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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:23 pm
Basic information Characters Name: Haruna Race: Imp Zodiac Sign: The Spear Academy House or University: Grendel Gender: Female Starting Stage: Senior Body Type Base: C-2 Brief Description of Appearance or Custom Form: Username: Midnightglow18 Starting Stage: Senior Race: Imp Base: C-2 Description: Body: Pale skin tone Eyes: Pale white Hair: Mint green Clothes: Similar to avi, but open to colorists modifications. Horns: Mint and white Tail: Mint, with CC white markings Claws: White Ears: White Ear base CC Horn base CC Hair base/style CC References (if applicable): Color pallette one Color pallette twoCost: 450k
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:36 pm
Short history and her feelings on some things Haru is a cache baby, her stone was damaged which cause her blindness. Haru is unable to see shapes or colors. She can sense movement on air currents, she can't see light, color or shadows. Her parents died long ago, so she never knew them. She was raised in the orphanage, she was well cared for by the caretakers, but Hara always had a fiery temper inside her. She never let her blindness slow her down in what she wanted to do. She was never really judged or harmed in the orphanage or because of being a cache baby, ever child in the orphanage had their own story and Haruna was no different. She was however mocked for her lack of desire to make friends, perhaps the damage to her stone cause her personality to be so different from other imps perhaps not. Haru didn't want to form a family group in the orphanage and was worried over that she wasn't adjusting well. That she needed friends and love to grow as a being. To which Haru pushed all attempts away since it wasn't what she wanted. Even though Haru was treated differently at the orphanage because of this her anger level was still fairly low. Finally Haru was sent to the academy to begin her studies as a freshling. Haru learned quickly to read braille in order to read for her classes, what sparked life into Haruna's world was the first time she touched clay in an elective art class. She wasn't bothered by the clay stuck in her fur, if anything it was one of the few things that made her smile, made her happy. Haru had nothing to distract her and she began creating things from her imagination. Wonderful, flowing abstract piece, she would hear music in her head and then she would create what the sound felt like to her. Haru finished her freshling classes and moved on to her junior year to learn more about creating art pieces. Trying her hand at working with, wood, stone, different types of clay. She tried her hand at painting, but she hated it and grew very angry in her attempts. Ripping and throwing the canvas. Hara has struggled with her temper for most of her life. Not because of her blindness or the fact that she never had parents. Just something about Har always burned hotter than some of the other freshlings. Senior year Haru found her true heart in the form of art that sang to her heart. She felt like it had something to do with clay, but it was when she touched a face of a Chimera volunteer for the first time. Haruna's heart beat so fast she felt the planes of the persons face. Then she that feeling Hara was able to make a sculpture of the Chimera. Haru felt the piece and created something of a masterpiece. Those who could see were shocked that a blind imp was able to make such a creation. To Haru irritation. Haru had done just about everything for herself, besides having a teacher her how to read braille since there was no way for her to decode the bumps to mean words by herself. This Haru knew this was her calling, creating art with her hands, feeling her subject and bringing them to life. Her next step in life is to attend University. She feels something is missing in her artwork, she wishes to learn more so she can do more and make her art more lifelike. Haru feels little about her own race, she didn't connect well with other students freshling, junior or senior year. So she never built her own extended family, as some other orphaned imps did. Haru has always pushed others away, fearing they would again mock and judge her for not acting like a proper imp. For not wanting to build an adoptive family. On some level Haru worries she is damaged, perhaps something was wrong with her and she was better off alone. Her temper, her blindness?? All Haru's insecurities holding her back from making any real friends. Perhaps one day she would meet someone who had the strength of will to break down her walls, but it hasn't happened yet. Haru was a student of Arkham, and she liked it for the most part though at times she was annoyed by wishy washy art students. She hates anyone who thinks she needs to be babied or coddled because she can't see. Haru intends to go to Grendel to learn more about art. Haru hopes that going to Grendel university will be her chance to turn over a new leaf, to perhaps find a friend. Maybe even get past all her insecurities and find love some day?? Haru hopes she will find others who will understand her and help her learn more about her craft. Clay covered fur and all.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:13 pm
Personality flaws and strengths Haru often lets little things get to her, she is angered by others pitying her. She is angered by artwork that doesn't go well. She is prone to fits of temper. Breaking things when she is angry. She is forced to sit and count to one hundred when she gets into these moods to regain her focus. Haru can be aggressive at times, especially when someone suggestions that she needs help. She does her best not to be cruel to those just trying to help her, but sometimes she can come off as cold, when she is rejecting help. Often coming across passive aggressive. She is courageous, no matter how many times she fell down as a freshling Hara always got back up. No matter how many times, she walked into something learning the layout of an area she has never asked for help and will never give up. She is also tenacious in her will to keep working on her art and her will to keep trying. When Hara gets a desire in her head, she refuses to let it go. Haru has a deep-set insecurity about herself, fear her flaws, her anger, her blindness. Are faults no one will ever be able to deal with and care about her. To see that she is a determined, passionate artist. One who loves chocolate and loves the feel of clay in her fur. Messy as it might be. Passionate, though Haru sometimes tries to hide how much she feels about things, like art, chocolate, the feel of clay in her fur. Haru feels everything to extream levels. She isn't just an angry blind imp. She is just afraid to show her passion to others, out of fear of being mocked and rejected.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:22 pm
Likes and dislikes Likes: Above all else Hara likes control, she likes to control her art. She likes to control her environment. She has been a lousy roommate, because of this fussing about strange scents brought into the dorm. Hara loves chocolate it is one of her biggest weaknesses and she does her best to hide it from others. Feeling the wind on her face. --------------- Dislikes: Weakness and losing. Hara hates weakness, but not in her blindness, she hates being last-place, she hates, losing in art contests. She strives to be better. She does not consider her blindness a factor. Clearly if she lost it was her weakness and her piece wasn't good enough. Oranges, taste, smell, feel Hara hates them. Being babied. -------------- Hobbies Art is Hara's only hobby right now.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:34 pm
A smart-mouthed peer just told your Nightmare that they're a failure to their race. How do they react?
Haru stood on the playground listening to the annoying fool. The imp before her's voice sounded older to her, but Haru couldn't really be sure, since she couldn't see him and never would. Haru wasn't about to see anything, she could however sense his movements. Feel him moving about in an adjatatied manner. The boy seemed to think he knew how she should act, how she should feel, and he was wrong, but didn't seem to want to listen to what Haru wanted. Which was to be left alone. Haru didn't wanted to play with the other children and this boy was just keeping her from working on her art by telling her she was a failure to the imp race. Haru tried not to care what he thought about her, but it wasn't easy. Right now all she wanted to do was go back inside and color and hide away from the other orphans.
"So what I don't have friends and don't want a big family, leave me alone you fool I want to go color." She listened to him continue that she should come play and talk to the other children. "I don't want to, just leave me alone, I don't want to make friends." She tried to brush his comments off like they were nothing, but deep down they hurt her badly. Was Haru broken? Was she a failure as an imp?? Is that why her parents had left her stone in the cashe instead of weakening her or taking her with them?? Then he told her.
She needed help because she wasn't nice and pleasant like other imps of their kind. Finally lost her temper and decked him she growled anger filling her blood. "You fill not fix me!! You don't understand the first thing about me!!" Haru ended up in the counselor's office once again for letting her temper get away from her once again. Haru hated it when people suggested she was broken because she wasn't sweet and nice like other imps. Really what the hell?? Not everyone was the same, she hated it even more when others suggested she was bitter and angry because she was blind or an orphan.
Haru listened to the questions "Why was she so angry, why didn't she want to make friends and be happy like the other children??" Why couldn't anyone understand that Haru didn't want to let anyone else in, she just wanted to color in peace was that so much for a freshling to ask?? Then no one would ever get close enough to break her heart?? She sorta understood why she pushed others away, but Haru didn't feel like she could tell anyone how she felt. After all, they would likely try to hug her and tell her she was perfect the way she was and Haru didn't feel like she was.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 8:46 am
Critique incoming!
Appearance: Just some small things to add to your custom post: What face and horns would you like? Or would you prefer them CC? Maybe add what shade of mint you would like for her? The first color when someone says "mint" to me is a green, so it's just something that's open to interpretation.
Personality: So from her personality, I'm getting pretty much angry and determined. Maybe you could add another positive and negative trait to just give her some more depth? What is she when she isn't angry from pity or contented when working with clay? Was she always a little firecracker? Or was this a gradual build up to her senior year? If she doesn't feel like her anger is from her being an orphan, how has being an orphan affected her? Where did she get the system to calm herself down? Was that something she picked up from someone or came up with herself?
Backstory: For her vision imparement, you need to decide if she's fully blind (as you stated she was "completely blind") or if she just has poor vision (her vision based off of movement). Also for her vision imparement, she could have been damaged (e.g. crack in the stone or a cheap/subpar stone purchased by her parents) or just born that way without the stone being damaged. Up to you, but we'd like for you to clarify. :'3 When she began working with clay, you mentioned music. Was that part of the class or something in her head? Has she ever connected to anyone or has anyone tried to connect to her? Someone who didn't see her as the blind girl, but someone who actually cared about her? It seems like she pushes everyone away, is there a fear of losing them? How does she feel about Grendel University? Does she feel as though it'll be more "wishy washy art students"? Or maybe is this going to be a blank slate that she can make some friends? How does she feel about other races? What are her long term goals outside of learning more about art at Grendel? She doesn't seem to want a large family like most imps do, so what does she feel about building relationships?
RP Response: "Hara stood listening to the annoying fool" not quite sure what you meant here. Did she actually stand? "She brushed his comments off like they were nothing." - it doesn't quite seem like nothing if he already has her growling |D Overall, it's somewhat choppy to read, so maybe go over it once more. Maybe add some more emotion or her thoughts? It's just tweaking really.
Bonus Round: I'm really just curious about this, but I'm not sure where they'd go. Feel free to add them, but they're not really manditory. So she has claws and fluffy arms... how fun is that to clean the clay off of? I just feel like there would be endless gobs of clay stuck in her fur and it would be painful.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 8:48 am
Thank you mew those are a lot of good ideas, I'll work on that later today heart
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 11:21 am
I feel like you followed my advice really well! Thank you for that and consider her approved!
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 11:25 am
Thank you Mew heart your advice was a big help with bringing Haru to life emotion_hug Love the clay in her fur idea rofl that is such a cute idea blaugh
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