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 Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2018 11:23 am
Name: Coralie Tityus
Nickname: Cora
Age: 15
Birthday: September 8
Sign: Virgo
Gemstone: Sapphire
Blood Type: B+
Fav. Food: Cucumber
Hated Food: Lentils
School: Meadowview High School
Hobbies:
Bug collector -- A childhood hobby well continued into her teenage years, Cora loves to collect bugs and insects. She has a terrarium with a rhino beetle grub she is determined to raise to imago form, several pinboards of insects, and a few books of all the local insects. She can be found in parks and gardens, carefully trying to catch a cool bug!
Sports Lover - Cora is a bit of a jock, with a love of physical activities. She runs track at school, and does soccer and tennis for fun. She sometimes likes to watch sports games, but thinks its more fun to do than to watch.
Video Games - When the weather isn't good, or when she'd rather relax, Cora loves to play video games. Sports games, shooters, and puzzle games are her favorites, though she really likes co-op games so she can play with friends!
Virtues:
Outgoing -- Cora loves making friends and hanging out in public spots where she can see and meet a lot of people. She loves to go to conventions, sports meetings, and even just the mall. She's very energetic and easygoing with other people.
Determined -- Once Cora's set her mind to something, she'll work as hard as she can to make it happen! She doesn't give up easily, and doesn't back down often once she's got her eyes on something she wants to accomplish or have.
Flaws:
Dishonest -- Cora is a bit of an impulsive liar, often saying things that serve her no benefit other than she felt compelled to say it, despite it not being true. She often lies about her whereabouts to her parents, and lies to her friends about her activities. Being honest is difficult for her, and it takes facing a serious consequence for her actions to understand that there is no reason to lie. She often feels if she tells the truth she will be seen as less important or interesting, or that she may get in trouble for doing things she probably wasn't supposed to. It's frustrating to her family and friends, and she's not well trusted by family (and potential friends) because of it.
Impatient -- She has very little patience, and wants things she wants as soon as possible. She snaps at friends for being late or slow, and wants to constantly go go go! Cora knows this isn't very nice, but she just can't help it! She struggles with things not going her way quickly, and gets frustrated easily.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Green, large lashes
Hair: Purple, in a ponytail, bangs and framed face
Face: Strong, has ear piercings, large nose.
Clothes: School uniform. For her personal style she likes sporty clothes, feminine things... I'll try and make a pinboard should I get alt art!
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2018 11:24 am
Senshi: Sailor Sylvania, Senshi of Beetles Challenge: "Get tossed!" Fuku Colour: Main Color: Jade/teal #309588Secondary Color: Blue #324c79 Fuku: (see my rough ref, click for Big) Collar -- A teal sailor collar with a blue stripe. Bow -- A blue backbow with a green antennae, beetle wing bow under collar Bodice -- A basic white bodice Sleeves -- Petaled sleeves in the shape of beetle shells with a teal-blue gradient Brooch -- Beetle brooch, blue Bottoms -- Petal skirt with a teal-blue gradient Tiara -- Beetle horn tiara, blue base with green shimmer Choker -- Classic choker with a beetle Shoes -- Thin string-laced ballet flats over simple patterned stockings give a grub-like appearance to her legs. Gloves -- Fingerless short gloves Accessories -- Beetle earrings Attacks: Sailor Scout Attack: Beetleshell Fell For a brief period of time, Sailor Sylvania is empowered! She displays ethereal beetle shells on her shoulders, and she has the strength to lift and carry up to three times her normal capacity for 20 seconds. She can use this three times a day. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Beetlewing Fling For a brief period of time, Sailor Sylvania is empowered! She displays ethereal beetle wings, and has the strength to lift and carry up to five times her normal capacity for 30 seconds. She can use this twice a day. Eternal Sailor Attack: Beetlehorn Scorn For a short period of time, Sailor Sylvania displays an ethereal beetle horn for fighting her enemies! When she rushes an enemy with her horn, she can flip them easily, or give a substantial knockback should she connect with them (up to player discretion if it does any additional damage). The effect is short at 45 seconds, and can only be used once per day.
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2018 1:06 am
just stopping by to say I love this sphere
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2018 7:40 am
Hey Purple!!!
Congratulations on obtaining Cora! I'm here to help you work on getting her stamped up <3
Her hobbies and virtues look great and I have only one little question about her Dishonest flaw. While it's a perfectly acceptable flaw to use, could you elaborate a little bit on how it impacts her in a negative way? Does it make her friends and family distrust her more often because of her tendency to lie so much? Why does she find being honest so difficult - does the truth seem more boring, so she avoids it? Or is she scared of getting in trouble, so she lies to cover it up? I just need a little more info on this flaw to approve her civilian side.
And since you wanted the powered side also reviewed, I'd be more than happy to look at that too <3
Both her sphere and name look good but as a reminder, neither one are considered reserved until you obtain a slot for her so even with a stamp, they'll be considered free game.
As long as the ethereal shell/wings are there for show and are not usable, I have only one minor correction to suggest.
Typically with the growth of magic, spells last longer and are more powerful as a senshi levels up. So I would start with her Basic attack being 20 seconds (3 uses) and then make her Super attack 30 seconds (with 2 uses). Her Eternal attack has appropriate timing/uses.
Other than that, there's a minor wording repeat in her Super attack (you doubled up the words "and has the strength to" ) but she looks good to me!
If you have any questions or would like to discuss anything, please feel free to PM me. Otherwise, quote me when you're ready for me to swing by with another review.
Thank you!! <3
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2018 9:48 am
Thank you so much! I elaborated a little - the lying a bit of both (wanting to seem cooler and avoid getting in trouble), though it's bit of compulsion. Obviously, people aware of her chronic lies probably won't trust her as much, but people are free to decide for themselves just how distrusting they are. And yes the wings/shell are just for show, they aren't solid and cannot be used in any meaningful way. Just there to look cool. Thank you for the suggestion, I've applied it! And for catching that aha, for all the time I've had it up I never noticed the typo. <3
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2018 8:15 pm
Thank you so much for those changes! She looks peachy-keen to me, so have a stamp!
A GM will be by shortly for their review! <3
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2018 12:36 am
This is a neat sphere! Everything looks good to me, and I have only just one small thing to add (that won't affect a stamp!) The way her magic is written it clearly outlines that she is able to lift or carry more, so I am going to stamp this under the impression that this boost in magic won't make her punches stronger and will only affect her ability to lift and throw! If you had something else in mind, please PM me so we can work out details--otherwise, have fun!
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