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Kaname Kyoto

Handsome Bibliophile

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2018 8:25 pm


Name: Abigail Beeson

Nickname: Abby

Age: 10

Birthday: 1/9

Sign: Capricorn

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: AB

Fav. Food: Cheeseburgers without ketchup or mustard

Hated Food: mustard

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:

Softball Abby loves softball! She’s quite the pro for being just ten years old, or at least, to a ten year old she's a pro. She joined the softball league just two years ago, at the encouragement of her parents wanting her to exercise and has no regretd

Building crafts She loves building large structures with her legos or anything that she can get her hands on that allows her to make towering buildings, nice trees or even little people. She also has the tendency to then smash them, but what fun would building things be if you couldn't destroy them! She gets pretty creative with height and structure of her creations, and sometimes even the depth. She has attempted several times to build a fort around herself, her parents or (dumb) big sister stopping her each time.


Virtues:

adventurous - her boundless creativity and thirst for fun has led her to be a pretty adventurous girl. Whether it's exploring in the park, finding new, unexplored little areas in and out of the house, or even around town, Abigail will do it with enthusiasm, of course, not without its set backs for her worried parents

quick witted - dodging the racoon she just met, a softball coming right at her face, or her parents nagging her to eat veggies, Abby is quick to come up with a plan! You've gotta be though, when your an explorer dodging the dreaded bed time, or playing ball and the opposing player makes a mistake, or a pot shot to take her out. Please don't tell anyone you know about the raccoon encounter though!


Flaws:

Liar Though being fast with her words has unfortunately made Abby quite a list. She knows the things she's up to aren't exactly safe, but darnit, they're the fun things she likes to do! She can think of something to hopefully divert her suspicious party, but if not, she has one more line of defense.

Overdramatic if shes caught in a lie, or doing something rather dangerous and lieing, she brings out the exasperated sighs, and if that fails anger, and finally, she starts up the waterworks and crying how it's unfair she can't have fun, that she can't do anything at all. It's very...well, it's not a favorite of her families, and as of late her exasperated babysitter. It's earned a few groundings in her short life.



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION



Eyes: red and round

Hair:black, pulled into an updo ponytail with one long bang at the front. Has a long hair tie with a heart attached

Face: round with average sized ears

Clothes: knightside elementary uniform
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2018 8:26 pm


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__________ A R C H E R N A R __________

A T T A C K S
B a s i c : Tears!
Holding her hands to her eyes, she gathers one tear from each eye. She proceeds to fling them up into the sky, over her or her target and a larger, healing 'tear' comes down and surrounds them, healing extremely minor wounds or relieving a small amount of fatigue. Lasts 10 seconds and can be used three times in battle.

S u p e r : Tears of relief!
Again, she holds her hands to her eyes and gathers more than one drop from each. They are flung into the sky, over her or up to 3 targets. What comes down is a mist of tears that relieve a little fatigue and fully heal minor wounds. Lasts 20 seconds, can be used twice in battle.

E t e r n a l : Tears of joy!
Just like the last two attacks, she gathers numerous tears in her hands and flings them sky high. An area of six feet around her is misted over with a drizzle of tears that lasts 30 seconds and fully heals moderate injuries.** Also still takes care of fatigue if uninjured. Can be used once in battle. The injured party members have to stay within her six foot radius the entire 30 seconds.


** Injuries like broken bones wouldn't be effected. Major injuries would need to be looked at regardless.

***cannot garauntee abilities will work all the time.


E X T R A I N F O R M A T I O N
S p h e r e : Tears

Kaname Kyoto

Handsome Bibliophile


Kaname Kyoto

Handsome Bibliophile

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2018 8:51 pm


And closed for critique, got what I needed u vu
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2018 4:29 pm


Hey, Kaname! Congrats on the character!

Her civilian side looks good, and while I can see that you didn’t change the powered side, because of how young she is going to be there are a few things we have to go over before I an stamp this! I will try to make it quick so you can get her in play but, as a chibi senshi, this means that she should have magic that is typically considered weaker than a normal Senshi magic! In addition to that, chibi magic often regularly backfires on them until they get more experience, so that is something to keep in mind while you are playing!

For her basic attack, as a chibi I think she should only be able to heal extremely minor injuries and relieve a bit of fatigue. The rest of this looks good!

For her super attack, I think it would be fair either for her to relieve a moderate level of fatigue and completely heal minor injuries for one target or use her basic attack and extend it to three people (and maybe say that it can completely heal minor injuries but still only slightly rejuvenate them from fatigue) while keeping the durations the same.

For her eternal magic, I think it would be fair for her to completely heal moderate injuries (such as deep scrapes or bruising, but nothing major/worth a trip to the hospital/life threatening—although it could very slightly begin to heal these injuries, but it wouldn’t be much) for everyone within six feet of her, and restore some fatigue, but as a chibi she should not be healing major injuries. Also, this attack would be powerful enough that it should only have one use per battle, not two!

If you make any changes or have any questions, please quote me and I’ll be back ASAP so we can get her in play!

Kaname Kyoto


Kyuseisha no Hikari

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Dragonslaying Dragon


Kaname Kyoto

Handsome Bibliophile

PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2018 9:13 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Okay, everything editted, like we discussed over DMS ivr adjusted length and effect
PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2018 9:47 am


Kaname Kyoto


Fabulous, thanks so much! Have fun!

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Kyuseisha no Hikari

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Dragonslaying Dragon

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