Welcome to Gaia! ::

♥ In the Name of the Moon! ♥

Back to Guilds

A Sailor Moon based B/C shop! Come join us! 

Tags: Sailor, Moon, Scouts, Breedables, Senshi 

Reply Accepted Quests
[Q] Shizuka Minami // Isis Page of Ganymede

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Shameless Elocutionist

PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 1:58 pm


Name: Shizuka Minami

Nickname: Zuki (By Natalia), Zucchini (By Natalia), Shizu (By Merle)

Age: 16

Birthday: August 20th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Sardonyx

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Melonpan

Hated Food: Zucchini

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:

  • Singing - Even as a child Shizuka had a beautiful voice, and as soon as she was old enough her parents signed her up for her school's chorus. Initially it was just something she did to kill time, but after landing her first solo it became a passion of hers. Having all eyes on her while she's belting out that final high note is the biggest rush she knows, and she's more than happy to put in the work to improve if it means she can keep getting attention.

  • Sewing - This particular hobby started out as something Shizuka did with her mother, and more in the sense of mending old clothes than creating something new. But soon enough she started to get a bit more creative, and she found she enjoyed creating something unique just for herself. Upcycling thrift store finds is one of her favorite ways to add new things to her wardrobe, although she's perfectly able to make things from bolts of fabric when the mood strikes her.

  • Photography - What started as just the occasional picture of something Shizuka found neat or wanted to remember spiraled into a core part of how she interacts with the world. It isn't uncommon to find her taking pictures with her phone when she's out with her friends or family, and she meticulously sorts through these pictures for scrapbooking purposes later. Every major event has either an entire album or a scrapbook in the works, with the completed ones holding a special space on her bookshelf.

Virtues:

  • When You Need A Helping Hand - When it comes time to ask for a little assistance, Shizuka is always a good person to turn to. Whether it's lending her skills to sew costumes for the drama department or going out of her way to brighten someone's day, she's always willing to offer her support where she feels it's needed. But not all help is tangible, and a listening ear and a warm shoulder are things she's just as likely to offer as her practical skills. A little kindness can go a long way, and if she can do the tiniest thing to show someone that the world isn't all bad... Well, she thinks it's worth it in the end.

  • I'm Not Going To Mince Words - Shizuka isn't one to beat around the bush. She has a blunt honesty that's almost refreshing in the days when people are just as soon to go behind your back about something on the internet. If she thinks a sweater makes you look bad or if you've done something to upset her, she'll let you know and she won't try to cover it up. That being said, her honesty isn't for the purpose of being cruel. While she doesn't hide things, she will do her best to soften the blow when she knows someone needs to hear something. And she knows there are times when the best way to be honest is to stay silent.

  • Nothing's Gonna Bring Me Down - As far as Shizuka is concerned, the glass is always half full. Everything that happens has a purpose, and there's no reason to sweat the small stuff when you can just keep moving forward to something bigger and better. She doesn't let the unexpected drag her down, and her upbeat attitude is borderline infectious. Energy and enthusiasm are practically her default setting, and it's a difficult feat to put a damper on either. Any attempts to rain on her parade might be met with a comment on how much she enjoys the rain at worst, and her outright enjoying herself to spite the attempt at best.

Flaws:

  • I'm The Center Of The Universe - If there's one thing Shizuka can't get enough of, it's attention. She thrives the most when all eyes are on her, and absolutely despises being ignored. Her attention seeking nature can be a source of conflict with people who find it annoying, especially those who try to point out her flaws. Her opinion of herself is strong, and she refuses to let anyone try to change it - even if they're trying to better her. She's perfect the way she is, and anyone who thinks she isn't is just trying to tear her down for no reason.

  • What's Mine Is Mine - The biggest and most glaring problem with Shizuka is easily her tendency to get overly attached. She has a difficult time embracing the concept of friends having other friends, and can get extremely jealous when she finds the people she cares about spending more time with people that aren't her. And as bad as it gets with her friends, it can get even worse when she's dating someone. Hanging out as a group is all well and good, but she wants to be the only person spending quality time with her besties.

  • Things Need To Move Quicker - There's nothing in the universe that gets on Shizuka's nerves quite like having to wait. She likes her gratification to be immediate, and when it isn't she gets irritable and anxious. If things aren't moving fast enough for her liking, she has a bad habit of skipping over important steps in the hopes of getting to the end result quicker. This goes about as well as one might expect, and a lot of the time her speeding through things tends to blow up in her face in the end. Unfortunately, she still hasn't quite learned her lesson that the old adage of patience being a virtue is actually true.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Honey brown, and angled slightly upwards with an epicanthic fold. (Hex code: #A05806 ✿)

Hair: Shizuka's hair is dark brown. While it is naturally straight, she most often styles it into loose curls. It is cut into a chin length bob with bangs that fall just above her eyes. (Hex code: #2B1809 ✿)

Face: Shizuka has an oval-shaped face with high cheekbones. Her nose is small and has a narrow bridge, and her lips are thin. Her skin is light brown with a yellow undertone. (Hex code: #D7AD87 ✿)

Clothes: Shizuka accessorizes her Meadowview uniform with a charm bracelet that she is always adding new charms to. It currently has six charms - a dragon, ballet slippers, phoenix, thimble, microphone, and camera. She also swaps out her shoes with a pair of cute heeled loafers. When outside her uniform, she tends to wear clothes that she finds both cute and comfortable. Oversized shirts, sweater dresses, plain leggings, and boots are all staples of her wardrobe.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 1:59 pm


Knight Title: Isis, Page of Ganymede

Challenge: This is going to be one hell of a performance!

Uniform:
User Image
Top -- A red corseted bodice with gold designs covering the front. (Ganymede symbol and other CC designs?)
Bottoms -- A tiered ruffly skirt with a large bow in the back and two smaller bows at the edge of each front hem. White thigh-high stockings with scalloped tops and golden designs along the outside hem. (More Ganymede symbols along with CC designs?)
Gloves -- No gloves.
Belt -- No belt.
Shoes -- Gold high heeled pumps.
Shoulders -- No shoulders.
Accessories -- Two strings of pearls around her neck - a short, choker-length string and a long rope-length string. A phoenix headpiece with a single large, red feather emerging from the tail.

Weapon & Magic
Page Weapon: Silk Fan
Squire Weapon: Twin Feather Fans, attached to each other at the base by a delicate gold chain. The chain has just enough length that she can spread her arms with a fan in each hand.
Squire Magic: In The Mood
    -Purpose: Debuff; Distraction
    -Duration: Immediate; Maximum channeling time of 30 seconds.
    -Visual: Isis brings her fans across her face, fluttering them and focusing her energy into them. After a few moments they begin to glow gold, and when she points them at an enemy within 10 feet, they expel a deep red mist that envelops her target. The mist lingers as long as she continues to channel her magic and the target is within range.
    -Effect: The targeted enemy is immediately hit with a strong sensation of desire. They feel flushed, their heart begins racing, and catching their breath becomes difficult. It becomes increasingly difficult to focus the longer the spell lasts.
    -Weakness: More experienced enemies might be able to ignore effects entirely.
Knight Weapon: Twin Burlesque Fans, attached to each other at the base by a strong gold chain. The chain has just enough length that she can spread her arms with a fan in each hand.
Knight Magic: Hot And Bothered
    -Purpose: Debuff; Distraction
    -Duration: Immediate; Maximum channeling time of 45 seconds.
    -Visual: Isis brings her fans across her face, fluttering them and focusing her energy into them. After a few moments they begin to glow gold, and when she points them at an enemy within 10 feet, they expel a deep red mist that envelops her target. The mist lingers as long as she continues to channel her magic and the target is within range.
    -Effect: The three targeted enemies are immediately hit with a strong sensation of desire. They feel flushed, their hearts begin racing, and catching their breath becomes difficult. It becomes increasingly difficult to focus the longer the spell lasts.
    -Weakness: More experienced enemies might be able to ignore effects entirely.

Summons -- Isis' summon takes on the shape of a fiery phoenix about the size of a peacock. I have no clue what kind of magic I want for it though. Help? Please?


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Shameless Elocutionist



Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Shameless Elocutionist

PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 2:00 pm


Miscellaneous
    - Templates used should be FC1 and F18.
    - If her current page design is too elaborate, I am willing to tweak a few details to simplify it. (Shorter skirt, saving the phoenix headpiece for her final stage but leaving the feather, etc.)
    - Shizuka was born in Destiny City, to third generation Japanese-American parents. While she speaks rather fluent Japanese, she can't read or write a single word of it.

PostPosted: Thu Oct 22, 2015 1:40 pm


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


So since I'm coming back for an official crit, I'm just gonna use the post I made before >>"

On the whole, Shizuka looks fine to me! Just two things: I need magic progression (Ganymede's magic themes are lust, extravagance, indulgence) and unfortunately, Neith is already taken as a powered name! If you need suggestions for magic or Wonders I'm happy to help.

Quote me if you have any questions or are ready for another look!


Noir Songbird

Crew

Dramatic Senshi

18,325 Points
  • OTP 200
  • Hero 100
  • Magical Girl 50


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Shameless Elocutionist

PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 12:52 am


Noir Songbird


*shows up to critique a year late with Starbucks* I mean... What?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 3:20 pm


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Isis's Wonder and magic look good, but just one more thing -- unfortunately Knights cannot have paired weapons! Knights have a single channeling object, so a single fan would be fine, or, for instance, a pair of fans on either end of a staff, or something similar!

Otherwise she looks great, though!


Noir Songbird

Crew

Dramatic Senshi

18,325 Points
  • OTP 200
  • Hero 100
  • Magical Girl 50


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Shameless Elocutionist

PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 3:24 pm


Noir Songbird


Would linking the fans with a chain be an acceptable way to turn them into a single weapon?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:20 pm


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Yes, that would definitely work!


Noir Songbird

Crew

Dramatic Senshi

18,325 Points
  • OTP 200
  • Hero 100
  • Magical Girl 50


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Shameless Elocutionist

PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:27 pm


Noir Songbird


Updated the weapon sections!
PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 5:33 pm


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


Okay, looks good!

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

A GM will be by soon!


Noir Songbird

Crew

Dramatic Senshi

18,325 Points
  • OTP 200
  • Hero 100
  • Magical Girl 50


Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2016 5:21 pm


Kitsune Mistress Nyoko


This looks good to me, so I can drop a stamp! I do have one small note--for her Squire and Knight stage magic, it says that 'After a few moments they begin to glow gold' -- I would change the wording just to say 'after a few seconds'--just so she doesn't have to spend a few minutes mid-battle charging up to use her magic! That doesn't need to be changed now or anything, I just wanted to let you know for when you got her/set up her journal!


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Reply
Accepted Quests

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum