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MoonKitsune

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2015 7:49 pm


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Sarkinite

Challenge: You're going to need a bigger boat
OR
Nom Nom

Uniform:
First tier uniform: Neon colored pipework on a short black jacket. Cut similar to a leather jacket and/or varsity jacket.
- wears a face mask
- high top sneakers

End Uniform theme: Punk - rocker - Grudge
Briker/Bomber jacket. Straight jacket. Straps. Designs.
Design of jaws/teeth biting a starseed/diamond.
Teeth - Have been sharpened


Jackets:
https://www.pinterest.com/samuelforeman1/punk-jackets/?lp=true
Shoes:
https://d136usn7jnoe61.cloudfront.net/magazine/articles/387/images/sneakers-group01-2.jpg
Light up soles
https://media.gq.com/photos/5767e0c37958c156295e1a47/master/w_800/philipp-plein-spring-2017.jpg


Weapon --
Lieutenant: Toy Axe. Plastic Halloween prop. Fake blood.
Captain: Axe (Lighted Handle) Fireman axe size
General: MUCH BIGGER AXE (Vibrant colors with a shark jaws and eyes size view on blade) About half his body in size

Main Color: Black
Secondary Color: Blue
Colors (Bright Saturated. Black, Blue, Pink, Yellow) Things that light up. He isn't caring about stealth.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2015 7:50 pm


Name: Jason Reid

Nickname: Jaws, Jabber Jaw, Jab

Age: 17

Birthday: 2/23/2001

Sign: Pisces
Birthstone: Aquamarine

Gemstone: Sarkenite Mineral Link

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Diners, Dives, and whatever is in the fridge of whoever he is staying with. He loves cereal.

Hated Food: Anything too overly complicated or he sees as pointless. Why make food a foam?

School: Hillworth Grammar School

Hobbies:

Graphitti: Strapping on your backpack and heading out into the fresh, metro-yonder, Jab finds sanctuary in dodging cops and defacing public property. This ranges from writing in urinals, carving into classroom desks, adding more words to street signs to make them inappropriate, tagging his name on everything and anything he deems "WORTHY" enough to make an impression, and generally just adding some unwanted Jab flair to whatever he desires.

Breaking and Entering: This usually is just urban exploring where he sees if he can get into a backroom that isn't locked or up to the roof of an office building. He knows by now that it probably will be disappointing, but he feels a thrill in knowing he CAN do it.

Painting: When the weather outside is just too bad or when he broke his leg again scaling a ladder to a water tower, Jab paints and draws. Markers, acrylics, even finger paints, He'll splatter color on paper and see what he can come up with. Most of his wardrobe is now "paint" clothes and has flecks of previous sessions on them.

Music: But only the bands you don't know about. Ya know, like the hobo who sings under 23rd and Weston or that band your brother plays in that really is going to hit it big one day - they REALLY have that something you just can't get with corporate sellouts. That band.

Shipper: Since his wrinkled porn wad always found, Jab found a work around in harlequin novels when growing up. Adding the internet, Jab has put on a tricorn and ships hard. Not just fictional people. Real people. Two people just standing close on the subway and he'll wrote up a scenario in his own head how they are bumping the midnight tango on their commute between work - catching this one train to meet each other. Inspired, he will write (poorly and without grammer rules) about people he has met/seen and then distribute his sweat sweet garbage to the public under the name The Mask.



Virtues:

Easy Going: Take a breath. A chill pill. Count to ten. Find your inner zen garden. There is no need to blow a fuse over stressing over every little things. Things will work out in their own way and the universe will show the way. Karma no doubt is on his side, and he doesn't want to sweat the small stuff.

Confident: Jab has got this. No really, he has GOT this? He might not have ever done it, but he is 200% sure he can just wing it enough until he gets a basic understanding.

Creative: If it's one thing he has, it's imagination. Turn it on a new axis, no idea is stupid, brainstorming. He is a firm believer of thinking outside of the box that thinking inside of it might even be innovative for him once in a while. He is your go-to guy for making your t-shirt logo or throwing about ideas for band names.


Flaws:

Steering the Wheel into a Wall: - reverse of confidence.Not wanting to admit he has no idea what he is doing and bullshitting even if he knows he is steering others and himself into danger. Sometimes you need to know that climbing that particular rusty scaffolding isn't as smart as you thought and that one piece of billboard just isn't worth it in this kind of winds, but hey, you are already here and there is no turning back in your mind. Wouldn't want to loose face even if no one is with you.Even worse if they are.

Pent up: Like a coke shaken hard, Jab bottles up. His art is his inner demons outlet, but no outlet can take on everything and even worse when he has a art block. There is a reason Jab is in Hillworth, and his particular brand of violence is quick and physical to those around him and himself. His form of destruction can be thrown at anyone or be taken within himself. This is why Jab can't have nice things. Eventually they wind up shattered against a wall.

Hedonistic: Everyone likes a good time, and Jab wants that time to be all the time. Whenever the chance presents itself, Jab is off crashing any party he can spot and will forgo responsibilities and duties to be somewhere else he finds more entertaining. "No Thanks. I'm good." is not in his vocabulary. Whatever poison is offered, he'll take. Whatever invitation is given, he won't turn down even if he is recovering from the flu and agreed to watch your dog this weekend.



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Yellow

Hair: . Black, One set of pink/blue set of bangs. Wears a headband.

Face: Eyeball Earrings

Clothes:

MoonKitsune

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:09 pm


MoonKitsune


Hello! It's always good to see an old quest getting dusted off and bumped up, so let's see what we can do to help you get it ready for stamping.

Since you started with the Negaverse side of things, I'll start there too!

While 'Sarkenite' is not currently a name reserved on the Master List, we will need a URL link to the information you've got on it so we can verify it!

When it comes to his uniform, I love that you're looking to personalize him a bit and add a bit of flare into his design. We encourage our players to do that, but because the Negaverse is a military organization, uniforms should be military/uniform or business themed. You've got a good start with that if you stick with bomber jackets as they've been used in the military dating back to WW2, but ultimately the goal is to make sure they look professional!

The links that you've provided as refs would make fantastic civ attire, though and that's definitely a place to let even more of his personality shine through!

You could still add personality in to the more 'formal' look of a Negaverse officer as well by using the brighter colors that you've mentioned for accents. If his primary uniform color is black using a bright blue piping/trim can really make things pop. Our artists are incredibly talented and I'm sure one of the will be able to help you find a compromise.

For his weapon progression-- Do you have an example for the first stage weapon? A wooden mallet could potentially be a bit too close to an actual weapon, depending on the nature of it. An example would help determine that, or you could also go the toy hammer route! For Captain-- how large of an axe you were thinking? For General, how much bigger from there? A littlIe bit of information goes a long way to helping us help you!

Onward to the civilian side of things!

You've got an interesting young fellow written up here. I can see why he might fit in at Hillworth, what with hobbies like graffiti and breaking and entering! Unfortunately, 'Anderson' is already in play as a last name, so unless you've reached out to Cheekiebirdie for the okay to use it we'll have to request a change. For something similar you could use Andersen or we can help you come up with something else that might work for you!

I'm going to request that you reconsider the nickname 'Sarkster'-- either dropping it entirely or changing it to 'Sharkster' to tie in to the Jaws theme.As it is his Lieutenant Alias it could lead to some unfortunate incidents if it causes someone to figure out his secret identity.

For Gemstone, is there a reference that you've found somewhere directly tying Sarkenite to the sign Pisces or to the month of February? If not, here are two handy sites that can help you with picking one out for Jason:

Birthstones by Month
Birthstones by Zodiac


Hobbies, virtues and flaws all check out for the basics, which leaves one last thing to touch on.

In regards to the teeth sharpening noted in the Negaverse section of his profile... We would just like to note that if this is something you would like to include for your character it should be stressed/established that it is a cosmetic feature only and not any more useful in battle than biting someone would normally be (the information that we were able to dig up says that it actually makes teeth weaker, so that might be something to consider!).

If you've got any questions or want to go over anything, please let me know!
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2018 6:04 am


1.) Nickname removed.
2.) I'm fine with weakened teeth. Being a person in the present, long term affects of his actions wouldn't factor much when he saved to get his teeth done.
3.) Updated weapons to include size and that 1st stage is a toy.
4.) Included link to mineral.
5.) I didn't think it mattered about minerals corresponding to birthdates and that was just whatever you wanted. There isn't anything linking a mineral to a gemstone. It's his birthstone.
6.) I did state black would be the main color with blue as accenting. I'd prefer if ot was as vibrant as boundaries of current shop allows. I'm not sure if Scheelite's, Zinkenite, amd Serandite's uniforms would no longer serve as a current shop rules example as each shows designs upon the main black uniform. Each started with accenting that grew more and more through their stages.


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2018 9:05 pm


We're making progress! Weapon progression should work with what you've got plugged in above, but just as a side note it's Lieutenant, Captain and General here. Was he one of your TiH characters that you're looking to bring into Moonshop? If so, that's fantastic and it'll be interesting to see how he fits in here!

It looks like the link that you provided was for a resale site that didn't have much information on the mineral, but we were able to dig up this: Sarkinite. Sarkinite is currently available as a mineral name, although we do have to note that it would not be reserved for you until you were able to obtain a slot.

It does not matter if the Negaverse agents mineral name corresponds with the birthdate, but it does matter if the birthstone does. The two are not connected to one another, so we do have to request that you pick something that corresponds to the civilian side of things for Jason.

As for the uniform guidelines-- the three agents that you've listed have uniforms that were grandfathered in as they were obtained prior to updates to requirements for the Negaverse faction. The requirements can be found in the Questing Handbook in the form for Negaverse officers:

Quote:
Uniform: The canon Negaverse characters had very plain uniforms, but we don't expect all our characters to share that specific design! Because the Negaverse is a military organization, uniforms should be military/uniform or business themed. There are a lot of rooms for variations and bringing in themes, but ultimately the goal is to make sure they look professional! Your stamper or artist will be able to help you if you are struggling with designs. While some designs may be sultry, please try to avoid overly sexual outfits! Negaverse characters can be as young as fourteen, so please try to keep your uniform appropriate! Negaverse Uniforms should be predominantly dark; you may use lighter colors in moderation to provide piping or other accents to the uniform.


Brighter colored piping and accents are acceptable in moderation, but the most important thing that I was trying to stress in my initial critique is that his uniform must be military/uniform or business themed. Some of what you have listed for his uniform design won't fit into either of those categories, unfortunately.

Last but not least, I think the only thing from my original crit that we haven't touched on is the last name! Had you considered what you might want to do about that? Just let me know!

MoonKitsune
PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2018 7:19 am


He is not a TIH character.

I changed his last name to Reed.

I don't get what you mean about birthstones.

I changed information on his uniform I've seen Nega uniforms with biker jackets or short cut jackets.

I'm adding in another hobby.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2018 12:01 pm


Oh! I'd only asked because you had Y1, Y2 and Y3 for his stages instead of Lieutenant, Captain and General. If you could update those, that would be fantastic!

The last name 'Reed' is currently being used by four other players. Both Reid and Reede are available as last names, however, if you'd like something similar and would like to switch to one of those instead of tracking down players for permission to use the last name. If you're picking another last name entirely, I would recommend checking the Master Character List to make sure there are no overlaps.

Sarkinite is not a birthstone. Based on your character's birthday I would recommend one of the following:

Amethyst, the traditional birthstone for February
Bloodstone, the mystical birthstone for February
Aquamarine, Ruby and Jasper are all birthstones associated with being a Pisces

In regards to the Negaverse uniforms, I am aware that standards were less strict with uniforms in the past however everything that I have stated above is in regards to current uniform standards, guidelines and restrictions. While it is okay to incorporate some of the elements design-wise, the overall appearance should be military/professional business. As long as your artist sticks with that as the primary theme you should be okay with the tweaks made.

The additional hobby is approvable!

MoonKitsune
PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2018 12:15 pm


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Updated!

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2018 8:03 pm


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 7:17 am


MoonKitsune


This looks good to me! I can say you will need to work with your artist on a design that fits Negaverse guidelines, just because they have had some updates to their uniform guidelines since those characters you have listed! The black with neon piping should be fine, it's just that the uniform will have to be predominantly military/professional attire more than punk/rocker/grunge--but those things can be incorporated into his uniform as long as it still has a professional or military base!

(His face mask should also only cover the lower part of his face and not his whole face, just to keep within guidelines!)

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