Hello Stump_Fairy!
Chihaya looks like a very interesting character, I cannot wait to see what you do with her in Destiny City. I do have some things to go over with you so we can get her moving onward and upwards! (As an aside, my heart is broken, how can anyone not love hotdogs! ;w; They're trash, but they're delicious trash? Ah well, c'est la vie!)
For her 'reading' hobby - if she
only reads because there is nothing better to be doing and doesn't actually enjoy it, it's not really a hobby (an activity done in one's leisure time for pleasure), it's more a "time sink" as it reads, not a hobby. If you wanted to reword it as something she does for enjoyment it would be fine!
With 'collecting stuffed animals' I would maybe expand a little bit on this. How large is her collection? How long as she been collecting? Does she have favorite brands or does that matter at all? Are they mostly gifts or does she pick them herself? Are they named? Do they have personalities and backstories/stories to them? Are they just
stuffed animals to her - or so much
more? Which one(s) are her favorite(s)?
Piano is a wonderful instrument! With this one, I would recommend changing this hobby to 'music' and then expanding on the types of music she enjoys and keeping in that she plays piano to please her mother. It's a very solid, interesting character point and says a lot about Chihaya being a 'people pleaser' and a 'mediator' type.
Intelligence is a great virtue to have, especially in someone so young! This looks fine to me, and I can't wait to see how her 'book intelligence' lands her in trouble in Destiny City! It's going to be fantastic.
For 'calm, collected' I think you need to expand on how she manages to stay level-headed in stressful situations and how she became such a steadfast person. Also, moving the 'easily distracted' portion down into flaws would be helpful as you need a second flaw (which I will address in a moment).
In the flaws section you have two flaws written down that when described can be attributed to essentially one thing: apathy. It's a fantastic flaw for Chihaya and I believe that's precisely what you were going for, so I recommend combining your current flaws into one called 'apathetic' and then adding a second flaw based off the way that she is easily distracted/bored.
As a person with albinism, Chihaya would potentially have related medical conditions which you may or may not want to explore - this
is a magical fantasy shop, after all - and that's completely up to whether or not you would find that sort of thing interesting/enjoyable.
For the powered side, she looks really good! Inesite is currently open, challenge is fine, Uniform is fine with some added military accents to make it fit the uniform guidelines a bit more, and I believe the weapon progression should be fine going from a plastic garden trowel --> hoe --> scythe.
I hope that my critique is helpful in completing Chihaya's profile for stamping! The suggestions I made are just that - suggestions - and you do not have to take them; however, the issues I noted
will need to be corrected before she can be stamped properly.
Please let me know if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns and I will do my best to work with you to address them. Feel free to quote me when you're ready and I will come back by!
-Sy