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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2017 5:29 pm
Fuuinjutsu:
Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Armor elements may only be switched every three posts and only elemental attacks matching the current armor's element (up to A-rank) may be absorbed. Any strength gained in the technique is reset upon an element switch. Strengthening means that techniques can be absorbed faster simply.
Issai Soshi Yoroi - All Element Armor [rank-S] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - This technique is done the same way as Soshi Yoroi. Instead of being only one element at a time, Issai Soshi Yoroi is made of all of Sosei's chakra elements all at one time. An attack of any of these elements is absorbed into the armor, making it stronger in defense of that element. Sosei rarely uses this technique because of the high amount of chakra needed to maintain it. This technique is still subject to Soshi Yoroi's limitations.
Tensuu Taku Eizou - Marks of House Construction [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Until Released - This seal allows Sosei to create whatever kind of house he wants, but the house can only be fifty feet long, fifty feet wide, and one story high. It can be made out of anything.
Barike-Do Fuuin - Barricade Seal [rank-B] [type-defensive/supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will slam his hands into the ground. After doing so, a wall made of whatever is underneath him will rise from the ground twenty feet high and twenty feet long. It will have the same strength as reinforced concrete.
Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires.
Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Since these Kekkei Genkai are not true to Sosei, they will be weaker than the original Kekkei Genkai, and weaker again if more than one is used. The stronger the individual who's blood is used, the stronger and more potential for increasing strength the stolen Kekkei Genkai has. Currently used:
Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold.
Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, several rings of seals will appear on the ground with each ring functioning as an alarm point. This means that if something triggers/trips any alarm point, Sosei will know which ring was tripped/set off, though not which exact part of the ring was set off (meaning he will know how close the individual is, but not which direction). Rings of detection may range from a single to six at whatever intervals Sosei determines, with the total radius covered not exceeding one-hundred and fifty yards. These rings work off of any motion, no matter how slight,. or direct touch with the seal. Motion works not just with things moving around the seal, but also the seal itself moving.
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 7:41 pm
Fuuinjutsu
Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Minor scraps and small cuts are healed within a matter of seconds (one post); significant injuries/deep lacerations are healed in a few minutes (2-4 posts); major damage is healed within thirty minutes (5-8 posts); missing body parts are regenerated within an hour to four hours depending on how much of the limb/part was lost (10-20 posts).
Gaibu Rokku (Foreign Lock) [rank-A] [type-supplementary/defense] Designed with the pure purpose of detecting and isolating foreign entities in all forms within and/or on the target's body to a specific sector of the target's body. Generally this location will be wherever the seal is placed unless the jutsu is altered in formula to designate another location on the target's body.
Chi no Suwappu (Blood Swap) [rank-S] [type-supplementary] This technique allows the blood of the target to be recoded to match the blood of another individual so long as they are human in nature. This cannot grant kekkei genkai ability or uses, however the DNA coding will be the same. Thus, any techniques that affect the blood of the target will no longer work. If the recoded blood has natural resistances, the same benefit will be given to the target.
Inbijiburu Inku (Invisible Ink) [rank-B] [type=supplementary] Used in conjunction with any other Fuuinjutsu, this technique makes any seals placed invisible upon conception. This fuuin formula must be added on top of any other formula or it will not have any effect. As the ink is invisible from the start, normal ways of detection will not work as this technique hides everything from a chakra signature to the actual kanji itself. Techniques covered by this may still be barely sensed by S-ranked sensory techniques and fully seen by SS-ranked sensory techniques.
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2017 6:17 am
Quote: Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Limitations would have to be added to prevent immunity to every element at all times (I assume S+ attacks would be unaffected by the armor, but even then...). Also, "adding to its strength" is open to interpretation, so you should probably be more clear on that. And I only asked because the following technique only uses your character's chakra elements. Does this one only defend against his chakra elements too? Or all? Quote: Issai Soshi Yoroi - All Element Armor [rank-S] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - This technique is done the same way as Soshi Yoroi. Instead of being only one element at a time, Issai Soshi Yoroi is made of all of Sosei's chakra elements all at one time. An attack of any of these elements is absorbed into the armor, making it stronger in defense of that element. Sosei rarely uses this technique because of the high amount of chakra needed to maintain it. Basically the same thing. Although if this one is limited to only your chakra elements and the first one isn't, the limitations can be less severe. But "making it stronger" still needs to be elaborated. Quote: Tensuu Taku Eizou - Marks of House Construction [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Until Released - This seal allows Sosei to create whatever kind of house he wants, but the house can only be fifty feet long, fifty feet wide, and one story high. It can be made out of anything. Accepted, although you can't have your own housing thread unless you pay for it xD See The Marketplace for details Quote: Barike-Do Fuuin - Barricade Seal [rank-B] [type-defensive/supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will slam his hands into the ground. After doing so, a wall made of whatever is underneath him will rise from the ground twenty feet high and twenty feet long. It will have the same strength as reinforced concrete. Wouldn't it be as strong as whatever material you use it on? Although I'd factor in the technique's rank too Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. Quote: Shouchou Chiyu - Symbol of Healing [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Five Minutes - This seal will heal all wounds. The time it take to heal is based on how strong the attack was. E-Rank: Ten seconds, D-Rank: Fifteen seconds, C-Rank: Twenty seconds, B-Rank: Thirty seconds, A-Rank: One minute, S-Rank: Four Minutes. The type of wound would make more sense than the rank of the technique that caused it. But just to let you know, to use this technique, your character would have to have medical ninjutsu as one of their chakra elements. All medical-based techniques are subject to that. Quote: Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold and will increase its potency by three fold. Hmm, chakra recovery is kind of an unknown. So multiplying an unknown by seven is still unknown. Lol. Although the idea is fine And I don't really know what you mean by the potency of chakra, tbh. Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Quote: Fuuin Kouyou - Seal of the Elements [rank-S] [type-attack] - Permenant - By combining his knowledge of the elements, fuuinjutsu, and the aid of the elders of his family, Sosei created a fuuinjutsu that allows the bearer of this seal to use all natural elemental chakras. This basically breaks a guild system (the fact that we limit chakra elements, and more so than we have in the past), so I'm not okay with it. But you can talk to Colby about it. Athough if you do, please tell him that if it's allowed, it should only apply to the five main elements, not medical ninjutsu, sensory, etc. Lol Quote: Fuuin Hitan - Seal of Sorrow [rank-SS] [type-attack] - Once this seal is activated, it cannot be reversed until the attack is completed. In order to activate this seal, Sosei has to perform a ten second long string of handseals. If interrupted, he can pick back up at where he was once more, but if interrupted once more, he must start over. Once activated, Sosei'sbody will turn dark red and wings of chakra will form on his back. He will then fly high into the air and begin to gather chakra while chakra masses around him to protect him. As he gathers chakra, it will be added into the protective layer around him. After two minutes of charging, Sosei will point his head at the ground and fly at top speed into the ground and release all built up chakra in a single, massive explosion. This explosion will turn a one mile wide radius into a crater and burn everything in one hundred yards beyond that. After using this technique, Sosei will be unconcious for up to three days and need another two days before he can even move. After another three days, he will be back to normal. Hmm, well, for starters, would the defensive chakra cloak be SS-Ranked in strength? The answer should be no, tbh. Lol. Incorporating defense and offense into a single technique should decrease the strength of both. Basically...if someone had an SS Rank defense technique and a separate SS Rank attack...they should both be far superior to this. But either way, could it be destroyed with a strong enough attack? Or would it remain no matter what...while strong enough attacks would just slip through? Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Quote: Gaibu Rokku (Foreign Lock) [rank-A] [type-supplementary/defense] Designed with the pure purpose of detecting and isolating foreign entities in all forms within and/or on the target's body to a specific sector of the target's body. Generally, this location will be wherever the seal is placed unless the jutsu is altered in formula to designate another location on the target's body. Permanent seal? And also, if you can "designate another location," could you theoretically just designate the entire body? Quote: Chi no Suwappu (Blood Swap) [rank-S] [type-supplementary] This technique allows the blood of the target to be recoded to match the blood of another individual so long as they are human in nature. This cannot grant kekkei genkai ability or uses, however the DNA coding will be the same. Thus, any techniques that affect the blood of the target will no longer work. If the recoded blood has natural resistances, the same benefit will be given to the target. I assume you'd have to have access to the target's blood. Also, could this be used to, for instance, get around Kakashi's sharingan drawbacks (quickly drains him of chakra since he's not Uchiha)? Or...your fuuinjutsu that "steals" KG; would this allow you to negate the drawbacks I mentioned? Quote: Inbijiburu Inku (Invisible Ink) [rank-B] [type=supplementary] Used in conjunction with any other Fuuinjutsu, this technique makes any seals placed invisible upon conception. This fuuin formula must be added on top of any other formula or it will not have any effect. As the ink is invisible from the start, normal ways of detection will not work as this technique hides everything from a chakra signature to the actual kanji itself. Would that include S and SS-Ranked sensory techniques? (I don't think there are any SS Ranks, but still lol)
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2017 11:17 am
Yuumei Kagemusha Quote: Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Limitations would have to be added to prevent immunity to every element at all times (I assume S+ attacks would be unaffected by the armor, but even then...). Also, "adding to its strength" is open to interpretation, so you should probably be more clear on that. And I only asked because the following technique only uses your character's chakra elements. Does this one only defend against his chakra elements too? Or all? This technique states that it uses one element at a time, and has to be switched between chakra natures. It does not hold all of them at once. Naturally, attacks that are equal to or surpass it in rank are effective. I don't see where adding to its strength is ambiguous? Simply means it makes the armor stronger.
Quote: Issai Soshi Yoroi - All Element Armor [rank-S] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - This technique is done the same way as Soshi Yoroi. Instead of being only one element at a time, Issai Soshi Yoroi is made of all of Sosei's chakra elements all at one time. An attack of any of these elements is absorbed into the armor, making it stronger in defense of that element. Sosei rarely uses this technique because of the high amount of chakra needed to maintain it. Basically the same thing. Although if this one is limited to only your chakra elements and the first one isn't, the limitations can be less severe. But "making it stronger" still needs to be elaborated. It can only be used for whatever chakra elements the character currently has. Same response to the "make it stronger" thing.
Quote: Tensuu Taku Eizou - Marks of House Construction [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Until Released - This seal allows Sosei to create whatever kind of house he wants, but the house can only be fifty feet long, fifty feet wide, and one story high. It can be made out of anything. Accepted, although you can't have your own housing thread unless you pay for it xD See The Marketplace for details Quote: Barike-Do Fuuin - Barricade Seal [rank-B] [type-defensive/supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will slam his hands into the ground. After doing so, a wall made of whatever is underneath him will rise from the ground twenty feet high and twenty feet long. It will have the same strength as reinforced concrete. Wouldn't it be as strong as whatever material you use it on? Although I'd factor in the technique's rank too Yes, but the strength was given as a minimum kind of deal as the chakra and seal would reinforced weaker materials to that level.
Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? To a degree, but not as limiting. Remember, with Fuuinjutsu the formula is essentially prewritten and only needs chakra to execute. It's not something that has to be continuously focused on and maintained. The seal works is predetermined formula, drawing the chakra it needs from the user, and done.
Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. That is generally the drawback that the stolen KG isn't as strong as the one it was stolen from. Who it's taken from does affect it's strengths and it can still be trained, but never up to the maximum level. I've used it with Uchiha and set it where I never could go past three tome Sharingan.
Quote: Shouchou Chiyu - Symbol of Healing [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Five Minutes - This seal will heal all wounds. The time it take to heal is based on how strong the attack was. E-Rank: Ten seconds, D-Rank: Fifteen seconds, C-Rank: Twenty seconds, B-Rank: Thirty seconds, A-Rank: One minute, S-Rank: Four Minutes. The type of wound would make more sense than the rank of the technique that caused it. But just to let you know, to use this technique, your character would have to have medical ninjutsu as one of their chakra elements. All medical-based techniques are subject to that. I used ranks as a bit of a catch all, rather than trying to list out every type of wound. It's just a generic guideline. Also, as for the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing, I refer to my statement earlier a bout what Fuuinjutsu is. dFormulas that carry instructions and only need power. Make the formula right and it can do what it's told to do.
Quote: Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold and will increase its potency by three fold. Hmm, chakra recovery is kind of an unknown. So multiplying an unknown by seven is still unknown. Lol. Although the idea is fine And I don't really know what you mean by the potency of chakra, tbh. Potency would be.....I don't know how to simplify potency. Means that the chakra itself is more potent, ideally meaning that less chakra would be needed for the same technique used without this seal. As for chakra recovery being an unknown, seeing as it regenerates over time like stamina this would work just like a stamina recovery but for chakra.
Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Quote: Fuuin Kouyou - Seal of the Elements [rank-S] [type-attack] - Permenant - By combining his knowledge of the elements, fuuinjutsu, and the aid of the elders of his family, Sosei created a fuuinjutsu that allows the bearer of this seal to use all natural elemental chakras. This basically breaks a guild system (the fact that we limit chakra elements, and more so than we have in the past), so I'm not okay with it. But you can talk to Colby about it. Athough if you do, please tell him that if it's allowed, it should only apply to the five main elements, not medical ninjutsu, sensory, etc. Lol We can just remove this one honestly. It was made to go with the all elemental armor but I've never used it in the past. I can live without this.
Quote: Fuuin Hitan - Seal of Sorrow [rank-SS] [type-attack] - Once this seal is activated, it cannot be reversed until the attack is completed. In order to activate this seal, Sosei has to perform a ten second long string of handseals. If interrupted, he can pick back up at where he was once more, but if interrupted once more, he must start over. Once activated, Sosei'sbody will turn dark red and wings of chakra will form on his back. He will then fly high into the air and begin to gather chakra while chakra masses around him to protect him. As he gathers chakra, it will be added into the protective layer around him. After two minutes of charging, Sosei will point his head at the ground and fly at top speed into the ground and release all built up chakra in a single, massive explosion. This explosion will turn a one mile wide radius into a crater and burn everything in one hundred yards beyond that. After using this technique, Sosei will be unconcious for up to three days and need another two days before he can even move. After another three days, he will be back to normal. Hmm, well, for starters, would the defensive chakra cloak be SS-Ranked in strength? The answer should be no, tbh. Lol. Incorporating defense and offense into a single technique should decrease the strength of both. Basically...if someone had an SS Rank defense technique and a separate SS Rank attack...they should both be far superior to this. But either way, could it be destroyed with a strong enough attack? Or would it remain no matter what...while strong enough attacks would just slip through? This technique can be discarded as well. This is another old one that I think I can make a better one of. Not the same attack, but I can probably spend the points in a better fashion.
Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Yes. This seal has to be preexisting to make the genetic map copy of the target's DNA, otherwise the map is incomplete. It was intended to be a technique that could regrow a lost limb or appendage, though this would take a considerable amount of time obviously.
Quote: Gaibu Rokku (Foreign Lock) [rank-A] [type-supplementary/defense] Designed with the pure purpose of detecting and isolating foreign entities in all forms within and/or on the target's body to a specific sector of the target's body. Generally, this location will be wherever the seal is placed unless the jutsu is altered in formula to designate another location on the target's body. Permanent seal? And also, if you can "designate another location," could you theoretically just designate the entire body? It would be and yes you could.
Quote: Chi no Suwappu (Blood Swap) [rank-S] [type-supplementary] This technique allows the blood of the target to be recoded to match the blood of another individual so long as they are human in nature. This cannot grant kekkei genkai ability or uses, however the DNA coding will be the same. Thus, any techniques that affect the blood of the target will no longer work. If the recoded blood has natural resistances, the same benefit will be given to the target. I assume you'd have to have access to the target's blood. Also, could this be used to, for instance, get around Kakashi's sharingan drawbacks (quickly drains him of chakra since he's not Uchiha)? Or...your fuuinjutsu that "steals" KG; would this allow you to negate the drawbacks I mentioned? I would say it would not do anything for a Kekkei Genkai as I stated in the technique that it cannot grant kekkei abilities or uses. So using your example, it would not allow the full use of a KG, however with your Kakashi example, I think it would negate that sort of drawback.
Quote: Inbijiburu Inku (Invisible Ink) [rank-B] [type=supplementary] Used in conjunction with any other Fuuinjutsu, this technique makes any seals placed invisible upon conception. This fuuin formula must be added on top of any other formula or it will not have any effect. As the ink is invisible from the start, normal ways of detection will not work as this technique hides everything from a chakra signature to the actual kanji itself. Would that include S and SS-Ranked sensory techniques? (I don't think there are any SS Ranks, but still lol) No. S and above would still be capable of detection. S would be able to minorly detect the traces and SS would have probably full detection.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 1:43 am
Quote: Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Limitations would have to be added to prevent immunity to every element at all times (I assume S+ attacks would be unaffected by the armor, but even then...). Also, "adding to its strength" is open to interpretation, so you should probably be more clear on that. And I only asked because the following technique only uses your character's chakra elements. Does this one only defend against his chakra elements too? Or all? This technique states that it uses one element at a time, and has to be switched between chakra natures. It does not hold all of them at once. Naturally, attacks that are equal to or surpass it in rank are effective. I don't see where adding to its strength is ambiguous? Simply means it makes the armor stronger.
One element at a time, yes. But there's nothing stopping you from switching that element as many times as you want, even in the same post. I would limit it to one change every two or three posts. And it's ambiguous because there's no indication of how much stronger it would get. Does absorbing one fire attack mean it can now defend against S-Ranked fire attacks? Or, since you just said equal rank (A Rank) would still be effective, does it mean that after absorbing a fire attack, A Ranks would now be ineffective? In any case, I think strengthening should reset when the chakra element is switched. Quote: Issai Soshi Yoroi - All Element Armor [rank-S] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - This technique is done the same way as Soshi Yoroi. Instead of being only one element at a time, Issai Soshi Yoroi is made of all of Sosei's chakra elements all at one time. An attack of any of these elements is absorbed into the armor, making it stronger in defense of that element. Sosei rarely uses this technique because of the high amount of chakra needed to maintain it. Basically the same thing. Although if this one is limited to only your chakra elements and the first one isn't, the limitations can be less severe. But "making it stronger" still needs to be elaborated. It can only be used for whatever chakra elements the character currently has. Same response to the "make it stronger" thing.
Forget about the limitation for this one, it's fine how it is. But see the first technique about strengthening. Quote: Barike-Do Fuuin - Barricade Seal [rank-B] [type-defensive/supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will slam his hands into the ground. After doing so, a wall made of whatever is underneath him will rise from the ground twenty feet high and twenty feet long. It will have the same strength as reinforced concrete. Wouldn't it be as strong as whatever material you use it on? Although I'd factor in the technique's rank too Yes, but the strength was given as a minimum kind of deal as the chakra and seal would reinforced weaker materials to that level.
Accepted. Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? To a degree, but not as limiting. Remember, with Fuuinjutsu the formula is essentially prewritten and only needs chakra to execute. It's not something that has to be continuously focused on and maintained. The seal works is predetermined formula, drawing the chakra it needs from the user, and done.
I mean, as long it requires constant contact to use, then it's fine. Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. That is generally the drawback that the stolen KG isn't as strong as the one it was stolen from. Who it's taken from does affect it's strengths and it can still be trained, but never up to the maximum level. I've used it with Uchiha and set it where I never could go past three tome Sharingan.
The target's strength should affect it. If you're using it on an Uchiha with an unawakened sharingan, you shouldn't get an awakened one. Training to improve a KG is fine though. And obviously each KG's limit should be approved whenever you get a new one. Oh...and switching KGs should be limited as well, so switching between them doesn't happen every ten seconds. Quote: Shouchou Chiyu - Symbol of Healing [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Five Minutes - This seal will heal all wounds. The time it take to heal is based on how strong the attack was. E-Rank: Ten seconds, D-Rank: Fifteen seconds, C-Rank: Twenty seconds, B-Rank: Thirty seconds, A-Rank: One minute, S-Rank: Four Minutes. The type of wound would make more sense than the rank of the technique that caused it. But just to let you know, to use this technique, your character would have to have medical ninjutsu as one of their chakra elements. All medical-based techniques are subject to that. I used ranks as a bit of a catch all, rather than trying to list out every type of wound. It's just a generic guideline. Also, as for the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing, I refer to my statement earlier a bout what Fuuinjutsu is. dFormulas that carry instructions and only need power. Make the formula right and it can do what it's told to do.
Okay, but if a C-Ranked attack cuts your arm off, recovering from that in twenty seconds is ridiculous. Speaking of which, especially since it's only B in Rank...it shouldn't heal ALL wounds. Unless we're just talking about superficial wounds. And I understand that, and would personally give the same argument. But Colby seems determined to not let people get around the chakra element system. There would be no point in having medical ninjutsu take up a slot of you could just use fuuinjutsu instead (since fuuinjutsu itself doesn't take up a slot). I mean, I have a Kekkei Genkai, wind-based sensory technique that doesn't actually sense chakra, but only movement, and it requires the sensory chakra element. So.... Quote: Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold and will increase its potency by three fold. Hmm, chakra recovery is kind of an unknown. So multiplying an unknown by seven is still unknown. Lol. Although the idea is fine And I don't really know what you mean by the potency of chakra, tbh. Potency would be.....I don't know how to simplify potency. Means that the chakra itself is more potent, ideally meaning that less chakra would be needed for the same technique used without this seal. As for chakra recovery being an unknown, seeing as it regenerates over time like stamina this would work just like a stamina recovery but for chakra.
Chakra Recovery is fine. Don't like the idea of all techniques consuming a third of the normal amount of chakra though. Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Used a speciifc example for sensory in the medical fuuinjutsu response. Technique itself is fine though. Quote: Fuuin Kouyou - Seal of the Elements [rank-S] [type-attack] - Permenant - By combining his knowledge of the elements, fuuinjutsu, and the aid of the elders of his family, Sosei created a fuuinjutsu that allows the bearer of this seal to use all natural elemental chakras. This basically breaks a guild system (the fact that we limit chakra elements, and more so than we have in the past), so I'm not okay with it. But you can talk to Colby about it. Athough if you do, please tell him that if it's allowed, it should only apply to the five main elements, not medical ninjutsu, sensory, etc. Lol We can just remove this one honestly. It was made to go with the all elemental armor but I've never used it in the past. I can live without this.
I like that idea. Lol Quote: Fuuin Hitan - Seal of Sorrow [rank-SS] [type-attack] - Once this seal is activated, it cannot be reversed until the attack is completed. In order to activate this seal, Sosei has to perform a ten second long string of handseals. If interrupted, he can pick back up at where he was once more, but if interrupted once more, he must start over. Once activated, Sosei'sbody will turn dark red and wings of chakra will form on his back. He will then fly high into the air and begin to gather chakra while chakra masses around him to protect him. As he gathers chakra, it will be added into the protective layer around him. After two minutes of charging, Sosei will point his head at the ground and fly at top speed into the ground and release all built up chakra in a single, massive explosion. This explosion will turn a one mile wide radius into a crater and burn everything in one hundred yards beyond that. After using this technique, Sosei will be unconcious for up to three days and need another two days before he can even move. After another three days, he will be back to normal. Hmm, well, for starters, would the defensive chakra cloak be SS-Ranked in strength? The answer should be no, tbh. Lol. Incorporating defense and offense into a single technique should decrease the strength of both. Basically...if someone had an SS Rank defense technique and a separate SS Rank attack...they should both be far superior to this. But either way, could it be destroyed with a strong enough attack? Or would it remain no matter what...while strong enough attacks would just slip through? This technique can be discarded as well. This is another old one that I think I can make a better one of. Not the same attack, but I can probably spend the points in a better fashion.
Aight. Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Yes. This seal has to be preexisting to make the genetic map copy of the target's DNA, otherwise the map is incomplete. It was intended to be a technique that could regrow a lost limb or appendage, though this would take a considerable amount of time obviously.
Limit it somehow. Shouldn't have an infinite amount of uses after the seal is placed. Although if the seal can also be placed instantly in the middle of battle, kind of makes limiting its uses a useless drawback. You mention that the process of it is long, but I assume that refers to the healing process, not the process of applying the fuuinjutsu seal. Quote: Gaibu Rokku (Foreign Lock) [rank-A] [type-supplementary/defense] Designed with the pure purpose of detecting and isolating foreign entities in all forms within and/or on the target's body to a specific sector of the target's body. Generally, this location will be wherever the seal is placed unless the jutsu is altered in formula to designate another location on the target's body. Permanent seal? And also, if you can "designate another location," could you theoretically just designate the entire body? It would be and yes you could.
Meh, okay. Lol. Accepted. Quote: Chi no Suwappu (Blood Swap) [rank-S] [type-supplementary] This technique allows the blood of the target to be recoded to match the blood of another individual so long as they are human in nature. This cannot grant kekkei genkai ability or uses, however the DNA coding will be the same. Thus, any techniques that affect the blood of the target will no longer work. If the recoded blood has natural resistances, the same benefit will be given to the target. I assume you'd have to have access to the target's blood. Also, could this be used to, for instance, get around Kakashi's sharingan drawbacks (quickly drains him of chakra since he's not Uchiha)? Or...your fuuinjutsu that "steals" KG; would this allow you to negate the drawbacks I mentioned? I would say it would not do anything for a Kekkei Genkai as I stated in the technique that it cannot grant kekkei abilities or uses. So using your example, it would not allow the full use of a KG, however with your Kakashi example, I think it would negate that sort of drawback.
Hmm, accepted. Quote: Inbijiburu Inku (Invisible Ink) [rank-B] [type=supplementary] Used in conjunction with any other Fuuinjutsu, this technique makes any seals placed invisible upon conception. This fuuin formula must be added on top of any other formula or it will not have any effect. As the ink is invisible from the start, normal ways of detection will not work as this technique hides everything from a chakra signature to the actual kanji itself. Would that include S and SS-Ranked sensory techniques? (I don't think there are any SS Ranks, but still lol) No. S and above would still be capable of detection. S would be able to minorly detect the traces and SS would have probably full detection.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 1:06 pm
Yuumei Kagemusha Quote: Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Limitations would have to be added to prevent immunity to every element at all times (I assume S+ attacks would be unaffected by the armor, but even then...). Also, "adding to its strength" is open to interpretation, so you should probably be more clear on that. And I only asked because the following technique only uses your character's chakra elements. Does this one only defend against his chakra elements too? Or all? This technique states that it uses one element at a time, and has to be switched between chakra natures. It does not hold all of them at once. Naturally, attacks that are equal to or surpass it in rank are effective. I don't see where adding to its strength is ambiguous? Simply means it makes the armor stronger.
One element at a time, yes. But there's nothing stopping you from switching that element as many times as you want, even in the same post. I would limit it to one change every two or three posts. And it's ambiguous because there's no indication of how much stronger it would get. Does absorbing one fire attack mean it can now defend against S-Ranked fire attacks? Or, since you just said equal rank (A Rank) would still be effective, does it mean that after absorbing a fire attack, A Ranks would now be ineffective? In any case, I think strengthening should reset when the chakra element is switched. I agree with the time restraints for switching. I'd say every three posts. Absorbing an attack only works for the rank it is at. So the Jutsu is A-ranked so it can absorb A-Ranked and below of that chakra nature. And I agree on strength being reset.
Quote: Issai Soshi Yoroi - All Element Armor [rank-S] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - This technique is done the same way as Soshi Yoroi. Instead of being only one element at a time, Issai Soshi Yoroi is made of all of Sosei's chakra elements all at one time. An attack of any of these elements is absorbed into the armor, making it stronger in defense of that element. Sosei rarely uses this technique because of the high amount of chakra needed to maintain it. Basically the same thing. Although if this one is limited to only your chakra elements and the first one isn't, the limitations can be less severe. But "making it stronger" still needs to be elaborated. It can only be used for whatever chakra elements the character currently has. Same response to the "make it stronger" thing.
Forget about the limitation for this one, it's fine how it is. But see the first technique about strengthening. Quote: Barike-Do Fuuin - Barricade Seal [rank-B] [type-defensive/supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will slam his hands into the ground. After doing so, a wall made of whatever is underneath him will rise from the ground twenty feet high and twenty feet long. It will have the same strength as reinforced concrete. Wouldn't it be as strong as whatever material you use it on? Although I'd factor in the technique's rank too Yes, but the strength was given as a minimum kind of deal as the chakra and seal would reinforced weaker materials to that level.
Accepted. Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? To a degree, but not as limiting. Remember, with Fuuinjutsu the formula is essentially prewritten and only needs chakra to execute. It's not something that has to be continuously focused on and maintained. The seal works is predetermined formula, drawing the chakra it needs from the user, and done.
I mean, as long it requires constant contact to use, then it's fine. The Fuuin would be on their body so that would be constant contact with the person, via the Fuuin.
Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. That is generally the drawback that the stolen KG isn't as strong as the one it was stolen from. Who it's taken from does affect it's strengths and it can still be trained, but never up to the maximum level. I've used it with Uchiha and set it where I never could go past three tome Sharingan.
The target's strength should affect it. If you're using it on an Uchiha with an unawakened sharingan, you shouldn't get an awakened one. Training to improve a KG is fine though. And obviously each KG's limit should be approved whenever you get a new one. Oh...and switching KGs should be limited as well, so switching between them doesn't happen every ten seconds. I agree with the limitations on strength and glad you agree to the training. And yes, it would have to be run by admins for it's acceptance for it's limit. As for switching between, there is not switch. If two KG are currently used then both are active. However, having two should in turn make each weaker than if Sosei just stole one.
Quote: Shouchou Chiyu - Symbol of Healing [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Five Minutes - This seal will heal all wounds. The time it take to heal is based on how strong the attack was. E-Rank: Ten seconds, D-Rank: Fifteen seconds, C-Rank: Twenty seconds, B-Rank: Thirty seconds, A-Rank: One minute, S-Rank: Four Minutes. The type of wound would make more sense than the rank of the technique that caused it. But just to let you know, to use this technique, your character would have to have medical ninjutsu as one of their chakra elements. All medical-based techniques are subject to that. I used ranks as a bit of a catch all, rather than trying to list out every type of wound. It's just a generic guideline. Also, as for the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing, I refer to my statement earlier a bout what Fuuinjutsu is. dFormulas that carry instructions and only need power. Make the formula right and it can do what it's told to do.
Okay, but if a C-Ranked attack cuts your arm off, recovering from that in twenty seconds is ridiculous. Speaking of which, especially since it's only B in Rank...it shouldn't heal ALL wounds. Unless we're just talking about superficial wounds. And I understand that, and would personally give the same argument. But Colby seems determined to not let people get around the chakra element system. There would be no point in having medical ninjutsu take up a slot of you could just use fuuinjutsu instead (since fuuinjutsu itself doesn't take up a slot). I mean, I have a Kekkei Genkai, wind-based sensory technique that doesn't actually sense chakra, but only movement, and it requires the sensory chakra element. So.... That's a fair point, so maybe I need to rank this up? It's rank is low because it's literally just....actually....since I proposed the Regeneration Seal down below, I'd like to remove this one from consideration as well. Lol. No point in having two jutsu that do the same thing.
Quote: Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold and will increase its potency by three fold. Hmm, chakra recovery is kind of an unknown. So multiplying an unknown by seven is still unknown. Lol. Although the idea is fine And I don't really know what you mean by the potency of chakra, tbh. Potency would be.....I don't know how to simplify potency. Means that the chakra itself is more potent, ideally meaning that less chakra would be needed for the same technique used without this seal. As for chakra recovery being an unknown, seeing as it regenerates over time like stamina this would work just like a stamina recovery but for chakra.
Chakra Recovery is fine. Don't like the idea of all techniques consuming a third of the normal amount of chakra though. I can remove the potency then, that is no big deal. It was more just a flavor addition to the technique.
Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Used a speciifc example for sensory in the medical fuuinjutsu response. Technique itself is fine though. I understand, but I still have the same argument. I'll ask Colby to take a look, or you can. Which ever you prefer.
Quote: Fuuin Kouyou - Seal of the Elements [rank-S] [type-attack] - Permenant - By combining his knowledge of the elements, fuuinjutsu, and the aid of the elders of his family, Sosei created a fuuinjutsu that allows the bearer of this seal to use all natural elemental chakras. This basically breaks a guild system (the fact that we limit chakra elements, and more so than we have in the past), so I'm not okay with it. But you can talk to Colby about it. Athough if you do, please tell him that if it's allowed, it should only apply to the five main elements, not medical ninjutsu, sensory, etc. Lol We can just remove this one honestly. It was made to go with the all elemental armor but I've never used it in the past. I can live without this.
I like that idea. Lol Quote: Fuuin Hitan - Seal of Sorrow [rank-SS] [type-attack] - Once this seal is activated, it cannot be reversed until the attack is completed. In order to activate this seal, Sosei has to perform a ten second long string of handseals. If interrupted, he can pick back up at where he was once more, but if interrupted once more, he must start over. Once activated, Sosei'sbody will turn dark red and wings of chakra will form on his back. He will then fly high into the air and begin to gather chakra while chakra masses around him to protect him. As he gathers chakra, it will be added into the protective layer around him. After two minutes of charging, Sosei will point his head at the ground and fly at top speed into the ground and release all built up chakra in a single, massive explosion. This explosion will turn a one mile wide radius into a crater and burn everything in one hundred yards beyond that. After using this technique, Sosei will be unconcious for up to three days and need another two days before he can even move. After another three days, he will be back to normal. Hmm, well, for starters, would the defensive chakra cloak be SS-Ranked in strength? The answer should be no, tbh. Lol. Incorporating defense and offense into a single technique should decrease the strength of both. Basically...if someone had an SS Rank defense technique and a separate SS Rank attack...they should both be far superior to this. But either way, could it be destroyed with a strong enough attack? Or would it remain no matter what...while strong enough attacks would just slip through? This technique can be discarded as well. This is another old one that I think I can make a better one of. Not the same attack, but I can probably spend the points in a better fashion.
Aight. Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Yes. This seal has to be preexisting to make the genetic map copy of the target's DNA, otherwise the map is incomplete. It was intended to be a technique that could regrow a lost limb or appendage, though this would take a considerable amount of time obviously.
Limit it somehow. Shouldn't have an infinite amount of uses after the seal is placed. Although if the seal can also be placed instantly in the middle of battle, kind of makes limiting its uses a useless drawback. You mention that the process of it is long, but I assume that refers to the healing process, not the process of applying the fuuinjutsu seal. That is correct. Limiting uses is pointless to me if healing an almost severed arm takes like 10 posts or something of that nature. It was meant to be able to heal all, but take time doing it as the drawback.
Quote: Gaibu Rokku (Foreign Lock) [rank-A] [type-supplementary/defense] Designed with the pure purpose of detecting and isolating foreign entities in all forms within and/or on the target's body to a specific sector of the target's body. Generally, this location will be wherever the seal is placed unless the jutsu is altered in formula to designate another location on the target's body. Permanent seal? And also, if you can "designate another location," could you theoretically just designate the entire body? It would be and yes you could.
Meh, okay. Lol. Accepted. Quote: Chi no Suwappu (Blood Swap) [rank-S] [type-supplementary] This technique allows the blood of the target to be recoded to match the blood of another individual so long as they are human in nature. This cannot grant kekkei genkai ability or uses, however the DNA coding will be the same. Thus, any techniques that affect the blood of the target will no longer work. If the recoded blood has natural resistances, the same benefit will be given to the target. I assume you'd have to have access to the target's blood. Also, could this be used to, for instance, get around Kakashi's sharingan drawbacks (quickly drains him of chakra since he's not Uchiha)? Or...your fuuinjutsu that "steals" KG; would this allow you to negate the drawbacks I mentioned? I would say it would not do anything for a Kekkei Genkai as I stated in the technique that it cannot grant kekkei abilities or uses. So using your example, it would not allow the full use of a KG, however with your Kakashi example, I think it would negate that sort of drawback.
Hmm, accepted. Quote: Inbijiburu Inku (Invisible Ink) [rank-B] [type=supplementary] Used in conjunction with any other Fuuinjutsu, this technique makes any seals placed invisible upon conception. This fuuin formula must be added on top of any other formula or it will not have any effect. As the ink is invisible from the start, normal ways of detection will not work as this technique hides everything from a chakra signature to the actual kanji itself. Would that include S and SS-Ranked sensory techniques? (I don't think there are any SS Ranks, but still lol) No. S and above would still be capable of detection. S would be able to minorly detect the traces and SS would have probably full detection.
Accepted. I will go to the original posts and make the approved/suggested edits at this time so that the first two posts can be looked at without all this clutter.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 1:20 pm
Can you look at this and give us your input.
Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Yuumei Kagemusha [ Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Lieutenant Jet Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Yuumei Kagemushas Used a speciifc example for sensory in the medical fuuinjutsu response. Technique itself is fine though. Lieutenant Jet I understand, but I still have the same argument. I'll ask Colby to take a look, or you can. Which ever you prefer.
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2017 2:38 am
Quote: Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Limitations would have to be added to prevent immunity to every element at all times (I assume S+ attacks would be unaffected by the armor, but even then...). Also, "adding to its strength" is open to interpretation, so you should probably be more clear on that. And I only asked because the following technique only uses your character's chakra elements. Does this one only defend against his chakra elements too? Or all? This technique states that it uses one element at a time, and has to be switched between chakra natures. It does not hold all of them at once. Naturally, attacks that are equal to or surpass it in rank are effective. I don't see where adding to its strength is ambiguous? Simply means it makes the armor stronger.
One element at a time, yes. But there's nothing stopping you from switching that element as many times as you want, even in the same post. I would limit it to one change every two or three posts. And it's ambiguous because there's no indication of how much stronger it would get. Does absorbing one fire attack mean it can now defend against S-Ranked fire attacks? Or, since you just said equal rank (A Rank) would still be effective, does it mean that after absorbing a fire attack, A Ranks would now be ineffective? In any case, I think strengthening should reset when the chakra element is switched. I agree with the time restraints for switching. I'd say every three posts. Absorbing an attack only works for the rank it is at. So the Jutsu is A-ranked so it can absorb A-Ranked and below of that chakra nature. And I agree on strength being reset.
That should be fine then. Just be sure to include how strong the armor becomes after absorbing a technique (i.e. whether or not S+-Ranked techniques would now be absorbed). Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? To a degree, but not as limiting. Remember, with Fuuinjutsu the formula is essentially prewritten and only needs chakra to execute. It's not something that has to be continuously focused on and maintained. The seal works is predetermined formula, drawing the chakra it needs from the user, and done.
I mean, as long it requires constant contact to use, then it's fine. The Fuuin would be on their body so that would be constant contact with the person, via the Fuuin.
Then the length of contact should be a decent amount of time before the seal is actually placed. Basically, it should be preventable by a third party. If in the middle of a 1 vs 2 battle, you shouldn't be able to slap some dude on the forehead for a second and continue to fight with the second guy while also interrogating someone. xD Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. That is generally the drawback that the stolen KG isn't as strong as the one it was stolen from. Who it's taken from does affect it's strengths and it can still be trained, but never up to the maximum level. I've used it with Uchiha and set it where I never could go past three tome Sharingan.
The target's strength should affect it. If you're using it on an Uchiha with an unawakened sharingan, you shouldn't get an awakened one. Training to improve a KG is fine though. And obviously each KG's limit should be approved whenever you get a new one. Oh...and switching KGs should be limited as well, so switching between them doesn't happen every ten seconds. I agree with the limitations on strength and glad you agree to the training. And yes, it would have to be run by admins for it's acceptance for it's limit. As for switching between, there is not switch. If two KG are currently used then both are active. However, having two should in turn make each weaker than if Sosei just stole one. Colby's input:On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 1. I would say, put a time limit on it. To use it again theyd need more blood. Require fresh blood That would make things more interesting, imo. But that would also negate the idea of training to improve the KG, since you'd have to get fresh blood from someone else the next time. But I'm fine with his decision or mine. If you choose to go with mine (what we've been discussing), then I have one question. Can you store more than two KG at a time? You said there's no switching of the KG, so I would assume no. But there might be a misunderstanding. But if you can store more than two at a time, details needs to be added for how you would go from an active KG to something that's in your reserves. Quote: Shouchou Chiyu - Symbol of Healing [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Five Minutes - This seal will heal all wounds. The time it take to heal is based on how strong the attack was. E-Rank: Ten seconds, D-Rank: Fifteen seconds, C-Rank: Twenty seconds, B-Rank: Thirty seconds, A-Rank: One minute, S-Rank: Four Minutes. The type of wound would make more sense than the rank of the technique that caused it. But just to let you know, to use this technique, your character would have to have medical ninjutsu as one of their chakra elements. All medical-based techniques are subject to that. I used ranks as a bit of a catch all, rather than trying to list out every type of wound. It's just a generic guideline. Also, as for the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing, I refer to my statement earlier a bout what Fuuinjutsu is. dFormulas that carry instructions and only need power. Make the formula right and it can do what it's told to do.
Okay, but if a C-Ranked attack cuts your arm off, recovering from that in twenty seconds is ridiculous. Speaking of which, especially since it's only B in Rank...it shouldn't heal ALL wounds. Unless we're just talking about superficial wounds. And I understand that, and would personally give the same argument. But Colby seems determined to not let people get around the chakra element system. There would be no point in having medical ninjutsu take up a slot of you could just use fuuinjutsu instead (since fuuinjutsu itself doesn't take up a slot). I mean, I have a Kekkei Genkai, wind-based sensory technique that doesn't actually sense chakra, but only movement, and it requires the sensory chakra element. So.... That's a fair point, so maybe I need to rank this up? It's rank is low because it's literally just....actually....since I proposed the Regeneration Seal down below, I'd like to remove this one from consideration as well. Lol. No point in having two jutsu that do the same thing.
Very well. I'll reply to the next one then. Lol. Please delete the conversation about this technique in your next reply. Quote: Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold and will increase its potency by three fold. Hmm, chakra recovery is kind of an unknown. So multiplying an unknown by seven is still unknown. Lol. Although the idea is fine And I don't really know what you mean by the potency of chakra, tbh. Potency would be.....I don't know how to simplify potency. Means that the chakra itself is more potent, ideally meaning that less chakra would be needed for the same technique used without this seal. As for chakra recovery being an unknown, seeing as it regenerates over time like stamina this would work just like a stamina recovery but for chakra.
Chakra Recovery is fine. Don't like the idea of all techniques consuming a third of the normal amount of chakra though. I can remove the potency then, that is no big deal. It was more just a flavor addition to the technique.
Alright. Then it should be accepted after that. Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Used a speciifc example for sensory in the medical fuuinjutsu response. Technique itself is fine though. I understand, but I still have the same argument. I'll ask Colby to take a look, or you can. Which ever you prefer. Colby's input on Medical Ninjutsu: (Which, since sensory is also a chakra element, would also apply to this situation) On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 2. Yes, medical element would be required I feel for ya man!! I had to alter my character considerably because of this xD Depending on what elements you go with, that would also affect the effectiveness of your elemental armor. So we can discuss that again as well, if you want. Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Yes. This seal has to be preexisting to make the genetic map copy of the target's DNA, otherwise the map is incomplete. It was intended to be a technique that could regrow a lost limb or appendage, though this would take a considerable amount of time obviously.
Limit it somehow. Shouldn't have an infinite amount of uses after the seal is placed. Although if the seal can also be placed instantly in the middle of battle, kind of makes limiting its uses a useless drawback. You mention that the process of it is long, but I assume that refers to the healing process, not the process of applying the fuuinjutsu seal. That is correct. Limiting uses is pointless to me if healing an almost severed arm takes like 10 posts or something of that nature. It was meant to be able to heal all, but take time doing it as the drawback.
Hm, if it's gonna take ten posts to heal, then that's probably limited enough. You'll just have to go in detail about that. Also, again, Colby's response. On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 2. Yes, medical element would be required I will go to the original posts and make the approved/suggested edits at this time so that the first two posts can be looked at without all this clutter.
Alright. In your reply, feel free to clean up the cluttered post. I've been deleting accepted techniques from the conversation to help but...it's still a mess xD
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2017 10:16 am
Yuumei Kagemusha Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? To a degree, but not as limiting. Remember, with Fuuinjutsu the formula is essentially prewritten and only needs chakra to execute. It's not something that has to be continuously focused on and maintained. The seal works is predetermined formula, drawing the chakra it needs from the user, and done.
I mean, as long it requires constant contact to use, then it's fine. The Fuuin would be on their body so that would be constant contact with the person, via the Fuuin.
Then the length of contact should be a decent amount of time before the seal is actually placed. Basically, it should be preventable by a third party. If in the middle of a 1 vs 2 battle, you shouldn't be able to slap some dude on the forehead for a second and continue to fight with the second guy while also interrogating someone. xD Any technique is preventable by a third party. Since you cannot autohit with any technique, normally, the same would apply here. The target and/or any third party in the vicinity would have an opportunity to block/dodge/stop the seal.f
Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. That is generally the drawback that the stolen KG isn't as strong as the one it was stolen from. Who it's taken from does affect it's strengths and it can still be trained, but never up to the maximum level. I've used it with Uchiha and set it where I never could go past three tome Sharingan.
The target's strength should affect it. If you're using it on an Uchiha with an unawakened sharingan, you shouldn't get an awakened one. Training to improve a KG is fine though. And obviously each KG's limit should be approved whenever you get a new one. Oh...and switching KGs should be limited as well, so switching between them doesn't happen every ten seconds. I agree with the limitations on strength and glad you agree to the training. And yes, it would have to be run by admins for it's acceptance for it's limit. As for switching between, there is not switch. If two KG are currently used then both are active. However, having two should in turn make each weaker than if Sosei just stole one. Colby's input:On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 1. I would say, put a time limit on it. To use it again theyd need more blood. Require fresh blood That would make things more interesting, imo. But that would also negate the idea of training to improve the KG, since you'd have to get fresh blood from someone else the next time. But I'm fine with his decision or mine. If you choose to go with mine (what we've been discussing), then I have one question. Can you store more than two KG at a time? You said there's no switching of the KG, so I would assume no. But there might be a misunderstanding. But if you can store more than two at a time, details needs to be added for how you would go from an active KG to something that's in your reserves. I'm not going to put a time limit on this as it make the technique all but pointless. As for reserves, the switch cannot happen fast like that. It would be a bit of a process, thus the two KG cap. If there were a switch from an active to a new KG then the process would start all over from the beginning.
Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Used a speciifc example for sensory in the medical fuuinjutsu response. Technique itself is fine though. I understand, but I still have the same argument. I'll ask Colby to take a look, or you can. Which ever you prefer. Colby's input on Medical Ninjutsu: (Which, since sensory is also a chakra element, would also apply to this situation) On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 2. Yes, medical element would be required I feel for ya man!! I had to alter my character considerably because of this xD Depending on what elements you go with, that would also affect the effectiveness of your elemental armor. So we can discuss that again as well, if you want. Where is this "medical" and "sensory" are chakra elements? That has never been the case in any segment of the Naruto universe. Technique specialties for sure, but not elements. If such things were reliant on chakra nature, then Sakura would have never become a medical nin. Does this also mean that the Bijuu's healing factor has to carry medical element chakra or the jinchuriki cannot have it?
Basic question: Why are we making technique specialties into chakra natures with no examples/backing from the actual series?
Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Yes. This seal has to be preexisting to make the genetic map copy of the target's DNA, otherwise the map is incomplete. It was intended to be a technique that could regrow a lost limb or appendage, though this would take a considerable amount of time obviously.
Limit it somehow. Shouldn't have an infinite amount of uses after the seal is placed. Although if the seal can also be placed instantly in the middle of battle, kind of makes limiting its uses a useless drawback. You mention that the process of it is long, but I assume that refers to the healing process, not the process of applying the fuuinjutsu seal. That is correct. Limiting uses is pointless to me if healing an almost severed arm takes like 10 posts or something of that nature. It was meant to be able to heal all, but take time doing it as the drawback.
Hm, if it's gonna take ten posts to heal, then that's probably limited enough. You'll just have to go in detail about that. Also, again, Colby's response. On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 2. Yes, medical element would be required Same comment as above.
I think we need to sit down and clarify exactly what Fuuinjutsu is and how it works. It is a written code of instructions that only need energy to be carried out. True, a Fuuin would need fire/water/etc elemental chakra to carry out element based techniques, but the same is not true for techniques that are non-elemental/neutral. This means that any technique specialties that do not rely on true chakra natures can be, in theory, programmed into a Fuuin so long as the user has the intellect to do so. Given this, here's how Fuuin works with the Regeneration Seal: 1) Seal senses, decodes, and records existing body structure/DNA and embeds code as part of the Fuuin itself. 2) Seal detects damage or is user-activated and replays code, eliminating any code where there is no change. 3) Once change is detected, the seal pulls on the now missing portion of body structure/DNA and accelerates the body's natural healing factor while directing the body's cells on what and where to grow. 4) Due to it's non-medical and simply instruction driven nature, the technique can take quite some time to regrow limbs, etc. - This, to me, means this is not a medical jutsu, though it may function as one.
Essentially the same goes for Proximity Seal. 1) Seal is placed and programmed to "alarm" when it's perimeter if violated 2) Seal itself has several "alarm points" that will annunciationf if violated/stepped on/whatever have you 3) Seal sends a notification to the user that A) alarm was tripped and, B) what alarm was tripped. - Again, this means it is not truly a sensory technique as it does not seek out to sense, but rather sits on a pre-programmed code that simply waits for a cause then has an effect.
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 3:47 am
Lieutenant Jet Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires. Most interrogation techniques are a drawn-out process, making it nearly impossible to use in battle when fighting multiple people. Would that apply to this? To a degree, but not as limiting. Remember, with Fuuinjutsu the formula is essentially prewritten and only needs chakra to execute. It's not something that has to be continuously focused on and maintained. The seal works is predetermined formula, drawing the chakra it needs from the user, and done.
I mean, as long it requires constant contact to use, then it's fine. The Fuuin would be on their body so that would be constant contact with the person, via the Fuuin.
Then the length of contact should be a decent amount of time before the seal is actually placed. Basically, it should be preventable by a third party. If in the middle of a 1 vs 2 battle, you shouldn't be able to slap some dude on the forehead for a second and continue to fight with the second guy while also interrogating someone. xD Any technique is preventable by a third party. Since you cannot autohit with any technique, normally, the same would apply here. The target and/or any third party in the vicinity would have an opportunity to block/dodge/stop the seal.f
I'll agree, and I don't think your technique is unreasonable. I just didn't want an interrogation technique to be used so quickly in mid-battle. But at the same time, it's fine, considering, as you said, a third party could still interfere with it. Accepted. Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Currently used: If approved, the Kekkei Genkais would have to be significantly weaker than the person you got the blood from. But I would send this technique to Colby. I don't personally have a problem with it. He might. I know it's been allowed in the past, but I don't know about now. That is generally the drawback that the stolen KG isn't as strong as the one it was stolen from. Who it's taken from does affect it's strengths and it can still be trained, but never up to the maximum level. I've used it with Uchiha and set it where I never could go past three tome Sharingan.
The target's strength should affect it. If you're using it on an Uchiha with an unawakened sharingan, you shouldn't get an awakened one. Training to improve a KG is fine though. And obviously each KG's limit should be approved whenever you get a new one. Oh...and switching KGs should be limited as well, so switching between them doesn't happen every ten seconds. I agree with the limitations on strength and glad you agree to the training. And yes, it would have to be run by admins for it's acceptance for it's limit. As for switching between, there is not switch. If two KG are currently used then both are active. However, having two should in turn make each weaker than if Sosei just stole one. Colby's input:On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 1. I would say, put a time limit on it. To use it again theyd need more blood. Require fresh blood That would make things more interesting, imo. But that would also negate the idea of training to improve the KG, since you'd have to get fresh blood from someone else the next time. But I'm fine with his decision or mine. If you choose to go with mine (what we've been discussing), then I have one question. Can you store more than two KG at a time? You said there's no switching of the KG, so I would assume no. But there might be a misunderstanding. But if you can store more than two at a time, details needs to be added for how you would go from an active KG to something that's in your reserves. I'm not going to put a time limit on this as it make the technique all but pointless. As for reserves, the switch cannot happen fast like that. It would be a bit of a process, thus the two KG cap. If there were a switch from an active to a new KG then the process would start all over from the beginning.
Ahh, I see. Well, as long as the entire process (minute-long string of hand signs, etc.) would have to happen before you could switch it out, then that's fine. Accepted. Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, a seal will appear on the ground, fade into the ground, and then spread underground for one hundred yards. If anyone comes within those one hundred yards, Sosei will know. Another thing that kind of screwed up my character as well lol. Similar to what I said about medical ninjutsu, (almost) all forms of sensory techniques require the chakra element for it. Only thing I think is excluded from that are like Inuzuka's enhanced senses. But other than that, technique is fine. Question though, would you know their exact location. Or just be alerted that someone is present somewhere inside the circle? Again, I refer to my comments on what Fuuinjutsu is in terms of needing a chakra nature. And the user would know their exact location due to the precision of Fuuinjutsu.
Used a speciifc example for sensory in the medical fuuinjutsu response. Technique itself is fine though. I understand, but I still have the same argument. I'll ask Colby to take a look, or you can. Which ever you prefer. Colby's input on Medical Ninjutsu: (Which, since sensory is also a chakra element, would also apply to this situation) On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 2. Yes, medical element would be required I feel for ya man!! I had to alter my character considerably because of this xD Depending on what elements you go with, that would also affect the effectiveness of your elemental armor. So we can discuss that again as well, if you want. Where is this "medical" and "sensory" are chakra elements? That has never been the case in any segment of the Naruto universe. Technique specialties for sure, but not elements. If such things were reliant on chakra nature, then Sakura would have never become a medical nin. Does this also mean that the Bijuu's healing factor has to carry medical element chakra or the jinchuriki cannot have it?
Basic question: Why are we making technique specialties into chakra natures with no examples/backing from the actual series?
It's actually in the profile layout, under charka elements. Quote: Known Chakra ElementsOnly put the chakra elements in which your character has awakened (i.e. can use). You may start with a number of elements based on your rank E/D- 1, C- 2, B or higher- 3. If you have sensory ninjutsu, that takes the slot of one of your basic elements (e.g. if you can sense chakra or use your own sense of smell to track. This does not apply to canon clans and some custom clans). This also applies to puppetry and medical ninjutsu. So, the elements you may choose from are: -Lightning -Fire -Water -Earth -Wind -Sensory -Puppetry -Medical Ninjutsu Admittedly, I just added Medical Ninjutsu to it because it wasn't included. But we've been treating it as a chakra element. I will completely agree that, in the series, they are not chakra elements. Theoretically, any shinobi could develop Medical Ninjutsu and Sensory techniques. But as you should know, not everything we do is completely based off of the series. There are no time restraints on techniques like Flying Thunder God, but we add them to shape the guild how we see necessary. To be honest, in the series, most characters do not have three chakra elements to begin with. Naruto only has one. But that would make for an uninteresting RP experience. My best guess is, Colby included Medical Ninjutsu and Sensory techniques to prevent every character from being Medics and Sensors. If you wanna base it off the series, then the majority of characters shouldn't be either. Addings these to the chakra elements accomplishes that. Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Already addressed the medical ninjutsu chakra element thing. But I'm confused. It regenerates damaged body parts...but it must be placed on the person before the damage occurs? Also, if you continue with the technique and don't discard for the above reason, you should be more clear on the healing capability of the technique. "Significant body damage" is ambiguous. Yes. This seal has to be preexisting to make the genetic map copy of the target's DNA, otherwise the map is incomplete. It was intended to be a technique that could regrow a lost limb or appendage, though this would take a considerable amount of time obviously.
Limit it somehow. Shouldn't have an infinite amount of uses after the seal is placed. Although if the seal can also be placed instantly in the middle of battle, kind of makes limiting its uses a useless drawback. You mention that the process of it is long, but I assume that refers to the healing process, not the process of applying the fuuinjutsu seal. That is correct. Limiting uses is pointless to me if healing an almost severed arm takes like 10 posts or something of that nature. It was meant to be able to heal all, but take time doing it as the drawback.
Hm, if it's gonna take ten posts to heal, then that's probably limited enough. You'll just have to go in detail about that. Also, again, Colby's response. On 10/28/2017, at 8:25 AM, R31gn of Ph3r wrote: > 2. Yes, medical element would be required Same comment as above.
I think we need to sit down and clarify exactly what Fuuinjutsu is and how it works. It is a written code of instructions that only need energy to be carried out. True, a Fuuin would need fire/water/etc elemental chakra to carry out element based techniques, but the same is not true for techniques that are non-elemental/neutral. This means that any technique specialties that do not rely on true chakra natures can be, in theory, programmed into a Fuuin so long as the user has the intellect to do so. Given this, here's how Fuuin works with the Regeneration Seal: 1) Seal senses, decodes, and records existing body structure/DNA and embeds code as part of the Fuuin itself. 2) Seal detects damage or is user-activated and replays code, eliminating any code where there is no change. 3) Once change is detected, the seal pulls on the now missing portion of body structure/DNA and accelerates the body's natural healing factor while directing the body's cells on what and where to grow. 4) Due to it's non-medical and simply instruction driven nature, the technique can take quite some time to regrow limbs, etc. - This, to me, means this is not a medical jutsu, though it may function as one.
Essentially the same goes for Proximity Seal. 1) Seal is placed and programmed to "alarm" when it's perimeter if violated 2) Seal itself has several "alarm points" that will annunciationf if violated/stepped on/whatever have you 3) Seal sends a notification to the user that A) alarm was tripped and, B) what alarm was tripped. - Again, this means it is not truly a sensory technique as it does not seek out to sense, but rather sits on a pre-programmed code that simply waits for a cause then has an effect.
I completely understand your argument, and again, would ordinarily agree with it. But it's just how things are being done in the guild. The fact that it's fundamentally a fuuinjutsu technique and not a Medical/Sensory techniques makes no difference, because what the technique accomplishes...is fundamentally a Medical/Sensory technique. Sensor Fuuinjutsu: If it was literally just an alarm that trips, when someone enters the vicinity, I would fine with not requiring the sensory chakra element. Assuming the alarm trips are only on the outside of the technique and not any part of the center of it. But if you're able to locate the person while they're inside the range of the technique, that would be sensory. Edit: Ignore the medical ninjutsu chakra element portions. It has been brought to my attention that it was switched from requiring a Chakra Element to, instead, requiring the Nurse and Doctor job classes. I completely forgot about that. Anyways, Nurse allows up to A Rank, which is what you must start out as. The secont Tier job class of Doctor must be purchased using Emeralds. The bit about Sensory Chakra element remains though.
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Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 12:55 pm
Yuumei Kagemusha I completely understand your argument, and again, would ordinarily agree with it. But it's just how things are being done in the guild. The fact that it's fundamentally a fuuinjutsu technique and not a Medical/Sensory techniques makes no difference, because what the technique accomplishes...is fundamentally a Medical/Sensory technique. Sensor Fuuinjutsu: If it was literally just an alarm that trips, when someone enters the vicinity, I would fine with not requiring the sensory chakra element. Assuming the alarm trips are only on the outside of the technique and not any part of the center of it. But if you're able to locate the person while they're inside the range of the technique, that would be sensory. Edit: Ignore the medical ninjutsu chakra element portions. It has been brought to my attention that it was switched from requiring a Chakra Element to, instead, requiring the Nurse and Doctor job classes. I completely forgot about that. Anyways, Nurse allows up to A Rank, which is what you must start out as. The secont Tier job class of Doctor must be purchased using Emeralds. The bit about Sensory Chakra element remains though. Changed Sosei's job to Nurse to satisfy that.
I reworked the Proximity Seal so that it should work within the confines of acceptability without the Sensory chakra nature. If this does not work, just let me know and I will change Sosei to have a sensory chakra Nature....which I may still do anyway now that I think about it....but just let me know if this would work without the change of chakra nature.
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Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 3:27 am
Quote: Soshi Yoroi - Element Armor [rank-A] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will place his hands on his stomach. Armor of the element he chooses will form around him. The element can be changed at any time while the technique is active. Whatever element the armor currently is, an attack of that element will be absorbed into the armor, adding to its strength. Armor elements may only be switched every three posts and only elemental attacks matching the current armor's element (up to A-rank) may be absorbed. Any strength gained in the technique is reset upon an element switch. Strengthening means that techniques can be absorbed faster simply.
Accepted
Quote: Issai Soshi Yoroi - All Element Armor [rank-S] [type-defense/supplementary] - Until Released - This technique is done the same way as Soshi Yoroi. Instead of being only one element at a time, Issai Soshi Yoroi is made of all of Sosei's chakra elements all at one time. An attack of any of these elements is absorbed into the armor, making it stronger in defense of that element. Sosei rarely uses this technique because of the high amount of chakra needed to maintain it. This technique is still subject to Soshi Yoroi's limitations.
Accepted
Quote: Fuuin Chikara Shuudou - Seal of Forced Learning [rank-S] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - After performing the needed handseals, Sosei will stick out his right hand, plam up, and grasp his wrist with his left hand and a seal will appear on his right palm. He will then touch his palm to the forehead of an opponent and forcefully extract the information he desires.
Accepted
Quote: Fuuin Chi Tounan - Seal of Blood Theft [rank-SS] [type-supplementary] - Permenant - Sosei will take the blood of a member of a certain clan and draw a fuuinjutsu seal on his stomach. He will then perform a minute long string of handseals and the seal will flare white before sinking into his skin. After completion, Sosei will be able to use the benefits of that clan. Only two clans can be used at a time. Since these Kekkei Genkai are not true to Sosei, they will be weaker than the original Kekkei Genkai, and weaker again if more than one is used. The stronger the individual who's blood is used, the stronger and more potential for increasing strength the stolen Kekkei Genkai has. Currently used:
Accepted
Quote: Mato Isei - Mark of Power [rank-A] [type-supplementary] - One Hour - After performing a string of handsigns, Sosei will place his hands either on himself or on a comrade. A seal will appear and sink into that person's skin. The seal will increase the rate at which chakra is restored by seven fold.
Accepted
Quote: Soba Fuuin - Proximity Seal [rank-B] [type-supplementary] - Thirty Minutes - After performing the needed handseals and slamming his hands into the ground, several rings of seals will appear on the ground with each ring functioning as an alarm point. This means that if something triggers/trips any alarm point, Sosei will know which ring was tripped/set off, though not which exact part of the ring was set off (meaning he will know how close the individual is, but not which direction). Rings of detection may range from a single to six at whatever intervals Sosei determines, with the total radius covered not exceeding one-hundred and fifty yards. These rings work off of any motion, no matter how slight,. or direct touch with the seal. Motion works not just with things moving around the seal, but also the seal itself moving.
Accepted
Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective.
I think this one still needs to be more detailed in what it can heal and how fast it can heal. You mentioned something about it taking ten posts to heal. That type of stuff just needs to be includeded in the technique's actual description.
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Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 9:28 pm
Yuumei Kagemusha Quote: Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective.
I think this one still needs to be more detailed in what it can heal and how fast it can heal. You mentioned something about it taking ten posts to heal. That type of stuff just needs to be includeded in the technique's actual description. Additional details of that technique have been added in the original post now.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2017 6:14 am
Lieutenant Jet Saisei Shīru (Regeneration Seal) [rank-A] [type-supplementary] By detecting, decoding, and storing a copy of the target's genetic code, this seal has the capability to facility the regeneration of significant body damage, both internal and external. As this process takes a fair amount of time, wounds that would normally be instantly or rapidly deadly are still normally effective. This seal must be placed on the target before the body part is damaged or destroyed before it can be effective. Minor scraps and small cuts are healed within a matter of seconds (one post); significant injuries/deep lacerations are healed in a few minutes (2-4 posts); major damage is healed within thirty minutes (5-8 posts); missing body parts are regenerated within an hour to four hours depending on how much of the limb/part was lost (10-20 posts). Accepted
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2017 8:40 pm
Fukantai (Dead Zone) [rank-S] [type-attack/defense] - Combining Sosei's mastery of Fuuinjutsu with this affinity for wind, this technique creates a lethal space around the shinobi. Once the seal is placed upon Sosei's body, or a space he designates, the jutsu takes affect. The wind directly around Sosei's body, and up to a foot from it, becomes super charged with chakra, causing the wind to spin and blow fiercely at random angles, all in a manner which allows the technique to remain invisible. Debris and grass at the user's feet may be blown about or shredded, but otherwise the wind moving cannot be seen or heard unless interacted with. This chakra charged wind gusts so strongly, and at such random angles, that even chakra infused metals are shredded instantly upon contact. Observers would simply see the object slowly vaporize at a microscopic level. This technique can be used until the user's chakra is depleted.
Wiccan Blade [rank-S] Made with the idealogy of Wica in mind, this blade was made with pure indestructible diamond and inlayed with various other natural crystals with many effects. However the sword itself has its own effect to it that allows Sosei to do many different things. Effects from no more than two of the inlayed stones at any given time, and switching stones takes at least one post. However, once the switch has been started it cannot be stopped. (Start it one post, switch done next post)
Diamond - Greatly increases stamina and increases the rate at which Chakra is replenished by 5 fold. Obsidian [Silver Sheen] - Causes oneself to see his/her self as others do. (genjutsu release) Obsidian [Red] - Increases all physical attributes by 2 fold. Obsidian [Green] - Identifies and cleanses foreign substances in the body. Obsidian [Electric Blue Sheen] - Allows for pure clam during battle, increases all reflexes by 3 fold, and improves sight range and time by 5 fold. Obsidian [Snowflake] - Helps find the way through puzzles and mazes, redesigns one's thoughts and mind, and aids in purification of mind, body, and soul. Also acts as a protector, keeping the soul in the body when something attempts to force it out.
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