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Senshi: Tezcatlipoca

Challenge: "In the eyes you will see the power of her intent. "

Fuku Colour: CC (based on image but with a jaguar twist)
Main Color: CC
Secondary Color: CC

Fuku: see below images

this close up of items another image

Collar -- cc to fit outfit
Bow -- CC to fit outfit
Bodice -- Bikini top with skirt bottom
Sleeves -- no
Brooch -- CC
Bottoms -- almost miniskirt type bottom
Tiara -- Woven fabric or maybe beaded? Whichever works better here
Choker -- necklace ish (based on image above)
Shoes -- Fur boots (look to image)
Gloves -- No gloves, just arm bracers (look to images above)
Accessories -- (look at image) though not all need to be incorporated, nothing that will look cluttered

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Sailor Tezcatlipoca's Jaguar Strike
Sailor Tezcatlipoca calls out the name of her attack and summons a small phantom Jaguar to her side. She can command the jaguar to attack a single target. At this stage, the jaguar’s attacks can feel like light scratching or bruising. It cannot be attacked and will continue to cause the sensation of pain for the full duration of the magic. While this magic only causes the sensation of pain, a player may choose to take on lasting damage after the duration ends. The attack can only be used 2 times per battle with a duration of 20 seconds per casting.


Super Sailor Scout Attack: Sailor Tezcatlipoca's Jaguar Vice
Sailor Tezcatlipoca calls out the name of her attack and summons a Large phantom Jaguar to her side. She can command the jaguar to attack a single target. At this stage, the jaguar’s attacks can feel increased; as if being clawed and bitten. It cannot be attacked and will continue to cause the sensation of pain for the full duration of the magic. While this magic only causes the sensation of pain, a player may choose to take on lasting damage after the duration ends. The attack can only be used 2 times per battle with a duration of 30 seconds per casting.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Sailor Tezcatlipoca's Jaguar Fury
Sailor Tezcatlipoca calls out the name of her attack and summons two large phantom jaguars to her side. She can command the jaguar to attack two targets. At this stage, the jaguar’s attacks can feel suffocating or inflicting as if being suffocated or clawed. It cannot be attacked and will continue to cause the sensation of pain for the full duration of the magic. While this magic only causes the sensation of pain, a player may choose to take on lasting damage after the duration ends. The attack can only be used once per battle with a duration of 40 seconds per casting.

Hey, Astoria! This looks pretty good to me so I just have a few quick things I want to go over before I can drop a stamp!

Senshi magic is designed to last only for the duration of the magic (and should not be guaranteed to do lasting or permanent damage), so she could summon an ethereal jaguar to attack a target and cause the sensation of pain, but the magic and damage should be expected to fade after the duration ends. While attacks cannot force people to take on lasting damage, you can include a sentence that would allow players to take lasting or more severe damage even after the duration of the magic ends! This is helpful in situations where you want to plot your character being heavily damaged but don’t have to worry about forcing someone to take on more damage than they might be comfortable with!

Also, it might help to give other players an idea of how much damage they could expect to feel during each stage (such as bruising or scratching for first stage, heavier bruising and deeper cuts for later stages) so they know how much pain their character should be in if the attack is successful.

For example, her first attack could be rewritten to say:



You don’t have to word any edit like that, but I thought it might be easier to see what I was saying if I gave you an example!

I would suggest wording all three attacks to include that lasting damage is voluntary and include what sensation of pain they could feel during the natural duration!

Eternal attacks usually only last for about forty to forty five seconds and have one use; I would recommend also reducing her uses to one, but instead tweaking the write up to allow the jaguars to have a slightly wider attack range! Instead of focusing on one target, you could say that they can attack anyone within ten feet of Tezcatlipoca—if that is something that you might be interested in! You do not have to change that aspect, but if the eternal attack is going to last for forty seconds it should only have one use.

I know this is sort of a wall of text; I am sorry! Your profile looks good but I can get a little wordly! Please let me know if you have any questions, comments or make any changes and I’ll be back as soon as possible!

I am happy to hear that and I like those changes! The only thing I can suggest before dropping a stamp is to make her eternal attack have one use so it is on par with other eternal magic, but if you are comfortable with that I am happy to drop a stamp! <3

You are awesome, thank you so much! Everything looks good to me; good luck winning her!