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demon_pachabel

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 10:39 am


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name: Cassian Norris

Nickname: Cass

Age: 17

Birthday: December 22nd

Sign: Cusp Sagittarius - Capricorn

Gemstone: Turquoise

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Gyros, Curry, Balsamic Vinegar (..by itself....)

Hated Food: Cass is a garbage can. He'll eat it. Unless it's moldy.

School: SHP - Planning on Culinary

Hobbies:
FOOD - Cassian's parents haven't cooked since Cassian was 8 and took over the kitchen at home. It is lined with books from America's Test Kitchen along with binders of his own recipes that he has adjusted to perfection. He believes even in trying out bad food combinations just for the experience and the possibility of finding something that may be unexpectedly delicious! Cass also runs a food blog that is updated daily with both delicious new things as well as 'and here is today's fail'.

He gets more traffic for his food failures and the humor people get from them. After all, most people aren't wanting to spend 2 hours in the kitchen with 12 ingredients to make the perfect pasta sauce (even if they're guaranteed to want to eat it if he makes it for them).

UNICORNS - Cass collects unicorns. They're the image of perfection and classic beauty and if you don't represent them right, Cass will call you out on it. He totally and completely wears unicorn shirts and the like unironically. He owns a lot of books that featured them (The Last Unicorn, The Unicorn Chronicles, The Little White Horse, Unicorns of Balinor), and a healthy collection of dolls and stuffed animals as well.

HORROR - Is it scary and spooky and probably gonna make you have nightmares? Cassian L O V E S that stuff. Ghost movies, zombie movies, Survival Horror Games, Jumpscares, all of it. Occult stuff, Lovecraftian stuff, it is the B E S T. Absolutely amazing. A+. Second only to unicorns as his favorite stuff.


Virtues:
PART KENDER (Fearless) - Horror movies? Games? Dark Alleys??? Cass isn't afraid of anything. He'll lead the charge into any danger and take it upon himself. Scary creature needs to be wrestled with? Cass will do that too. He's the go-to for scary things.

SOAKING IT ALL UP (Smart) - Cass loves to learn. He hates school and homework (his grades being entirely average), but the reviews on his report cards in High School all read the same: Cassian is so smart, he should be doing better on his assignments. Just the second you ask him to do something mundane with it (like write a paper), it..it all falls apart.

HELLO FURREND, HOWL ARE YOU DOING (Friendly) - Cass isn't a serious person in most cases and is more than happy to chat and make new friends. However, not all of their friendly, assertive personality is charming and people can find them overwhelming...especially (SEE: Aggressive)

Flaws:
TOO MUCH PART KENDER(Fearless) - Cass isn't afraid of anything...including being hurt. His fearlessness makes for decisions that aren't entirely thought out when it comes to his own safety....or really anybody else's. Hopefully he's really far ahead when leading the charge, cause people may hurt otherwise.

I'LL KICK MY OWN a** (Aggressive) - Have a problem? Cass is ready to beat it up for you....Are you a problem? Cass is READY TO BEAT YOU UP. Is that a Youma? I'M GOING TO FIGHT IT WITH MY B A R E H A N D S. Cass's first solution to most everything is fight vs flight and even when it comes to social interactions their assertive personality can be overbearing.

SURE YOU CAN STAB ME IN THE BACK AGAIN (Too Forgiving) - Cassian likes his friends. If you're his friend, you're great.....even if realistically, you're not a good friend. Cassian will keep people who will hurt him if at some point in time, you were friends. He'll let people keep hurting him under the guise of 'we're friends tho, so they don't really mean it'. This does not extend to people who were mean to him initially.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Bright blue (7cd2fb)

Hair: Brown (63523e), with choppy bangs in the front and the back long enough to pull into a small ponytail of sorts (kind of like Breath of the Wild Link....not intentional. Whoops)

Face: Squarish-oval-y. Angular eyes. Skin is c9a762

Clothes:
Black pants, These Boots, This shirt
PostPosted: Mon May 01, 2017 10:20 pm


[[ADDING MINCHIR BECAUSE RAVV LOVES ME AND BOUGHT ME THE UPGRADE TO GO WITH MY CIV PURCHASE]]

Senshi: Sailor Minchir, Senshi of Day

Challenge: Rise and Shine!

Fuku Colour: CC
Fuku:

Reference pictures may be used in place of descriptions, but please be prepared to give extra detail if your artist requires it!

Collar -- CC
Bow -- CC
Bodice -- CC
Sleeves -- CC
Brooch -- CC
Bottoms -- CC
Tiara -- CC
Choker -- CC
Shoes -- CC
Gloves -- CC
Accessories -- CC

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: The Light of Day

Minchir can create an area of bright sunlight, roughly 7 feet in diameter around a target. All who enter it will be treated to the blinding field of white. It lasts for 25 seconds. A lingering 'white spot' vision effect can linger for up to another 30 seconds for flavor-text purposes. Can use twice per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: The Healing Light of Day

Minchir can create an area of bright sunlight, roughly 11 feet in diameter around a target. All who enter it will be treated to the blinding field of white and any allies will be minorly healed. While no skin will suture back together, bleeding will stop and smaller scrapes will scab over. It lasts for 30 seconds. Can use twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Sunkissed

Minchir's hands become white-hot with the light of order, and anything he touches for the next 30 seconds are effected according - darkness and chaos burns, order and allies are soothed and rejuvenated. Any chaos touched by this light will be hurt, with a feeling of blistering skin and the potential for lingering heat after the fact. While no wounds will be healed, allies will feel as though they have a little more energy. Can be used twice per battle.

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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2017 10:05 pm


demon_pachabel


Hey Pach~!

Congrats on Minchir!

However, before I can stamp him there's a few small tweaks needed~!

Okay so her basic attack when does her magic stop working? Is it the 15 seconds when the blinding light ends? If so, the lingering 'white spots' would then also end with the blinding lights as any magic and its' effect ends on the main timer, unless it's an optional effect that can last up to however many seconds. However, since his attack is a blinding light; I personally think you could buff the timer up to about 25 seconds and still have it optional that they could see the 'white spots' afterwords and players could decide how long it lasts. Also, I think a diameter of 5 feet might be a little small since this attack just blinds. You could probably get away with up to a 7 foot diameter if you really wanted.

Now on the super attack, personally I'd take off the total targets? Since the attack has a diameter there could potentially be more characters affected by this attack than five targets. I don't feel like this is a necessary caveat for an attack.

So after that I would also nudge down his current 15 foot diameter to about a 11 foot diameter, and since his attack only blinds and minor-ly heals allies; Michir's timer is actually really low considering. 8 seconds is more like a 100% paralysis timer, so this attack can realistically be bumped up to around 25 to 30 seconds and you'd be okay with two uses. This way you still get what you wanted out of the attack but it's not under powered.

Finally, I have a question on Eternal. You say that Minchir's hands would burn chaos? Could you clarify for me if this is the sensation of burning or if it's suppose to cause any sort of marks/wounds?

If you need help have questions or just want me to come back please quote me and I'll be here!!!
PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2017 10:19 pm


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I have tweeked based on your feedback and I appreciate it! I just sit here holding my tiny son in my hands and looking at other stuff that's been cleared going ????????????????????Whatdo??????????????????????????? and I am partially successful.

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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2017 11:10 pm


demon_pachabel


Okay awesome! Thank you for those tweaks, so now just one more tiny thing before he's stamped. I want to apologize for this particular request as I didn't want to overload information on you, with my just assuming what you wanted on the eternal attack.

Just so you know, any magical attacks won't be able to create real damage unless it's optional to the player. The reason for this is so that players don't feel like they're forced into a situation they don't want for their character; but also to give players a little more freedom with severity of damage that could happen.

So since it sounds like you're intending to cause physical damage; this would be a sensation of the pain of blistering skin and heat in the wound until the attacks magic ends at the 30 second mark. However, if a player wished they could also, take physical damage up to blistering skin and it could at that point linger beyond that 30 second mark.

So if you do want actual damage if you could just tweak the wording a bit to reflect that I think we'd be good to give you a stamp after that! If you have any questions, need help or just want me to come back just quote me~!
PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2017 11:19 pm


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demon_pachabel


Okay awesome! Thank you for those tweaks, so now just one more tiny thing before he's stamped. I want to apologize for this particular request as I didn't want to overload information on you, with my just assuming what you wanted on the eternal attack.

Just so you know, any magical attacks won't be able to create real damage unless it's optional to the player. The reason for this is so that players don't feel like they're forced into a situation they don't want for their character; but also to give players a little more freedom with severity of damage that could happen.

So since it sounds like you're intending to cause physical damage; this would be a sensation of the pain of blistering skin and heat in the wound until the attacks magic ends at the 30 second mark. However, if a player wished they could also, take physical damage up to blistering skin and it could at that point linger beyond that 30 second mark.

So if you do want actual damage if you could just tweak the wording a bit to reflect that I think we'd be good to give you a stamp after that! If you have any questions, need help or just want me to come back just quote me~!


Tweeked my wording to 'a feeling of' on the blistering skin and the 'potential' of lingering heat to allow for more player-chosen wiggle room/nobody has to explain to their boss why they have a bad sunburn if they don't want to. smile

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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2017 11:24 pm


Thank you so much Pach!

A GM'll be by shortly~!

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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2017 11:00 pm


demon_pachabel


He looks fabulous, have fun!

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