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Ashhaven Academy~ A school of romance, mystery, and whatever you desire. 

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R4NGE187

Brilliant Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2015 6:43 pm


These are my characters there i will be using for the roleplay.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2015 7:15 pm


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Name: Richie Morgan
Age: 18
Race/Species: SuperHuman
Sex/Gender: Male
Sexual Preference Heterosexual
Grade Level: High school senior
Dorm: Chestnut- Dorm Room #109
Abilities: Intangibility: Allow's the user to go through solid matter.
Superhuman Speed: Explains itself, To go with it he has enhanced stamina
Ice Manipulation: More commonly known as Cyrokinesis, Allow's the user to generate ice,Shape and become ice itself.
Foresight: Can see the future by either dreaming thinking or passing out.
Sound Manipulation: Has a small part of it but is fully activated when is in the threat of death, Allow's one to manipulate his yell/voice to level's to lethal level's.
The voice of all: Can sound like anybody and anything, Can manipulate someone if used right.
Major or Club: Cooking Club, Kendo Team
School of Learning: School of Magic.
History: Richie was born different due to the fact he had three different power's that he could use.Richie kept this a secret from the rest of his family because if he did people would take him away.Richie knew his power's would cause him harm so he became very durable toward his own power's so he can use them without being harmed. Richie spent a almost everything on practicing sparring and dodging many harmful objects. Some point in Richie's life he fell off his house and hurt himself but he recovered, After that incident he never wanted to fall again so he concentrated and made him have ice wings. Richie knew his powers could harm someone and maybe even kill someone, He knew that he should master all of his power's even if he had new ones. After a few years of hiding, Richie got a letter saying he can go to an academy with people just like him and immediately choose to go to the school.
Personality: Energetic, Scared, Nice, Afraid of dying, Deathly afraid of being hated.
Other notes: later is reaviled he has seizures, The school did something wrong about his checkup so they don't know if he has actual seizures or faking it. His wings.
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R4NGE187

Brilliant Lunatic


AngelicWings24
Captain

Chatty Codger

PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 2:20 pm


thedudebot


                        Since you made your character before the rules were changed, we don't need to approve them.
                        But thanks for being careful (and reading the rules)!
PostPosted: Sun Nov 29, 2015 10:21 am


                        just a couple of things.
                        if she's 15 she'd be in 9th grade. also, power wise she seems very unbalanced. she can freeze time and go invisible and do stuff without being noticed? i would figure out a way to balance her power a bit. so for your history. i don't think i'm following her story. could you make it more concise? if you could specifically work on rewording these sentences? i'll paste them below.

                        "hearing stories about Richie's past she was shocked about the time he fell. one night inside her house, while watching a movie a thief broke in and was about to kill her before travelling back in time where her parent's attended and still are."

                        quote us again when you've made those changes and we'll look over it again.




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menmei_chan

Vice Captain

Sparkling Hero


Shiruke Ryu
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Nov 29, 2015 1:28 pm


I regret to inform you that Samantha is not approved. Or at least, by me. I'm sorry that I must say so. In my opinion, I would like you to include in her past why she chose to stay in this time frame. After all, she traveled to before her birth, meaning her very existence is greatly threatened. Please provide a reason as to why she is risking her life in order to stay.

Also, even if her abilities are difficult to use, she's still a bit over powering. Perhaps adding downsides or consequences to her abilities would balance it out more. For example, you could add in that every time she travels through time, a portion of her life is taken away. It would be more balanced if her invisibility had limits (i.e. has a specific cool down or duration time, does not work in rain, etc.)



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