█CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team LMAA █PARTNER(S) ▬ Vance █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is a very talented pianist. Lunia is also very durable in a fight, she can take more hits and will always attempt to get back up. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia has learned to read body language very well. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong. █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed. Having been through so much in her lifetime that could break a human, Lunia has a strong will and can push through many situations/torture that others may not.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. The blades are slightly shorter than in the photo, measuring just over a meter each when in their full form. In the chakram form, they are still large but easy enough to fit in her hands and throw around. She can throw these a maximum of 2 metres, however the further away the less chance she has of getting them back. So Lunia sticks to a 1/1.5 metre range. This range increases as she is able to control them. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat (This blade measures around 4 inches long, it is only used in critical moments and doesn't do that much damage unless used right) █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. These missies do a variety of things and damage, they can push someone back a few yards if she has enough energy to expend on it and they can also be used to cause distractions and therefore bounce off someones aura. If an individual does not have aura, these missiles can do enough damage to cause bruising or a broken bone if hit in the right place, they would struggle to do much cutting damage and are more blunt. For each level, her semblance takes effect quickly with creating forcefields and offensive attacks. She can create one larger forcefield per cooldown, three missiles per cooldown or one larger object per cooldown/two smaller objects per cooldown. If the forcefield isn't destroyed within the hit count and she decides to bring it down, she won't lose as much energy. An example of what she can create would be most things she has seen, early levels could be tables, balls etc. Later stages are more complicated, she could eventually create a scroll, technical objects that require much more concentration and energy. For easier objects the creation time is very quick, if it is larger and requires more thought (later levels) the creation time is 1 full post to take full effect in the second. Her forcefield and missiles can be created immediately at all levels. The missiles created do strong damage, she can make them sharper to cut through things or to explode with aura on impact, dealing decent damage, especially at later levels. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. The cooldown is 5 posts. The forcefield can stretch to 5 feet. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. The forcefield can stretch to 10 feet. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. The forcefiels can stretch to 15 feet. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. The cooldown for the abilities in this level is 5 posts. The forcefields can stretch to 20 feet. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2018 4:39 pm
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Lunia Alexandria Yatomura "I'll make you all proud of me one day.."
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❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖ So, Close quarters combat is within 300 ft. You are going to want to change that to either Melee combat or hand to hand combat. ❖ So I did not realize how old this profile was until just now. You will need to update the personality section to meet the current requirements.
█CURRENT TEAM ▬ █PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is very bright, her intelligence gets her far. She is also very talented at the piano, and enjoys taking time out to play this in her spare time. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia is able to analyse her opponents quicker than most, pinpointing weaknesses to take advantage of. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her █PERSONALITY TRAITS █ ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is very close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements. █ ▬ █ ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █ ▬ Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
█CURRENT TEAM ▬ █PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is very bright, her intelligence gets her far. She is also very talented at the piano, and enjoys taking time out to play this in her spare time. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia is able to analyse her opponents quicker than most, pinpointing weaknesses to take advantage of. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
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█CURRENT TEAM ▬ █PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is very bright, her intelligence gets her far. She is also very talented at the piano, and enjoys taking time out to play this in her spare time. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia has learned to read body language very well. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
█CURRENT TEAM ▬ █PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is very bright, her intelligence gets her far. She is also very talented at the piano, and enjoys taking time out to play this in her spare time. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia has learned to read body language very well. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Youroka Kage
Xcon299
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Eddy_Soul5
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Core:
1. May want to update partners/team. Also update crew quotes.
Archetype:
2. You have intelligence twice; in primary and in other talents. You only need one since they do not stack, so you could have something else there. 3. You have 2 other skills, so you can have one more if you'd like.
Inventory:
4. So just to clarify for Keaton, given weapon images, should it just be referenced to her body for the lengths of them? 5. Also what is the length of close combat (for the blade that comes out)?
Semblance:
6. Semblance needs cooldowns.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team LMAA █PARTNER(S) ▬ Vance █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is a very talented pianist. Lunia is also very durable in a fight, she can take more hits and will always attempt to get back up. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia has learned to read body language very well. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong. █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed. Having been through so much in her lifetime that could break a human, Lunia has a strong will and can push through many situations/torture that others may not.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. The blades are slightly shorter than in the photo, measuring just over a meter each when in their full form. In the chakram form, they are still large but easy enough to fit in her hands and throw around. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat (This blade measures around 4 inches long, it is only used in critical moments and doesn't do that much damage unless used right) █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. These missies do a variety of things and damage, they can push someone back a few yards if she has enough energy to expend on it and they can also be used to cause distractions and therefore bounce off someones aura. If an individual does not have aura, these missiles can do enough damage to cause bruising or a broken bone if hit in the right place, they would struggle to do much cutting damage and are more blunt. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. The cooldown is 5 posts. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. The cooldown for the abilities in this level is 5 posts. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Aevil Silvertongue
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Ghost254
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Semblance:
1. How long can she use the semblance (is it certain amount of posts or certain amount of "creations" (missile, forcefield, etc)? 2. Need a radius for the forcefield for levels 0,2,3 and how many/what type of hits it can take? Level 2 is a good baseline but just need to see how much it would be for other levels Ex: It can takes 1 powerful hits at level 0, 2 at level 1, 4 at level 2, and 8 at level 3. Weaker hits take twice as much. Ex: Radius of forcefield at level 0 is 5 feet, 10 feet at level 1, 15 at level 2, 20 at level 3. 3. As for the mechanical items she can make, can you give like an example or two of what they would be? Just to have as reference for size and complexity of it. 4. Also for the stuff she makes; is it instant or takes a post to make?
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team LMAA █PARTNER(S) ▬ Vance █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is a very talented pianist. Lunia is also very durable in a fight, she can take more hits and will always attempt to get back up. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia has learned to read body language very well. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong. █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed. Having been through so much in her lifetime that could break a human, Lunia has a strong will and can push through many situations/torture that others may not.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. The blades are slightly shorter than in the photo, measuring just over a meter each when in their full form. In the chakram form, they are still large but easy enough to fit in her hands and throw around. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat (This blade measures around 4 inches long, it is only used in critical moments and doesn't do that much damage unless used right) █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. These missies do a variety of things and damage, they can push someone back a few yards if she has enough energy to expend on it and they can also be used to cause distractions and therefore bounce off someones aura. If an individual does not have aura, these missiles can do enough damage to cause bruising or a broken bone if hit in the right place, they would struggle to do much cutting damage and are more blunt. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. The cooldown is 5 posts. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. The cooldown for the abilities in this level is 5 posts. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
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As mentioned on Gaia, With Ghost departure, I have been assigned your profile so I will be going over it today so we can get this done easily and quickly.
-For weapon, I need an effective range for your weapon. You have the measurements but i need effective range in regards to when you are using the range mode. How far distance can you hit a person.
Semblance: The stuff requested from Ghost judgement is still needing to be added. So I shall add it below.
1. How long can she use the semblance (is it certain amount of posts or certain amount of "creations" (missile, forcefield, etc)? 2. Need a radius for the forcefield for levels 0,2,3 and how many/what type of hits it can take? Level 2 is a good baseline but just need to see how much it would be for other levels Ex: It can takes 1 powerful hits at level 0, 2 at level 1, 4 at level 2, and 8 at level 3. Weaker hits take twice as much. Ex: Radius of forcefield at level 0 is 5 feet, 10 feet at level 1, 15 at level 2, 20 at level 3. 3. As for the mechanical items she can make, can you give like an example or two of what they would be? Just to have as reference for size and complexity of it. 4. Also for the stuff she makes; is it instant or takes a post to make?
-Also need for the items you create such as the missiles, how much damage the missiles can do.
█CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team LMAA █PARTNER(S) ▬ Vance █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Lulu, Lu █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5ft 2. █WEIGHT ▬ 112lbs, Petite
█HAIR ▬ Azure █CLOTHING ▬ A Outfit █ACCESSORIES ▬ A heart necklace with a picture of her brother in it - Keaton █EYES ▬ Azure Blue ITS GREEN █BUILD ▬ Petite, however isn't as weak as she looks. █TATTOOS ▬ N/A █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ With her intelligence, Lunia is a quick thinker and can use this to gain advantages in combat, quick at coming up with solutions. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Lunia is athletic, she can maintain energy for a longer period of time. █Other Talents ▬ Lunia is a very talented pianist. Lunia is also very durable in a fight, she can take more hits and will always attempt to get back up. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Due to her upbringing and having dishonest, disloyal people around her, Lunia has learned to read body language very well. █Weakest Skill ▬ Lunia isn’t physically very strong. █Other Skills ▬ Close quarters combat, Lunia is also no stranger to fighting without a weapon, and is trained to do so. Lunia is also quite flexible, and can perform basic flips when needed. Having been through so much in her lifetime that could break a human, Lunia has a strong will and can push through many situations/torture that others may not.
█LIKES █ ▬ Piano █ ▬ Sweet things █ ▬ People who don't judge her on her families name █ ▬ Dogs, especially short one's █ ▬ Learning new things █DISLIKES █ ▬ Liars █ ▬ Fish █ ▬ Being weaponless █ ▬ Pitch black █ ▬ People using her
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Lunia always tries her hardest at whatever she can, she is a strikingly determined young girl who just wants to make her family proud. She is close with most of her siblings, and is almost envious of all their achievements for she was always that bit behind them throughout childhood. Lunia is a hard worker, a good team player and strives to be a good leader in the footsteps of her brother. █Vernacular ▬ Lunia is a happy, positive girl who is very honest and loyal to those she trusts. She loves getting to know people, yet doesn't always share much about her life because she doesn't exactly have a lot of positive things to say. █Positive Traits ▬ Lunia is a loyal, honest and trustworthy character. She always works hard to make those around her happy and can almost forget about her own safety, putting the lives of her friends first. █Negative Traits ▬ Lunia can be too trusting of others, she also becomes quite nervous if someone compliments her, and can make some situations more awkward than they need to be. Lunia never sleeps a full night, her brother is always in her thought's, especially at night, because of this she can become quite exhausted throughout the day - but not always.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The Yatomura family, made up of some of the wealthiest, strongest, most respected yet feared fighters and known for their striking blue hair. The family made its name many moons ago by helping to both protect and provide for the people of the world, they were a force to turn to in a time of need. However, with both fame and money comes lies and deceit. The family has become broken in recent years, and civil war between sides of the family is still ongoing, with one half becoming power hungry, and the other seeking peace.
18 years ago, when Lunia Yatomura was born into the name, she had no idea what she was being born into. Harsh training routines, exhausting family feuds and never really sleeping a full night. Lunia was never quite as strong as her siblings, she struggled with her endless routine and never understood why her family were fighting with others of her name. She avoided the fame and limelight that she was offered.
At the age of 14, her older brother Keaton who attended beacon was accompanying her on a walk in which they were ambushed. Lunia froze, not knowing what to do. It was that day her life changed forever. Keaton always protected Lunia, and on that night he lost his life doing just that. Lunia was distraught, she was useless and because of that her best friend lost his life.
Ever since, Lunia vowed she would never be useless again. She always tries her hardest to learn and fights with all she's got. Her brother dreamed of becoming a hunter, and she has decided to follow his dream, heading for Beacon.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Keaton █ ▬ Although a strange name to give to a weapon, Lunia decided to call it after her brother. It gives her comfort knowing even in his death he still protects her through them. Both blades reach an impressive length (see image) and can be used in a variety of ways due to them being double edged. The blades can be altered into two chakrams, attached to each other by some rope to begin with until Lunia unlocks her semblance in which she can release this rope and have some form of control over their movements. The blades are slightly shorter than in the photo, measuring just over a meter each when in their full form. In the chakram form, they are still large but easy enough to fit in her hands and throw around. She can throw these a maximum of 2 metres, however the further away the less chance she has of getting them back. So Lunia sticks to a 1/1.5 metre range. This range increases as she is able to control them. █ ▬ Melee Form █ ▬ Ranged Form █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ █ ▬
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Close Combat (This blade measures around 4 inches long, it is only used in critical moments and doesn't do that much damage unless used right) █ ▬ █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Lunia always carries a packet of sweets with her, extra sugar boost if needed. █ ▬ █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Energy Release █AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Lunia's semblance is called 'Energy release'. It is the ability to convert aura into different energy form's - such as a forcefield or missiles. These missies do a variety of things and damage, they can push someone back a few yards if she has enough energy to expend on it and they can also be used to cause distractions and therefore bounce off someones aura. If an individual does not have aura, these missiles can do enough damage to cause bruising or a broken bone if hit in the right place, they would struggle to do much cutting damage and are more blunt. For each level, her semblance takes effect quickly with creating forcefields and offensive attacks. She can create one larger forcefield per cooldown, three missiles per cooldown or one larger object per cooldown/two smaller objects per cooldown. If the forcefield isn't destroyed within the hit count and she decides to bring it down, she won't lose as much energy. An example of what she can create would be most things she has seen, early levels could be tables, balls etc. Later stages are more complicated, she could eventually create a scroll, technical objects that require much more concentration and energy. For easier objects the creation time is very quick, if it is larger and requires more thought (later levels) the creation time is 1 full post to take full effect in the second. Her forcefield and missiles can be created immediately at all levels. The missiles created do strong damage, she can make them sharper to cut through things or to explode with aura on impact, dealing decent damage, especially at later levels. █ ▬ Level 0 - Semblance is relatively new, still finding new things it can do and how this can aid Lunia in a fight. Missiles, small weaker forcefields and other simple abilities are found throughout her time at beacon. The cooldown is 5 posts. The forcefield can stretch to 5 feet. █ ▬ Level 1 - Lunias forcefields are slightly bigger, however are twice as dense, allowing them to take two hits before failure. Due to her being able to create more dense items, she is able to create stronger missiles that can explode on impact. Lunia's missiles, simple items and force fields have an initial zone of 20ft, she can only create items within this zone. However, if it has a force, from any source, to propel it. it can achieve ranges of 60ft before dispersal happens. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. The forcefield can stretch to 10 feet. █ ▬ Level 2- Lunia can create mechanical items and has more control over her weapons with the missiles she uses. Lunia can apply her auras abilities to create a micro rocket to propel her attacks, increasing their speed and in turn the impact. However, if the attack was to miss, this would leave her open and susceptible to an attack. The exemption to this is when the micro rockets are applied to her ranged chakram. This increases there max range to sixty feet 'thrown' and allows for fine control mid flight. If they leave this 60 foot range she loses control and they continue on the path they where set before. The cooldown for this is 5 posts. The forcefiels can stretch to 15 feet. █ ▬ Level 3 - Lunia can create complex mechanical items using her semblance along with creating very dense forcefields. All previous level abilities are still available, however much stronger and dense. The cooldown for the abilities in this level is 5 posts. The forcefields can stretch to 20 feet. █DRAWBACKS ▬ Lunia is finding this semblance hard to master, as it is very taxing on the body. There are many limits to this semblance, Lunia must be quick thinking with it, and make sure she doesn't waste it's use as it uses up a lot of her aura. This semblance will become easier to use as she grows in ability and experience. She can't form items around people to block airflow, and can't form items on top of anything. Due to things giving off aura, she cannot spawn any complex items within 2 feet of someone.
