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Name: Nevaeh Selie (Adopted Brother of Hel Selie with Lucyal Permission)

Nickname: Nay-Nay. If he likes you though, it could be Heaven (;

Age: 16 years old

Birthday: July 22nd

Sign: Cancer

Gemstone: Pearl

Blood Type: B-

Fav. Food: Grilled Chicken and Onions. Onions in general. Grilled food also in general. Everything grilled is awesome.

Hated Food: Overly bitter foods.

School: Romano's (Freshly transferred....yay.)

Gender: Gender Fluid. Preferably male, but sometimes will ask for female pronouns. As a senshi, they prefer strictly female pronouns! (I feel this is important to include because it explains the difference between their Senshi form and their Civilian form!)

Hobbies:

Sewing: Travelling with his sister and adoptive father didn't give Nay a lot of time to really attach himself to things. Instead he focused on things that could benefit them in their travels. Sewing was the best and quickest thing he managed to pick up and it ended up being something he loved to do. He loves sewing outfits and clothing for cosplays, and channels a lot of it into his fashion style choices!

Style/Cosplay dressing: The best way for Nay to show off his outfits is by wearing them himself! He loves to go out in new clothes he's made, whether they be 'cute' or 'cool' or 'sexy', he's not shy! Added to that, he loves finding cute characters from shows or animes and creating cosplays based off them!

Muay Thai: This was a course that was not really a choice for Nay, but because his adopted sister took it and was forced to be her partner. As such, he has trained and continued the regimen so that he could keep up with Hel, and because it provides good self defense in cons where he is cosplaying.

Basketball: Nay has been playing basketball since he was like....5. Even though he has a small frame, he uses that to his advantage as a pointer, and has a killer 3 point shot. He's quick and nimble and will throw down basketball if you ask him! When he's not cosplaying, the boy is totally basketball crazy.

Virtues:

Creative: Moving around a lot meant that Nay had to get creative with their resources. Nay loves finding ways to turn scrap into gold, and making acute not thought of decisions to situations. They use quick talking and quick thinking to solve a lot of their problems.

Resourceful: There is always something to use for something. There's always a way to think of something with what you have around you. Nay is a coordinator with his resources, and making the best of what he is given.

Nimble: Nay is a quick thinker, and takes advantage of the fact that he is a bit smaller and quicker then others to get out of sticky situations. His coin of term is that he's light on the feet and quick to the beat. It helps sometimes when he's making difficult decisions for creating attire, or when he plays basketball where decisions and actions do not have allotted time to be thought about!

Flaws:

Relentless: Nay is constant in the way he acts and thinks. Sure he's quick thinker but once he is, he is CONSTANTLY sure that it is the correct way to act or think for the situation and he will continue that way of thinking unless proven otherwise.

Rash: There is no time for looking back on a decision he's made, so he just keeps going with it and that's that. There is little thought sometimes for consequences that may be...present...past or future. Once it's done, it's done right? This can be troublesome because he truly doesn't reflect on bad decisions and chalks them up as just one mistake in a long running game.

Arrogant: Nay is hot s**t, just like his Sister, he comes from a family that are confident and sure of themselves. So much so that its hard to find faults (he says). This arrogance causes a lot of harm because it puts him in situations that could've been resolved if he stepped down.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: Olive Green, Almond and big due to both a spanish and Norweigen heritage.

Hair: Long Silver, Easier to dye for cosplays. Naturally silky and pretty

Face: Very feminine and petite, not very full faced or a lot of baby fat.

Clothes:N/A.

Good morning, Nyx! Let's see if we can get Nevaeh approved for you.

For your Civilian Side:

Your Hobbies look good so far, though I do have a question. For Muy Thai, it that something he enjoys doing, or is it something he's more doing because he doesn't really have a choice? It's not a big deal, just something I was curious about, since hobbies tend to be things we like to do, rather than something we were forced to do and just keep up with.

For Virtues, Creative and Resourceful read well! They tie in greatly with his hobbies and make alot of sense for who Nevaeh is. Nimble, however, reads as a physical trait rather than a personality one right now. I did notice towards the end that he's a quick thinker/reactor to situations, so you may want to focus on that, rather than his size. The word Reactive and Adaptable come to mind, so you could use those instead and elaborate further on how he responds to things that don't turn out quite right.

I feel as if the word Relentless for his flaw may not be the word you're looking for. Does he try to push his views onto other people as well, or is he more the kinda person who just refuses to change his own opinion? If the second is the case, I think the word Stubborn might work better, as he's not trying to enforce his will on others. Relentless might also mean that he never gives up on what he's doing, which could be mistaken for a virtue instead. Could you clarify this for me, please?

While Rash works well, I feel as if that first sentence there is a little confusing, did you mean that the time has already passed after he's made a decision, or something else? Arrogant, however, is wonderful and I love it! I hope Nay can live up to the hot s**t he thinks of himself!

For his powered side:

While the attacks look pretty decent, part of the definition of Ruin you've chosen includes the word 'destruction' which is a restricted/locked sphere. Make sure you're focusing on the disintegrating/dissolving aspect of the word ruin. The idea of 'falling to ruin' brings up a different image than destruction, which is alot more physically violent.

Everything looks good for both Basic and super! Because you have put at 'a player's descretion', it comes off as well balanced and quite damaging if the player decides to let themselves be. I like it alot!

Most eternal attacks are one use only, and has a maximum distance of 25 feet, whether split into a radius around a player, or in a single shot direction. That being said, you can push the casting time to 45 seconds, which is a pretty common length for an eternal attack. And in order to balance it further, while the concentration is needed, you could also allow them to keep their arms free, so that maintaining the entire 45 second duration becomes easier and less likely to fall apart, since it's a one-time use ability.

If you have any questions, please let me know, and quote me once you're ready for me to take a look at your quest again.

Thank you,
Poods

Good morning, Nyx! I apologize for the delay, It seems there was information in regards to this particular quest I was missing. I was informed that the sphere was approved a while back, and I had not known this before taking on your quest, and again, I apologize! After discussing this with the other mods, I think we've come to agreement on several points you made. There's just a little bit more that needs to happen before we can approve of this quest.

For Civ: That works well, thank you for touching up on that for me!

For Powered:

Specifically, what I had saw as destruction was in the definition of Ruin you provided. "The physical Destruction or Disintegration" part had caused some confusion for me.

For your basic attack, instead of going towards disintegration, it can be worded as 'falling into ruin', to emphasis that the sphere is infact ruin, not instantaneous disintegration. You can also state 'this may look different depending on the character or player, but it could appear as if they are disintegrating, aging rapidly, falling apart, or any other visuals that would represent falling into ruin.' The same goes for super.

For your eternal attack, I suggest changing the 'dissolving to ruin' and the 'they see the illusionary effects of the ruin of the environment around her" to a single sentence, “Anyone caught within the circle experiences the sensation of being ruined, as an intense burning feeling spreads through their body. As long as they are within the circle, it will appear to them as if they, everyone around them, and the environment has all fallen into ruin.” for a bit more of a clear understanding.

I hope this helps! The usage looks fine, just a little bit of rewording is needed before we can approve this.

Thank you!

Poods

Yes, it looks good to me! Thank you so much for your patience!

A GM will come by shortly to drop the final stamp!