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Name: Lucia Felshaw

Nickname: Lu or Lucy

Age: 9

Birthday: August 3rd

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Peridot

Blood Type: 0

Fav. Food: Ice Cream and Chocolate

Hated Food: Anything Spicy

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:
Karate -- Lucia started taking Karate classes when she was four years old and she's loved it ever since. She loves the exercise and learning how to fight. She's also pretty good at it, being one of the better students in her class.

Mythology -- Lucia loves learning about mythology, especially the Greek myths. She first heard about them from her father when he would read them as bed time stories, she now reads them on her own. She loves the heroes and gods, though she doesn't fully understand some of the tragedies. She wants to be a hero someday just like the Greek heroes of old.

Archery -- Lucia only recently started trying out archery and she's already fallen in love with it. She is still learning alot about the sport but she does seem to have a natural talent for it. She started doing it because so many Greek heroes and gods used bows and she wanted to be like them.

The Arts -- Lucia loves all forms of the arts from music, to painting, to poetry. She loves both looking other paintings and trying to make her own, though they are not nearly as good as she wants them to be yet so she'll rarely let anyone else see them. She loves listening to and reading poetry. She loves most types of music but her favorite is pop, she is able to play the piano a little and would like to learn how to play the guitar as well at some point.

Virtues:
Courageous -- Lucia is very brave, she'll gladly put herself in harms way to save another. She'll stand up to bullies without any hesitation and isn't afraid to fight back to defend herself or those she cares about. She doesn't let fear stop her from doing what she believes is right.

Curious -- Lucia loves to learn, she wants to always increase her knowledge about things. If it something she is interested in she will go out of her way to learn as much as possible and as quickly as possible. She is also very quick to pick up on something she is trying to learn, and she has a very good memory.

Flaws:
Fight Me -- Lucia's courage can sometimes go a bit far and tends to get her in a lot of unnecessary fights because she won't back down. She is also a bit rebellious and reckless so her lack of flight instinct can put her in real danger sometimes.

No Chill -- Lucia tends to throw her self at any thing that she starts, she won't be content until she is the best at everything she does. While this can be a useful trait it also causes her to over work herself to the point of getting sick. She will also focus on something so much that she might not notice what else is going.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Gold, Round

Hair: Black, style 6, white bow in the pony tail.

Face: Round with soft features

Clothes: Something like this only minus the hat and with scarf, socks, and gloves being red instead of blue and the buttons being gold.

Ara (The World)
-The people of Ara were known Arians
-The Arian empire was vast and contained multiple star systems
-Arians had elvish features
-The architecture of Ara was very Greeco-Roman mixed with Tolkien Elvish architecture
-Ara was a planet rich in resources and magic
-One of the geographical features of the world was a long river made of magical water but it has since dried up, the river originally cut through the capital city.
-The capital city was a beautiful city of marble and gold, it was full of riches acquired both from the planet it's self and from trade with other worlds outside of it's empire.
-Ara was ruled over by an Imperator/imperatrix who had to be confirmed by the Arians high council before they could take up the crown. They worked off of a philosopher king system of government

Ara (Past Life)
-Ara's birth name was Lux
-Ara was the daughter of the Imperator and Imperatrix
-At 7 years old Ara was sent to train with the Penthesileans so that she would learn how to fight and how to defend her world from any invaders.
-As an adult Ara would often travel to other worlds in search of new treasures that she could bring back to her home world.

Hey, Aure!

The civilian looks good, and I only have two things I want to go over for the senshi magic!

For all of her magic, it says that the magic can make the skin feel like it was burned, but it does not have a duration for how long targets might feel these sensations! For basic stage it is usually ~20 seconds, and for super stage it is ~25 seconds for chibis. I think, at long as the burns/cuts are optional, these are fine for her to have, even as a chibi since you have specified that if a player chooses to take damage, it is only minor.

For her eternal magic, what if a player decides not to have their character take on any physical damage? I just wanted to make sure, since all damage seems to be at a players discretion and they could easily choose not to take on any damage. It might help to reword it (and possible her earlier attacks) to say that for the duration of her magic, anywhere her magic hits can cause the sensation of minor cuts or burns. Alternatively, chibi magic is not supposed to be very strong/cause a lot of damage. It might be possible to, instead of the sensation of damage, say that looking right into the light while the magic is cast could cause temporary blindness for the duration of the magic? Or that the magic can illuminate the area, to tie into the sphere? Because she is a chibi I would caution against her magic doing too much, but I wanted to at least offer those for consideration!

I would also suggest removing the note '(She can chose between having this be a weak attack that hits multiple enemies or a very strong attack that hits one enemy).' ; to avoid additional details on what a stronger attack would look like, I think it would be best to just let the player understand that if she sends all her magic at them, they have to deal with the multiple blasts!

I also want to double check or her eternal magic; it says that it lasts for forty five seconds but it doesn't specify what magic is occurring in that time. Is that duration meant to be how long the sensation of cuts/burns last for? Or how long she can fire the arrows for? Either way, forty five seconds with two uses is a little long for a chibi; I would suggest capping it at one use, thirty five seconds. Because she is a chibi, I would recommend that the barrage of arrows instigates the magic and then no more arrows come after the first wave; this way anyone who was hit can suffer the effects of the magic.

If I have misunderstood, please let me know and I'll be happy to look over things after clarifications. If you have any questions or make any changes, please quote me and I'll be back as soon as possible!

She looks perfect, thank you so much!