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 Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 3:06 am
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♚║Customs Review
Paste your customs outline here for approval.
Once approved post it in the appropriate thread.
DO NOT pester Mods for approval. They will get to it when they can.
If you've been waiting for 3 days, then Quote an approval Mod.
If still nothing PM the Guild Captain.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 8:42 am
xxx▪ Username ⊰ Golden Glitch
xxx▪ Character Name ⊰ Khai Remon
xxx▪ Link to Profile ⊰ Not yet posted~
xxx▪ Weapon Name ⊰ Old Glory
xxx▪ Weapon Type ⊰ .50 Caliber Rifle
xxx▪ Range ⊰ 1,800m
xxx▪ Description ⊰ A restored relic from times before everything went to s**t. This rifle fires .50 caliber bullets up to a maximum effective range of 1,800m. It is equipped is a variable scope of up to 2,000m clear range. At creation, the rifle comes with [ 75 ] bullets at creation. More bullets can be made by using the Salvage Yard. 25 coins worth of mining will make one bullet.
xxx▪ Stat Boost ⊰ +1 Accuracy
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 8:47 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 11:49 am
xxx▪ Username ⊰ magcookie
xxx▪ Character Name ⊰ Amelia Marie Álehtta
xxx▪ Link to Profile ⊰ [u/c]
xxx▪ Supernatural Ability ⊰ Projective Empathy
xxx▪ Supernatural Description ⊰ A psychic ability that stems from empathy, in average cases of empathy one has the ability to tell how another being is feeling be that from body language or facial ticks. In Amelia's case she was given the ability, by a Pandora's Box, to project her own emotions onto those around her from a single focused target to a passing crowd. This can be used when combined with a strong enough memory to incite riots from her anger, or cause a weak enough target to preform their own execution when combined with memories of depressing natures as two examples.
xxx▪ Supernatural Ability Weaknesses/Limitations ⊰ While projecting her emotions onto a single target has become second nature it still causes minor strain on her psyche. For every singular target she projects onto her strain counter goes up by [+1]. When projected onto a group of no more than five targets her counter goes up by [+3]. When projected onto a group of more than five and with a limitation of twenty individuals the counter increases by [+7]. In order to project her emotions onto an entire thread her counter jumps up by [+15] points, to preform a thread wide projection she must be still and focused for [2] posts and it requires her to trudge up memories with the strongest emotion ties which in itself can be extremely painful for her. Strain counter cannot exceed [20] points, for example if the counter is resting at [19] she would only be able to project onto a single target once. For every [2] posts she spends sleeping her counter goes down by [-5] points.
At five points she reaches stage one of the strain which includes a dull headache which persists the remainder of her waking hours and bloody nose which persists for [1] post. This dull ache makes her already short fuse grows shorter making it easier to draw on the anger that so often blinds her.
At ten points she reaches stage two of the strain in which the headache evolves into a splitting pain, her nose starts bleeding once again but for [3] posts this time, and she suffers a [-1] to her Accuracy.
Fifteen points and that simple headache upgrades to a migraine which comes with weakness to both light and noise for the remainder of the day both of which causing a flare of pain when introduced, the nose bleed now gushes for [5] posts, and she suffers a increased penalty to her stats. [-3] Accuracy and [-2] to both Reaction and Intelligence.
The final stage is reached when she accumulates a total of twenty points her brain cannot handle the strain being put on it anymore and causes her to pass out. For [5] posts she will be unable to move on her own or defend herself, rendered useless until she awakes. Awaking from stage four only reduces the counter by [-1] and shouldn't be reached more than once a day else it cause permanent damage to her stats (if deemed needed by the reviewer that is) or lose of the ability to control her legs for the remainder of the day.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:26 pm
Approved. Your characters sanity level is 3.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 2:31 pm
xxx▪ Username ⊰ magcookie
xxx▪ Character Name ⊰ Amelia Marie Álehtta
xxx▪ Link to Profile ⊰ [u/c]
xxx▪ Weapon Name ⊰ Sewing Needle
xxx▪ Weapon Type ⊰ Bladed Umbrella
xxx▪ Range ⊰ 2' 10' while the blade is retracted, when deployed it reaches a full 3'. When the umbrella is spread out its coverage reaches a 3'4" diameter.
xxx▪ Description ⊰ Personally made by her own hands, with the use of her fathers forge, this umbrella was made to be as unassuming as possible to aid in her stealth ops. Weaved with twice as many threads of a usual umbrella the fabric adds a small windows of protection when coming under fire from mundane objects. The main focus of this usual tool is the hidden blade with a simple press of the red button resting in the umbrellas grip this small blade of iron peeks out to defend its wielder. And with a second press of the button it vanishes back into its compartment, hidden from sight like it was never there. Requires a daily cleaning and oiling to prevent the blade from dulling or rusting from blood coverage.
xxx▪ Stat Boost ⊰ Incurs a [+1] boost to Amelia's Physical Strength stat when being wielded.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 2:44 pm
Since this is your first custom weapon you do gain a [ +1 ] Stat Boost. So you will need to include that information.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 4:06 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 4:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2016 8:29 pm
xxx▪ Username ⊰ Golden Glitch
xxx▪ Character Name ⊰ Khai Remon
xxx▪ Link to Profile ⊰ Not yet posted~
xxx▪ Weapon Name ⊰ Mr. Smiley!
xxx▪ Weapon Type ⊰ .44 Caliber Pistol
xxx▪ Range ⊰ 30m
xxx▪ Description ⊰ Mr. Smiley is a simple .44 caliber magnum pistol with a 7.5in. barrel. There is a smiley face sticker slapped on the side of the barrel, hence the name of the gun. The weapon comes with [ 100 ] standard bullets at creation. More bullets can be made by using the Salvage Yard. 25 coins worth of mining will make one bullet.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:34 am
xxx▪ Username ⊰ Oh Honey Shake It
xxx▪ Character Name ⊰ Ruby Sardonys
xxx▪ Link to Profile ⊰ Link
xxx▪ Equipment Name ⊰ Titan Suit MKI
xxx▪ Equipment Type ⊰ Mechanical Armor
xxx▪ Weight ⊰ 92kg
xxx▪ Description ⊰ This suit of armor is a mechanical suit built by Ruby out parts she collected and tinkered with over many years, trying to come up with this design. It stands at eight feet tall and weighs quite a bit. It can't really be carried around so transportation is difficult, usually being worn around as the only method of transportation. Ruby climbs in through the back of the torso and takes her position on the inside of the armor in order to operate it. Once she's in position, she can flip the switches that will allow the suit to power up. Once that is done, she presses her "ignition button" to get things rolling. While the armor is turned on, it has a system that enables Ruby to move around with ease with the armor. A set of hydraulics and pressure sensors around the cockpit allow this. As a prototype to many other types of armor to come, this suit of armor has the capability of being enhanced by other parts.
xxx▪ Stat Boost ⊰ +2 P.DEF while being worn
xxx▪ Ability ⊰ Burst Movements: With a quick burst of energy, the Ruby can sprint for a short period of time. While doing so, Ruby gains +2 AGL. This only lasts for [ 1 ] post per use. Using this ability works on a charge system. [ 2 ] charges can be stored at a time and each use of this ability uses a single charge. This ability can only be used once per post and a new charge is gained every [ 3 ] posts.
Hydraulic Shot: Each limb is equipped with an extra hydraulic system that allows Ruby to push the limb in a strong rush in one direction. When added to a punch or kick, it makes that hit do some serious damage. While using this ability, Ruby gains +2 P.STR. This can also be used to enhance a jump, however. Ruby can jump up to 25ft forward with this ability. This only lasts for [ 1 ] post per use. Using this ability works on a charge system. [ 2 ] charges can be stored at a time and each use of this ability uses a single charge. This ability can only be used once per post and a new charge is gained every [ 3 ] posts.
xxx▪ Equipment Name ⊰ Hands of Zeus
xxx▪ Equipment Type ⊰ Mechanized Gauntlets
xxx▪ Weight ⊰ 8kg
xxx▪ Description ⊰ The Hands of Zeus are a thick pair of gauntlets that fitted with an insulted inner lining around Ruby's hand, shield by machinery cased in steel plating. The machinery contains a generator that Ruby can turn on to force an electrical charge to arc all around the gauntlets. Contact with the outer part of the gauntlets will let out an electrical shock at about 8mA. (This is enough to briefly stun a human in the location that the shock was administered, but not cause any paralysis - This is very painful)
xxx▪ Stat Boost ⊰ +1 P.ATK
xxx▪ Ability ⊰ Godhand: Any other weapon or piece of equipment can be charged with a powerful, constant charge and add an extra buff. While charged, the other weapon or piece of equipment provides double the buff it normally provides. When being used on any model of the Titan Suit, a +1 AGL buff is administered instead and the Hands of Zeus' electrical charge is applied to the entire exterior of the Titan Suit.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 6:51 am
A quick note, an ability is not a technique it's a power gained from Pandora's Box that has given that specific item some kind of supernatural ability. The currently abilities you have would have to be remade as techniques. If you want you can claim an item or a power from Pandora's Box and start off with it so you could gain your own supernatural ability and have it attached to one of your weapons, you could also use Pandora's Box to gain additional stat boosts to a certain weapons or item.
Also at the start of conception only one of your three custom items can have a stat boost and that boost is only a [ +1 ], all other weapons or items will have to be upgraded through the purchase of a stat booster or boosted through Pandora's Box.
Quote me when you've made the changes and I'll look over them again.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 6:53 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 10:50 am
xxx▪ Username ⊰ magcookie xxx▪ Character Name ⊰ Amelia Marie Álehtta xxx▪ Link to Profile ⊰ Ayeee xxx▪ Weapon Name ⊰ Seem Ripper xxx▪ Weapon Type ⊰ Stiletto xxx▪ Range ⊰ 9" Overall, 4" Blade xxx▪ Description ⊰ A simple stiletto knife forged by her own hand like all of her 'sewing' tools. Its handle made of a varnished willow, unblemished with knots or scratches. The blade made out iron for a more cost efficient replacement should the blade ever damage. The small slender blade usually at rest inside of its own handle until a press of its button releases the pointed blade to quickly defends its owner or to offer a helping hand in her targets farewell to the waking world. The tool usually hidden from sight under her sash. xxx▪ Accessory Name ⊰ Spinning Thread xxx▪ Accessory Type ⊰ Ring xxx▪ Description ⊰ Appearing as a plain silver ring topped with a small stone of ruby this tool makes an excellent way of silencing the trouble makers of Valkir. Twisting the red stone to the left unlocks it from its silver home, with a simple pull and the steel thread hidden inside the ring can be freed for use. This thread reaches a foot and a half in length, and hold of the red stone mustn't be lost of else the thread will begin its self rewind back into the ring.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:23 am
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