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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2017 8:50 pm
Sumitsuki Arashi Fuuinjutsu:
Seigensokudo - Speed Limit - A A fuuinjutsu technique formed by specific seals that form a closed rectangle. There are two variations of the technique based on size. A smaller seal can be created, which would be a circle with a radius of five feet. This is generally formed with the user at its center, but isn't necessary. The second variation is a much larger rectangle that stretches throughout the entire area (to simplify things, anyone RPing in the Thread would be affected, within reason). When the seals are formed, everyone's speed is altered to match that of the user of the technique. This prevents anyone from reaching a speed higher than the user is capable of, regardless of the use of chakra or any other technique. Alternatively, it also allows those who are slower than the user to now move as fast as him/her. It should be noted that dimensional and space/time traveling does not affect speed and is, therefore, not affected. Chakra Blasts: 1 for Smaller Version, 3 for Larger
Jigoku no Fuka-sa - Depths of Hell - E-S A seal that resembles the kanji for hell fire (獄火) can be placed on an object (usually a scroll). Then, if the object makes contact with a fire technique up to S in Rank, the fire technique becomes absorbed into the seal. The user can then release the seal at any time, although the technique loses a rank in strength when this happens. Only one fire technique can be absorbed at a time and repeated use of the technique is impossible until any previously absorbed fire jutsu has been released or destroyed (destroying the fuuinjutsu technique itself would also destroy the fire technique. This technique may even be used to seal Blaze Release techniques, although in this instance, the seal itself is also sacrificed, meaning the user cannot reuse a Blaze Release technique. Chakra Blast: 1
Chikaraotoshi - Loss of Energy - C After a seal is created in a rectangular shape (size can range anywhere from a few inches to hundreds of meters), a barrier of chakra is formed. Anything within the barrier gradually loses chakra (the amount of a single E-Ranked technique per post) and stamina (they will feel slightly fatigued, nothing serious). All of the lost energy is then sent to the user of the technique. Using it with only one other person present doesn't present much of a gain; the chakra required to actually use the technique might not make it worth it. But the more people present, the higher the boost. In a crowded battlefield, the user would be able to fight potentially endlessly due to the gain in stamina and chakra. The technique, by itself, however, is not enough to cause anyone to die of chakra loss, as the amount absorbed isn't significant enough. Chakra Blasts: 2
Ichijin - A Gust of Wind - E Simply put, this technique is a seal that gives the user another way of using the Wind Release technique known as Ichijin. When the seal is activated, the technique is used. Unfortunately, the technique still uses C-Ranked chakra. Chakra Blast: 1
Fuuton Techniques:
Ichijin - A Gust of Wind - C A very simple wind technique. After hand seals are formed, wind can be generated outwards from the user's body, covering a distance of five feet. The wind is strong enough to send anyone within those five feet flying roughly 50 feet. Using the strength of Sumitsuki's ability to manipulate wind to an extent, by moving one of his arms to the side right after the hand signs are formed, he can also cause anyone caught by the technique to rotate, making it very difficult for them to land on their feet.
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Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2017 8:57 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 9:12 pm
Techniques above the line are brand new. Techniques below the line have already been accepted, but I'm altering them. Changes are in bold text.
Tenjiru Hitotoki - To Alter Time - A (Passive) A fuuinjutsu technique placed upon Sumitsuki's eyes. It's visually apparent to others in the form of a tiny, white circle at the very center of his pupils. This seal allows himself to alter the flow of time, to an extent. No one else perceives the change in time, but it enables Sumitsuki to witness the world as if it was standing still, or even in just a slowed down motion. His movement isn't affected though; for instance, if time is stopped for him, he cannot move at all. He wouldn't even be able to alter what his eyes are focused on. It does, however, allow some very practical things. For one, he can essentially keep up with any amount of speed, visually. It also allows him an infinite amount of time to think things through, if need be. Sumitsuki seems to be able to read things almost instantly due to the technique as well. Time can also be moved forward at a quicker pace as well, although this has few practical uses, if any, since it gives the user less time to react. Time cannot be reversed. The downside is that Sumitsuki continues to age while the technique is used. Not only that, but he actually ages at a faster pace, though it's a set rate. Consistent use of the technique would mean that Sumitsuki would likely die by the age of 30.
Shinshikujizai Enjin - Expandable Ring - S A seal placed on Sumitsuki's back. By surging chakra into the seal, a ring is formed around him at his feet. It then quickly expands outwards, moving through physical objects (as it isn't a physical objects itself) but never changing its vertical (the term vertical is used loosely and would really only apply when he is standing perfectly level; the ring would be parallel to the position of his feet, only allowing him to move to his sides/front/back, not up and down) position. After it's created, Sumitsuki may move through space/time and instantly appear at any point on the ring, similar to Manato's Flying Thunder God technique. Foreign chakra, however, disrupts the ring, causing the ring to break wherever it makes contact with the chakra. Any broken area can not be teleported to, essentially preventing Sumitsuki from appearing directly behind someone. The technique does come at a cost though. Each use causes a technique of Sumitsuki's to be temporarily sealed away for the remainder of the battle, evident by new seals forming on his neck in the shape of a chain link. Each link in the chain represents a single technique. The technique would ordinarily be permanently sealed away, but using Chuushuunomeigetsu's ability to destroy fuuinjutsu seals, the effect is only temporary. However, since the seal is on his own neck, destroying the seal in battle could be fatal. It would take time and delicacy to remove the seal without harming himself.
Itsutsu no Yōso Shīru - Five Elemental Seal - SS A seal placed on the inside of Sumitsuki's body, present in his abdomen (that's where I imagine chakra is stored). Once the technique is activated, five intangible flames may appear above Sumitsuki, each a different color. Red represents fire, green for wind, yellow is lightning, brown for Earth, and lastly, blue represents water. These flames don't burn to touch and aren't affected at all by outside force. The only way to do anything about them would be to knock Sumitsuki unconscious or kill him. Or destroy the seal. Once activated, Sumitsuki may absorb any elemental attack within twenty meters of himself by matching the chakra used to create it. Though only one of each element may be absorbed at once. Once a technique is absorbed, the flame with the corresponding color will appear, signifying that the element is absorbed and no other technique of that element may be absorbed again. When combination elements (ice, wood, etc.) are absorbed, they take more than one spot. An ice technique would cause the water and wind flames to appear. A non-elemental technique (or blaze release, since it's not a combination of any element) may also be absorbed, but it would require a total of three flames to be absorbed. Furthermore, any SS-Ranked technique would require all five to be absorbed. Upon absorbing a technique, Sumitsuki may then release the technique himself, but only once. Though he cannot do it immediately. For every element used to absorb a technique, Sumitsuki will have to wait two posts before he can release it. Unfortunately, absorbing an element also causes the user to not be able to use techniques of that same element.
Fueru - To Multiply - D A fuuinjutsu technique that, once placed on an object, allows the user to cause the object to multiply, creating duplicates of the object instantly. Up to ten copies may be made, and it doesn't work on living objects.
Chouin Karite - Sealing Reaper - S A bow that causes every arrow fired from it to take on special properties. There are three kinds of arrows. 1.) Taifuugan (Eye of a Typhoon): This arrow has wind properties and can be manipulated by Sumitsuki (due to his KG) after it is fired. The wind around the arrow enhances the capabilities of a normal arrow considerably, causing it to penetrate much further. Furthermore, a wound created by the arrow is about three times as large (an arrow with about an inch-long head would create a wound three inches in diameter. 2.) Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space): This arrow pierces time and space, creating two portals along its path. It is only two feet in diameter, disallowing people from entering. But what goes through one portal comes out the other instantly. If fired at another portal, the technique can counteract it. 3.) Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper): The arrow that the bow is named after. Or perhaps the other way around. Upon being fired, the arrow takes on a sinister appearance, becoming enveloped by a black flame/gas-like entity. The arrow emits a scent so foul that animals tend to run away from it. Once the arrow pierces a living being, the darkness will disappear from the arrow and enter the target, slowly spreading throughout its entire body. Starting from the entry wound, the body begins to decay, rapidly aging and eventually dying off. There is no known cure, although removing the "infected" tissue before it can spread works.
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Kotonashi Kaketsu - Safe Passage - B A yin-yang seal placed on Sumitsuki's both of his palms. Any object with a matching seal can be summoned to and from his hands. To place the seal on an object, Sumitsuki must touch it with the original seals for a full minute. When first used on an object, it takes a considerable amount of chakra, S in Rank. But each time that same object is summoned, it consumes minimal chakra. Both the chakra cost and the time it requires to prepare makes it very impractical to form a seal on a new object in the middle of battle. The only real issue with using the technique is that the presence of foreign chakra disrupts the seal, disallowing Sumitsuki from using it when another person's chakra is within ten feet of himself. This also means that his Chuushuunomeigetsu (Read special objects) must not contain anyone else's chakra in order for him to use the technique, unless of course it isn't near him.
Taiyoukousen - Rays of the Sun - S Taiyoukousen is the counterpart to Chuushuunomeigetsu; the blade works as any ordinary sword without its use. By using the chakra from its twin, Taiyoukousen can create objects made of chakra in various shapes and sizes (changed from blasts to objects). These chakra blasts come from the blade of the sword, but it doesn't have to be swung for them to be released. When used "against" other entities of chakra, it actually increases the strength of the technique (C-B chakra: increase in one rank, A-S chakra: increase in two ranks). Even enemies could make use of this, although without the ability to see chakra, it would be nearly impossible to properly utilize it. That's not even the primary ability of the sword though. After the chakra from the blade is created, it can then be manipulated, even without the use of the blade. The chakra may be used to create seals for fuuinjutsu techniques. So while its twin blade is designed to destroy fuuinjutsu, Taiyoukousen is designed to create them, almost instantly. Unfortunately, there is a time restraint on the use of the sword's abilities. Only one fuuinjutsu technique may be created every thirty seconds. (Used to be "one chakra blast per post." )
Chuushuunomeigetsu - Harvest Moon - S Chuushuunomeigetsu's primarily ability is cutting through chakra (kind of). That's what it appears to do anyways. What really happens is that the chakra is absorbed into the blade. The initial purpose of the blade was for negating fuuinjutsu techniques, as cutting through a single seal of any fuuinjutsu technique is enough to dispell the entire thing. That's what the hexagons on the blade are for. But it's not limited to only fuuinjutsu. Anything with chakra is susceptible to similar effects. While other techniques aren't diffused like fuuinjutsu techniques, the blade does have the ability to cut through them. What this accomplishes depends on the technique itself. If it's a defense created by chakra, the blade can cut right through it (but doesn't cause the technique itself to stop working). There are some issues with it though. Elemental techniques are only weakened by two ranks (and generally, cutting through one would mean that the technique would still impact the wielder). Unfortunately, due to the nature of its abilities, techniques like Asuma's Chakra Blades would not work while using this sword. Furthermore, the weakness of the blade lies in the fact that it can only hold S-ranked amount of chakra at one time, and until that chakra is removed, it acts as an ordinary weapon. And the only way to release the chakra is through the use of Taiyoukousen. When someone is cut using the blade, it absorbs a portion of their chakra (up to B in Rank).
Binsoku Kouyou - Agility Enhancement - S (Passive) Bloodline users gain an unnatural speed passively using the wind to boost their own agility. This technique does come at a cost. Clan members lose raw strength for speed and most clan members display this by having a rather thin stature. After mastering the ability, Sumitsuki's speed while using the technique has increased dramatically.
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2017 6:49 am
Yuumei Kagemusha Itsutsu no Yōso Shīru - Five Elemental Seal - SSA seal placed on the inside of Sumitsuki's body, present in his abdomen (that's where I imagine chakra is stored). Once the technique is activated, five intangible flames may appear above Sumitsuki, each a different color. Red represents fire, green for wind, yellow is lightning, brown for Earth, and lastly, blue represents water. These flames don't burn to touch and aren't affected at all by outside force. The only way to do anything about them would be to knock Sumitsuki unconscious or kill him. Or destroy the seal. Once activated, Sumitsuki may absorb any elemental attack within twenty meters of himself by matching the chakra used to create it. Though only one of each element may be absorbed at once. Once a technique is absorbed, the flame with the corresponding color will appear, signifying that the element is absorbed and no other technique of that element may be absorbed again. When combination elements (ice, wood, etc.) are absorbed, they take more than one spot. An ice technique would cause the water and wind flames to appear. A non-elemental technique (or blaze release, since it's not a combination of any element) may also be absorbed, but it would require a total of three flames to be absorbed. Furthermore, any SS-Ranked technique would require all five to be absorbed. Upon absorbing a technique, Sumitsuki may then release the technique himself, but only once. Though he cannot do it immediately. For every element used to absorb a technique, Sumitsuki will have to wait two posts before he can release it. Unfortunately, absorbing an element also causes the user to not be able to use techniques of that same element. The name is too similar to the canon technique, five element seal. Quote: Fueru - To Multiply - DA fuuinjutsu technique that, once placed on an object, allows the user to cause the object to multiply, creating duplicates of the object instantly. Up to ten copies may be made, and it doesn't work on living objects. Can this work on objects with abilities? And are the multiplied objects permanent or how long do they last? Quote: Chouin Karite - Sealing Reaper - SA bow that causes every arrow fired from it to take on special properties. There are three kinds of arrows. 1.) Taifuugan (Eye of a Typhoon): This arrow has wind properties and can be manipulated by Sumitsuki (due to his KG) after it is fired. The wind around the arrow enhances the capabilities of a normal arrow considerably, causing it to penetrate much further. Furthermore, a wound created by the arrow is about three times as large (an arrow with about an inch-long head would create a wound three inches in diameter. 2.) Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space): This arrow pierces time and space, creating two portals along its path. It is only two feet in diameter, disallowing people from entering. But what goes through one portal comes out the other instantly. If fired at another portal, the technique can counteract it. 3.) Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper): The arrow that the bow is named after. Or perhaps the other way around. Upon being fired, the arrow takes on a sinister appearance, becoming enveloped by a black flame/gas-like entity. The arrow emits a scent so foul that animals tend to run away from it. Once the arrow pierces a living being, the darkness will disappear from the arrow and enter the target, slowly spreading throughout its entire body. Starting from the entry wound, the body begins to decay, rapidly aging and eventually dying off. There is no known cure, although removing the "infected" tissue before it can spread works. A two foot diameter is plenty wide enough for a human to go through a portal. That means it has a 4 foot circumference… though even at 2 feet, a human could go squeeze through. Also, what is the range of portal creation? Quote: Taiyoukousen - Rays of the Sun - STaiyoukousen is the counterpart to Chuushuunomeigetsu; the blade works as any ordinary sword without its use. By using the chakra from its twin, Taiyoukousen can create objects made of chakra in various shapes and sizes ( changed from blasts to objects). These chakra blasts come from the blade of the sword, but it doesn't have to be swung for them to be released. When used "against" other entities of chakra, it actually increases the strength of the technique (C-B chakra: increase in one rank, A-S chakra: increase in two ranks). Even enemies could make use of this, although without the ability to see chakra, it would be nearly impossible to properly utilize it. That's not even the primary ability of the sword though. After the chakra from the blade is created, it can then be manipulated, even without the use of the blade. The chakra may be used to create seals for fuuinjutsu techniques. So while its twin blade is designed to destroy fuuinjutsu, Taiyoukousen is designed to create them, almost instantly. Unfortunately, there is a time restraint on the use of the sword's abilities. Only one fuuinjutsu technique may be created every thirty seconds. (Used to be "one chakra blast per post." ) What qualifies as an object? Can this be literally anything? Can objects have abilities?
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2017 8:20 pm
--R31gn-of-Ph3r-- Yuumei Kagemusha Itsutsu no Yōso Shīru - Five Elemental Seal - SSA seal placed on the inside of Sumitsuki's body, present in his abdomen (that's where I imagine chakra is stored). Once the technique is activated, five intangible flames may appear above Sumitsuki, each a different color. Red represents fire, green for wind, yellow is lightning, brown for Earth, and lastly, blue represents water. These flames don't burn to touch and aren't affected at all by outside force. The only way to do anything about them would be to knock Sumitsuki unconscious or kill him. Or destroy the seal. Once activated, Sumitsuki may absorb any elemental attack within twenty meters of himself by matching the chakra used to create it. Though only one of each element may be absorbed at once. Once a technique is absorbed, the flame with the corresponding color will appear, signifying that the element is absorbed and no other technique of that element may be absorbed again. When combination elements (ice, wood, etc.) are absorbed, they take more than one spot. An ice technique would cause the water and wind flames to appear. A non-elemental technique (or blaze release, since it's not a combination of any element) may also be absorbed, but it would require a total of three flames to be absorbed. Furthermore, any SS-Ranked technique would require all five to be absorbed. Upon absorbing a technique, Sumitsuki may then release the technique himself, but only once. Though he cannot do it immediately. For every element used to absorb a technique, Sumitsuki will have to wait two posts before he can release it. Unfortunately, absorbing an element also causes the user to not be able to use techniques of that same element. The name is too similar to the canon technique, five element seal. YK: You know I don't pay any mind to canon techniques! xD I'll change it. Everything else fine? Quote: Fueru - To Multiply - DA fuuinjutsu technique that, once placed on an object, allows the user to cause the object to multiply, creating duplicates of the object instantly. Up to ten copies may be made, and it doesn't work on living objects. Can this work on objects with abilities? And are the multiplied objects permanent or how long do they last? YK: No, but any technique (only thing currently applicable would be fuuinjutsu) used on the object would duplicate. But weapons with actual abilities such as Taiyoukousen can't be duplicated. I was going to say permanent, since they're just regular objects, but they can be destroyed like shadow clones though, if you want...where any attack would destroy them. Quote: Chouin Karite - Sealing Reaper - SA bow that causes every arrow fired from it to take on special properties. There are three kinds of arrows. 1.) Taifuugan (Eye of a Typhoon): This arrow has wind properties and can be manipulated by Sumitsuki (due to his KG) after it is fired. The wind around the arrow enhances the capabilities of a normal arrow considerably, causing it to penetrate much further. Furthermore, a wound created by the arrow is about three times as large (an arrow with about an inch-long head would create a wound three inches in diameter. 2.) Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space): This arrow pierces time and space, creating two portals along its path. It is only two feet in diameter, disallowing people from entering. But what goes through one portal comes out the other instantly. If fired at another portal, the technique can counteract it. 3.) Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper): The arrow that the bow is named after. Or perhaps the other way around. Upon being fired, the arrow takes on a sinister appearance, becoming enveloped by a black flame/gas-like entity. The arrow emits a scent so foul that animals tend to run away from it. Once the arrow pierces a living being, the darkness will disappear from the arrow and enter the target, slowly spreading throughout its entire body. Starting from the entry wound, the body begins to decay, rapidly aging and eventually dying off. There is no known cure, although removing the "infected" tissue before it can spread works. A two foot diameter is plenty wide enough for a human to go through a portal. That means it has a 4 foot circumference… though even at 2 feet, a human could go squeeze through. Also, what is the range of portal creation? YK: Hm, true. One foot? Or I could just say that living beings simply phase through it? And none...it would be as far as the arrow can go. Though you can give it any range you want. Quote: Taiyoukousen - Rays of the Sun - STaiyoukousen is the counterpart to Chuushuunomeigetsu; the blade works as any ordinary sword without its use. By using the chakra from its twin, Taiyoukousen can create objects made of chakra in various shapes and sizes ( changed from blasts to objects). These chakra blasts come from the blade of the sword, but it doesn't have to be swung for them to be released. When used "against" other entities of chakra, it actually increases the strength of the technique (C-B chakra: increase in one rank, A-S chakra: increase in two ranks). Even enemies could make use of this, although without the ability to see chakra, it would be nearly impossible to properly utilize it. That's not even the primary ability of the sword though. After the chakra from the blade is created, it can then be manipulated, even without the use of the blade. The chakra may be used to create seals for fuuinjutsu techniques. So while its twin blade is designed to destroy fuuinjutsu, Taiyoukousen is designed to create them, almost instantly. Unfortunately, there is a time restraint on the use of the sword's abilities. Only one fuuinjutsu technique may be created every thirty seconds. (Used to be "one chakra blast per post." ) What qualifies as an object? Can this be literally anything? Can objects have abilities? YK: I suppose it could be anything, although it's just chakra. Invisible to the naked eye and no tangible form. It's not being spun into a rasengan or anything like that. It's literally just for fuuinjutsu creation. The manipulation allows for the seal to be placed virtually anywhere the chakra can reach. So no, they wouldn't have abilities.
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2017 9:59 am
Quote: Quote: Fueru - To Multiply - DA fuuinjutsu technique that, once placed on an object, allows the user to cause the object to multiply, creating duplicates of the object instantly. Up to ten copies may be made, and it doesn't work on living objects. Can this work on objects with abilities? And are the multiplied objects permanent or how long do they last? YK: No, but any technique (only thing currently applicable would be fuuinjutsu) used on the object would duplicate. But weapons with actual abilities such as Taiyoukousen can't be duplicated. I was going to say permanent, since they're just regular objects, but they can be destroyed like shadow clones though, if you want...where any attack would destroy them. No need to make the duplicated objects temporarily if its only normal objects. You're good. Quote: Quote: Chouin Karite - Sealing Reaper - SA bow that causes every arrow fired from it to take on special properties. There are three kinds of arrows. 1.) Taifuugan (Eye of a Typhoon): This arrow has wind properties and can be manipulated by Sumitsuki (due to his KG) after it is fired. The wind around the arrow enhances the capabilities of a normal arrow considerably, causing it to penetrate much further. Furthermore, a wound created by the arrow is about three times as large (an arrow with about an inch-long head would create a wound three inches in diameter. 2.) Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space): This arrow pierces time and space, creating two portals along its path. It is only two feet in diameter, disallowing people from entering. But what goes through one portal comes out the other instantly. If fired at another portal, the technique can counteract it. 3.) Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper): The arrow that the bow is named after. Or perhaps the other way around. Upon being fired, the arrow takes on a sinister appearance, becoming enveloped by a black flame/gas-like entity. The arrow emits a scent so foul that animals tend to run away from it. Once the arrow pierces a living being, the darkness will disappear from the arrow and enter the target, slowly spreading throughout its entire body. Starting from the entry wound, the body begins to decay, rapidly aging and eventually dying off. There is no known cure, although removing the "infected" tissue before it can spread works. A two foot diameter is plenty wide enough for a human to go through a portal. That means it has a 4 foot circumference… though even at 2 feet, a human could go squeeze through. Also, what is the range of portal creation? YK: Hm, true. One foot? Or I could just say that living beings simply phase through it? And none...it would be as far as the arrow can go. Though you can give it any range you want. one foot diameter or living beings phase through it. Either way. And the range is fine. I misunderstood something. Quote: Quote: Taiyoukousen - Rays of the Sun - STaiyoukousen is the counterpart to Chuushuunomeigetsu; the blade works as any ordinary sword without its use. By using the chakra from its twin, Taiyoukousen can create objects made of chakra in various shapes and sizes ( changed from blasts to objects). These chakra blasts come from the blade of the sword, but it doesn't have to be swung for them to be released. When used "against" other entities of chakra, it actually increases the strength of the technique (C-B chakra: increase in one rank, A-S chakra: increase in two ranks). Even enemies could make use of this, although without the ability to see chakra, it would be nearly impossible to properly utilize it. That's not even the primary ability of the sword though. After the chakra from the blade is created, it can then be manipulated, even without the use of the blade. The chakra may be used to create seals for fuuinjutsu techniques. So while its twin blade is designed to destroy fuuinjutsu, Taiyoukousen is designed to create them, almost instantly. Unfortunately, there is a time restraint on the use of the sword's abilities. Only one fuuinjutsu technique may be created every thirty seconds. (Used to be "one chakra blast per post." ) What qualifies as an object? Can this be literally anything? Can objects have abilities? YK: I suppose it could be anything, although it's just chakra. Invisible to the naked eye and no tangible form. It's not being spun into a rasengan or anything like that. It's literally just for fuuinjutsu creation. The manipulation allows for the seal to be placed virtually anywhere the chakra can reach. So no, they wouldn't have abilities. In that case,its fine. So, make the few changes and I'll approve everything
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2017 10:51 am
--R31gn-of-Ph3r-- Changed the name of the Five Elemental Seal technique to Sealer of Heavens.
Tengoku no Shīrā - Sealer of Heavens - SS A seal placed on the inside of Sumitsuki's body, present in his abdomen (that's where I imagine chakra is stored). Once the technique is activated, five intangible flames may appear above Sumitsuki, each a different color. Red represents fire, green for wind, yellow is lightning, brown for Earth, and lastly, blue represents water. These flames don't burn to touch and aren't affected at all by outside force. The only way to do anything about them would be to knock Sumitsuki unconscious or kill him. Or destroy the seal. Once activated, Sumitsuki may absorb any elemental attack within twenty meters of himself by matching the chakra used to create it. Though only one of each element may be absorbed at once. Once a technique is absorbed, the flame with the corresponding color will appear, signifying that the element is absorbed and no other technique of that element may be absorbed again. When combination elements (ice, wood, etc.) are absorbed, they take more than one spot. An ice technique would cause the water and wind flames to appear. A non-elemental technique (or blaze release, since it's not a combination of any element) may also be absorbed, but it would require a total of three flames to be absorbed. Furthermore, any SS-Ranked technique would require all five to be absorbed. Upon absorbing a technique, Sumitsuki may then release the technique himself, but only once. Though he cannot do it immediately. For every element used to absorb a technique, Sumitsuki will have to wait two posts before he can release it. Unfortunately, absorbing an element also causes the user to not be able to use techniques of that same element.
Fueru - To Multiply - D A fuuinjutsu technique that, once placed on an object, allows the user to cause the object to multiply, creating duplicates of the object instantly. Up to ten copies may be made, and it doesn't work on living objects; nor does it work on objects with special abilities.
Chouin Karite - Sealing Reaper - S A bow that causes every arrow fired from it to take on special properties. There are three kinds of arrows. 1.) Taifuugan (Eye of a Typhoon): This arrow has wind properties and can be manipulated by Sumitsuki (due to his KG) after it is fired. The wind around the arrow enhances the capabilities of a normal arrow considerably, causing it to penetrate much further. Furthermore, a wound created by the arrow is about three times as large (an arrow with about an inch-long head would create a wound three inches in diameter. 2.) Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space): This arrow pierces time and space, creating two portals along its path; these portals are connected; only portals from the same arrow may be connected. What goes through one portal comes out the other instantly, and they are only two feet in diameter. Livings beings simply phase through the portals, disallowing them from using one. If fired at another portal, the technique can counteract it. 3.) Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper): The arrow that the bow is named after. Or perhaps the other way around. Upon being fired, the arrow takes on a sinister appearance, becoming enveloped by a black flame/gas-like entity. The arrow emits a scent so foul that animals tend to run away from it. Once the arrow pierces a living being, the darkness will disappear from the arrow and enter the target, slowly spreading throughout its entire body. Starting from the entry wound, the body begins to decay, rapidly aging and eventually dying off. There is no known cure, although removing the "infected" tissue before it can spread works.
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Taiyoukousen - Rays of the Sun - S Taiyoukousen is the counterpart to Chuushuunomeigetsu; the blade works as any ordinary sword without its use. By using the chakra from its twin, Taiyoukousen can create objects made of chakra in various shapes and sizes (changed from blasts to objects). These chakra blasts come from the blade of the sword, but it doesn't have to be swung for them to be released. When used "against" other entities of chakra, it actually increases the strength of the technique (C-B chakra: increase in one rank, A-S chakra: increase in two ranks). Even enemies could make use of this, although without the ability to see chakra, it would be nearly impossible to properly utilize it. That's not even the primary ability of the sword though. After the chakra from the blade is created, it can then be manipulated, even without the use of the blade. Although the chakra cannot be formed into anything such as a rasengan or chidori. The chakra may only be used to create seals for fuuinjutsu techniques. So while its twin blade is designed to destroy fuuinjutsu, Taiyoukousen is designed to create them, almost instantly. Unfortunately, there is a time restraint on the use of the sword's abilities. Only one fuuinjutsu technique may be created every thirty seconds.
New Techniques Sumitsuki
Rokku to Kī - Lock and Key - E A technique created by Sumitsuki. By placing a lock (in the form of a seal) on an entry way (must be a physical object, such as a door) or something like a treasure chest, it prevents entry to those without a "key" to it. The key is a separate seal that Sumitsuki may grant to anyone he wishes, which appears on their hand, generally. By touching the seal on their hand to the door, it allows the door to be opened. The technique, however, doesn't grant any other protection to the door, so it could easily be broken down, just like any other door. Each door and key can be specially "coded," meaning that someone's key may only open certain doors, which is completely controlled by Sumitsuki himself. Once an object that has a lock on it has been broken or unlocked, Sumitsuki is immediately made aware of it.
Shuru Yuki
Reitōken - Frozen Sword - N/A A simple sword without any abilities. The sword itself is ordinary, but its sheathe is made out of ice and is chained to the hilt of the katana. Each chain link is also made out of ice. The ice can be shattered or broken, but it would require quite a bit of force. It is, however, strong enough to block normal attacks from other swords and similar weapons.
Kaze ni Kakkū - Glide on Wind - D A simple wind technique that allows the user to surge wind chakra through an object or their body. When used on an object, it allows the user to change the direction of the object up to two times per use. So a thrown shuriken could move in the opposite direction it was thrown using this technique. The technique allows the object to move as quickly as if it were being thrown. So even if an affected shuriken came to a complete stop, it could be "rethrown." If used on the user's body, it allows for them to do something similar by changing directions in mid-air, or even "double jumping." Though due to the size and weight difference, it can only be used once per activation, and does require hand signs.
Hanryuudoutai - Semiliquid - C By making contact with a non-living object, the user is able to temporarily turn that object into water. Contact must be maintained for an entire minute before the technique can be used. After which, the object can be released and still affected with the technique, for up to ten minutes. Once an object turns into a liquid form, the user can cause it to reform back into its original state at will. Alternatively, by making contact with a body of water for a minute, the user can then form small objects like shuriken, which become as hard as steel, but look just like water, making them more difficult to see amidst a battle. Using this technique, Shuru creates her own tools and weapons, rather than buying them.
Aisusākuru - Ice Circle - A After forming a string of hand signs, snow begins to fall from the sky in a circle up to twenty meters in diameter. Within a matter of seconds, everything inside the circle will freeze into solid ice. If anyone in the circle doesn't leave it immediately after noticing the drop in temperature, they will likely not have enough time to escape, outside of time/space manipulation.
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2017 6:03 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 6:34 am
Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra.
Kūkan ni Namida - Tear in Space - A Appearance Upon researching and experimenting with one of the abilities of his bow, Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper), Sumitsuki was able to create a fuuinjutsu technique similar to Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space). The seal has been placed on his stomach, and when chakra is surged through it, Sumitsuki's body becomes intangible via time/space. The technique is very similar to Obito's Kamui technique, minus the teleportation ability. The technique may only be active for ten seconds at a time, and there is a thirty second cooldown.
Kazesao - Wind Rod - C A culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods.
Katon: Okibi - Fire Release: Blazing Fire - C A fire technique that enables the user to summon two pillars of flames in front of themselves, spaced up to ten meters apart and up to fifty meters high. Shortly after they appear, a wall of fire forms from the pillars, meeting at the center. Using his manipulation of wind, Sumitsuki is able to cause the wall of flames to expand forward for twenty meters.
Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - S By using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. Water evaporates almost immediately. 5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur as is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost immediately. 10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. Dehydration is more likely than normal, but no one is at any further risk.
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 9:40 pm
Quote: Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra.I'm assuming this only prevents sensory that senses through Chakra only, as such other methods such as Izunuka's smells and contact type sensory aren't included? Both of these and other various method senses targets through different means aside from simple chakra. Quote: Kūkan ni Namida - Tear in Space - AAppearanceUpon researching and experimenting with one of the abilities of his bow, Chouin Karite (Sealing Reaper), Sumitsuki was able to create a fuuinjutsu technique similar to Kūkan ni Namida (Tear in Space). The seal has been placed on his stomach, and when chakra is surged through it, Sumitsuki's body becomes intangible via time/space. The technique is very similar to Obito's Kamui technique, minus the teleportation ability. The technique may only be active for ten seconds at a time, and there is a thirty second cooldown. ✔ Quote: Kazesao - Wind Rod - CA culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods. 60 meters is pretty large for a C rank that seemingly doesn't have a limit to how many you can produce, hm? Quote: Katon: Okibi - Fire Release: Blazing Fire - CA fire technique that enables the user to summon two pillars of flames in front of themselves, spaced up to ten meters apart and up to fifty meters high. Shortly after they appear, a wall of fire forms from the pillars, meeting at the center. Using his manipulation of wind, Sumitsuki is able to cause the wall of flames to expand forward for twenty meters. ✔ Quote: Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - SBy using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. Water evaporates almost immediately. 5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur as is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost immediately. 10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. Dehydration is more likely than normal, but no one is at any further risk. These ranges are freaking huge past the 5-10 meter mark, severe dehydration is threatening. The fact this thing can still effect you at 50 meters?! You should either reword the distance effect or lower the range, 50 meters and still, dehydration has different levels and you could pretty much say that someone could go into shock, although I doubt you would. Regardless, being 50 meters away and being subjected to dizziness and other ailments is asking for a bit too much.
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 10:07 pm
Quote: Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra.I'm assuming this only prevents sensory that senses through Chakra only, as such other methods such as Izunuka's smells and contact type sensory aren't included? Both of these and other various method senses targets through different means aside from simple chakra. Correct, which is why Sumitsuki is still capable of sensing movement with his Wind Sensory ability. The chakra sensory of Doujutsu would not work as well though, such as the sharingan and byakugan. Sage Mode's sensory would also be included.Quote: Kazesao - Wind Rod - CA culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods. 60 meters is pretty large for a C rank that seemingly doesn't have a limit to how many you can produce, hm? Halve it? If not, any suggested number will do, tbh. Although the technique becomes useless if it's too small of a range.Quote: Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - SBy using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. Water evaporates almost immediately. 5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur as is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost immediately. 10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. Dehydration is more likely than normal, but no one is at any further risk. These ranges are freaking huge past the 5-10 meter mark, severe dehydration is threatening. The fact this thing can still effect you at 50 meters?! You should either reword the distance effect or lower the range, 50 meters and still, dehydration has different levels and you could pretty much say that someone could go into shock, although I doubt you would. Regardless, being 50 meters away and being subjected to dizziness and other ailments is asking for a bit too much. Well, you might be misunderstanding the 25-50 meter range...natural dehydration takes a long time to occur. I just meant that it would theoretically take a little less time to occur...which would still be hours? I suppose it's pointless to even mention, since the technique can only be maintained for a minute. I can remove that entire section. For the 10-25 meter range, keep in mind...that it would take a minute for them to fall unconscious, in which case, Sumitsuki would also fall unconscious. And like you mentioned in a discussion pertaining to something else entirely...wouldn't people's natural instinct upon extreme heat to be to run away? xD
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 10:58 pm
Quote: Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra.I'm assuming this only prevents sensory that senses through Chakra only, as such other methods such as Izunuka's smells and contact type sensory aren't included? Both of these and other various method senses targets through different means aside from simple chakra. Correct, which is why Sumitsuki is still capable of sensing movement with his Wind Sensory ability. The chakra sensory of Doujutsu would not work as well though, such as the sharingan and byakugan. Sage Mode's sensory would also be included.I wouldn't include Sage Mode sensory, that's a far heightened level that unless you're utilizing Natural Energy in that technique, wouldn't hinder a Sage sensory from picking you out. Byakugan is capable of penetrating through a body, suppressing your chakra probably wouldn't do much against such a Dojutsu, they can literally see your chakra network which is like... Seeing your blood vessels. Quote: Kazesao - Wind Rod - CA culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods. 60 meters is pretty large for a C rank that seemingly doesn't have a limit to how many you can produce, hm? Halve it? If not, any suggested number will do, tbh. Although the technique becomes useless if it's too small of a range.The range is fine honestly, but the method it's used and its low rank is the problem. Sumitsuki and Kini have their unique sensory that reaches 60 meters, the problem is that this technique has a nigh-infinite range that can practically give you omnipresent awareness of an entire country. I'd consider adding a limit to how many rods can be produced and or increase the rank. Quote: Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - SBy using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. Water evaporates almost immediately. 5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur as is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost immediately. 10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. Dehydration is more likely than normal, but no one is at any further risk. These ranges are freaking huge past the 5-10 meter mark, severe dehydration is threatening. The fact this thing can still effect you at 50 meters?! You should either reword the distance effect or lower the range, 50 meters and still, dehydration has different levels and you could pretty much say that someone could go into shock, although I doubt you would. Regardless, being 50 meters away and being subjected to dizziness and other ailments is asking for a bit too much. Well, you might be misunderstanding the 25-50 meter range...natural dehydration takes a long time to occur. I just meant that it would theoretically take a little less time to occur...which would still be hours? I suppose it's pointless to even mention, since the technique can only be maintained for a minute. I can remove that entire section. For the 10-25 meter range, keep in mind...that it would take a minute for them to fall unconscious, in which case, Sumitsuki would also fall unconscious. And like you mentioned in a discussion pertaining to something else entirely...wouldn't people's natural instinct upon extreme heat to be to run away? xDPeople can be weird, I know mine would naturally run away from it. Yeah, but nobody is running 50+ meters from whatever range they initially were at. They have to reach 5 meters in 5 seconds, then there's the 5 to 10 meter they have to clear in which water evaporates... Which pretty much kills them? I can assume this also includes the water inside their body also? You'd pretty much be dead if you're anywhere between 10-1 meter from Sumitsuki.
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2017 11:53 pm
Quote: Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra.I'm assuming this only prevents sensory that senses through Chakra only, as such other methods such as Izunuka's smells and contact type sensory aren't included? Both of these and other various method senses targets through different means aside from simple chakra. Correct, which is why Sumitsuki is still capable of sensing movement with his Wind Sensory ability. The chakra sensory of Doujutsu would not work as well though, such as the sharingan and byakugan. Sage Mode's sensory would also be included.I wouldn't include Sage Mode sensory, that's a far heightened level that unless you're utilizing Natural Energy in that technique, wouldn't hinder a Sage sensory from picking you out. Byakugan is capable of penetrating through a body, suppressing your chakra probably wouldn't do much against such a Dojutsu, they can literally see your chakra network which is like... Seeing your blood vessels. Fair enough for Sage Mode, but the technique doesn't suppress Sumitsuki's chakra. It nullifies sensory abilities.Quote: Kazesao - Wind Rod - CA culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods. 60 meters is pretty large for a C rank that seemingly doesn't have a limit to how many you can produce, hm? Halve it? If not, any suggested number will do, tbh. Although the technique becomes useless if it's too small of a range.The range is fine honestly, but the method it's used and its low rank is the problem. Sumitsuki and Kini have their unique sensory that reaches 60 meters, the problem is that this technique has a nigh-infinite range that can practically give you omnipresent awareness of an entire country. I'd consider adding a limit to how many rods can be produced and or increase the rank. Limit it to three rods? Which are not reproducible?Quote: Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - SBy using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. Water evaporates almost immediately. 5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur as is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost immediately. 10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. Dehydration is more likely than normal, but no one is at any further risk. These ranges are freaking huge past the 5-10 meter mark, severe dehydration is threatening. The fact this thing can still effect you at 50 meters?! You should either reword the distance effect or lower the range, 50 meters and still, dehydration has different levels and you could pretty much say that someone could go into shock, although I doubt you would. Regardless, being 50 meters away and being subjected to dizziness and other ailments is asking for a bit too much. Well, you might be misunderstanding the 25-50 meter range...natural dehydration takes a long time to occur. I just meant that it would theoretically take a little less time to occur...which would still be hours? I suppose it's pointless to even mention, since the technique can only be maintained for a minute. I can remove that entire section. For the 10-25 meter range, keep in mind...that it would take a minute for them to fall unconscious, in which case, Sumitsuki would also fall unconscious. And like you mentioned in a discussion pertaining to something else entirely...wouldn't people's natural instinct upon extreme heat to be to run away? xDPeople can be weird, I know mine would naturally run away from it. Yeah, but nobody is running 50+ meters from whatever range they initially were at. They have to reach 5 meters in 5 seconds, then there's the 5 to 10 meter they have to clear in which water evaporates... Which pretty much kills them? I can assume this also includes the water inside their body also? You'd pretty much be dead if you're anywhere between 10-1 meter from Sumitsuki. Water inside the body wouldn't be affected immediately. Your body protects you against that. Skin, organs, bones, muscle, etc. Which is why it would take so long to be killed by it. People have ample time to escape. And to make things better, I can include that the "storm" does not move even when Sumitsuki does. The heat energy is created and remains static. So if Sumitsuki moves, he would also be entering the affected area.
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2017 9:01 pm
Quote: Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra.I'm assuming this only prevents sensory that senses through Chakra only, as such other methods such as Izunuka's smells and contact type sensory aren't included? Both of these and other various method senses targets through different means aside from simple chakra. Correct, which is why Sumitsuki is still capable of sensing movement with his Wind Sensory ability. The chakra sensory of Doujutsu would not work as well though, such as the sharingan and byakugan. Sage Mode's sensory would also be included.I wouldn't include Sage Mode sensory, that's a far heightened level that unless you're utilizing Natural Energy in that technique, wouldn't hinder a Sage sensory from picking you out. Byakugan is capable of penetrating through a body, suppressing your chakra probably wouldn't do much against such a Dojutsu, they can literally see your chakra network which is like... Seeing your blood vessels. Fair enough for Sage Mode, but the technique doesn't suppress Sumitsuki's chakra. It nullifies sensory abilities.Then with that, it wouldn't negate something like Byakugan, Sharingan it might but I'm unsure. Basic sensory would be a 100% negation. Quote: Kazesao - Wind Rod - CA culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods. 60 meters is pretty large for a C rank that seemingly doesn't have a limit to how many you can produce, hm? Halve it? If not, any suggested number will do, tbh. Although the technique becomes useless if it's too small of a range.The range is fine honestly, but the method it's used and its low rank is the problem. Sumitsuki and Kini have their unique sensory that reaches 60 meters, the problem is that this technique has a nigh-infinite range that can practically give you omnipresent awareness of an entire country. I'd consider adding a limit to how many rods can be produced and or increase the rank. Limit it to three rods? Which are not reproducible?Perfect. Quote: Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - SBy using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. Water evaporates almost immediately. 5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur as is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost immediately. 10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. Dehydration is more likely than normal, but no one is at any further risk. These ranges are freaking huge past the 5-10 meter mark, severe dehydration is threatening. The fact this thing can still effect you at 50 meters?! You should either reword the distance effect or lower the range, 50 meters and still, dehydration has different levels and you could pretty much say that someone could go into shock, although I doubt you would. Regardless, being 50 meters away and being subjected to dizziness and other ailments is asking for a bit too much. Well, you might be misunderstanding the 25-50 meter range...natural dehydration takes a long time to occur. I just meant that it would theoretically take a little less time to occur...which would still be hours? I suppose it's pointless to even mention, since the technique can only be maintained for a minute. I can remove that entire section. For the 10-25 meter range, keep in mind...that it would take a minute for them to fall unconscious, in which case, Sumitsuki would also fall unconscious. And like you mentioned in a discussion pertaining to something else entirely...wouldn't people's natural instinct upon extreme heat to be to run away? xDPeople can be weird, I know mine would naturally run away from it. Yeah, but nobody is running 50+ meters from whatever range they initially were at. They have to reach 5 meters in 5 seconds, then there's the 5 to 10 meter they have to clear in which water evaporates... Which pretty much kills them? I can assume this also includes the water inside their body also? You'd pretty much be dead if you're anywhere between 10-1 meter from Sumitsuki. Water inside the body wouldn't be affected immediately. Your body protects you against that. Skin, organs, bones, muscle, etc. Which is why it would take so long to be killed by it. People have ample time to escape. And to make things better, I can include that the "storm" does not move even when Sumitsuki does. The heat energy is created and remains static. So if Sumitsuki moves, he would also be entering the affected area.That could work then, with those it'll be approved, try not to make my life more difficult. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2017 5:38 am
Nodus, my life would be incomplete without making your life difficult. <3 But uh, the added information is in bold.Quote: Sumitsuki Arashi Kakureru - To Conceal Oneself - A Appearance After extensive research into sensory abilities, Sumitsuki created a fuuinjutsu technique capable of counteracting such abilities. Placed on his left forearm, the seal is activated via chakra. When active, chakra sensory techniques in a fifty meter diameter around Sumitsuki fail to work. Chakra inside the diameter can still be detected by someone outside of it, but no chakra sensory works while the sensor is inside the area. Unfortunately, this also includes Sumitsuki, although his wind sensory skill still works, it just cannot be boosted with chakra. Due to the nature of Natural Energy, Sage Mode Sensory is unaffected. Additionally, Byakugan sensory is far too advanced to be affected. The sharingan and similar sensory-capable abilities, however, are still nullified.Quote: Kazesao - Wind Rod - CA culmination of Sumitsuki's mastery of his Kekkei Genkai and his specialization in Fuuinjutsu, as well as handiness in blacksmithing, Sumitsuki created black, metal rods similar to Nagato's. They allow him to amplify his Air Sense ability. After placing them into the ground, a seal present on the rods resonates a small amount of chakra constantly, allowing Sumitsuki to detect movement within 60 meters of these rods. Unfortunately, Sumitsuki is only able to utilize three of these rods, and due to the nature of their construction, he can no longer produce any more. Quote: Katon: Ensho - Fire Release: Heat Wave - SBy using fire release, Sumitsuki can cause heat to radiate around himself in a hurricane-like manner. The eye of the metaphorical storm would be within two meters of Sumitsuki, though Sumitsuki himself is still at risk; the technique can only be used for a minute, any longer and Sumitsuki would black out. The closer someone is to the middle of the storm, the more heat they face. 2-5 meters: Body begins to burn after five seconds of exposure. Skin and internal organs begin to melt and after ten seconds, causing deformities and permanent organ damage, though one would die of dehydration before organ failure. Death would occur in 30 seconds. Though lack of consciousness would occur in only 15. External water evaporates almost instantly - Water inside of people's bodies are not affected immediately, which is why unconsciousness would take 15 seconds to occur.5-10 meters: Still a lethal range; the rate the effects would occur is doubled. Water also still evaporates almost instantly (but again, not water inside of someone's body).10-25 meters: Non-lethal, but severe dehydration would still occur, causing unconsciousness after a minute of being exposed. Severe burns would begin to form after 30 seconds. 25-50 meters: Essentially a warning for anyone nearing Sumitsuki. The heat is still fairly intense, and not something you would want to endure through, but no adverse effects occur other than increased perspiration and a dry mouth.
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