B rank needs to be reworded.

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There likely are more things I haven't mentioned but for now, we'll start off small and work from there, the rest beneath is in regards to your "Secret Techniques"

These are not up for criticism just yet.

I know you have a lot of work, so you might have missed the PM i sent. I give you a heads up so that we do not exchange unnecessary dialogue or do additional work as I would despise having someone get upset for having to thumb through my unfinished work without warning and getting frustrated either with my work or me. It's more so to protect myself.

In addition there is no point of you checking out a technique that is going to change considerably. I really just want to finish my orbit technique so I have a technique I can use for the moment.

With that said I'll consider your advice below, but I do not expect an approval for my secret techniques. Let's try one thing at a time because we both are backed up. I will give responses below as to how I feel, but again these techniques might be deleted or reworded for any reason.


Alright, so, let me gets this straight with this Transformation Technique and correct me if I'm wrong here:

- The user's body becomes soft?

yes

Can they even be damaged by blunt forces?

yes, they're just flexible. its doesnt have elastic stretch like orochimaru or give under pressure. It's less folk tale and more like being a contortionist.

- These rings are passive? I'm assuming this is allowing you to basically boost your D-rank Technique to B-rank or A-rank without having to use hand seals or whatever, they just boost to the next level without any interval time between them?

no, they are like precursors. They dont exist until you activate them and then you can activate them with another technique that is "blackhole" *quotation fingers* related. My intentions were to make this technique so that I could place one of these cursors somewhere and then activate a technique as opposed to always having to be the source of gravity.

Also to answer the other question. No they don't make the techniques stronger. I wouldnt need that, i can simply use the stronger version which is why i made different strength variations and ranges.

As for the transformation itself, it doesn't boost the techniques a rank or anything, but the techniques will spool up faster with less energy and effort.


- Nothing is perfect, remember that so this "As a result the opponent loses reaction time under the user's chained attacks thus inevitably creating an opening to land a clean blow." should be reworded slightly to not make it seem "unavoidable"

I hear you, I am still working on that technique. I copied wording from kimimaro's technique which does the same thing. The techniques description versus whats in the show lets us know what that looks like. I might just attach a link of what that movement looks like.


- It sounds as if this makes it impossible to physical harm the user, incoming and outgoing assaults can be redirected, so what? Throw a Kunai at her and it tilts left and avoids? It redirects back towards the thrower? Puncher hand the fist tilts towards the right and misses entirely? Fireball at her and it tilts towards the right and misses entirely? What exactly is stopping her? I get that she's weak to Lightning Release, but is she seriously ONLY weak to Lightning Release now?

no,
higher ranked techniques
thermal techniques
energy draining techniques
energy moving
time space techs
for b rank any item larger than a boulder like an akimichi
for a rank anything bigger than a tree like an akimichi
yamanaka
colbys clan
many genjutsu
lightning release



Wormholes, Teleportation Technique with better utility. So, you can transport yourself and others. I'm assuming you can also teleport objects and practically anything, right? Going to come back to that one.


Pretty much, but im pretty aware i cant transport myself or other individuals to another thread... in case that's what you were getting back to.



Now, that Father Time Technique... Allow me to give you my honest review of it, and I apologize... But, ******** no, like, that is by far the most overpowered thing I've seen. Defying the laws of Physics? That's basically just self-immortality to the point where you can revert basically anything that has ever happened to you, or to anybody. That's even better than immortality, touch a friend that died and revert everything, people don't generally fight for 20+ minutes unless they're stalling and talking halfway through. Lost an arm? Ha, lemme just reverse time and regain my arm. Got trapped somewhere? Can just reverse time and get out. Is that seriously how this works or am I missing something?

You are missing that I have to make hand contact with someone and not something and it only effects the individual touched and the items they interacted with.

What I intended was if they interacted with someone during that duration of time reversal, then that person would exist as a transparency like the precursor i mentioned in my transformation. They would continue to exist as they normally would, but the target would re-experience the transparencies. Like an alternative timeline occurring right before every ones eyes that doesnt effect them just the individual.

I have no idea how I am using time on this technique. This technique was just slapped on last and if you look at it, well its still pretty bare. I never worked out timing i just threw some numbers and said id get back to it. I was not expecting to review this with you due to the message i sent you about my secret techniques not being ready. Notice how the lowest rank is 2 seconds and it progresses up to 30 minutes in a random fashion.

SS: Misses a skip and erases an object.
S: +/- 30 minutes
A: +/- 15 minutes
B: +/- 28 seconds
C: +/- 6 seconds
D: +/- 2 second

Also I would add descriptions to each rank as you noticed is my habit.


Also everything under father time is not the techniques description. Theres two techniques under father time, but since i wasnt done I never got to name the other one or finish it either.

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Whatever Yuumei had you do was what Yuumei had you do, unfortunately, Yuumei isn't here anymore because.. Reason that I don't know or something. The problem with it, with the potential exception of "Generates gradually". Sure for your SS-rank and S-rank Technique that can be fine, but the rest? They seemingly just activate and you're kinda screwed unless you know Techniques which, by the way, nobody is going to be starting with. The ones you've listed, I am begging you to just removed them because there is no reason someone should be allowed to counter you with reserve Techniques. I honestly asked it to simply be Lightning Release due to it being simple, its easily accessible, people are more likely to have it and it isn't something that's potentially and effectively going to be a "Rare" Technique, especially with how things are now you can't just "Reserve" the Weaknesses you've listed.

I also appreciate you trying to disprove that it's not as traumatic as I make it out to seem, but, let me also add my own statement into it because I'm not sure if you misunderstood what I meant. I really don't want you to scale yourself to Canon characters, never scale yourself to Canon character, never do anything to relate to Canon characters, never reflect your Techniques against Canon characters. Nothing should remotely be close to the absurdity that Canon characters can pull off. Regardless of how deep Gaara's whatever went, I'm caught up at your B-rank and above Techniques because that's where things get a bit out of control.

You're pulling the support out from something as big as a Tree, which by the way varies greatly depending on which type of Tree but we're not getting into that mess. The problem is... If you're trashing something as big as a Tree and stunning them at a maximum for 5 seconds, you are killing anyone who is within a fifteen-meter range to your RPC. Nobody is surviving that sort of blunt force trauma, that's shattering more than just bones, you are murdering individuals with zero effort. So, let's run into how someone would have to counter this.

A technique that seal yourself, that's rare, very rare to ask, people aren't likely to have that at their disposal and I'm unsure about what you mean by that. Which Technique specifically are you referring to?

Chakra absorption, widely only two individual have access to that and frantically that's a cheap way to counter it. Chakra absorption counters nearly every Chakra-based Technique out there, that's just... Cheap to be honest with you. If you're saying there's a rate of decay with your Techniques, imply it somewhere.

``There are techniques that redirect energy.
There are techniques that change density
There are techniques that change mass.
There are techniques that change energy``

Specification for all of those, changing mass I can assume what you mean, that's a Unique one that not everyone is going to have and I'm generally sure the same is applied for Density as well.

Mind Controlling, that's a Clan Specific and you and I both know that it's HIGHLY unlikely that someone is going to pick that Clan as a starter up, which again, I don't like the idea of these oddly specific Unique type of weaknesses.

Soul Controlling, Chiyura? Maybe that can qualify, again, way too specific. Tone it down so what at least there's a higher chance of someone actually being able to be a counter rather than what's, essentially at the moment, the ONLY person alive that can stop your RPC.

Sage-Mode, again, that's such a late-game sort of deal and that's basically saying. "Good luck stopping me, gotta be S-Rank and learn Sage Mode to even stand a chance." Really?

Yeah, no, I made them and the only ones surviving half of this isn't even remotely available at the moment and I'm being honest, all of them wouldn't stand a chance if they went up against these.

Nara clan? Okay, maybe, but I highly doubt that's ever happening and again... Uniquely specific.

Genjutsu work on basically anybody, which basically counters nearly everyone... It's cheap, while not everyone is going to have it, it's still nearly as cheap as saying Chakra Absorption is a counter.

I'll apologize for regarding your work as half-a**, I honestly have to say I'm impressed with your patience and really want to see your RPC go through... But let me say this at the very least.

I really, really, really want you to look at these and tone them down. I want you to look at what is available and ask yourself. "Can I stop this with a non-clan specific/non-Unique Technique RPC." Don't make Techniques that are absurdly big and extra, legitimately just make it simple, make it clean, make it so that it can be fun to actually go against and not too much to deal with. Like, don't pull an Uchiha, don't be THAT Clan that's basically the be-all-end-all.

I asked you to have your Gravity Techniques affect RPC/NPC's through Physical contact because it means YOU have to put in an effort to gain that advantage against others. If you want to ******** with the environment, you can ******** with the environment in a way that you're hurling objects and loose things at people, not dragging people into you and ruining their entire existence with blunt-force that they, in honesty, won't be living through.

Like, even through the Crew we've all agreed that Gravity, in the way you're displaying it, is coming off as overpowered and... Well, cheap. They just look like things that would hand you that, and I'm quoting this from somewhere else. "Ez Dub GG." That sort of thing isn't fun to read, it's not fun for a story, there's no effort behind it.

As a note, I'm probably not going to be the one following up, but I'll shove these down the Crew's throat as often as I can to see if you're being dealt with [Didn't mean for that to sound bad if it does], but I'll be in the background providing aid to them since, I don't think everyone there is familiar with Special Relativity and the entire Space-stuff. My dumb a** only wasted half her life with one specific category anyways.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2018 4:30 pm


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Whatever Yuumei had you do was what Yuumei had you do, unfortunately, Yuumei isn't here anymore because.. Reason that I don't know or something. The problem with it, with the potential exception of "Generates gradually". Sure for your SS-rank and S-rank Technique that can be fine, but the rest? They seemingly just activate and you're kinda screwed unless you know Techniques which, by the way, nobody is going to be starting with. The ones you've listed, I am begging you to just removed them because there is no reason someone should be allowed to counter you with reserve Techniques. I honestly asked it to simply be Lightning Release due to it being simple, its easily accessible, people are more likely to have it and it isn't something that's potentially and effectively going to be a "Rare" Technique, especially with how things are now you can't just "Reserve" the Weaknesses you've listed.

I also appreciate you trying to disprove that it's not as traumatic as I make it out to seem, but, let me also add my own statement into it because I'm not sure if you misunderstood what I meant. I really don't want you to scale yourself to Canon characters, never scale yourself to Canon character, never do anything to relate to Canon characters, never reflect your Techniques against Canon characters. Nothing should remotely be close to the absurdity that Canon characters can pull off. Regardless of how deep Gaara's whatever went, I'm caught up at your B-rank and above Techniques because that's where things get a bit out of control.

You're pulling the support out from something as big as a Tree, which by the way varies greatly depending on which type of Tree but we're not getting into that mess. The problem is... If you're trashing something as big as a Tree and stunning them at a maximum for 5 seconds, you are killing anyone who is within a fifteen-meter range to your RPC. Nobody is surviving that sort of blunt force trauma, that's shattering more than just bones, you are murdering individuals with zero effort. So, let's run into how someone would have to counter this.

A technique that seal yourself, that's rare, very rare to ask, people aren't likely to have that at their disposal and I'm unsure about what you mean by that. Which Technique specifically are you referring to?

Chakra absorption, widely only two individual have access to that and frantically that's a cheap way to counter it. Chakra absorption counters nearly every Chakra-based Technique out there, that's just... Cheap to be honest with you. If you're saying there's a rate of decay with your Techniques, imply it somewhere.

``There are techniques that redirect energy.
There are techniques that change density
There are techniques that change mass.
There are techniques that change energy``

Specification for all of those, changing mass I can assume what you mean, that's a Unique one that not everyone is going to have and I'm generally sure the same is applied for Density as well.

Mind Controlling, that's a Clan Specific and you and I both know that it's HIGHLY unlikely that someone is going to pick that Clan as a starter up, which again, I don't like the idea of these oddly specific Unique type of weaknesses.

Soul Controlling, Chiyura? Maybe that can qualify, again, way too specific. Tone it down so what at least there's a higher chance of someone actually being able to be a counter rather than what's, essentially at the moment, the ONLY person alive that can stop your RPC.

Sage-Mode, again, that's such a late-game sort of deal and that's basically saying. "Good luck stopping me, gotta be S-Rank and learn Sage Mode to even stand a chance." Really?

Yeah, no, I made them and the only ones surviving half of this isn't even remotely available at the moment and I'm being honest, all of them wouldn't stand a chance if they went up against these.

Nara clan? Okay, maybe, but I highly doubt that's ever happening and again... Uniquely specific.

Genjutsu work on basically anybody, which basically counters nearly everyone... It's cheap, while not everyone is going to have it, it's still nearly as cheap as saying Chakra Absorption is a counter.

I'll apologize for regarding your work as half-a**, I honestly have to say I'm impressed with your patience and really want to see your RPC go through... But let me say this at the very least.

I really, really, really want you to look at these and tone them down. I want you to look at what is available and ask yourself. "Can I stop this with a non-clan specific/non-Unique Technique RPC." Don't make Techniques that are absurdly big and extra, legitimately just make it simple, make it clean, make it so that it can be fun to actually go against and not too much to deal with. Like, don't pull an Uchiha, don't be THAT Clan that's basically the be-all-end-all.

I asked you to have your Gravity Techniques affect RPC/NPC's through Physical contact because it means YOU have to put in an effort to gain that advantage against others. If you want to ******** with the environment, you can ******** with the environment in a way that you're hurling objects and loose things at people, not dragging people into you and ruining their entire existence with blunt-force that they, in honesty, won't be living through.

Like, even through the Crew we've all agreed that Gravity, in the way you're displaying it, is coming off as overpowered and... Well, cheap. They just look like things that would hand you that, and I'm quoting this from somewhere else. "Ez Dub GG." That sort of thing isn't fun to read, it's not fun for a story, there's no effort behind it.

As a note, I'm probably not going to be the one following up, but I'll shove these down the Crew's throat as often as I can to see if you're being dealt with [Didn't mean for that to sound bad if it does], but I'll be in the background providing aid to them since, I don't think everyone there is familiar with Special Relativity and the entire Space-stuff. My dumb a** only wasted half her life with one specific category anyways.


I appreciated your help a lot and I don't take what you said to heart though it would be difficult to move forth if we continued to speak to each other this way.

I can see us having a difference in opinions but a lot of the things you point out are true. I have no problems adjusting, but being consistent goes a long way for the person trying to get their things approved. I know you guys are short on help.

I will keep what you have said in mind as I rework my clan.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2018 10:59 pm


Kyeonji

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 9:39 am


New Technique

Bare Nature | S-Rank | Genjutsu: A touch that matches a frequency in the targets body to cause maximum pleasure... The target will instantly find themselves in mid-heat until they are completely satisfied... even if that means another round for those with mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. The weakness behind this technique is that the user can never harm the target again or else this technique will never work again. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. The user must provide this stimulation consistently enough so as not to ruin the relationship and lose the targets trust forever.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 7:14 pm


First off, this is looking way better. I can finally see this being approved after a bit of revision.

So, a couple of points:

1) What is the size of the rings?

2) I feel they still need a more weaknesses. Here are a few ideas:
-firing a technique of equal or higher rank into the black hole can destroy it.
-since they suck in lots of earth, black holes could be a Doton technique and have lightning weakness.


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once it closes up on the objects that are trapped become internalized. The stripped properties can be stored inside the user's body.
How can the stripped properties be used?

Kyeonji
D-Rank | 2 pts. : The user creates a connection between two or more rings of high energy to create a wormhole. This wormhole allows something that has entered one ring to exit another ring like a tunnel without succumbing to it's crushing force. The wormhole can create layers of atmospheric pressure in the area where one ring is present with the power of any other connected ring(s). Transporting a human with this technique requires a minimum of two rings that add up to 11 pts. to form such a competent wormhole connection. Any of other connection of lower points can transport other objects, but not RPC or NPC. On the other end of this spectrum, the user can die from a heart failure by applying too much energy [ 29 points ].
This is a separate technique and will need to be treated as such.

What is the range? I imagine maintaining a black hole is chakra costly, so she couldn't travel to put them too far apart.


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S-Rank: A touch that matches a frequency in the targets body to cause maximum pleasure... The target will instantly find themselves in mid-heat until they are completely satisfied... even if that means another round for those with mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. The weakness behind this technique is that the user can never harm the target again or else this technique will never work again. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. The user must provide this stimulation consistently enough so as not to ruin the relationship and lose the targets trust forever.
Just list it as a genjutsu that triggers by touch and I'll approve this one.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 11:01 pm


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First off, this is looking way better. I can finally see this being approved after a bit of revision.

So, a couple of points:

1) What is the size of the rings?

It encompasses the area of the technique, since it's supposed to be a quasar.

Quasar - a massive and extremely remote celestial object, emitting exceptionally large amounts of energy, and typically having a starlike image in a telescope. It has been suggested that quasars contain massive black holes and may represent a stage in the evolution of some galaxies.



2) I feel they still need a more weaknesses. Here are a few ideas:
-firing a technique of equal or higher rank into the black hole can destroy it.
-since they suck in lots of earth, black holes could be a Doton technique and have lightning weakness.

Read the light gray section, i added terms/weakness:
I made lightning unaffected at equal ranks.
I made large mass created into the atmosphere in or surrounding the orbit to cause an imbalance.
I made summons cancel the technique and in some cases whiplash the user.
However, going into all the elements I made fire and wind weak to this technique when they are applied conventionally.


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once it closes up on the objects that are trapped become internalized. The stripped properties can be stored inside the user's body.
How can the stripped properties be used?

That's as far as I intended. I wanted to back up my henge no jutsu and another transformation technique from the show that combines parts from other creatures.

I might make a technique later if I need this to do more, but I think it does enough.



Kyeonji
D-Rank | 2 pts. : The user creates a connection between two or more rings of high energy to create a wormhole. This wormhole allows something that has entered one ring to exit another ring like a tunnel without succumbing to it's crushing force. The wormhole can create layers of atmospheric pressure in the area where one ring is present with the power of any other connected ring(s). Transporting a human with this technique requires a minimum of two rings that add up to 11 pts. to form such a competent wormhole connection. Any of other connection of lower points can transport other objects, but not RPC or NPC. On the other end of this spectrum, the user can die from a heart failure by applying too much energy [ 29 points ].
This is a separate technique and will need to be treated as such.

Separated from Mostly Holy: Blackhole
Turned into a transformation


What is the range? I imagine maintaining a black hole is chakra costly, so she couldn't travel to put them too far apart.


This doesn't place the blackholes or open them, you need to use Most holy: blackhole first in order to place the blackholes. This technique would take those pre-existing blackholes and make them connectable.

Quote:
S-Rank: A touch that matches a frequency in the targets body to cause maximum pleasure... The target will instantly find themselves in mid-heat until they are completely satisfied... even if that means another round for those with mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. The weakness behind this technique is that the user can never harm the target again or else this technique will never work again. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. The user must provide this stimulation consistently enough so as not to ruin the relationship and lose the targets trust forever.
Just list it as a genjutsu that triggers by touch and I'll approve this one.

Done

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 1:11 am


New technique

Most Holy: Medusa
A-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a wardrobe fluke exposing themselves and giving off a vibe of hysteria. This vibe is felt by all opponents getting ready to attack and causes them to have a moment of decency where they help the user cover up. In reality the user is not affected by their exposure and relieved by the delay of conflict. This technique will end any fight and the opponent's/s' guard will genuinely drop in response to the situation, but if an opponent truly wants to continue fighting they must use a higher ranking technique against the user. However, if the user of this technique is attacked without attacking first, the opponent will be wanted throughout the village it occurred in for sexual assault unless the user is trespassing/intruding. This act will go unpunished if it is done by a kage or if done by an official within their place of work unless the user is a Kage or an official. In the case that the user is a kage or an official, this act against them will not go unpunished even if they are not harmed.


Most Holy: Virgin
B-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a mistake, but their heart is in the right place so those around them can feel it. Usually this technique is preceded with a sound of urgency such as a squeal, scream, cry, or yell, but it can be activated by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior. If someone gets upset with them, this technique will force another NPC or RPC to come to their aid right on time. The user can not attack when using this technique, but may resume battle once the opponent continues to attack. An RPC or NPC can not aid twice a battle and after protecting the user, they must move aside.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:06 am


Quote:

What is the range? I imagine maintaining a black hole is chakra costly, so she couldn't travel to put them too far apart.


This doesn't place the blackholes or open them, you need to use Most holy: blackhole first in order to place the blackholes. This technique would take those pre-existing blackholes and make them connectable.

I get that, but I imagine maintaining black holes would be chakra intensive. Is it in any way feasible to use this to connect remote black holes?






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Bare Nature | S-Rank | Genjutsu: A touch that matches a frequency in the targets body to cause maximum pleasure... The target will instantly find themselves in mid-heat until they are completely satisfied... even if that means another round for those with mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. The weakness behind this technique is that the user can never harm the target again or else this technique will never work again. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. The user must provide this stimulation consistently enough so as not to ruin the relationship and lose the targets trust forever.

approved

Quote:

Most Holy: Medusa
A-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a wardrobe fluke exposing themselves and giving off a vibe of hysteria. This vibe is felt by all opponents getting ready to attack and causes them to have a moment of decency where they help the user cover up. In reality the user is not affected by their exposure and relieved by the delay of conflict. This technique will end any fight and the opponent's/s' guard will genuinely drop in response to the situation, but if an opponent truly wants to continue fighting they must use a higher ranking technique against the user. However, if the user of this technique is attacked without attacking first, the opponent will be wanted throughout the village it occurred in for sexual assault unless the user is trespassing/intruding. This act will go unpunished if it is done by a kage or if done by an official within their place of work unless the user is a Kage or an official. In the case that the user is a kage or an official, this act against them will not go unpunished even if they are not harmed.
It should only affect people who actually see it… not the whole village. Though, affecting bystanders is fine.

Quote:
Most Holy: Virgin
B-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a mistake, but their heart is in the right place so those around them can feel it. Usually this technique is preceded with a sound of urgency such as a squeal, scream, cry, or yell, but it can be activated by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior. If someone gets upset with them, this technique will force another NPC or RPC to come to their aid right on time. The user can not attack when using this technique, but may resume battle once the opponent continues to attack. An RPC or NPC can not aid twice a battle and after protecting the user, they must move aside.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 2:22 pm


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Quote:

What is the range? I imagine maintaining a black hole is chakra costly, so she couldn't travel to put them too far apart.


This doesn't place the blackholes or open them, you need to use Most holy: blackhole first in order to place the blackholes. This technique would take those pre-existing blackholes and make them connectable.

I get that, but I imagine maintaining black holes would be chakra intensive. Is it in any way feasible to use this to connect remote black holes?

I added that every post after activating a precursor will cost 2 points.




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Bare Nature | S-Rank | Genjutsu: A touch that matches a frequency in the targets body to cause maximum pleasure... The target will instantly find themselves in mid-heat until they are completely satisfied... even if that means another round for those with mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. The weakness behind this technique is that the user can never harm the target again or else this technique will never work again. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. The user must provide this stimulation consistently enough so as not to ruin the relationship and lose the targets trust forever.

approved
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Most Holy: Medusa
A-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a wardrobe fluke exposing themselves and giving off a vibe of hysteria. This vibe is felt by all opponents getting ready to attack and causes them to have a moment of decency where they help the user cover up. In reality the user is not affected by their exposure and relieved by the delay of conflict. This technique will end any fight and the opponent's/s' guard will genuinely drop in response to the situation, but if an opponent truly wants to continue fighting they must use a higher ranking technique against the user. However, if the user of this technique is attacked without attacking first, the opponent will be wanted throughout the village it occurred in for sexual assault unless the user is trespassing/intruding. This act will go unpunished if it is done by a kage or if done by an official within their place of work unless the user is a Kage or an official. In the case that the user is a kage or an official, this act against them will not go unpunished even if they are not harmed.
It should only affect people who actually see it… not the whole village. Though, affecting bystanders is fine.

changed it to bystanders [ anyone in the thread at the time of the event ]

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Most Holy: Virgin
B-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a mistake, but their heart is in the right place so those around them can feel it. Usually this technique is preceded with a sound of urgency such as a squeal, scream, cry, or yell, but it can be activated by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior. If someone gets upset with them, this technique will force another NPC or RPC to come to their aid right on time. The user can not attack when using this technique, but may resume battle once the opponent continues to attack. An RPC or NPC can not aid twice a battle and after protecting the user, they must move aside.


How do you feel about Most Holy: Virgin?
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:44 am


The Most Unholy: Predatory Gaze
A-Rank | 11 pts. | Radius: 0' to 40 | Genjutsu : A hard or intimidating gaze with a homicidal vibe that leaves one feeling violated and usually ruins the harmony in a gathering or crowd. The user doesn't have to stare at anyone in particular for the feeling to go around, which tends to make others wonder if it's just them... This technique is used to break any target's/s' focus long enough to where they at least get a half second advantage in reaction or response when using a single strike power blow or a short single directional dash movement. After using this technique the user may continue to feed the vibes, but the response/reaction time advantage will need a cool downtime of 1 minute. It is very difficult to tell if the user is up to something and they will give off the energy of someone that might jump the gun any second the closer they get.... as if you have to keep your eyes on them closely.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:34 pm


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What is the range? I imagine maintaining a black hole is chakra costly, so she couldn't travel to put them too far apart.


This doesn't place the blackholes or open them, you need to use Most holy: blackhole first in order to place the blackholes. This technique would take those pre-existing blackholes and make them connectable.

I get that, but I imagine maintaining black holes would be chakra intensive. Is it in any way feasible to use this to connect remote black holes?

I added that every post after activating a precursor will cost 2 points.

So do you mean the most holy permanently loses jutsu points and must sacrifice jutsu if they have no free points by using this?

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Most Holy: Medusa::: [ A-Rank ]
A-Rank | 11 pts. | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a wardrobe fluke exposing themselves and giving off a vibe of hysteria. This vibe is felt by all opponents getting ready to attack and causes them to have a moment of decency where they help the user cover up. In reality the user is not affected by their exposure and relieved by the delay of conflict. This technique will end any fight and the opponent's/s' guard will genuinely drop in response to the situation, but if an opponent truly wants to continue fighting they must use a higher ranking technique against the user. However, if the user of this technique is attacked without attacking first, the opponent will be attacked by bystanders [ anyone in the thread at the time of the event ] for sexual assault unless the user is trespassing/intruding. This act of sexual assault will go unpunished if it is done by a kage or if done by an official within their place of work unless the user is a Kage or an official. In the case that the user is a kage or an official, this act against them will not go unpunished even if they are not harmed.



changed it to bystanders [ anyone in the thread at the time of the event ]

You will also need to specify the trigger for the genjutsu. In other words, people will have to actually see the wardrobe fluke to be affected by it.

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Most Holy: Virgin
B-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a mistake, but their heart is in the right place so those around them can feel it. Usually this technique is preceded with a sound of urgency such as a squeal, scream, cry, or yell, but it can be activated by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior. If someone gets upset with them, this technique will force another NPC or RPC to come to their aid right on time. The user can not attack when using this technique, but may resume battle once the opponent continues to attack. An RPC or NPC can not aid twice a battle and after protecting the user, they must move aside.


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How do you feel about Most Holy: Virgin?

How would this technique work in practice? Would it force NPCs Nodus controls to help your character, or would you make up some random NPC? If so, How powerful can the NPCs be?

I am okay with it being activated by a scream, but I don’t think it should have so many other ways to activate it (by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior).
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:45 pm


--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
VIII-IX-MCMXCI
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--

What is the range? I imagine maintaining a black hole is chakra costly, so she couldn't travel to put them too far apart.


This doesn't place the blackholes or open them, you need to use Most holy: blackhole first in order to place the blackholes. This technique would take those pre-existing blackholes and make them connectable.

I get that, but I imagine maintaining black holes would be chakra intensive. Is it in any way feasible to use this to connect remote black holes?

I added that every post after activating a precursor will cost 2 points.

So do you mean the most holy permanently loses jutsu points and must sacrifice jutsu if they have no free points by using this?

No, but you gave me an idea.
Instead I did this:

Any most holy: blackhole that uses a precursor will lose 2 pts of chakra every post until it hits 0 and dies out. The precursor is the only way i can transport across distances.


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Most Holy: Medusa::: [ A-Rank ]
A-Rank | 11 pts. | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a wardrobe fluke exposing themselves and giving off a vibe of hysteria. This vibe is felt by all opponents getting ready to attack and causes them to have a moment of decency where they help the user cover up. In reality the user is not affected by their exposure and relieved by the delay of conflict. This technique will end any fight and the opponent's/s' guard will genuinely drop in response to the situation, but if an opponent truly wants to continue fighting they must use a higher ranking technique against the user. However, if the user of this technique is attacked without attacking first, the opponent will be attacked by bystanders [ anyone in the thread at the time of the event ] for sexual assault unless the user is trespassing/intruding. This act of sexual assault will go unpunished if it is done by a kage or if done by an official within their place of work unless the user is a Kage or an official. In the case that the user is a kage or an official, this act against them will not go unpunished even if they are not harmed.



changed it to bystanders [ anyone in the thread at the time of the event ]

You will also need to specify the trigger for the genjutsu. In other words, people will have to actually see the wardrobe fluke to be affected by it.

Done

Quote:
Most Holy: Virgin
B-Rank | Genjutsu: The user accidentally makes a mistake, but their heart is in the right place so those around them can feel it. Usually this technique is preceded with a sound of urgency such as a squeal, scream, cry, or yell, but it can be activated by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior. If someone gets upset with them, this technique will force another NPC or RPC to come to their aid right on time. The user can not attack when using this technique, but may resume battle once the opponent continues to attack. An RPC or NPC can not aid twice a battle and after protecting the user, they must move aside.


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How do you feel about Most Holy: Virgin?

How would this technique work in practice? Would it force NPCs Nodus controls to help your character, or would you make up some random NPC? If so, How powerful can the NPCs be?

I am okay with it being activated by a scream, but I don’t think it should have so many other ways to activate it (by flinching, cowering, and other retreating behavior).

it just forces Nodus' NPC or RPC [ or anybody else there] to come to her aid if they are around to witness.

I removed retreating behavior and the examples of it and just kept verbal calls.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 3:04 pm


VIII-IX-MCMXCI
The Most Unholy: Predatory Gaze
A-Rank | 11 pts. | Radius: 0' to 40 | Genjutsu : A hard or intimidating gaze with a homicidal vibe that leaves one feeling violated and usually ruins the harmony in a gathering or crowd. The user doesn't have to stare at anyone in particular for the feeling to go around, which tends to make others wonder if it's just them... This technique is used to break any target's/s' focus long enough to where they at least get a half second advantage in reaction or response when using a single strike power blow or a short single directional dash movement. After using this technique the user may continue to feed the vibes, but the response/reaction time advantage will need a cool downtime of 1 minute. It is very difficult to tell if the user is up to something and they will give off the energy of someone that might jump the gun any second the closer they get.... as if you have to keep your eyes on them closely.
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