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 Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2016 3:40 pm
Gaia username: Asura of rage (Formally Chaos_Wolf12, changed.)
Wanted legacy/villain: Power girl legacy
RP sample:
[Min. 200 Words]
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character? Yes
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege? You know it
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2016 9:50 pm
Please update this to the new profile format
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Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2016 5:49 pm
 [General Information]
Name: Khal-El (Named Jerimiah by adoptive parents then changed it to eric rose.)
Nicknames: Rose, Ranger, EXODUS, Son of Apokolips
Titles: Power Boy
Age: 18
Birthday: May 29
Star Sign: Gemini
Gender: Male
Race: Alien/~New god
Personality: "Hm? Oh, hey, didn't see ya' there. I'm Eric, The dashing heart throb you've been waiting for. I-..(Whispering)...Huh?..(Whispering)...My personality? oh....Okay so new information has been received. My name is Eric rose, I wouldn't exactly call myself a leader....though i have the characteristics of one. Strong, handsome, funny, Dashing- sorry, sorry I'm doing it again. All kidding aside, you can compare me to someone with a dark side. I'd describe myself as fierce, maybe even cocky at times. What? you thought i was supposed to be Mr.Trooper boy?"
[Personal Information] Occupation: Cashier.
Sexuality: Bisexual
Likes: The color red, Flying, Flirting, Silence
Dreams: To out do every other hero.
Dislikes: Losing, Pink
Fears: Being at fault for someone's death.
Darkest Secret: His presence was the reason his girlfriend died.
Favorite Food: Pizza, Vegetables, Tofu
Favorite Drink: Water, Orange & Grape soda.
Least Favorite Food: Pears
Least Favorite Drink: Alcohol
Loyalties: Riza
Intelligence Level: College Graduate level.
Dominant Hand: Right.
Strengths:
Ambitious
Athleticism
Persistent
Great leadership skills
Excels in fighting skills
Weaknesses:
Emotional
Hard headed
Rebellious
Short tempter
Cherished Items:
A locket with a picture of his Dead fiancee inside of it. The locket is 4 years old, it was a present from his fiancee, it originally had both of their faces in it, now he used a picture with just her face. Its shaped like a heard with angel wings covering it.
Riza's mark: By definition this isn't an item, but it was left behind by reason and it's a way that she lives on. She is sentient within this mark.
Philosophical/ Social Viewpoint:
Eric believes that it's a cold world and you never know when being merciful will help your or bite you in the end. He believes that killing a villain would be ethical when there is no turning back from what they did.
Religious Viewpoint:
He believes in the after life, believes in heaven or hell. The reason it doesn't bother him is because if he goes to heaven then he knows he lived a good life, If he goes to hell then he can just raise hell.
Romantic Viewpoint:
He is willing to date, but hasn't found anyone he'd stay with, so he leaves the next morning and doesn't call back. This stems from the death of his fiancee, since she died, he found it hard to have a relationship.
Biography
• The thing is about Khal is that he's not actually human; and the thing about that is he's not exactly natural either. Khal is actually the result of an Apokalyptian Experiment called PROJECT: EXODUS. After holding a grand tournament for his warriors with one for female combatants and one for male combatants, Darksied found two parents whom he wished to use as his donors for his experiment. The Project (should it be successful) would take the DNA of these two Champions and create a being so terrifying that it would lead Darksied's Armies throughout the Multiverse and conquer every plane of existence that it set foot on.
However, despite Darksied's best laid plans and his apparent satisfaction with the Project's parentage, the destiny of PROJECT: EXODUS was linked with another... The New Genesis spy, Riza.
Riza was a New God from New Genesis who was sent by Orion to spy on Darksied eons ago and having seen the gladiatorial games that her "Master" had decided to put on; Riza became somewhat reluctant to follow her mission. As a part of PROJECT: EXODUS, she would dissect and butcher the bodies of the two winners and eventually take the best tissue from each and mesh it together in one humanoid. Darkseid, having been dosed with enough pride, would add a bit of his DNA to the mix. He added enough to give Khal-El an ability of his but a much weaker version. It was a painfully long process but after weeks generating and destroying possible vessels, Khal's body was finally built and infused with life thanks to a bastardized version of the Life Equation. Darksied seemed once again pleased that his plan was going so swimmingly, in turn he would name him Khal-el in spite of his worst enemy. He finally had his greatest soldier but once again fate intervened and Riza stole a Mother box in order to send Eric to New Genesis.
However, upon discovery, Darksied quickly mobilized himself to stop the traitor. Riza, panicking, knew she would not be able to save herself and Khal and decided to make the ultimate sacrifice to save him. She opened a Boom Tube and pushed the unconscious experiment through. She thought he was safe and as Darksied stared her down... She spat at his feet as she destroyed by his Omega Beams...
disoriented from his travel inside the Boom Tube (as well as only just having been 'born'), Khal couldn't make out what was happening to him when he woke up. The ground was cold underneath him, like metal, and men in large bright coasts poked and prodded at what sounded like hard stone. Even as he tried to keep his eyes open, he could feel something being forced onto his face and his eyes slammed shut once again. He once again saw Riza, a tear in her eye as she thought of a home she'd never see again, disappear in a flash of red.
Jeremiah didn't remember much of his past. Apparently, he'd been hit by a car; it explained why he woke up to a loving family in a hospital in Central with little to no idea who he was. His Mother, so happy her son had found his way back, wrapped his arms around the young man as he sat up in his bed with no help. They said he'd been out for months and that everyone was wondering where he was. His friends, everyone. They even had a party for him when he went home.
However, try as he might to feel accepted in this set up that was apparently his own... Jeremiah couldn't help but feel like the World around him wasn't as simple as it seemed. There was something that the people wouldn't tell him. You could see it in their eyes every time he looked at them; there was something there that wasn't meant to be. And Jeremiah soon Came to believe that it was him.
This feeling of isolation drove Jeremiah to strange lengths. He would fight boys in his school, namely bullies or predators, with a skill and finesse that was not acquired within his memory. And with each time he displayed an intellect or a body that he could not explain, Jeremiah had memories of a large mountain or monster looming over him. There was always glass between them... Like Orcas at the zoo. Only Jeremiah was the prized attraction, floating and waiting for freedom.
Jeremiah's parents put all his strange memories and dreams down to the accident. They blamed things like PTSD or anxiety. They lied to Jeremiah's face and reported the new developments to their higher-ups in a heartbeat and relished in the money they recieved. Jeremiah was none the wiser. He just carried on. He kept his secret of the Granite Man. He studied hard. He worked hard in a local store. Everything was eventually going to turn out okay, or at least he thought it would. He believed his parents. Why shouldn't he? Even though he felt like such an outsider, he desperately wanted in and was content with leaving a humdrum life to do so.
That was until Olivia Wilde came to live in his sleepy, little town...
Olivia Wilde was not the hot actress from House. She was hot though and from the moment she walked into the store to buy chewing gum, Jeremiah eyes could not leave her beautiful body. She was a whirlwind a tempest and she was picking him up and taking him for the ride in a matter of seconds. The two of them became fast friends after Jeremiah asked her out for coffee after he got off the morning shift; he would even go as far as to be honest with her about how he felt. It wasn't just about her though, it was about many things like how he felt he didn't belong and he had strange dreams and how he felt as if he was destined for greater. Even though he'd been so afraid to tell anyone, he told Olivia and Olivia accepted him and loved him for it. She wanted him to achieve greater, to be greater and the two finally became romantically involved.
After High School, Olivia and Jeremiah would get engaged but thanks to his parents telling the Higher-Ups a full platoon of soldiers were sent to retrieve him. Jeremiah could not be allowed to leave that small town and join the world; Jeremiah could not risk being exposed and discovered; Jeremiah had too much riding on him. So, with the Platoon dispatched, they began hunting for Jeremiah and Olivia relentlessly. They closed all highways which lead out of town and, in a small prairie, the two lovers were found in their car.
Jeremiah tried turning himself in but the soldiers shot anyway and covering his face, Jeremiah's skin turned black and protecting him from the bullets. He could not protect Olivia. She died of multiple bullet wounds in the car and Jeremiah lost it.
In a few hours all the soldiers were dead and a black demon stood over them; breathing heavily and weeping. It took Jeremiah some time to realize he wasn't alone. Riza, or a part of her that she sealed in the young man, stood next to him. She would educate him. She would help him. She unlocked all of his memories and took him to the brink but Jeremiah re-emerged stronger for it.
Sadly all dreams come to an end as he would break down, and go into a shock that left him still for months. Once he returned to his city, he was a new man. He would change his name, cut his hair and keep his ability a secret as advised by Riza.
[Relationship Information]
Friends:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force | Relationship Type
Releationship Explanation
Enemies:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force They Belong To | Relationship Type
Releationship Explanation
Family:
○ Riza | New Genisis | Mother like relationship
"She's...like both parents mixed in one, though i call her mom because..well she's a woman."
○ Darkseid | Apokolips | Father
"To know that he was what created me...that isn't right. What made it even worse was that he wanted to add his DNA....I guess we all have our dark past's.
Romantic Relationships:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force They Belong To | Relationship Type
Releationship Explanation
[Weapon Information]
○ Weapon/ Item Name: Explanation here.
[Other Item Information]
○ Bruiser outfit:
[Ability Information]
○ Omega Beams: Omega Beams are powerful bio-electric energy beams that can track Via heat and disintegrate a selected target. For Eric, these beams can track and burn through a selected target as it is inferior to that of Darkseid, his creator.
○ Super strength: Superhuman Strength: Eric's strength works in a similar way to that of a Kryptonians, however his is pure strength whereas Kryptonians may manipulate energy fields. It is generally accepted that it is sufficient to lift 100,000 tons or more. The specific range is unknown as their strength may fluctuate over time. At full power, their normal strength levels are well into the multi-megaton range. However it is worth noting that Eric's strength does not reach as high as Supermans would.
○ Flight:Eric may fly up to super sonic speeds, however flying at top velocity expends his energy quicker.
○ Skin Carbonation: he has the ability to re-arrange the configuration of carbon atoms of his body, allowing him to convert his skin into Graphene. This allows for anything blade or bullet to either skid or ricochet off of it. This makes it incredibly hard to cut through his skin, Near impossible for a human, and incredibly hard for a superhero. The carbonation does have a pre-armor sense that the fly rule doesn't apply to, so it's able to transform patches of the body when Eric is attacked in that area. It won't activate unless Eric can see the attack.
○ Superhuman Reflexes:All New Gods, they have a highly developed nervous system. Their reaction speed and hand-eye coordination is superior to a normal human's. They can move fast enough to dodge a bullet before the gun fires and react with blinding speed.
○ Super human Immunity: New Gods have an extremely evolved immune system. They have developed immunity to a number of toxins and diseases. This means Eric cannot get sick, meaning he cannot die from any type of disease as he is immune to them.
○ Super Stamina: New God stamina and endurance is nothing short of amazing. Due to the naturally exhausting and extensive rigors of their life on Apokolips or Stamina training on New Genesis, a New God is able to manage their stamina on a certain amount of rest and sustenance (more than minimal) so that it seems they are able to constantly function, though this is not entirely the case. Tied directly to their strength and invulnerability, even their immunity to a certain extent, they can actually function at peak efficiency for almost 48 hours before needing to eat and rest.
○ Immortality: The New Gods are functionally immortal; they cease aging physically near the age of 30. Unless they fall in battle, they are immune to the ravages of time, and could easily live for thousands upon thousands of years.This means Eric can live for pretty much as long as he wants until he is killed.
○ Invulnerability: They are resistant to blunt trauma like punches, kicks, and blows from weapons like bats and maces, though not -completely- immune; unless the blows are dealt by a being with similar or greater strength, there isn't a chance of injury. However, this invulnerability does not extend to bullets, laser-blasts, or other piercing/slicing weapons - their invulnerability is more akin to that of an Amazon, rather than a Kryptonian. But his carbonation of the skin ability takes care of that.
○ Khal-El: The Exodus:
Khal-El, like superman, would be taken or would fly out into space to gain energy from the stars, A.K.A solar energy. Because of this, one may have trouble differentiating Khal-El from a Kryptonian. At that point 2 things could happen, either Khal would refill his energy to a certain mark or it would fill completely and activate a new mid track. The twist is, not only would this replenish his energy, it would activate a sequence called the Exodus which originally was meant to lead the armies of Apokolips. His hair would gain a grey streak and his pupil would turn a blood red. This mind state would also activate a new ability called Energy mimicker where Khal would mimic certain hand held weapons ranging from knives to battle axes which would vanish after a few minutes of use (3 post's for each weapon.) Once this mind state has been lifted, Khal-El will fall into a hibernation where he would sleep for up to 10 post after using this ability.
○ I am Khal-El, Son of Apokolips:
Eric's hair color would change from grey to black and his pupils would appear grey for the first few minutes of the battle, then his eyes will glow red. This ability, while increasing his powers, will cause Khal lose control of himself. This means his controlled fighting style will spiral out of control with Eric attacking in a fashion similar to that of a Berserker warrior.
-Super strength: Eric can push slightly over his normal boundaries
-Omega Beamx2: Instead of heat seeking beams, these omega beams will shoot out like massive bursts of energy in a straight direction in an attempt to horribly burn one extremely strong person, or a group of people. This ability can only be used up to 4 times in battle.
-My body doesn't matter: Khal-El's rage would be the one thing in his mind and because of that he would lose any train of thought he had. He would lose any sense of pain and would not feel it until after an extreme conflict.
[Weakness Information]
○ Radion:New Gods are vulnerable to a substance called Radion. Its source is unknown and its effects are toxic only in sustained amounts or after explosive exposure. The average New God can be slain by an application of Radion from a Radion blaster or bomb. Though, in Eric's case it would take 2 blast's because of his skin. The first to de-stabilize the skin, the second to kill.
○ Eyes: That is the weakest part on Eric's body. Anything can damage his eyes, like a set of normal eyes. They are pretty much the most sensitive area on his body that can be attacked, if attacked its the only passage way to the brain and Eric is dead.
○ Carbonation downside: Eric cannot use both flight and his carbonation ability at the same time. With these two its one or the other. He cannot fly with this ability, he cannot protect himself from bullets and such while flying, but long distance jumps are a different story, that's actually allowed. The carbonation does have a pre-armor sense so it's able to transform patches of the body when Eric is attacked in that area. It won't activate unless Eric can see the attack.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2016 9:45 am
Yaroki Please update this to the new profile format This better?
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2016 3:04 pm
Yes I'll give you one approval
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2016 9:12 pm
Asura of Rage
Gaia username: Asura of rage (Formally Chaos_Wolf12, changed.)
Wanted legacy/villain: Power girl legacy
RP sample:
[Min. 200 Words]
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character? Yes
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege? You know it
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2016 10:03 pm
Achidanza Asura of Rage
Gaia username: Asura of rage (Formally Chaos_Wolf12, changed.)
Wanted legacy/villain: Power girl legacy
RP sample:
[Min. 200 Words]
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character? Yes
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege? You know it
It's a Resubmit of an old character. It doesn't need a new or old sample again.
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Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2016 1:03 am
Sorry but when I approved you earlier I was going on the assumption that you'd kept the powers the same when I skimmed through. But it's been brought to my attention you added to them. Most I can allow the omega beams×2might need a draw back as laser vision is a taxing ability for Superman so just mention something like how often he can use it
The real problem though is the God's call, yeah a 11.0 earthquake is insane you realize that is big enough to pretty much wipe out some countries right? And as it's written you could just continually use it to destroy the world. It needs serious reworking.
- lower the magnitude of the earthquake or just get ride of it given your other powers
- like the omega beams×2 state how often it can be used
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Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2016 9:38 am
Yaroki Fixed it, i made some picture adjustments while doing modifications also.
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Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2016 1:26 pm
Asura of Rage Yaroki Fixed it, i made some picture adjustments while doing modifications also. Thank you, in the future if you change anything on a resubmit please let us know as resubmits are meant to be the same character which is why no sample is needed Okay now reappoved
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Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 8:27 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2016 6:46 pm
Ok after talking with the mods we've found some changes we'd like you to make to your profile. Bio: In your bio you stated that Darkseid gave enough DNA to call him his son but not get any powers, we request you change this. say it was enough DNA to allow him a weaker version of the Omega beam. This will let you keep it in your profile, as this is a power unique to Darkseid. Omega beams: You stated later on his beams are heat seeking, you will have to state here they track via heat seeking too. Super strength: we ask you phrase it as our Superwoman (superman legacy) has. However we also ask you add note saying you are weaker than superman as you currently are, here's how they phrased it Quote: Superhuman Strength: A Kryptonian develops enhanced physical strength after absorbing a sufficient amount of yellow solar radiation. This radiation interacts with the greater than human density, resilience and biological efficiency of their musculature to trigger superhuman levels. While the exact magnitude of their strength is unknown, it is generally accepted that it is sufficient to lift 100,000 tons or more. The specific range is unknown as a their strength, like their other powers, may fluctuate over time. Their strength is also more an act of conscious will on energy fields than actual physical strength. It is this act of conscious will that enables them to perform physical feats that are beyond the mere application force, such as moving a mountain top without said rock crumbling under its own mass. At full power, their normal strength levels are well into the multi-megaton range. An example you may use if you would like Quote: Superhuman Strength: Eric's strength works in a similar way to that of a Kryptonians, however his is pure strength whereas Kryptonians may manipulate energy fields. It is generally accepted that it is sufficient to lift 100,000 tons or more. The specific range is unknown as their strength may fluctuate over time. At full power, their normal strength levels are well into the multi-megaton range. However it is worth noting that Eric's strength does not reach as high as Supermans would. Flight: For flight it's a bit messy simply remove what's there and change it to "Eric may fly up to super sonic speeds, however flying at top velocity expends his energy quicker." Skin carbonisation: In weaknesses you brought up something that should be listed in the power itself. Quote: The carbonation does have a pre-armor sense so it's able to transform patches of the body when Eric is attacked in that area. It won't activate unless Eric can see the attack. We will allow you to have this however, make it so it's a reflex action and not a programmed response, you will have to say you are doing it in post. Exodus: For now change the strength section to "Eric can push slightly over his normal boundaries in strength in Exodus" This will be done as Kryptonians who you are based off, do not have a definite upper strength levels. Finally we request a RP sample as you've added quite a bit to this character, and we have upon looking on your past actions seen mild cause for concern. This sample will hopefully clear all concern. If not you should expect limits on your strength which will be loosened as you grow as a roleplayer alongside your character
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ThisCloudedLife Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2016 7:04 pm
Reflected Perspective Ok after talking with the mods we've found some changes we'd like you to make to your profile. Bio: In your bio you stated that Darkseid gave enough DNA to call him his son but not get any powers, we request you change this. say it was enough DNA to allow him a weaker version of the Omega beam. This will let you keep it in your profile, as this is a power unique to Darkseid. Omega beams: You stated later on his beams are heat seeking, you will have to state here they track via heat seeking too. Super strength: we ask you phrase it as our Superwoman (superman legacy) has. However we also ask you add note saying you are weaker than superman as you currently are, here's how they phrased it Quote: Superhuman Strength: A Kryptonian develops enhanced physical strength after absorbing a sufficient amount of yellow solar radiation. This radiation interacts with the greater than human density, resilience and biological efficiency of their musculature to trigger superhuman levels. While the exact magnitude of their strength is unknown, it is generally accepted that it is sufficient to lift 100,000 tons or more. The specific range is unknown as a their strength, like their other powers, may fluctuate over time. Their strength is also more an act of conscious will on energy fields than actual physical strength. It is this act of conscious will that enables them to perform physical feats that are beyond the mere application force, such as moving a mountain top without said rock crumbling under its own mass. At full power, their normal strength levels are well into the multi-megaton range. An example you may use if you would like Quote: Superhuman Strength: Eric's strength works in a similar way to that of a Kryptonians, however his is pure strength whereas Kryptonians may manipulate energy fields. It is generally accepted that it is sufficient to lift 100,000 tons or more. The specific range is unknown as their strength may fluctuate over time. At full power, their normal strength levels are well into the multi-megaton range. However it is worth noting that Eric's strength does not reach as high as Supermans would. Flight: For flight it's a bit messy simply remove what's there and change it to "Eric may fly up to super sonic speeds, however flying at top velocity expends his energy quicker." Skin carbonisation: In weaknesses you brought up something that should be listed in the power itself. Quote: The carbonation does have a pre-armor sense so it's able to transform patches of the body when Eric is attacked in that area. It won't activate unless Eric can see the attack. We will allow you to have this however, make it so it's a reflex action and not a programmed response, you will have to say you are doing it in post. Exodus: For now change the strength section to "Eric can push slightly over his normal boundaries in strength in Exodus" This will be done as Kryptonians who you are based off, do not have a definite upper strength levels. Finally we request a RP sample as you've added quite a bit to this character, and we have upon looking on your past actions seen mild cause for concern. This sample will hopefully clear all concern. If not you should expect limits on your strength which will be loosened as you grow as a roleplayer alongside your character Wait, Mild cause for concern? Can i ask what was the action that gave that idea?
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