I like it. It looks really impressive are u gonna add dialogue?
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Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 8:18 pm
I don't know what to think... the main character is very distracting, he looks ape-like with no nose. I pay more attention to him and dirt on his feet than what is really going on. Once the action picks up we'll probably see the main character's uniqueness unfurl.
Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:11 pm
LadyLola
I like it. It looks really impressive are u gonna add dialogue?
Yeah, most of the pages have dialogue in them, except the last two, since they're mostly action. Thanks for reading biggrin
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Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:13 pm
drakkenmuerte
I don't know what to think... the main character is very distracting, he looks ape-like with no nose. I pay more attention to him and dirt on his feet than what is really going on. Once the action picks up we'll probably see the main character's uniqueness unfurl.
Indeed, and not only the main character, but many others will be developed as well throughout the course of the story.
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