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Name: Milo Higgins

Nickname: Milo

Age: 17

Birthday: September 5, 2000

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Sapphire

Blood Type: B-

Fav. Food: Crunchy things

Hated Food: Greasy things

School: Azure Valley Academy

Hobbies:

Sailing - Milo enjoys being on the water, mostly in small sailboats, the feel of the waves and wind, as he pushes the little craft as fast as it can go. He especially enjoys entering into regattas, and is fairly good at it. He'll also do it just to have fun and waste time, when the opportunity strikes of course.

Fencing - The art of poking your opponent with a flexible metal stick, while not being poked yourself. While posturing and dancing about. What's not to like? He participates in competitions, and practices regularly

Painting - Oils, watercolors, sometimes simple ink. Sometimes makeup on himself or others. He likes to paint detailed, complex things, and show it off. He'll occasionally go out to a park or the like to paint what he sees (and be seen painting).


Virtues:

Think nothing of it - Milo is rather free with money. He's not poor. He does not care at all about the little things, and will buy things for people without much consideration. He's not stupid, he won't give away money continuously, but buying things for his friends (especially those who are more...monetarily challenged) is something he'll do easily and freely.

Truth in All Things - He will not lie. That could be bad but for the most part it means that he is trustworthy. There is sense in not telling everything, of course, so he's not going to say things that he thinks would be bad to say, but if he needs to be deceptive, it will only ever be by limiting what he says, never making things up.

Preparation is Key - Milo believes everything should be done right. And to do it right, it must be carefully planned and prepared. Everything he does is done with careful precision (as much as is possible), and he will never (willingly) leave something shoddily done, or incomplete.

Flaws:

I make this look GOOD - He's pretty. He knows it. And he makes sure everyone else knows it, too. Time is spent to make sure everything looks great if he's involved...if it doesn't look great, he's gonna make a stink, and probably delay whatever's going on so he can fix whatever is making him not look good.

This is not my problem! - It's not that he lacks empathy, it's more that he lacks the desire to fix what ails the world. Something that doesn't affect him directly isn't likelty to matter too terribly much in his mind.

How dare you? - Anything seen as a slight, insult, or otherwise acted against him is quite likely to set Milo off--he does not have a thick skin, and will react harshly quickly...and is not at all afraid to tell someone off, call people out on their s**t (especially if that s**t offends him), and generally be a harsh little jerk back at anyone he perceives as 'having it coming'.




PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Maroon

Hair: Maroon, long with a ponytail and bangs, much longer in the sides

Face: Round, soft, and with freckles. Looks girly or childish depending on presentation

Clothes: School uniform

Height: 5'6"

Hi, Tolin!

Milo's civilian profile looks good, but I have a few crits for his powered side.

Primarily, right now, there isn't really a connection between his sphere and his attacks. Although seamounts are habitats for fish, having only the fish and nothing of the mountains themselves isn't quite going to work, sorry! Including an illusion of standing on a seamount or something similar would make it more in line, but there does need to be a fairly direct connection between sphere and attacks!

Also, his Eternal attack is a bit too powerful right now -- primarily my concern is about the duration, since Dagon could do a lot of damage to a single opponent by trapping them in with him for 45 seconds (up to rendering them unconscious, since some people will pass out after as little as 30 seconds without air) and most battles are one-on-one. Taking the duration down to 35 seconds would ease my concerns, though. Also, how large is the bubble, as a general question?

Thanks for your patience in waiting for this crit! Quote me and I'll be back~

The Eternal looks good in terms of duration and effects, but I do feel all three could use more seamount-y nods They should be primarily themed around the sphere, and right now the sphere feels a little secondary to the attacks. You might also want to consider a different sphere that would allow you to keep the attacks you have! For instance, perhaps a specific type of fish? I could also bounce some other ideas as well!

While seamounts are absolutely thriving underwater ecosystems, please keep in mind that when reading a Senshi's attacks, it should be fairly immediately clear what their sphere is, or one should be able to make a reasonable guess. These attacks have very little to do with seamounts themselves (the actual sphere) and are primarily focused on secondary things around them, and therefore read more as magic for something like a Senshi of Fish, or Schooling, or something similar to that.

Also, on further read of the Eternal attack, I do have to ask for clarification on what you mean by Dagon being "free to pummel" his enemies until they escape. Are they in some way bound, or is it just assumed they will have difficulty defending themselves because they are underwater/unable to breathe? Because genuinely rendering an enemy defenseless (and overall the attack does lean fairly close to that, with everything involved in it) will call for a much shorter duration, of maximum 15 seconds.

Please let me know if you need any further clarification!

Awesome! Then I'm happy to drop a trial stamp on the civilian~



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