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[UPG] DMS Kalliope, Senshi of Poetry

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quite uneventful

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11, 2017 7:26 pm


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Senshi: Dark Mirror Senshi Kalliope, Senshi of Poetry

Challenge: Behold the coming strife!

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Main Color: black
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Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Kalliope Ode to Emotion!
Out of the sleeve of his chiton, Callum pulls a long scroll of poetry and throws it at the other. When hit, the target will overflow with the intense emotions. This attack usually throws them into being overwhelmed with every and all emotions at once. This attack lasts 30 seconds and can be cast 3 times.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Kalliope Elegy for the Fallen!
Same as his first attack, just instead of it just being energy, a long scroll of poetry extends and he throws it at them. This attack lasts 35 seconds and can be cast 2 times.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Kalliope Lacuna Caesura!
With this attack, Kalliope lifts his arms and a makes a diamond formation with his hands before thrusting it at his target. This freezes the target to a complete stop, and any and all attacks are frozen as well, until unfrozen-- It lasts for about 15 seconds and can be used 1 time per battle.

If the Basic had the same visual as the Super, I think that would work for a connection; also, there's not really an upgrade between the basic and super? I would suggest ticking up the time to 35 seconds for Super, so it really is a boost!

For the Eternal, some kind of connection to poetry in the visual of the attack (rather than just the name) would help draw the connection; also, unfortunately, for a full-body paralysis attack like that, only one use will be allowable, sorry!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 4:37 pm


annndd ready! open for any suggestions! im unsure about these attacks tbh, if you have any better ideas, please feel free to tell me!!!

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 14, 2017 1:21 pm


quite uneventful


Hello, Quite, and congratulations on Kalliope, he looks super cute!

Right now, Kalliope's attacks aren't quite lining up with his sphere - basically, there's not enough connecting them to "poetry," particularly for the Basic and Eternal. If the Basic had the same visual as the Super, I think that would work for a connection; also, there's not really an upgrade between the basic and super? I would suggest ticking up the time to 35 seconds for Super, so it really is a boost!

For the Eternal, some kind of connection to poetry in the visual of the attack (rather than just the name) would help draw the connection; also, unfortunately, for a full-body paralysis attack like that, only one use will be allowable, sorry!

I'm happy to talk more about making things line up; just quote me and I'll be back!
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