Hey Ghouli~
Congrats on Sodom! Before I can toss him a stamp there's a few minor things I’d like to go over!
The first is that, while it is totally fine for his magic to summon a salt circle, especially given what lore says about salt, we do ask that when people use any type of edibles in their magic that they clarify that they are not edible. If the salt is clarified to be ethereal/will disappear when the magic isn’t channeled, I think this will clear this up, but it is hugely possible that it might come up in RP so to avoid that it will help to have it in the magic description!
The more important tweak is a wording request; we try ask that when writing Knight magic the player tie in which power theme they are incorporating, so to make this plainly easy, would it be possible for you to reword, “Any person within the ring is now prevented from leaving the ring" to "Any person within the ring is now bound within ring"? It might seem like a silly way, but it really stresses and makes clear which power theme the Knight is accessing. This is most important in the Squire magic since it doesn’t reference the Silence magic like the Knight magic does, but it would be fine for the Knight magic to utilize both ‘binding’ and ‘silence’!
Thank you in advance for your patience, when you're ready for me or need me just quote me and I'll be here!
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